IELTS Writing Agree Disagree Essay | Complete BAND 9 Answer Step-by Step

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  • @IELTS-with-Juva
    @IELTS-with-Juva  2 месяца назад +12

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    • @kk-my4li
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    • @Adittoadi-u5u
      @Adittoadi-u5u 2 месяца назад

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    • @Adittoadi-u5u
      @Adittoadi-u5u 2 месяца назад

      yes, but not by writing i can't understand

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  2 месяца назад

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  • @masumrana6469
    @masumrana6469 2 месяца назад +6

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  • @_b1t
    @_b1t 2 месяца назад +19

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      @naharkhadiza6843 2 месяца назад +1

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    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  2 месяца назад +2

      I'm so glad you like it 😀. Thanks so much for your amazing feedback!

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      @IELTSA-Z 2 месяца назад +2

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  • @cilaperkasa1509
    @cilaperkasa1509 17 дней назад +1

    thank you! i like your video, so straightfoward and not speaking too fast or slow

  • @mina_missss
    @mina_missss 2 месяца назад +5

    you have a beautiful voice and you are very calm! please continue teaching me and others for ielts. waiting for more videos!

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  2 месяца назад +1

      I'm so glad you like it 😀. I noted your wish.

  • @cilaperkasa1509
    @cilaperkasa1509 17 дней назад +1

    dear Juva, please make videos about writing formal and informal letters for general training. i love the way you teach and your explainations are easy to understand and so straight foward compare to other teachers on youtube. viele danke

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  17 дней назад

      I'm so glad it's helpful 😀. I took note of your wish.

  • @fatimamalik2914
    @fatimamalik2914 2 месяца назад +5

    From past week,I have been watched some high-five vocabulary essay writing from different chanels. As a non-native English speaker, I found it really difficult to cope up with complex style. Also, Lost a lot of confidence. Your video explained alot more better and makes sense to most of writing method. Really appreciate that.
    Could you do more videos on problem-solution essay, please?

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  2 месяца назад +1

      I'm so glad you like it 😀. Thank you so much for your amazing feedback! You can find a full Band 9 sample answer for a problem-solution essay here: ruclips.net/video/TpUAgV-dTV4/видео.html

  • @MitalPatel-g9p
    @MitalPatel-g9p 10 дней назад +1

    Very nice learning mam

  • @KNMNabil
    @KNMNabil 2 месяца назад +1

    Clear, easy to catch and on point. Thank you 💙

  • @afradhossen3755
    @afradhossen3755 2 месяца назад +1

    You are a sage!
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    Keep it up...

  • @dilwarhussain9062
    @dilwarhussain9062 Месяц назад +1

    Wow, extra ordinary class I have ever seen.

  • @tumpafaizul8047
    @tumpafaizul8047 10 дней назад +1

    Tnk u dear juva mam.i was frustrated with writing part 2, but u made me clear view upon on this.take lots of love 🎉🎉🎉

  • @naharkhadiza6843
    @naharkhadiza6843 2 месяца назад +1

    Wow, Your teaching method is great, Thank you so much for your efforts.
    I would request you to make more videos like this for the writing module.

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  2 месяца назад +1

      I'm so glad you like it 😀. I took note of your wish.

  • @fungaidube37
    @fungaidube37 Месяц назад +1

    Wow such a nice essay with simple English made me to understand the essay question .please may more lessons of other essays types .

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  Месяц назад

      I'm so glad you like it 😀. I took note of your wish.

  • @dickensochieng3256
    @dickensochieng3256 11 дней назад +1

    Wow, I envy your coherence... from Nairobi -Kenya 👏💯

  • @wasimakram11
    @wasimakram11 2 месяца назад +1

    Your video is amazing and need more Ielts writing samples.

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  2 месяца назад +1

      I'm so glad you like it 😀. I took note of your wish.

    • @wasimakram11
      @wasimakram11 Месяц назад +1

      @IELTS-with-Juva Thank you waiting for your more amazing videos on comparing band 7 and re-writing to band 9.

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  Месяц назад

      @@wasimakram11 Okay, this is noted 😃

    • @wasimakram11
      @wasimakram11 Месяц назад

      @@IELTS-with-Juva also new c2 vocabulary

  • @khilolamasadikova5836
    @khilolamasadikova5836 2 месяца назад +2

    You explain calmly and i love this featire od your method❤

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  2 месяца назад

      Thank you so much for your amazing feedback! I'm so glad you like it 😀.

  • @MARICLEBACHASPATI
    @MARICLEBACHASPATI 17 дней назад +1

    I LIKE THE WAY YOU TEACH NEED MORE SIMPLE PLEASE
    THANKQ MA'AM JUVA❤

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  16 дней назад

      I'm so glad you like it 😀. I have noted your wish.

  • @RamPal-mh1ss
    @RamPal-mh1ss 2 месяца назад

    Hello!!! Amazing!!!! I would even say icing on the cake!!! Great love from Saudi Arabia!!! Stay blessed and keep posting such informative videos.

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  2 месяца назад

      I'm so glad you like it 😀. Thank you so much for your amazing feedback!

  • @saidyaxshiboyev
    @saidyaxshiboyev 2 месяца назад +1

    absolutely awesome essay apreciate all of this works 😇

  • @lengdagus-medina7583
    @lengdagus-medina7583 2 месяца назад +1

    Yes, I need more samples. Thank you😊

  • @MehediHasan-z2i9j
    @MehediHasan-z2i9j 2 месяца назад +2

    You are great 😊 your writing way are so essay. 😊

  • @aminullahhamzi507
    @aminullahhamzi507 2 месяца назад

    love your beneficial method, wish you more success in your life.

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  2 месяца назад

      I'm so glad you like it 😀. Thank you so much!

  • @atawurrahman5340
    @atawurrahman5340 5 дней назад +1

    thank you , love from bangladesh

  • @najmulislam3427
    @najmulislam3427 2 месяца назад +1

    Great job❤

  • @AidaAsi
    @AidaAsi 2 месяца назад

    Great writing practice tes.
    Thank you Juva 😊

  • @АсифАсиф-м9т
    @АсифАсиф-м9т 2 месяца назад +1

    Very useful information.Pleeeasee, could you give for all Types of writing task 2!!!two-views-opinion, advantages -disadvantages etc Thanks a lot

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  2 месяца назад +1

      I'm so glad it's helpful 😀. I took note of your wish.

  • @zoe-v4v1e
    @zoe-v4v1e Месяц назад +1

    Thank you!

  • @arwaa3382
    @arwaa3382 25 дней назад +1

    Yes,I love to have more

  • @TariqulIslam-qk5el
    @TariqulIslam-qk5el 2 месяца назад +1

    It's clear.. Thanks a lot.

  • @АглесМасалимова
    @АглесМасалимова 2 месяца назад

    Great tips! Thank you so much!

  • @madhur2118
    @madhur2118 2 месяца назад +1

    Thanks Juva... I think for agree and disagree essay if we can use the counterargument paragraph, it will incrase my band score and also this is necessary

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  2 месяца назад

      I'm so glad you like it 😀. The instructions ask you whether you agree or disagree and you must give reasons and examples for your opinion. So you have to give two reasons for why you agree or why you disagree. Don't state counterarguments to your view because this is not what the question asks you to do.

  • @sudiptonandi8638
    @sudiptonandi8638 2 месяца назад +1

    Hello Juva ❤
    You and your presentation are very nice, your presentation skills are amazing. I didn't lose my focus for a single moment while watching and it's very helpful. Keep going ❤❤❤

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  2 месяца назад

      I'm so glad you like it 😀. Thank you so much for your amazing feedback!

  • @canadianvibeswithgurpreet5863
    @canadianvibeswithgurpreet5863 Месяц назад +1

    Can we use the personal example in the essay? Because some it has Been said that we can’t use personal experience but general example . Can u please put some light in it

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  Месяц назад

      The instructions ask you to give reasons and examples from your personal experience, so it's totally fine to give personal examples. 😀

  • @arunidammalage9811
    @arunidammalage9811 Месяц назад +1

    It is.vry help full ,give me more please

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  Месяц назад

      I'm so glad you like it 😀. I took note of your wish.

  • @mariamabkamara2625
    @mariamabkamara2625 2 месяца назад +7

    My exam is on 7 Dec 😫 pray for me guys my second time now on it

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  2 месяца назад +2

      I wish you all the best for your IELTS, you can do it! 😃

    • @Rozhbyrozhi
      @Rozhbyrozhi Месяц назад +1

      how did your test go?

    • @mariamabkamara2625
      @mariamabkamara2625 Месяц назад

      @ Hmm 🌝 I hope I pass it time management is a little

    • @HaritGaming
      @HaritGaming Месяц назад

      What is your band score ​@@mariamabkamara2625

    • @amalimadhuwanthi3466
      @amalimadhuwanthi3466 Месяц назад

      I hope that you have faced to your exam very well

  • @HenryObichere-kk9tt
    @HenryObichere-kk9tt 2 месяца назад +1

    Am the avatar, i mastered all four english skills, (L. R. W. S.)
    Thanks juva❤

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  2 месяца назад

      Congratulations! That's amazing, you can be so proud of yourself. I'm so glad I could help 😀.

  • @kaushalbhattarai7864
    @kaushalbhattarai7864 Месяц назад +1

    just i wanna know can we give a personalize example like this essay

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  Месяц назад

      Yes because the instructions say that you should give examples from your personal experience.

  • @gcuchennaubah
    @gcuchennaubah Месяц назад +1

    I love your teaching style
    How do i get your materials
    I do not earn in dollars, makeit easier for me to get the material in my local currency 🙏.

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  Месяц назад

      I'm so glad you like it 😀. You can find the IELTS Materials here: juva.podia.com/ielts-materials

  • @rajdeepkaur2831
    @rajdeepkaur2831 Месяц назад +1

    Is it ok to use personal example? mam
    Actually no one in the institutes teach this they just use general examples or surveys..
    Please must reply.

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  Месяц назад

      Yes, it's fine to use personal examples because the instructions say that you should give examples from your personal experience.

  • @SukhbrarBrar-l4c
    @SukhbrarBrar-l4c 8 дней назад +1

    Can we write personal example is the exam??? But some teacher avoid this

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  7 дней назад

      The instructions tell you to use examples from your personal experience, so that's totally fine 😀

  • @akrom5023
    @akrom5023 2 месяца назад +1

    Thank you🎉

  • @Mind--Soul
    @Mind--Soul 2 месяца назад

    Hi! just came across your video. It was really insightful. I have a confusion. Should we include a paragraph focusing on opposing view? or it isn't necessary in ielts. Thank You!

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  2 месяца назад

      I'm so glad you like it 😀. Great question! In an Agree/Disagree essay the question asks you whether you agree or disagree with a statement and to give reasons and examples for your answer. So, you are not asked to write about another view. You have to state your view and give reasons and examples for it. I hope this helps!

  • @dhurkibaaniaai6761
    @dhurkibaaniaai6761 2 месяца назад +1

    yes we want more

  • @imransarder2558
    @imransarder2558 2 месяца назад +1

    Juva, what the personal example give this essay?

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  2 месяца назад

      I'm not sure what you mean, could you specify please?

    • @imransarder2558
      @imransarder2558 2 месяца назад

      What can be given in personal example into eassy? Please check your mail already I have a mail for your help.

  • @sadiquepindar335
    @sadiquepindar335 День назад

    yes

  • @jeonlarisa
    @jeonlarisa 2 месяца назад +1

    can i use personal examples?

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  2 месяца назад

      Sure, you can! The question asks you to give reasons and examples from your personal experience, so you are asked to do this.

  • @홍올리
    @홍올리 Месяц назад +1

    why did I just find ur video after having 3 tests!!!

  • @imaduddin9265
    @imaduddin9265 2 месяца назад +1

    make videos on every question type of task 2 writing

  • @YuvanPlays
    @YuvanPlays 2 месяца назад +1

    please upload video for discussion essay as well please

  • @Taposhecooking52
    @Taposhecooking52 2 месяца назад

    Thank u❤

  • @Sameer-i6b
    @Sameer-i6b Месяц назад +1

    Is it not Better to write 70% agree and 30% disagree because we do not know what will be the examiner view on question
    Like if we write on agreement view but examiner is opposite to it
    Will it affect our band or not?

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  Месяц назад

      It doesn't matter what your opinion is. The IELTS examiner is marking your writing, so is interested in your English skills, not your opinion.

  • @kathir8624
    @kathir8624 2 месяца назад

    Shall we write our own story in writing task 2 in example.
    In this video you are denoting "my sister's son".. like this can we write?

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  2 месяца назад

      The question asks you to include knowledge or examples from your personal experience, so this is absolutely fine 😀

  • @ParvejKhan-oy6vy
    @ParvejKhan-oy6vy 2 месяца назад

    Please make a play list for IELTS writing...

  • @kulvirkaursandhu5245
    @kulvirkaursandhu5245 Месяц назад +1

    Hii, I want template

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  Месяц назад

      Hi 😀 You can find all templates here: juva.podia.com/ielts-materials

  • @sheikhsr1377
    @sheikhsr1377 2 месяца назад

    I will see your video ❤

  • @Sameer-i6b
    @Sameer-i6b Месяц назад +1

    To what extent do you agree or disagree?
    Do you agree or disagree?
    Are these two different types of questions?
    Please answer

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  Месяц назад

      The two questions differ in some respect. If the question asks to what extent you agree or disagree, you need to say how much you agree or disagree.

    • @Sameer-i6b
      @Sameer-i6b Месяц назад

      ​@@IELTS-with-Juva so in this type can't we fully agree or disagree?

  • @ifedolaJoseph
    @ifedolaJoseph 2 месяца назад +1

    Yes!!!

  • @elijahobayagweme7213
    @elijahobayagweme7213 2 месяца назад

    Please Is personal example allowed in essay writing .

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  2 месяца назад

      Yes, you can use personal examples in IELTS Writing Task 2.

    • @prem7032
      @prem7032 2 месяца назад

      No. It is not allowed. Please don't write any personal examples or statistics in your ielts writing task 2.

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  2 месяца назад

      @@prem7032 The instructions in IELTS Writing Task 2 say "Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. " So it's absolutely fine to use personal examples 😀

  • @garynilesunson848
    @garynilesunson848 2 месяца назад +2

    Thank you very much, my lovely teacher 💕💕💕💕

  • @ahmety1313
    @ahmety1313 2 месяца назад +1

    Could you say what is the score of this essay?

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  2 месяца назад +1

      This is a Band 9 essay 😀

    • @TASIN286
      @TASIN286 Месяц назад

      ​@@IELTS-with-Juva amr cheder bal

  • @indirahathurusinghe
    @indirahathurusinghe 2 месяца назад +1

    Yes

  • @Itsstotaa
    @Itsstotaa Месяц назад +1

    My exam is 21 dec i don’t understand anything I’m worried too!

  • @Rahim_rahi
    @Rahim_rahi Месяц назад +1

    Today is my writing test its my 3rd test please pray for me

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  Месяц назад

      I wish you all the best for your IELTS test! 😀

  • @foeysalingkan9396
    @foeysalingkan9396 2 месяца назад

    how can i get your template?

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  2 месяца назад

      You can find all templates here: juva.podia.com/ielts-materials 😀

  • @sandhyagamingff1108
    @sandhyagamingff1108 2 месяца назад +1

    Write Opinion eassys in next video.... 🙌🏻

  • @Daviid214
    @Daviid214 15 дней назад +1

    Pray for me. My exam is scheduled on Monday 20 January.

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  14 дней назад

      I wish you all the best for your IELTS test! 😀

  • @erfanvid2626
    @erfanvid2626 2 месяца назад +1

    100% OUT OF 100% YES

  • @AswathyS-b3b
    @AswathyS-b3b 2 месяца назад +1

    Next week my exam😢

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  2 месяца назад +1

      I wish you all the best for your IELTS, you can do it! 😃

  • @sabazia8316
    @sabazia8316 2 месяца назад

    Is AI version?

  • @emranemon9293
    @emranemon9293 2 месяца назад

    You are incredible teacher and deserve more response then current...❤❤❤

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  2 месяца назад

      I'm so glad you like it 😀. Thank you so much for your amazing feedback!

  • @atherzz2808
    @atherzz2808 Месяц назад +1

    My exam is tomorrow send hel0 😢

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  Месяц назад

      I wish you all the best for your IELTS, you can do it! 😀

  • @armanitamber
    @armanitamber 2 месяца назад

    you cant carry a telephone ....telephones are landlines. telephones cant be a mobile phones.

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  2 месяца назад

      Telephone traditionally refers to a landline phone, but you can use "telephone" instead of "mobile phone".

  • @asmasaduf6257
    @asmasaduf6257 2 месяца назад

    Why on earth would someone start of saying 'is hard ' how demotivating that sounds . Bring in some positivity

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  2 месяца назад

      I wanted to point out that IELTS Writing Task 2 is challenging, but if you know what the IELTS examiner is looking for, it's easier to score high. I hope the video was helpful to you! 😀

  • @pawanshine7635
    @pawanshine7635 2 месяца назад

  • @AkashChy-w9g
    @AkashChy-w9g Месяц назад

    XEY

  • @tigerurfi9388
    @tigerurfi9388 2 месяца назад +1

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  • @ugwubeatrice9702
    @ugwubeatrice9702 2 месяца назад

    Yes

  • @healthandwellnessbysanz4624
    @healthandwellnessbysanz4624 Месяц назад +1

    Yes

  • @FarhanaAfrose-c2z
    @FarhanaAfrose-c2z Месяц назад +1

    yes

  • @md.nazmulhaque8926
    @md.nazmulhaque8926 Месяц назад +1

    Yes

  • @DanialGhahramani
    @DanialGhahramani 15 дней назад +1

    Yes