IELTS Writing Task 2 | ADVANTAGES / DISADVANTAGES ESSAY with Jay!
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- Опубликовано: 15 ноя 2024
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I heard "sepas".
@@SobhanSigarudi-dr3ld its surpass
@@SobhanSigarudi-dr3ldsurpass I think
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Hi Jay... I got a overall 8.5 for my IELTS with an 8.0 for writing. Your videos were my biggest resource for writing . Thank you so much !
What do you do to improve your writing and can I have your email to help me with that):
You got 8 in writing ,will you able to help me to improve by evaluating my sample
Could you suggest me when we should write advantages in first bp or when in second BP
Before a question, I would like to thank you, E2 IELTS team, so much that we are getting absolutely decent information on IELTS.
Turning to the question, In this video you mentioned the introduction for ADVANTAGES/DISADVANTAGES ESSAYS like this:
Sentence 1: Rewrite "general statement"
Sentence 2: Mention main "advantages" and "disadvantages"
Sentence 3: Give your opinion.
But on video name "IELTS Writing Task 2:The 3 Sentence Introduction by Jay!", you outlined this process as followed:
Sentence 1: Neutral Background Sentence
Sentence 2: Rewrite the question
Sentence 3: This essay will ...... (focusing on what to tell to readers).
As a learner, I am a bit confused on this Introduction. With all respect, I hope, you will accept my question and I am looking forward to hear the answer as I believed other learners do too.
I have same confusion. Can anyone guide
@@mohammadshahid1719 both are the same...he has framed his sentences with different vocabs that's all
that's for problem solution essay
differ acc to ques type
Dear Jay, can u believe this ? I came across this essay last month and I wrote it down. I learned this essay along with others of you. On my date of exam, while in my car again i learned it and i could not believe in my destiny when saw it as my Task 2 ! It took me by surprise to say the least...for 5 minutes i was stunned and in next 7 minutes i wrote my essay as it was a cake walk....I got 7.5 band in academic writing. Thanks a ton, your all ideas are brilliant..
Really? I heard that we will be penalised if we copy essays🙄
No way same essays won't repeat
Wow you’re so lucky!!!!
@@Mohammed_Arshad906 It repeats but some small changes
Wow!!!!!!!
I really want to thank E2 channel for these videos . I got my IELTS results today .
Listening -9
Reading -9
Speaking -7.5
Writing - 7.5
Overall - 8.5
I'm a non native speaker and this was my first attempt . Can't thank you guys enough .
More love and subscribers to you ❤
This is the channel guyssss .
Thank you , great content .
Wow
Am still stuck with reading
You got 7.5 in writing ,can you help me to improve by evaluating my sample
@@nazarshad9908 Sure
Hey, please help me to figure out this, did Body paragraph should cantain only one idea or more than one. Moreover, (idea1+ reason+example+result+idea2+ reason+example+result+idea3+ reason+example+result) is this the pattern for 3 idea in bodyparagraph.
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Paragraph 1.
The greatest benefit is that students who study overseas will have the rare opportunity to learn a lot about different cultures which will inturn enrich them with great skills to thrive in life.
Being in a foreign land requires people to push through or weather whatever challenges life throws at them.
For instance, an introverted nineteen year old student who is studying overseas, would have to adapt to new cultures and form new bonds of friendship to balance socially.
Ultimately, these ultra-challenging experiences are paradoxically the main advantage of studying abroad because they make you acquire great skills.
Hi Jay, I have been watching your videos from sometime now. I gave my IELTS exam yesterday in India and I got below topics
1. LETTER -: To headmaster of you child's school asking for a day off for special celebration
Describe the type of celebration
Why is it mandatory for your child to be present
2. Essay -: People while visiting foreign country should behave the same way like inhabitants of that country. (Culture and Tradition vary from country to country)
Jay please give a your feedback in our essay below. Thank you!
Question:
There is an increasing trend around the world to have a small family rather than a large family.
What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of having a small family rather than a large family?
Wife version:
Although having a small family has a lot of good benefits to parents, children, and society other people consider it can lead to an unhappy lifestyle and other drawbacks to be discuss in this essay.
Firstly, having a small family can result in less expenses. A family of four, which consists of parents and two kids can have smaller grocery bills, water and electric bills. This means, parents can save more money in their bank accounts, pay their house mortgage on time and have a extra money for leisure. For example, the family can plan a yearly vacation trip. This is a great time where the family can get away to relax and have a quality time together. Secondly, parenting responsibilities is easier. Two kids are easy to manage and supervise and parents can give full attention to them. This leads to great parenting skills and can easily resolve any conflicts. Giving full attention to your own children is very beneficial especially when it comes to academic skill, kids will become a achiever and gets a high grades. Thirdly, parents can have a less stressful life. Stress is a major problem to parents to survive everyday dealing with work and family life. Parents that have one or two kids have less stress which can lead to happy and healthy lifestyle.
On the other hand, a small family has disadvantages and problems. One of the disadvantages of having a small family, the children is who gets full attention become spoiled. As a result, kids behavior is becoming narcissistic, attention seeker at school and society, which can lead in a mental health issue. Another problem is having less family support that can result to loneliness. When parents get old and they move to nursing home, parents can get depressed and feeling of being abandoned.
In conclusion, while small families has plenty of benefits to both parents and children, it can also lead to loneliness and mental health issue.
Husband version:
Although there are some advantages to having a small family, there are also disadvantages. A small family will mean less expenses and allow for more time to be spent with the children, but there are drawbacks that should be taken into account.
Firstly, one advantage of having a small family is it have less financial burden compared to having a large family. This allows the family to have extra money to be spent on other things such as luxury items and vacations. Secondly, a small family means more time is available for each child. The extra attention to each child will allow for them to learn and excel at a faster rate. Thirdly, the parents will have less stress with a smaller family. Less stressful parents will have a positive affect on the children since they will have more patience with them.
On the other hand, one disadvantage of having a small family is the parents will have less company and visits when they get older. This may result in loneliness and unhappiness if their small smiley is too busy to visit with them. Another reason a small family is a disadvantage is the risk of the children becoming spoiled because of all the attention they get. This can lead to the children misbehaving or not becoming independent.
In conclusion, the advantages of a small family to have less financial burden and more quality time for the children outlay the disadvantages of potentially having less visits when the parents are older and the risk of the children becoming spoiled.
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Thank you so much Jay for everything. I passed my IELTS test with high overall score after I watched all of your videos.
I watched all your videos on IELTS Writing task 2 as the only source for preparation of Writing task 2. They were so comprehensive that I didn't go for anything else.
There is a rise in students moving from their countries to study overseas to advance their learning.
Introduction: More people now prefer to undertake their higher institution learning abroad rather than in their local countries. While studying abroad definitely ensures that students are able to interact with counterparts from other parts of the world thereby opening them up to new perspectives while schooling; it could also make them home-sick every now and then. In my opinion, in spite of issues associated with foreign study, the prospects of better which lead to students gaining improved capacities outweigh the drawbacks.
Study abroad doesnt mean you don't study in your local country.
I know you are looking at it from the eyes of a Nigerian studying abroad. But countries such as the Uk, there are studies that also gives a person the opportunity to do a year abroad... it could be another uni they have partnership with and after the year abroad, you come back to your country and finish your studies. That is to say they are still in their local country but their degree allows them to study in another country.
So going by that, your introduction wont necessarily be a paraphrase of the initial topic
Can you write two advantages and two disadvantages?
I highly recommend this video. All the tips that Jay said did help me during the test itself. I only have less than a week of preparations or 3days to be exact, and just now I got the results, and I'm totally overwhelmed that I got band of 7.0
Kudos to you SIR JAY!!!
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More and more students are pursuing their tertiary education in foreign countries. While this may result in students not contributing anything to their own country, it allows students to broaden their perspective of the world which will aid them in their future careers. In my opinion, students should indeed study overseas, regardless of the inevitable drawbacks.
If students partake in academia in a place far away from home, they will be subject to immense personal growth, in terms of how they view the world. Furthermore, when a person is in foreign land, they are pushed outside of their comfort zones, and as a result he/she has to adjust accordingly to the new environment. In addition, he or she can meet new and completely different people, which gives the students a chance to listen to other points of view regarding various issues. For example, a person might have a strict belief system that conflicts with how the new country operates, which results in the person making allowances for the people around them. Also, a student can befriend an invidual who views the world differently, and the student can take invaluable insight from the other person's experiences. To sum up, students who study in a different country are exposed to a plethora of new experiences. As a result, they become wiser people.
On the other hand, there are definite drawbacks to studying abroad, and the main one is the detachment people feel from their own country. Living far away from home takes that home out of sight and out of mind, which can result in the student feeling no responsibility for the betterment of their native country. Moreover, many students decide to build their careers in the country they studied in, which leads to an economic disadvantage for their home country. For instance, if those international students had studied locally, they could have substantially contributed to the workforce in their native country, which means that the workforces of those countries lose out on many potential newcomers. Indeed, students who study abroad are less likely to give back to their own countries.
In conclusion, an increasing number of students are opting to pursue further education in a different country. Even though this decision enlightens the students, it causes problems for the countries those students are originally from. Nevertheless, I believe that students should move far away in order to study, as it builds character and wisdom, despite any negative consequences for their homelands.
You have some mistakes grammaticality, sentence formation
Thanks Jay, I wrote on Friday 26 June 2020 and scored band 7.
Jay thank you so much for the videos its unbelievable that such info is for free...taking my IELTS tests tomorrow, hope it goes well!
Dear J...I just feel like it would be selfish on my part not to come here and share this .I just cant thank you enough for your help on writing an essay. I was on zero when i came across your videos on RUclips. Thank you soo much for all the effort you put in and the time we wrote essays together step by step and sentence by sentence. It helped me soo much. My test date was on the 10th of August and I got band 6.5 on W, 7.5 S, 5.5 R, 6 L, and overall band 6.5. For me this is huge and I am very much thankful to your many many videos on RUclips. Thank you for your advice on not to just watch videos but to practice a lot.
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Thanks to Jay and team followed your channel on RUclips and had a band score of 7 in AC writing. I will recommend this channel to all
Thanks so much, I watched your video two days before exam and I just received my results . GT band 7. Thank you so much ❤️
I do not have words to thank you for these amazing lectures! IELTS seemed to be unconquerable dream until i came to know about this channel.
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For this type of essay , i have a question that the question promot use the plural word i.e advantages outweigh the disadvantages, but u told us to mention only 1 majn advantage- y is it so.
Secondly, i have heard that if word count goes beyond 300, then our marks are deducted.. is is really the case ??
I concur
Thanks Jay. I have been following you and your lessons have been very useful for my preparation. My score was reading-7.5, listening - 7.5, writing-7 and speaking 8.5. Thank you. Great job.
Congrats Deepa!
Deepa Balaji Rao I m also preparing for facing ielts but i m too weak in listening as well as in reading moreover i don't know that how to be accomplished this task
Deepa Balaji Rao great
+inderjeet
*Regarding Listening:* You should watch hollywood movies with/without subtitles regularly, it will help you understand the accent and answer the questions.
*Regarding Reading:* This one relies upon how much practise you have done. You should get some IELTS test book and start practicing the sample tests.
In my opinion, *Reading* & *Listening* tasks are not that tough to crack as you don't have to focus on grammar or vocabulary. But in *Writing* & *Speaking* tasks, you have to make sure your grammar, vocabulary, pronunciation is 100% correct.
Deepa Balaji Rao n
I truly appreciate the way you remain open and admit your mistakes. Since the majority of teachers don't tend to admit them, considering how it influences the students, starting to think like you by admitting mistakes can help both teachers and students learn and grow together.
Lots of love from #India
Jay you are an awesome teacher. I have blindly followed your videos and will appear for exam tomorrow.
Got 8 in writing. Prior to watching these videos I used to get 6.5. Simply followed your tips. Thanks a lot, Jay. Billion likes to all your writing videos.
realy?//are they that helpful,,,, i have same issue,,should i b hopeful now
how did you do it????
so could you please answer one of the common question of people left comment here?they ask Jay just wrote oneadvantage and one disadvantage.is it right?shoulnt we write more cons and pros???please answer me,I appretiate you😊
You made this type of pros/cons easier. Thank you. I love the way you teach so much.
Glad it was helpful!
Thank u very much jay for this wonderful video. I gave my exam on 4th January and received an overall 7.5 with 7 in writing (academic). I got the advantages/disadvantages essay and i followed ur given format. once again thank you for all your help. 🥰🥰🥰
Hi Utpal, would you please let me know if you wrote only 1 Advantage and Disadvantage or more than 1 Advantages and Disadvantages for your exam ?
@@dipenvadnagra6269 afcourse you u have to write more than one advantage/disad (i wrote 2 for both)
Congratulations.... Did you put the two advantages in one paragraph?
@@ikeoluwaoluwafolake2292 yass
My test is tomorrow and what on earth I just found this vdo!😫
Many thanks jay u website was a great asset in my preparation .I got the required score ,I was struggling with my preparation for almost a year and always missing my score just by 0.5 but your structure and all your essential tips for essay writing helped me crack the exam this time with flying colours
Many thanks
This trend will have expose students to different cultures and people however, It make it students face different climate conditions which may take time to adapt to.
In my opinion,I will say studying abroad is more beneficial in the long run since the students will eventually adapt overtime..
While in the students get to socialize and learn other cultures other than their s This inturn makes them better off has a person.
I really appreciate the job you have done here. I'm gonna try sending my text here :) (Yes, since this is my first try, I've used your grammar as well, so I could remember it and use in the future)
Writing Task 2 (first try)
Topic: In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Having finished high school, future students in some countries are inspired to work or travel for a year before entering university. Although young people will delay their graduation from university for this period, they will also have a chance to gain significant life experiences that will reward them later on in their career. In my opinion, students are far better off having gained new experiences despite that they will postpone their studying process as well as graduation.
Having a chance to make a wise decision about any young person’s future job by traveling or working before beginning higher education studies is the greatest benefit in this case. A future student will have an opportunity to try different professions or see new places and people to understand society in depth, which will improve themselves as people. For instance, when I started working as a sixteen-year-old waitress or a manager at a hotel later on, I was continually pushed out of my comfort zone, which gave me an opportunity to see how these spheres work, to communicate with different people and understand what job will suite me better, thus, helped me to grow as a human being. Therefore, doing a pause before studying at university and using this period for young people’s growth will give them far more benefits and even some new skills that would have been impossible if they had started learning at university right after high school.
The main challenge that future students will face while stemming studies will surely be the process of delaying itself. The time lagging will make pressure over a young person because it makes feel as if you were slower at progressing than other ones from high school graduating class. For example, while working as a teenage, I knew that my classmates had already entered different universities and by the time I was ready to continue studies they had already been in the process for a year. Oftentimes, it made me feel that I was missing something.
To conclude, young people from around the world are encouraged to make a pause between school and university in order to travel or work meanwhile. While future learners will no doubt experience time lagging pressure in comparison to their classmates, it is in fact the issue that leads to the main advantage of taking a pause for a year, which is personal growth. As a contradiction of sorts, it is the hardship that ultimately makes the experience of traveling or working before entering university more advantageous than disadvantageous.
I like the way u introduce and conclude essays Jay. Your wide usage of vocabulary as well helps for scoring.
hi ! Jay. Myself Dr. Akash from India. Just want to mention that you are awesome with your teaching methods. In dentistry we follow a concept i.e. the KISS concept ( Keep It Simple and Safe), while learning from your videos it just clicked to me that somehow that the KISS concept was also made applicable to the IELTS learning , by your brilliant methodology of teaching. So my advice to all my friends out there just keep it simple and safe (KISS concept ).thanks.
Western education has become popular among students nowadays. Although, it can be a bit challenging for students with cultural differences and linguistic problem whilst, studying abroad can enhance their knowledge and life experiences which can play a magnificent growth in their career
I am one of them who want to make your subscribers 1 million,,,,,,,,after doing this lesson i become your subscribers jay🇧🇩🇧🇩🇧🇩 well done
introduction General statement:
Nowadays, a growing number of student are seeking to undertake their studies in a foreign country.
How is my introduction general statement?
it is students,not student. their studies abroad...
Hi Jay,
I'm doing my ilets today. Hoping for the best. Thanks for the lessons
I passed, thanks
Band 7
Though this was 4 years ago, I really appreciate it for knowing your "you tube channel" recently and hoping this will help me to gain more for my band score for Writing Task 2 (Essay). Actually, this is my retake IELTS test I did passed my IELTS test 2 years ago but I have to retake for some reasons/purposes.
Just hoping that I will pass again for my 2nd time. Nway, I will keep watching your You Tube channel about Speaking, Listening, Reading, and Writing (methods, tips and strategies) to overview and gain my knowledge. Thank you Jay!
Jay, In your 1st sentence of paragraph one, I would rather say "The greatest benefit of studying abroad is that students will have life experience that will improve themselves as people that would have been otherwise impossible if they HAD HAD ( not 'HAVE' ) only studied in their own country". It seems more grammatically correct. What would you say?
Thanks Jay ,I will be sitting for my tests on Saturday and I am so confident that I will make it.
adv/disadv essay intro thesis statement:While there are some benefits to this,I believe that the drawbacks should also be taken into account.
Rewrite General Statement: It is a growing trend among university students to study abroad as a part of their academics.
Learning abroad allows to open a door for significant possibilities, such as personal growth, gaining experience and making new acquaintances.
I have watched the writing videos 3 hours before the exam and this particular one besides the task 1 videos were like a savior to me as I scored 7 in writing moving from 5.5 last time.
I was suspicious when I read the positive comments here, but after you helped me passing the exam, I felt in debt and that I must write something in your favor.
Thank you guys!
what was your task 2 question
@@alindasheena7666
I don't vividly remember, I wish to have a stronger memory. I think it was something like "Advantages and disadvantages of Research done by private sector not the government.."
This video explains very well. My only concern is if we are responding to the prompt correctly or not. The question is asking for advantageS and DisadvantageS. Why do we only talk about ONE advantage and disadvantage?
refer to official ielts website we should;
introduction (incloud more advantages)
advantage
another advantage
disadvantage
conclusion
In my opinion, studying abroad has far reaching benefits rather than challenges students may face.
Jay you're a splendid teacher and professional. I have spent substantial time watching these educational videos. I still have a constructive comment for you: instead of saying "despite blah blah blah blah", you can say: "despite this and that" "although this and that" "Because such and such" these examples sound more academic and not disturbing at all. I will not be getting a heart from you for this comment but I hope you will please consider this for your future videos and live classes. Peace
After 7 years and still this video is helpful.
Thankuuuuu I GOT 8.0 BANDS IN WRITING THAT'S BCUZ OF UR WRITING VIDEOS😘😘THANKUU
Hii there ...they mention advantages and disadvantages but jay only give one advantage and disadvantage .is that ok
Can you help me please i have exam tomorrow
@@prabhjotsaggu6352 yes.. Its correct.. Bcs in ielts writing.. We only need write one point for adv and one point for disadvantage
Being in another country opensb you up to better learning experience and quality of learning is top notch
Thank you sooo much jay ..you're the best teacher ever..i got 7 in writing by watching your videos only ..i recommend your lessons to anyone who is even thinking about ielts 😂 it doesn't hurt that you're easy on the eyes either 😉
But seriously thanks 😘
My opinion:
In my opinion, students can prefer to participate in such programs since it would help them to gain more knowledge in their desired course and will also boost their resumes scores, making them a far better desirable candidate.
here to express my gratitude to team E2 Ielts, you are the best! got a 7 in writing and an 8 in speaking in a period of 10 days by just following their videos and tips. Thank you so much Jay, Mark and Alex.
Did you give ietls general? If yes then what was your essay type and what type of question types were in listening ???
Im over the moon now, finally, I found this channel which is worth to watch.
Nowadays, it's becoming very common to go abroad for further studies. Students get great opportunities in a foreign land. On the other hand, they suffer from homesickness. In my opinion, studying away is far better and can undoubtedly benefit students from the opportunities they are gonna get, despite its downside.
During the overseas study, students get in touch with different types of local as well international students and can get benefits from their language, culture, and study strategy. People get new and advance career options in other countries that might not be possible in their home country. For instance, when I moved to Australia for further studies, I became self-reliant, made a lot of multi-cultural friends, and had to push my boundaries to make myself adjust to new culture and society. Hence, the students studying abroad grow very efficiently and practically as a person.
Some people do feel homesick because they have never been away from home before. People have to try harder to come out of their comfort zone and have to adjust in a new environment. When one of my friends moved abroad for his studies, it adversely affected his mental health due to being away from his family. He couldn't make it and returned after 3 months back to his hometown.
To conclude, students prefer to move overseas for higher education. So, the advantages of newer opportunities to what people are exposed to are way higher than the suffering of being away from family. According to me, the overall advantages of being overseas students outweigh its disadvantages.
Jay.... I made an 8.5 in listening, 7.5 in writing and 7.0 in reading. thank you, thank you, thank you.
You gave general ielts or academic..??
What was speaking score..?
@@vishalgurejani3933 General. Speaking 8.5
Wonderful!!
Congratulations!
Thank you
Brother I want to know that whether the speed of listening in real test is normal or fast
Many university students are considering to move overseas for their studies. The significant loss is to leave away their loved ones behind however, they move abroad to get closer to their goals and ambition, which is beneficial for them in the future. In my opinion, despite of the fact of leaving your loved ones behind going abroad for studies will certainly bring good to them and their family in the long-run.
Going abroad for studies opens up new doors of opportunities which helps students to achieve what they want in their lives. One of which is networking with like-minded people who share the same mission and vision. For instance, a student from Pakistan gets to meet new people from the industry which can help him to get a good job or to start a business. Migrating to a new Country for studies nurtures up a student's mindset and accompany them to reach towards their destiny.
But in order to achieve the desired goal one have to sacrifice a lot and the biggest one which holds the most value is leaving your family behind. Without any doubts they are closest to one's heart and separating from them for studies will be a massive challenge for any student. For example, in my Country most people prefer to live in the same house with their family so leaving them for the span of 2 to 4 years would not be an easy task by any means. Indeed, for a student it is a big hurdle to overcome the distancing of their loved ones for studying abroad.
To conclude, academic students are frequently moving to other Countries to continue their studies. Which absolutely assists students in converting their dreams into reality. Meanwhile, moving apart from your family is by far the greatest hurdle which one have to face. In my opinion, going abroad for studies really pushes and motivates one's limit to receive their desired output by which they and their family be proud of.
7 band
Before watching these videos i got 6.5
Listening 8.0
Reading 6.0
Writing 5.5
Speaking 6.5
I will update what i will get on the next test !
Wish me luck guys i want achieve a good score .
Hey.. How many got???now
@@goinnocent didn't change that much :( got (just one month difference) Listening 8.5 Reading 6.0 Writing 5.5 Speaking 6.0
I can't believe this lesson is free on youtube. Thank you Jay, this was very helpful!
@Noor Sultan i have my exam on 11 sep can you help me with writing and reading and if you want to we can do practice too?
@Noor Sultan where can I contact you?
@Noor Sultan speaking and listening was good but i messed with reading and writing 😫
@Noor Sultan In sha allah aa jaye ga. Nh mjy nh mila apka email…
@Noor Sultan paper based.
In many ways, studying abroad challenges students to coping up with new environment but it inevitably makes them better at communication.
Keep posting videos about Ietls please !!!! This is super helpful. Thankyou so much
There is a benefit because students become more knowledgeable despite the language challenges and fear people overcome working overseas.
HELP PLEASE! in one of your other tutorials, you clearly mentioned we need to use "double idea paragraph structure" for this type of essays, while here you have used a single main idea for each paragraph. It's quite confusing now, please guide why is that difference?
My teacher told me that in (advantages and disadvantages opinion version) you write just one paragraph for advantages
One paragraph for disadvantages
And one paragraph for your opinion.
_in this type you should write about 5 paragraphs
@@enashusarya1973 but in the description told that they are advantageS and disadvantageS so double idea, he told us
You are right , if that is the right criteria, here we will lose marks to mention only one advantage which is personal growth or gaining life experiences.
@@enashusarya1973 This is correct for discuss and give your opinion, not adv/disadv.
Do one advantage and one disadvantage paragraph. Put one idea in each and 'present, extend and support', just like the band descriptors say to. BD are king.
Thank you E2 IELTS.Your videos hepled me a lot on my test specially on Writing.Jay your are the best teacher.
Thank you so much Jay. Your help and support means a lot to me. All the best 🙏👍🤠
Studying abroad, on the one hand, give ample of opportunity to grow globally, and also create room for having promotion on returning back.
Dear Mr. Jay It's been a great help for me, I really appreciate your efforts to help IELTS students. I went through many other IELTS but you are the best one among them.Thanks a lot.Regards
Despite the fact that studying abroad can make students feel nostalgic to their home but it can provide them with a good knowledge of many things
Man it's dope how jay can teach as well as write a 9 band essay in an hour ,compared to 40 mins exam essay time....
it isn't.
@@geoffreycurrie5949 really! wasting your precious time here then haa....
Best coach on the planet of RUclips
You are a phenomenal educator Mr. Jay as well as a very charismatic individual...
In this essay I will argue that studying abroad is more beneficial as cultural experiences and connections will be useful to students in their professions.
Hello Jay! I am currently reviewing my IELTS, and I am so thankful to stumble on your video. It really helps me in many ways on my review specially on my writing. I just wanna ask is it necessary that whatever argument you supported you should state 2 to 3 reasons just to outweigh the other argument?
All things being equal, students have the opportunity to study under more advanced environments and equipments. Lack of study aids and practical experiences makes home studying at home challenging but which are not so overseas. During my training, we were frequently told " ideally it supposed to be done this way but because of lack of equipments, let's do it this way" hence u get used to the wrong things while learning
Thank you so much Jay.I've scored 7 in writing by following your tips 😍
Waoh congratulations 👏.. what topic on task 2 of writing?
Body paragraph 1.
To begin withm the main reason of studying aborad is that students get to finish their studies as at when due, except in some few circumstances where the student is having a resit, For example: a four years course is four years and so on.
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Although, studying overseas would enable students complete their courses within the number of years stated, since they do not have academic interruption. For example, the schools do not indulge in strike actions.
My introduction was like:
Nowadays, a rising number of tertiary students are preferring to study outside of their home country. Though studying abroad is beneficial for obtaining world class education from the top institutes of the world yet a feeling of isolation and monetary constraints cannot be ignored. This essay will aim at discussing the major pros and cons of receiving an education overseas.
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Availability of equipment and use of practical learning aids which are available oversea, help learners do well
Please Jay, what band score shall I get for this one, I want to know my starting score, before I watch the rest of your videos.
Essay question : the growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on thr health care system, in an effort to deal with health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
The Health Care System is struggling to overcome health issues relating to the increasing incidence of obese population. Some people think that the ideal method to face this dilemma is by introducing more exercise lessons in the school curriculum. In my opinion, it is crucial to pay more attention to physical education at schools. However, other measurements in particular teaching pupils healthier food habits at an early age will be required.
Dedicating more hours to exercise in the school curriculum is a key to reduce overweight rates, and thus, to prevent diseases. First because, started at an early age, exercise becomes a habit, and children will no longer look at it as if it was an intensive activity, but as a part of their life routine. Moreover, children are known to be more ready to accept and receive new things, Therefore it is much easier to be adopted since childhood than at any other ages.
However, exercise alone, will not be able to put an end to the overweight issues, if it is not matched to healthier food habits. and here all the efforts of the community should be put together to create new atmosphere that makes access to healthy food easier, by encouraging people to stay on diet, eat less fat products and warning them about the grave impacts on health, junk food might cause. This will lead to a better healthier life, free from any obesity health problems.
To conclude, the high rates of overweight are threatening the Public health. In a way to try slowing it, it is important to introduce more physical education lessons at schools in parallel with having correct nutritional statues
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I loved your essay. There were indeed a few punctuation errors but the rest of the essay looked just perfect!
The main advantage of studying abroad it gives a broad learning in a new environment and learning of languages.
The main disadvantage is adjustment to new environment and learning the culture and cost of living too
i'm just from writing AC and this was the task 2, except that they changed studies to work. I think i wrote too much😂 the time i should used to check my work , i used it writing. looking forward to the results
Although studing abroad take learners far from thier beloved ones but the doors open to achieve thier goals are more significant
Many thanks for this video. My fouth IELTS attempt will be tomorrow and I'm hoping it'll be the last!
hope it ends well.
Studying abroad gives you an opportunity to come across new ideas,,skills technology and experiences
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I was worried regarding my writing task, as I had no idea that how we should write it but after seeing your valuable videos it makes my mind calm and proved to be helpful for me . Thanks Sir Jay stay healthy
the benefit of studying abroad gives the student opportunity to diverse language learning
Although studying overseas leads to high paying jobs but staying away from loved ones leads to isolation
In this essay i will buttressmy view, that while students studying aboard are more confident that the stipulated number of years for each study is what it would be, they are not interrupted in the course of their studies.
Hi Jay,
Thanks for posting the video.
I have a small query with regards to the question being asked here. Will we lose marks for stating "one main advantage" or "one main disadvantage" while the question is asking us about advantageS and disadvantageS?
If the main advantage outweighs the main disadvantage, that means that this advantage also outweighs any supposed disadvantages. It's logical
@@aliakseivasiukovich6602 I think you're misunderstanding him. He was talking about the plural of "disadvantageS" & "advantageS" that the essay asked. Jay only mentioned one so it probably will make you lose marks.
A growing number of tertiary students are now considering education overseas. Although, it is very expensive, it help one to develop expert skills which are unavailable in one's home country.
Hello Jay,
Thanks a lot for your awesome videos. I just want to ask, did't you tell us in another video that advantages and disadvantages requires a double idea paragraph which means that we are required to state TWO advantages and TWO disadvantages in each body paragraph? In this video we only practiced a single idea paragraph.
Waiting for your advice.
Thanks
No reply on this???
This is very helpful.Thanks Jay. I didnt have clear idea about writing and now, I have more confidence with it
Hey Jay
Just gave my exam on 13th april 2019
Guess what???!! I got the same topic as this one "today more and more students are going to different countries for their higher education studies.
Do the benefits of this outweigh the problems associated?"
I m hoping to get 9 in task 2!!!wish me luck
Buddy how much did you scored
@@iqbaljotsingh2842 The result is on 26th april
My score
L=8
R=8.5
W=8
S=7.5
@@jcrypto2986 congrats
@@jcrypto2986 how did u practice.. Congratulations🎉🎊