Dear Speaker: I’ve been an ESL Teacher for 25 years. I can firmly say this is one of the best tutorials on writing essays. You seamlessly flow through your guidance. Your voice is well-timed and the visual aids are just right. Congrats! I just feel like giving something back: I would recommend minding two factors: Avoiding contractions because it is more academic and makes room for more word-count and punctuation on relative clauses. I wish you festive successful moments!!!
Hello madam please upload more video. I always wait for your new video . I found that you are the best online ielts teacher .if you have any way to communicate with me please tell me l really want to talk with you and gain more knowledge of ilets from you.
Whoever you are, I can not thank you enough for your help with the writing task. I was never able to get more than 6.5. I sat IELTS on December 7th and scored 7.5. Thank you!!!!!!
I needed 6.0 in writing. I did no practice, found this channel on the day of exam and followed the guidelines to structure my essays for both task 1 and 2. Got band 7.0. The videos give really good explanations to build a structure and write essays. Thanks.
I'm PGT English and an ielts trainer now I have been teaching for last twenty two years, watching your videos is a great support for me. Thank you so much 💖
I just came back to say thank you. This information is the real deal!!! I watched 3 videos from this channel and I got a 7.5 Band for Writing and an overall Band 8.5.
I got band 8 in writing after I watched this video and other videos of the same channel, and followed the same techniques, although I needed just 6, and my English is not that solid... thank you very much, and good luck for others
I HAVE GONE THROUGH THOUSANDS OF VIDEOS BUT I SWEAR BY GOD THIS IS ONE OF THE MOST EFFECTED VIDEO I CAME ACROSS. PLEASE MAKE MORE VIDEOS LIKE THIS PLS,
can anyone kinldy help me by telling that is it sufficient if follow this Wonderfull channel's two Writing Task 2 video 1 - Agree or Disagree and Causes Solutions? this two video is enough for Writing Task 2? Thank you
0:39 Example of the question 1:57 Writing task 2 structure 2:41 Choosing your opinion (Your opinion doesn’t affect your mark) - When you don’t know which opinion to pick: Pick the one that you have more supporting points 3:39 Generate supporting points - You don’t need too many supporting ideas: 2 or 3 is enough 4:19 Second opinion 5:02 Introduction - First sentence: Paraphrase the statement from your question card - Second sentence: Say whether you agree or disagree with the statement 5:37 Statement (introduction) To paraphrase, you can use following expressions: - It is argued that... - It is considered that... - It is thought that... 6:13 Written example of statement 7:37 Second sentence of introduction: Agree or Disagree 8:34 Body paragraphs 9:39 Band 9 template to write a body paragraph - Start 4th sentence with ‘For example’ or ‘For instance’ 14:41 Second paragraph 17:22 Conclusion: You can write the conclusion in 1 sentence - To conclude, - In conclusion, - To sum up, - To summarize, + Restate your opinion + Restate 2 reasons 19:15 Full essay
From all the videos I have watched you are by far the best. You remain focussed on teaching with excellent visual aids. You are so clear and easy to follow. You do not amplify on your own pictures/videos nor condemn other teachers. Such a rare breed that gives knowledge selflessly. Wherever you are, I can only wish good things your way.
I was at 5.5 and now I get my result today and its 7.5 in writing. How .... I dont know, i just followed this pattern !!!!!!!!!!!!>.. who you are ,?? where are you from .... I want to send a bouquet !!!
This channel is by far the best out of all channels out there for IELTS instructions. I highly recommend anyone to watch each and every single video they published. Their videos helped me a lot to dive deep into the core points we usually miss during our exams in order to achieve better scores.
You really have a good way of teaching in a way that intrigues the viewer. You sound very young at times- mid or late teens. It's impressive if that's the case. A slow, steady and a sweet voice is an added virtue. I can imagine you to be a teacher.
You are one among a few who could really make people understand the structure of essays. What we, the students, truly appreciate is your way of simplifying things. Please do post more videos like these.
I can’t describe how much she has made the IELTS writing so enjoyable. NO COMPLICATION, NO BORING unlyk most of videos I’ve watched. You saved lots of peoplee!!
I recently came across your channel. In my opinion, you are one of the best in teaching. You are excellent at what you do and I know that because of listening to your tutorials, I will undoubtedly ace my IELTS. Thanks a bushel for teaching so clearly and simplifying what seemed difficult.
I firmly believe that you should upload new videos on IELTS. Really, I have been surfing through IELTS recommendation videos and this is by far the best video.
Dear teacher please kindly come back and make more videos. You are so good at this. I plan to have IELTS exam at the end of this year and need your help.
I would like to thank you, because of you and one more ielts youtube page i managed to get an overall band 7 score on my first ielts attempt, with under a week of studying. Your videos have been massively helpful for me!
Really love the way of detailed explanation with examples. Kudos to your effort of making these videos for financially struggling students out there who can watch this tutorial for free!! cheers!!
this is the best video tutorial on writing Task 2 i have seen so far. well arranged in a logical way. thank God i found it earlier before my examination.
your tutorials are worth more than the course I attended. They are very precise and understandable. Having hated writing hobby for ages I now have started to enjoy writing. I have been following your lessons and doing several exercises. It helps me a lot. Please keep doing it. You are helping thousand of students across the globe.
I am watching your content right now just before the day of my IELTS exam. I hope your video affects my score in a positive direction because this was very informative. I'll keep you posted about the writing score. Edit: I got 6.0 from writing and I wrote less than 150 words in W1 but still I applied your method on W2. Thank you, helped me much.
In my opinion this is the best channel for me to learn because she uses simple words and she also provide basic and small detailed instructions that we miss
Dear speaker...how can someone be so sweet you have so clear way to teach,so perfect timing....you are just amazing... If you were my personal teacher than i would surely have scored 9 on every section🙂 Thank you.
I have watched tons of videos to up my writing skills. By far, this is the BESTTTTTT. Perfect technique/ pattern, logical and impressive. God bless youuu. Please make more videos. You are a great teacher.🌸
its my personal request to the admin, kindly please upload more videos on writing task -2 formats. literally the best formats I have ever seen in the internet. Thank you very much !!!! xoxo..s!!
You are absolutely fabulous! The best tutorial I have seen, and believe me I've seen a few. You have a very smooth tone in your voice and you take the time to explain in great detail the steps in becoming a great essay writer. I'm a native speaker and wow! What makes you different is that you are a magnificent communicator and you speak through your heart. You can feel proud of yourself, and I can feel honoured to have been lucky to stumble on your essay-master-class quite by chance. They say that when the student is ready, the master shall become present. Perhaps everything is life does have a purpose after all. Thank you.
The most great lecture ever about ielts. I have seen thousand of vedios of youtube but no one has made a vedio like this. Amazing vedio, understand everything. Acknowledge the whole topic. Best vedio in 2024 even.
I finish may IELTS last Feb. 11 .. may only advice is that you must not be nervous because if you did .. all you hardwork in preparation will be ruined .. just focus ..
Actually it seams like she does not make more videos but her videos were very gelpful for me ,clarity ,structure of ans,everything been understood the way she tried to explain about attempting exams so i was appreciating her
Moral of this video is, she didn't use any fancy vocabularies rather she focused on structures the most. SO dear pupils whoever is planning to attempt their ielts i must say don't go after vocabularies , in contrast you guys should look out at the strategy first for getting a good score . Thanks to the person for making my basics more clear.
I have my examination todayy after few hours & i am watching her videos! I hope everything goes welll! I will be back to comment how was my exam! Wish me all the besttt❤️
Dear Speaker, I am anxiously waiting to see your videos on reading strategies, specially on “matching questions”. I thank you on behalf of everyone here because I am fully satisfied with your guidelines and at the same time looking forward to see the best in your videos.
Definitely, you came to this world to teach. No doubt about it. I believe, to have a job that helps your world, society, gives you a lot of satisfaction. You Found it. I am happy for you.
Overall, your essay addresses the topic well and presents a clear opinion. Let's break down the evaluation based on IELTS Writing Task 2 criteria: 1. **Task Response (TR):** You have addressed the task clearly, expressing a well-defined opinion on the importance of job satisfaction over a high salary. Your ideas are relevant to the topic. 2. **Coherence and Cohesion (CC):** Your essay has a good structure with clear paragraph divisions. The ideas within paragraphs are logically presented, and there is a smooth progression from one point to the next. 3. **Lexical Resource (LR):** Your vocabulary is varied and appropriate for the topic. You effectively use words and phrases to convey your ideas. Consider adding some more complex vocabulary to further enhance your lexical range. 4. **Grammatical Range and Accuracy (GRA):** Your grammar is generally accurate, and you have used a variety of sentence structures. However, there are a few minor grammatical errors that can be corrected for better precision. 5. **Overall Impression (OI):** The essay demonstrates a strong argument in favor of job satisfaction. It is well-organized and presents ideas coherently. However, improving grammatical accuracy and incorporating more advanced vocabulary could enhance the overall impression. Given the assessment, I would assign the essay a score of approximately 7.5 to 8.0 for IELTS Writing Task 2. This is based on the general IELTS band descriptors for each criterion. Keep refining your writing skills, and you'll likely achieve an even higher score.
Replying 4 years late but i would wish you better and easy upcoming days, tasks and Challenges of your life and where ever you are hope you are happy and enjoying your life
I was stunned by how many subscribers (535B) she has, that is outstanding! This channel is worth that many subscribers, additionally, she is an amazing teacher from my point of view.
Such a well structured way and mechnsim for getting cherishing the result. I am planning to get exam at decmeber... I'll keep such way in my mind, I doubt to keep them alive in my mind but I'll do my best
Its 2024 and this still is the best tutorial one can find on youtube. 🔥
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Indeed... Why she is not available!!!!!????
@@tanhiatondra7703that's what I am thinking...she is best
yes, still I think so
Dear Speaker: I’ve been an ESL Teacher for 25 years. I can firmly say this is one of the best tutorials on writing essays. You seamlessly flow through your guidance. Your voice is well-timed and the visual aids are just right. Congrats! I just feel like giving something back: I would recommend minding two factors: Avoiding contractions because it is more academic and makes room for more word-count and punctuation on relative clauses. I wish you festive successful moments!!!
Hello sir/madam, I have some issue with writing part 2 .we need to write opposite oppion or not
Hello madam please upload more video. I always wait for your new video . I found that you are the best online ielts teacher .if you have any way to communicate with me please tell me l really want to talk with you and gain more knowledge of ilets from you.
@@rushabhdoshi9532 it depends on what you choose.
?can you recomend another website or any other youtube channel for high ielts score ? pleaseeee
@@annamariastavropoulou8002 follow ielts Liz
I had come across your channel just a few hours before my test. I received my results today, I got 6.5 in writing. I'll forever be grateful to you. ❤
Thank god i found this youtube channel 😭😭 Its currently 1am and my exam is tomorrow. Wish me luck everyone.
She is truly good at this, furthermore, I have never seen anyone writing and explaining so clearly writing some short lines.
Exactly
agree
Sadly she doesn't have much videos. She's so good at this.
Yes, she is. I hope she will upload more videos about Ielts.
yes
I agree
Please come back
I Totally agree .It's the best video I've seen so far about opinion essay writing . You're the best
I'm taking my test tomorrow. SO nervous. Good luck to me and you.
How'd it go
How was it?
What's about your result Ms. And Mr.😁
How's that !! Results??
@@burningeyes2211 😂😂😂
Whoever you are, I can not thank you enough for your help with the writing task. I was never able to get more than 6.5. I sat IELTS on December 7th and scored 7.5. Thank you!!!!!!
How did it go ?
I needed 6.0 in writing. I did no practice, found this channel on the day of exam and followed the guidelines to structure my essays for both task 1 and 2.
Got band 7.0. The videos give really good explanations to build a structure and write essays. Thanks.
plz tell me is it compulsory to use fancy vocab and some fixed lines in writing module ?? cuz i don't have much confidence to use fancy one..
@@ZoraTheStaffyDog not at all
Just use simple words, but should be meaningful
@@ZoraTheStaffyDog no not really
I'm PGT English and an ielts trainer now I have been teaching for last twenty two years, watching your videos is a great support for me. Thank you so much 💖
Hi miss, would you like to have conversation with me, i am also preparing & will sit for ielts test in the ending of December.
I just came back to say thank you. This information is the real deal!!! I watched 3 videos from this channel and I got a 7.5 Band for Writing and an overall Band 8.5.
Wow! That's incredible ❤️🔥 well done!
I got band 8 in writing after I watched this video and other videos of the same channel, and followed the same techniques, although I needed just 6, and my English is not that solid... thank you very much, and good luck for others
shadi sror i'm smiling on your success.I wish i will get the same on tomorrow test.
Asmit katwal How was it?
Now I am in Asmit's position, I am having a test scheduled for tomorrow. :)
did u use contraction
@@shashankiiitdm how much did you got???
I HAVE GONE THROUGH THOUSANDS OF VIDEOS BUT I SWEAR BY GOD THIS IS ONE OF THE MOST EFFECTED VIDEO I CAME ACROSS. PLEASE MAKE MORE VIDEOS LIKE THIS PLS,
@Hello Welcome home no
its true
please coming back
can anyone kinldy help me by telling that is it sufficient if follow this Wonderfull channel's two Writing Task 2 video 1 - Agree or Disagree and Causes Solutions? this two video is enough for Writing Task 2? Thank you
@@positivenahcreative yes you can follow her instructions
Are you attend in IELTS Exam dear
0:39 Example of the question
1:57 Writing task 2 structure
2:41 Choosing your opinion (Your opinion doesn’t affect your mark)
- When you don’t know which opinion to pick: Pick the one that you have more supporting points
3:39 Generate supporting points
- You don’t need too many supporting ideas: 2 or 3 is enough
4:19 Second opinion
5:02 Introduction
- First sentence: Paraphrase the statement from your question card
- Second sentence: Say whether you agree or disagree with the statement
5:37 Statement (introduction)
To paraphrase, you can use following expressions:
- It is argued that...
- It is considered that...
- It is thought that...
6:13 Written example of statement
7:37 Second sentence of introduction: Agree or Disagree
8:34 Body paragraphs
9:39 Band 9 template to write a body paragraph
- Start 4th sentence with ‘For example’ or ‘For instance’
14:41 Second paragraph
17:22 Conclusion: You can write the conclusion in 1 sentence
- To conclude,
- In conclusion,
- To sum up,
- To summarize,
+ Restate your opinion + Restate 2 reasons
19:15 Full essay
Thanks. Ur comment really helped
Thanks👍😇
Thanks for ur effort
really appreciate your comment, thanks a lot
Thank you so much 😘
I hope all of you get band 9 in IELTS overall 🙏🏽
I got 6.5 in IELTS Writing watching this channel. Great work and thankyou!!
Hi
From all the videos I have watched you are by far the best. You remain focussed on teaching with excellent visual aids. You are so clear and easy to follow. You do not amplify on your own pictures/videos nor condemn other teachers. Such a rare breed that gives knowledge selflessly. Wherever you are, I can only wish good things your way.
I was at 5.5 and now I get my result today and its 7.5 in writing. How .... I dont know, i just followed this pattern !!!!!!!!!!!!>.. who you are ,?? where are you from .... I want to send a bouquet !!!
Is that real
@@jeevan3571 yes... may be because my question was same agree/disagree
@@XTRAXPARTS you are so luck, I think agree/ disagree is easy than comparing to other types, isn't it.any keep it up
Plss tell me about yore test....
What is your overall score??
Each and every sentence of hers never fails to amaze me all the time. I bet you are the best. What a genius!
This channel is by far the best out of all channels out there for IELTS instructions. I highly recommend anyone to watch each and every single video they published. Their videos helped me a lot to dive deep into the core points we usually miss during our exams in order to achieve better scores.
Thank you for your advice!
You really have a good way of teaching in a way that intrigues the viewer. You sound very young at times- mid or late teens. It's impressive if that's the case. A slow, steady and a sweet voice is an added virtue. I can imagine you to be a teacher.
You are one among a few who could really make people understand the structure of essays. What we, the students, truly appreciate is your way of simplifying things. Please do post more videos like these.
I can’t describe how much she has made the IELTS writing so enjoyable. NO COMPLICATION, NO BORING unlyk most of videos I’ve watched. You saved lots of peoplee!!
I watched so many videos on so many channels but the way U link the words with the given statement is like magic.
Your teaching is Infectious and on point. Very useful, scored 7 band after going through your videos in a day.
Wherever you're, loved it.
Big thanks ❤
I got a band 7 in writing. Thank you so much! ❤️
Can you help me in task 1.....
Lucky you I'm so bad at it
Hi
@@deepika1081 Hi.. Did you attempt your Ielts
@@deepika1081 i can help you
You are the greatest teacher I have seen ever on RUclips. I'm glad to your teaching technique
In 2023 I didn't take any special classes for IELTS just your videos and achieved an overall 8 band.. Thank you!!
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Incredible 🎉👌👍👍
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Can you help me plz
How
its 2024 and this video is the only one I can grasp the IELTS Writing task 2.
What an enthralling video! Thanks for your sharing 😍😍😍😍
I got 6.5 on writing and thanks a lot to my online teacher for such a wonderful videos which enhanced my score as well as confidence❤️
Bro give me tips in writing task 2
I recently came across your channel. In my opinion, you are one of the best in teaching. You are excellent at what you do and I know that because of listening to your tutorials, I will undoubtedly ace my IELTS. Thanks a bushel for teaching so clearly and simplifying what seemed difficult.
You lady have done an amazing job, I've watched numerous videos about writing task 2 and I can state that your video is by far the best, thank you
This is the best so far
Good job!!
Thank you so much
I firmly believe that you should upload new videos on IELTS. Really, I have been surfing through IELTS recommendation videos and this is by far the best video.
Dear teacher please kindly come back and make more videos. You are so good at this. I plan to have IELTS exam at the end of this year and need your help.
You are absolutely right. I send her an E-mail, But she didn’t respond me.😢😢
You have made the most comprehensive guide on ielts writing in the entirety of RUclips. 🎉
So many thanks for your video! I got a 5 to 7 improvement in writing tasks after finishing watching all your videos!!!
I would like to thank you, because of you and one more ielts youtube page i managed to get an overall band 7 score on my first ielts attempt, with under a week of studying. Your videos have been massively helpful for me!
Hey can you please share that other page of RUclips from where you get some help in order to get good scores.
hey could you please share with us ant other youtube ielts chanel that helpped you achieve that score . or any website polease ?
Chris Max
You are so good at structuring the material. Looking forward to other types of essays properly displayed. Fascinating job. Brilliant
This channel is the best for IELTS! I recommend this one!
Really love the way of detailed explanation with examples. Kudos to your effort of making these videos for financially struggling students out there who can watch this tutorial for free!! cheers!!
Big thanks to you. I got 4 8s in my IELTS test and can now proceed to apply for residency in Australia.
what the mening of 4 5s
Good day☀
Have you settled
Hey, which city
Due to the virus Australia will likely to be corrupted LOL :))
this is the best video tutorial on writing Task 2 i have seen so far. well arranged in a logical way. thank God i found it earlier before my examination.
your tutorials are worth more than the course I attended. They are very precise and understandable. Having hated writing hobby for ages I now have started to enjoy writing. I have been following your lessons and doing several exercises. It helps me a lot. Please keep doing it. You are helping thousand of students across the globe.
I am watching your content right now just before the day of my IELTS exam. I hope your video affects my score in a positive direction because this was very informative. I'll keep you posted about the writing score.
Edit: I got 6.0 from writing and I wrote less than 150 words in W1 but still I applied your method on W2. Thank you, helped me much.
In my opinion this is the best channel for me to learn because she uses simple words and she also provide basic and small detailed instructions that we miss
Dear speaker...how can someone be so sweet you have so clear way to teach,so perfect timing....you are just amazing...
If you were my personal teacher than i would surely have scored 9 on every section🙂 Thank you.
Did you do the practice test given in the description
I have watched tons of videos to up my writing skills. By far, this is the BESTTTTTT. Perfect technique/ pattern, logical and impressive. God bless youuu. Please make more videos. You are a great teacher.🌸
Best deconstruction.. has brought so much more clarity and makes me more relaxed. The best video so far!
can u give general statement for this agree disagree question?in introduction
I’m leaving this massage to every one those who take their examination best wishes to all and always successful in your life ! God bless you ❤️
I'll be seating for my exam on 25 3 2023 thanks for your wishes
its my personal request to the admin, kindly please upload more videos on writing task -2 formats. literally the best formats I have ever seen in the internet.
Thank you very much !!!!
xoxo..s!!
You are absolutely fabulous! The best tutorial I have seen, and believe me I've seen a few.
You have a very smooth tone in your voice and you take the time to explain in great detail the steps in becoming a great essay writer.
I'm a native speaker and wow! What makes you different is that you are a magnificent communicator and you speak through your heart.
You can feel proud of yourself, and I can feel honoured to have been lucky to stumble on your essay-master-class quite by chance. They say that when the student is ready, the master shall become present. Perhaps everything is life does have a purpose after all.
Thank you.
Pls make videos on reading listening and speaking too.plsssssss
It's a humble request
Awesome! In 2020, I learnt a lot of technique that would be helpful for my IELTS exam, InshaAllah. Thank you very much.
Do you know how to write an essay well?
The most great lecture ever about ielts. I have seen thousand of vedios of youtube but no one has made a vedio like this. Amazing vedio, understand everything. Acknowledge the whole topic. Best vedio in 2024 even.
I finish may IELTS last Feb. 11 .. may only advice is that you must not be nervous because if you did .. all you hardwork in preparation will be ruined .. just focus ..
We need you back with more and more content , this is true masterpiece and gold stuff.
totally agree with you. I have learned ielts for 3 years, and i haven't seen a person can teach writing part so clear and useful.
Tomorrow is my ielts test ..god be with me ... i M nervous 😢
I really appreciate your work may Allah always have his Blessings on you 😘😘😘😘
???:^
Actually it seams like she does not make more videos but her videos were very gelpful for me ,clarity ,structure of ans,everything been understood the way she tried to explain about attempting exams so i was appreciating her
I don't have a problem with you appreciating her
Moral of this video is, she didn't use any fancy vocabularies rather she focused on structures the most. SO dear pupils whoever is planning to attempt their ielts i must say don't go after vocabularies , in contrast you guys should look out at the strategy first for getting a good score . Thanks to the person for making my basics more clear.
I think that she is one of the best online tutors on IELTS writing
The best tutorial for writing task 2!!! i need this since my exam is in 3 weeks. thank you :)
How was it? I've in 2 weeks
Thank you so much for your lessons.. I scored an 8.5 overall!
keep up the good work! 10/10 recommend! :)
That is my desired overall score!!congratulations.
Kaise yrr plss share with me
How did you achieve that score? Can u please share with us?
@@aashibhardwaj7063 have you written IELTS yet ?
Hlo please tell me can we use pronounce in paragraphs
I just finished all of your vids. Pls upload more . They're Very helpful and straightforward. I love the way you explain thank u so much.
can u give general statement for this agree disagree question?in introduction
I think so
Please come back, your videos are so clear and helpful for dozens of IELTS students including me .!
She makes it look so easy. you're a very good teacher
I have my examination todayy after few hours & i am watching her videos! I hope everything goes welll! I will be back to comment how was my exam! Wish me all the besttt❤️
how was your exam?
So how was it?
Dear Speaker,
I am anxiously waiting to see your videos on reading strategies, specially on “matching questions”.
I thank you on behalf of everyone here because I am fully satisfied with your guidelines and at the same time looking forward to see the best in your videos.
REALLY GOOD THIS VIDEO . SO EASY TO UNDERSTAND THE STRUCTURE OF WRITING TASK 2. MANY THANKS TO THE TEACHER OF THIS VIDEO.
This is obviously one of the best and most explicit IELTS channel i've come across. it's very much helpful, thanks.
Definitely, you came to this world to teach. No doubt about it. I believe, to have a job that helps your world, society, gives you a lot of satisfaction. You Found it. I am happy for you.
I am taking test on October 24 ...I am little bit nervous ..friends plz pray for me🥺🙏
Where are u mam, please come back
Thank you, this video helps me a lot! My writing score increased from 5.5 to 6.5 (which enough for my need and purpose) ~💜
Really when did u given ? I also got 5.5
Overall, your essay addresses the topic well and presents a clear opinion. Let's break down the evaluation based on IELTS Writing Task 2 criteria:
1. **Task Response (TR):** You have addressed the task clearly, expressing a well-defined opinion on the importance of job satisfaction over a high salary. Your ideas are relevant to the topic.
2. **Coherence and Cohesion (CC):** Your essay has a good structure with clear paragraph divisions. The ideas within paragraphs are logically presented, and there is a smooth progression from one point to the next.
3. **Lexical Resource (LR):** Your vocabulary is varied and appropriate for the topic. You effectively use words and phrases to convey your ideas. Consider adding some more complex vocabulary to further enhance your lexical range.
4. **Grammatical Range and Accuracy (GRA):** Your grammar is generally accurate, and you have used a variety of sentence structures. However, there are a few minor grammatical errors that can be corrected for better precision.
5. **Overall Impression (OI):** The essay demonstrates a strong argument in favor of job satisfaction. It is well-organized and presents ideas coherently. However, improving grammatical accuracy and incorporating more advanced vocabulary could enhance the overall impression.
Given the assessment, I would assign the essay a score of approximately 7.5 to 8.0 for IELTS Writing Task 2. This is based on the general IELTS band descriptors for each criterion. Keep refining your writing skills, and you'll likely achieve an even higher score.
Only God can reward you on your time you dedicated to breakdown IELTS test step by step, thank you once again.
Thank you so much! Probably the most useful video I've seen so far for IELTS prep. I do have my exam tomorrow, wish me luck :)
Replying 4 years late but i would wish you better and easy upcoming days, tasks and Challenges of your life and where ever you are hope you are happy and enjoying your life
I found these videos really impressive as these help us to enhance our writing skills efficaciously. I wish you will upload more videos soon.
Plzz post a video for reading tips its the only difficult task for most of the students
there's a lot of tips on reading that are very helpful all over youtube :)
You are the very teacher of ielts please carry on 🙏
I can't stop saying may God bless you, you are a best teacher ever
It was amazing video which helps to achieve 7+ bands in writing
Excellent! More videos about strategies for IELTS TASK 2!
Altai Aidyn u
+Ramesh Magar rundy ko xoro marxas muje rundy...
tero yesto kura lekhne thau ho khate
Thank you so much for this video. Please upload more videos as well. You have amazing potential to continue this job.
We’re you? please we need more fascinating videos like this ❤😢
Nobody can understand that where is she now😔 i feel sad about her.
@@Anoos424 😔
Tomorrow is my D day.. hoping to bring a band 9 home🙏. Thank you for this.
Your lecture is so amazing. It makes me understand a lot of things.. 💜💜
i got band 10 after this video!! it’s so good that i went over the score
fake......there is only band 9 and it is last
hahahahaah "Band 10" you seriously made me laugh
Hahahahhhaa
Idp , British council would have gone mad after reading ur comment.
Indeed! 🤣🤣🤣
This is what no one else informed me about.. Totally meaningful. Thank you
Roman Sandhu when will u appear in ielts exam
mian ammar , i am going to appear on 20th of january. Wish me luck.
Roman Sandhu wish you best of luck my brother
I was stunned by how many subscribers (535B) she has, that is outstanding! This channel is worth that many subscribers, additionally, she is an amazing teacher from my point of view.
I have watched too many videos. Started to watch the video here today and I can say that this is the best one for me.
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can u give general statement for this agree disagree question?in introduction
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What was ur writing and speaking topic?
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