Thank you so much for your kind words!🙂 I’m really glad you found my method helpful. I'm always looking to improve my lessons and will keep putting out more content to make essay writing even easier.
I received my IELTS exam results today and got 7 in writing! I used the same strategies you mentioned in your videos, and your channel was a huge help for someone like me who only had one month to prepare. I really appreciate it! Keep up the great work!
@@EnglishMende thank you so much, i actually watched this exact video the night before my exam haha, at the start of the writing task 2, i took my time and wrote the bullet points to know what I wanna talk abt, it was an opinion based essay! It was super easy to talk abt the topic as I had a plan in mind, all bc of your help since I knew nothing abt IELTS and its format
"Hi there!🙂 For now, you can learn from my videos, which I (hopefully) upload regularly, as I don't have an online English course yet. Maybe in the future, I'll be able to teach online classes.
As-salamu alaikum. I'm a New subscribers of your channel. I'm struggling so much with Writing modules. Can you give me a guideline Please. My exam is 1st November
@@EnglishMende let me try to write the response. The majority of people think verbal interaction is more important compared to texting communication. I truly agree with this point , because face to face or phone talks offers immediate feedback compared to massages delivered through letters or other forms of communication other than verbal. One of the advantages of mouth to mouth interaction is that , it provides both the speaker's immediate response. This mode of talking between individuals also enables them to solve problems to situations without wasting much time. However , in spoken communication people are able to note the tone of the voice whether one is emotional or not . For example, if the other speaker is talking to a friend who has had a funeral and during the talk he /she starts crying the other speaker can take quick intervention to cool the friend. Additionally, questions are clarified immediately during mouth to mouth interaction. However, written conversation can disadvantage both the writer and recipient especially when there is a fault in delivery of the massage . For instance, the letter was posted to the wrong destination. Also in texted conversation they is a higher possibility that the receiver may not understand the context especially where wrong spellings of words are used . On the other hand, there is no clarification of the message which may lead to inappropriate response from the receiver to the sender. In conclusion, spoken communication either by phone or face to face is good as it provides both humans a quick response to their conversation and a faster solution to the problem discussed may be find quickly compared to written were one has to wait for the feedback for some time.
I believe you have provided your response to this topic, but youtube does not show it here. So here are my comments on your essay: Task Response: 7 Your essay addresses the prompt and maintains a clear position throughout. You agree with the idea that verbal communication is more important than texting, and you explain why you hold this view with relevant examples. You also provide examples, such as immediate feedback and the ability to perceive emotions through tone, to support their argument. Areas for improvement: The point about "immediate feedback" and "emotional tone" is good, but the idea could be elaborated further, with more specific examples or additional points about why these aspects are important. ____________________________________ Coherence and Cohesion: 7 Your essay is logically organized and ideas are presented in a mostly clear manner. Paragraphs are used effectively, and there is a logical progression in the argument. Areas for improvement: Cohesion could be improved by varying connectors or using more sophisticated linking phrases. ____________________________________ Lexical Resource: 6 You use a range of vocabulary that is generally appropriate for the task. Words like "immediate feedback," "tone of voice," and "clarified" are relevant to the topic. However, there are some errors in word choice and collocation, which limit the score. Areas for improvement: "Phone talks" is an unnatural phrase in English. "Phone conversations" or "verbal conversations" is a more appropriate and commonly used phrase. Massages" is a misspelling of "messages." "communication other than verbal" is awkward and imprecise. "Non-verbal communication" is a more accurate and natural term. "Mouth to mouth" is incorrect here. It refers to a type of resuscitation, not communication. The correct term is "face-to-face interaction." "Take quick intervention" is not natural phrasing. The correct verb form is "quickly intervene." "cool the friend" is inappropriate and unnatural. The correct expression would be "comfort the friend." "Wrong spellings" can be replaced with "incorrect spellings" for a more formal and appropriate tone in academic writing. Adding the article "an" before "inappropriate response" makes the sentence grammatically correct and smoother. "Humans" is an unusual word choice in this context. "Parties" is more natural and appropriate for describing the people engaged in communication. ____________________________________ Grammatical Range and Accuracy: 6 You demonstrate an ability to use a range of grammatical structures, but there are noticeable errors in grammar and sentence structure. Basic sentence forms are correct, but more complex sentence structures often have issues. Areas for improvement: Consistent errors with articles and plural forms, such as "the speaker's immediate response" (should be "the speakers' immediate responses") Problems with subject-verb agreement (e.g., “they is” instead of “there is”). "Compared to" should be "than" when making a direct comparison. "Face to face" should be hyphenated as "face-to-face" when used as an adjective. "Offers" should be "offer" because the subject is plural (face-to-face or phone conversations). "Both the speaker's immediate response" needs correction as the subject here should be plural (both speakers). "The tone of the voice" should be "the tone of voice." The phrase "solve problems to situations" is unclear and awkward. The correct phrasing is "solve problems quickly," "May be find" should be "may be found," ____________________________________ So, your writing task 2 score is: 6.5 Excellent!!
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Thank you so much for your kind words!🙂 I’m really glad you found my method helpful. I'm always looking to improve my lessons and will keep putting out more content to make essay writing even easier.
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I received my IELTS exam results today and got 7 in writing! I used the same strategies you mentioned in your videos, and your channel was a huge help for someone like me who only had one month to prepare. I really appreciate it! Keep up the great work!
That’s absolutely amazing! congratulations! I’m really glad the strategies in my videos helped. I wish you continued success!!! 🙂👍👍
@@EnglishMende thank you so much, i actually watched this exact video the night before my exam haha, at the start of the writing task 2, i took my time and wrote the bullet points to know what I wanna talk abt, it was an opinion based essay! It was super easy to talk abt the topic as I had a plan in mind, all bc of your help since I knew nothing abt IELTS and its format
I'm really happy you did well on your writing! You did a great job!
Amazing, your explaination can be super understood. Thank you very much
No problem at all🙂 Glad I could help.
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Hello i'm a newbie member in your channel. I'm eager to learn writing task & 2 from you.Is it possible sir?
"Hi there!🙂 For now, you can learn from my videos, which I (hopefully) upload regularly, as I don't have an online English course yet. Maybe in the future, I'll be able to teach online classes.
Good explanation...thank you alot.
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Thank you for this . I will try to write mine
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sir, could you please make one problem and solution essay
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As-salamu alaikum. I'm a New subscribers of your channel. I'm struggling so much with Writing modules. Can you give me a guideline Please. My exam is 1st November
Hi there. Thanks for subscribing! What type of IELTS are you going to take? The Academic or General version?
Perfect
9band essay?
Based on the IELTS Writing Task 2 criteria, it would probably get around an 8 or 9.
Thank you, I will respond soon
Sounds good!
@@EnglishMende let me try to write the response.
The majority of people think verbal interaction is more important compared to texting communication. I truly agree with this point , because face to face or phone talks offers immediate feedback compared to massages delivered through letters or other forms of communication other than verbal.
One of the advantages of mouth to mouth interaction is that , it provides both the speaker's immediate response. This mode of talking between individuals also enables them to solve problems to situations without wasting much time. However , in spoken communication people are able to note the tone of the voice whether one is emotional or not . For example, if the other speaker is talking to a friend who has had a funeral and during the talk he /she starts crying the other speaker can take quick intervention to cool the friend. Additionally, questions are clarified immediately during mouth to mouth interaction.
However, written conversation can disadvantage both the writer and recipient especially when there is a fault in delivery of the massage . For instance, the letter was posted to the wrong destination. Also in texted conversation they is a higher possibility that the receiver may not understand the context especially where wrong spellings of words are used . On the other hand, there is no clarification of the message which may lead to inappropriate response from the receiver to the sender.
In conclusion, spoken communication either by phone or face to face is good as it provides both humans a quick response to their conversation and a faster solution to the problem discussed may be find quickly compared to written were one has to wait for the feedback for some time.
I believe you have provided your response to this topic, but youtube does not show it here. So here are my comments on your essay:
Task Response: 7
Your essay addresses the prompt and maintains a clear position throughout. You agree with the idea that verbal communication is more important than texting, and you explain why you hold this view with relevant examples. You also provide examples, such as immediate feedback and the ability to perceive emotions through tone, to support their argument.
Areas for improvement:
The point about "immediate feedback" and "emotional tone" is good, but the idea could be elaborated further, with more specific examples or additional points about why these aspects are important.
____________________________________
Coherence and Cohesion: 7
Your essay is logically organized and ideas are presented in a mostly clear manner. Paragraphs are used effectively, and there is a logical progression in the argument.
Areas for improvement:
Cohesion could be improved by varying connectors or using more sophisticated linking phrases.
____________________________________
Lexical Resource: 6
You use a range of vocabulary that is generally appropriate for the task. Words like "immediate feedback," "tone of voice," and "clarified" are relevant to the topic.
However, there are some errors in word choice and collocation, which limit the score.
Areas for improvement:
"Phone talks" is an unnatural phrase in English. "Phone conversations" or "verbal conversations" is a more appropriate and commonly used phrase.
Massages" is a misspelling of "messages."
"communication other than verbal" is awkward and imprecise. "Non-verbal communication" is a more accurate and natural term.
"Mouth to mouth" is incorrect here. It refers to a type of resuscitation, not communication. The correct term is "face-to-face interaction."
"Take quick intervention" is not natural phrasing. The correct verb form is "quickly intervene."
"cool the friend" is inappropriate and unnatural. The correct expression would be "comfort the friend."
"Wrong spellings" can be replaced with "incorrect spellings" for a more formal and appropriate tone in academic writing.
Adding the article "an" before "inappropriate response" makes the sentence grammatically correct and smoother.
"Humans" is an unusual word choice in this context. "Parties" is more natural and appropriate for describing the people engaged in communication.
____________________________________
Grammatical Range and Accuracy: 6
You demonstrate an ability to use a range of grammatical structures, but there are noticeable errors in grammar and sentence structure. Basic sentence forms are correct, but more complex sentence structures often have issues.
Areas for improvement:
Consistent errors with articles and plural forms, such as "the speaker's immediate response" (should be "the speakers' immediate responses")
Problems with subject-verb agreement (e.g., “they is” instead of “there is”).
"Compared to" should be "than" when making a direct comparison.
"Face to face" should be hyphenated as "face-to-face" when used as an adjective.
"Offers" should be "offer" because the subject is plural (face-to-face or phone conversations).
"Both the speaker's immediate response" needs correction as the subject here should be plural (both speakers).
"The tone of the voice" should be "the tone of voice."
The phrase "solve problems to situations" is unclear and awkward. The correct phrasing is "solve problems quickly,"
"May be find" should be "may be found,"
____________________________________
So, your writing task 2 score is: 6.5
Excellent!!
@@EnglishMende I appreciate your help