Cutie Mark Seance [MLP Grimdark Reading]

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  • Опубликовано: 4 окт 2024
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    Happy 2018! I'm hoping to bring you guys some cool stuff this year, but first, we start off with my longest reading ever published on this channel! This fic was a beast to put together, and may be the last time I do a fic along the lines of 10k words...
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    COPYRIGHTS: FAIR USE, Title 17, US Code (Sections 107-118 of the copyright law) All media in the following video is used for purpose of review and entertainment under terms of fair use. All footage, music, and visuals used belong to their respectful companies and users.
    Plot
    While spring cleaning, Apple Bloom comes across a strange board that is said to be able to communicate with dead ponies. Feeling jealous that she never got to see or know her parent's, Apple Bloom attempts to contact her mother, but what she contacts may be something more than just a ghost. All she knows is that it wants free...
    Music by: Myuuji: / @myuu
    Background art originally done by: xxmarkingxx.de...
    All voices by me!
    Written by: Waxworks
    Original story: www.fimfiction...

Комментарии • 154

  • @Sparrow9642
    @Sparrow9642  6 лет назад +49

    Hey guys! Thank you so much for supporting this story, it truly was a beast! I truly would like to know how I did on expressing the emotion of the characters, seeing that was the biggest challenge. Any pointers would be helpful 😀

    • @creepy_girl7351
      @creepy_girl7351 5 лет назад +1

      Its not a problem I love your videos

    • @creepy_girl7351
      @creepy_girl7351 5 лет назад +1

      What other videos do you make? I'm not saying I don't like these I'm just wonderin.

  • @davidradcliffe955
    @davidradcliffe955 4 года назад +25

    "That bitch cinnamon toasty" god i will pay to hear rarity say that XD

  • @TheDevilDogLeader1987
    @TheDevilDogLeader1987 6 лет назад +99

    From the moment I heard the details "letters A-Z and numbers 1-0" I knew immediately what the board was. That is no game, it's serious business, not something to be playing around with.

  • @heyitzbabygurl4025
    @heyitzbabygurl4025 6 лет назад +104

    Abaddon is both a place of destruction and an angel. So the Crusaders are contacting a Demon. So those fillies are screwed. Wow Abaddon seems to be nice. Nevermind I knew this would happen!

    • @nightmarekinggrimm7259
      @nightmarekinggrimm7259 6 лет назад +10

      Abaddon is a other name for Satan too.

    • @Sparrow9642
      @Sparrow9642  4 года назад +21

      Abbadon is a demon, which is an angel/servant of Satan. Satan has many many names, but Abbadon isn't one of them. Even in Revelations Abbadon rose from the Abyss when Satan broke free from Hell in the form of a dragon, so they aren't the same being

    • @vynal187theunseen3
      @vynal187theunseen3 4 года назад +7

      Sparrow 9642 well technically abaddon is a neutral creature so powerful that even the devil himself is cautious of him and angels demons and corporal beings fear his name alone plus heaven and hell claim him as an ally and enemy also I thought the demon was Zozo since he’s the demon of the Oujia board

    • @LiterallyAWesternHognose
      @LiterallyAWesternHognose 2 года назад +3

      Abaddon the despoiler also known as the "lead" figure of chaos and leader of the black crusades launched semi-annually from the Eye of Terror.

    • @lunnaflame12
      @lunnaflame12 7 месяцев назад

      That's why you say goodbye when things get evil

  • @pearldragon6508
    @pearldragon6508 6 лет назад +34

    18:32 - "Cry if you gotta. But keep going." How to face life in the hard times. I know this struggle. Thank you to the writer for putting it so perfectly, and especially having AJ say it. Out of all the Mane 6, nobody else could have carried it with such meaning.

  • @angelicsakura4928
    @angelicsakura4928 4 года назад +30

    I just realize something. Abbadon took applebloom to tartarus aka the underworld then applebloom run and found a dim light. When came out of tartarus she heard her mother's voice. She went to heaven to see her mother. But it wasn't and found the exit was and she was now in heaven with her parents

  • @Gamzeejunior
    @Gamzeejunior 6 лет назад +83

    Applebloom: Alright then board, who are you?
    ???: A-b-b-a-d-o-n
    Me: This is why we in the creepypasta community BURN OUJI BOARDS!

    • @loafiam6062
      @loafiam6062 6 лет назад +2

      understandable have a nice day
      O
      /|\
      / \ he is bob he only says "hulo fuud" and "understandable have a nice day"

    • @CaseyK1337
      @CaseyK1337 6 лет назад +1

      *BURN WEEGEE BOARDS!*

    • @LailaNightmage
      @LailaNightmage 6 лет назад +2

      Zero Crosseyd TM Burn the Luigi boards????

    • @mercenaryminor
      @mercenaryminor 4 года назад +6

      LADIES AND GENTLEMEN WE DO N O T BURN OUIJA BOARDS. You burn one and it permanently opens a door you cannot close. You basically create a doorway for whatever wants to come in. DO NOT BURN HAUNTED OBJECTS.

    • @savannahashley9120
      @savannahashley9120 4 года назад

      Mercenary Minor I was honestly about to say that lol

  • @shelbyc4173
    @shelbyc4173 6 лет назад +55

    Not bad
    Am I the only one that was getting annoyed every time the planchette was called a magnifying glass?

    • @ace_of_cups4096
      @ace_of_cups4096 3 года назад +3

      The author was not properly informed, it happens. Some authors don't bother to research stuff because they think it's unimportant

  • @percivalthemimicknight2733
    @percivalthemimicknight2733 6 лет назад +79

    Does anyone see the pony monster behind AppleBloom in the picture?

  • @themachine6125
    @themachine6125 6 лет назад +19

    Something behind Apple Bloom. Let me just turn up the brightness a little bit.
    * I N S T A N T R E G R E T*

  • @LittleWerewolfPlushie
    @LittleWerewolfPlushie 6 лет назад +65

    Sheol = She'ol, in the Hebrew Bible, is a place of darkness to which all the dead go, both the righteous and the unrighteous, regardless of the moral choices made in life, a place of stillness and darkness cut of from life and from god.
    Abaddon - The Hebrew term Abaddon, and it's Greek equivalent Apollyon appear in the Bible as both a place of destruction and an angle of the abyss.

    • @johnynoway9127
      @johnynoway9127 4 года назад +3

      Isnt abbadon an angel who wanted power and basically joined hell's army to attain that power but of course he turned into a demon/fallen angel monster

    • @ValterFrey
      @ValterFrey 3 года назад +2

      In Sheol it was believed that there existed a place called the Bosom of Abraham, where those who worshipped God would be when they died. Correct me if this last part is wrong but it is believed that Jesus came down and took or will take those loyal to God to Heaven

  • @stekerri
    @stekerri 6 лет назад +11

    never mess with Quija boards

  • @rogueshark23
    @rogueshark23 3 года назад +6

    Dead is always better.

  • @Jay_hates_his_readers
    @Jay_hates_his_readers 3 года назад +21

    "FREE? this doesnt make anyone of you concerned?" Scootaloo AppleBloom was originally concerned BECAUSE it wanted 'free' she told you

  • @littlepip4014
    @littlepip4014 6 лет назад +6

    Haha this is the unofficial prequel to "The cutie Mark crusaders"

  • @willphully
    @willphully 6 лет назад +25

    The magnifier device is called a planchette.

    • @spacecowboy4464
      @spacecowboy4464 6 лет назад +1

      Willphully I was wondering why they didn’t call it that

    • @willphully
      @willphully 6 лет назад +2

      I'm guessing because a lot of people don't know what that is. They would rather say magnifier thingy. 😜

    • @Meringuesnake
      @Meringuesnake 6 лет назад +1

      The characters didn’t know what it was called, so. That could also be why they stayed ouija wrong

  • @mirandabeaulieu7735
    @mirandabeaulieu7735 6 лет назад +5

    apple bloom what ever you do don't play with a ouija board.

  • @nephylias3507
    @nephylias3507 5 лет назад +5

    It sounds like the prequel to "The Cutiemark crusaders". Because in the end it says that the house was burned down.

    • @Sparrow9642
      @Sparrow9642  5 лет назад +2

      Couldn't tell you, seeing I've never read that story, but it's highly doubtful.

  • @LailaNightmage
    @LailaNightmage 6 лет назад +8

    This was actually kinda bittersweet.
    Edit: Nevermind.

  • @decentfreestyle3686
    @decentfreestyle3686 5 лет назад +6

    T-h-a-n-o-s "And with a snap of his fingers"

    • @jaspernavall8204
      @jaspernavall8204 4 года назад +2

      "Eliminated half of the ponies in equestria taking some of the mane 6 and sweetie bell in the process"

  • @M.W.K6996
    @M.W.K6996 6 лет назад +36

    Wow. An hour long reading.

  • @xander470
    @xander470 6 лет назад +11

    If you plan on using on of these boards whether you believe in it or not, follow these rules : Ask if its in the light of god; if not say goodbye making a full circle on the board. When ending the game say goodbye following the rules as stated before. Never take your hands off the board, and NEVER break the board before or after saying goodbye. Thank you for taking the time to read this and have fun and stay safe!

  • @fluttershy1126
    @fluttershy1126 4 года назад +12

    Max and Ruby: Death Is Our Only Release.
    Me: I.. I don’t wanna know what that means.

  • @lindadarkhand7656
    @lindadarkhand7656 6 лет назад +7

    A box within a box. *Boxception*

  • @LilPieceOfHeaven6
    @LilPieceOfHeaven6 6 лет назад +5

    And that’s why you don’t mess around with ouji boards.

  • @hollycollins6575
    @hollycollins6575 4 года назад +8

    Any one see this as a presequal to another story where the crusaders kill blank flanks forever trapped in the forest and burnt down tree house.

    • @Flowerbarrel
      @Flowerbarrel 4 года назад +2

      I wonder if it is! I remember that one. It was a good story. It'd explain what happened to Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle.

  • @vynal187theunseen3
    @vynal187theunseen3 6 лет назад +10

    I thought they were going to talk to zozo you know the demon of the qujia board but instead they spoke to a demon worst than zozo

    • @rootwig9867
      @rootwig9867 3 года назад

      Fun fact I’ve been haunted by him before and had about 5 near death experiences per week for about a month 😀

    • @revaslatts8011
      @revaslatts8011 3 года назад

      @@rootwig9867 Great Celia's Ghost!
      How can you have a smiley face?

    • @rootwig9867
      @rootwig9867 3 года назад

      @@revaslatts8011 I finally got rid of em so I’m good now (I think)

    • @revaslatts8011
      @revaslatts8011 3 года назад

      @@rootwig9867 Okay...

  • @autumnthurston5152
    @autumnthurston5152 6 лет назад +30

    is there something behind Applebloom in the picture or am i seeing things?

    • @christopherwellens338
      @christopherwellens338 5 лет назад +10

      Its there, some monster

    • @Inyu-C0de
      @Inyu-C0de 4 года назад +5

      I see it too

    • @darkyboode3239
      @darkyboode3239 4 года назад +2

      Galaxy Angel Yes a monster and that monster is what Abbadon is.

    • @goatmom1346
      @goatmom1346 2 года назад

      Either there is something or were all crazy.

  • @DrecusXheng
    @DrecusXheng 6 лет назад +12

    This will be enjoyable since I can't sleep well this few days... (2:47am) welp I ma listen... hope this can get me some nice dream (yes. Nice dreams..)

  • @mkg2124
    @mkg2124 4 года назад +3

    "Abadon" great. Juuuuuuust great.

  • @lindadarkhand7656
    @lindadarkhand7656 6 лет назад +6

    She came across a Ouija board?

  • @Jelly_Jello
    @Jelly_Jello 3 года назад +3

    I fell asleep with this going in the background.

  • @moonscout3702
    @moonscout3702 Год назад +4

    It sounds like a PREQUEL to The Cutie Mark Crusaders by Lunafan1k. Where the CMC became ghosts. They are killing foals, the tree house they reside in is burnt down and they are trapped in the forest.
    I think that would explain what happened to Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo. And Applebloom is in the afterlife

  • @twilight3272
    @twilight3272 2 года назад +7

    Great reading! The story felt a little contrived and seemed to lose focus of itself and its characters at times, and the ending feels like a bit of a sudden cop-out, but it was still well-detailed and the dialogues were great. I liked the voice effects used!

  • @queenlatrodectushasselti7711
    @queenlatrodectushasselti7711 4 года назад +3

    WHAT IS THAAAAAAAAAT!!!!!!!!
    Few minutes in *heirs creepy music*
    Me: WHY!!!!!!

  • @ИванХомяков-н4ф
    @ИванХомяков-н4ф 6 лет назад +5

    I love pony grimdark. Good work.

  • @caitlynparkes5932
    @caitlynparkes5932 3 года назад +3

    What did Applejack say, "GesunHAT"?

  • @creationsylphfandom6256
    @creationsylphfandom6256 4 года назад +4

    Can’t understand a thing the imposter things are saying with that filter on. It’s a bit frustrating.

  • @jerryorange9104
    @jerryorange9104 6 лет назад +14

    Not bad not great but not bad (I promise this is 10/10 but if you know the show then you get the joke)

  • @CalebLaw1
    @CalebLaw1 6 лет назад +5

    It spelled: Nintendo! Weegee time!

  • @Cal1c0_Cats
    @Cal1c0_Cats 6 лет назад +15

    Amazing reading!

  • @eeveefiona8305
    @eeveefiona8305 5 лет назад +4

    At least she finally met her parents?

  • @GracieTheWolfie
    @GracieTheWolfie 6 лет назад +15

    THIS IS AMAZING!!!

  • @hersheythewolf4001
    @hersheythewolf4001 4 года назад +3

    My parents would Kill me if i played with Ouija board

  • @lucwarfel
    @lucwarfel 5 лет назад +5

    WHY IS IT ALWAYS ABADDON?!

  • @TheDevilDogLeader1987
    @TheDevilDogLeader1987 6 лет назад +5

    Also Abbadon is a character in the Bible. For those who are Christian and/or morbidly curious you can find it in Revelations 9:11.

    • @Sparrow9642
      @Sparrow9642  6 лет назад

      Interesting, I'll have to look in my bible

  • @christopherwellens338
    @christopherwellens338 5 лет назад +3

    This was an excellent reading!!! Definitely worth listening to all of it! I love the voices!

  • @timothystowell3122
    @timothystowell3122 6 лет назад +17

    ignore my previous thing you messing with Ouija boards yeah do you want to be cursed!

  • @iquittedajpwsorry4849
    @iquittedajpwsorry4849 6 лет назад +7

    Welp who needs sleep anyway..

  • @littlepip4014
    @littlepip4014 6 лет назад +4

    SHEOL?
    the hell

  • @joshua_riley5996
    @joshua_riley5996 5 лет назад +5

    What the frick did applejack say 0:44

    • @Sparrow9642
      @Sparrow9642  5 лет назад +6

      Basically the German pronunciation of "bless you."

    • @joshua_riley5996
      @joshua_riley5996 5 лет назад +2

      Oh...... I don’t know much german
      And I love 💕 ur vidoes btw

  • @revaslatts8011
    @revaslatts8011 3 года назад +1

    Moral Of The Story: Stay away from Ouija

  • @lostcreepypasta1838
    @lostcreepypasta1838 6 лет назад +6

    It's a long car drive might as well!

  • @jroxpone
    @jroxpone 4 года назад +1

    I mean. she got to see her parents in the end. so not all bad

  • @Flowerbarrel
    @Flowerbarrel 4 года назад +3

    So the Hebrew places of Sheol and Abaddon have crossed into Equestria. Was the demon drawing the Sefirot tree of life diagram? There were circles and connecting lines. This was creepy just because of that. Sheol seems to be where Applebloom wound up. That's so horribly sad. Did Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle too, or did it just get Applebloom?

  • @lullabycue7362
    @lullabycue7362 6 лет назад +3

    yeahhhh I have no clue what the heck just happened

  • @chaoticdusk1316
    @chaoticdusk1316 2 года назад +1

    As soon as I heard it was a board with a bunch of letters and numbers I knew sh*t was gonna go sideways. Do not screw with those things. They aren't games. Whether they work or not it's not worth the risk.

  • @imreddragon9517
    @imreddragon9517 6 лет назад +10

    so wait did applebloom die?

    • @jroxpone
      @jroxpone 4 года назад +7

      yes, and the other crusaders as well.

  • @oldreaddy3341
    @oldreaddy3341 6 лет назад +7

    Woah

  • @kevinmclean96
    @kevinmclean96 6 лет назад +4

    Saw theme

  • @lunagirlaj1491
    @lunagirlaj1491 4 года назад +1

    Awesome job o really liked it

  • @johnkoji8910
    @johnkoji8910 2 года назад +1

    Well depending how old the ritual was to contain it let's see if we can do this here

  • @Suggarypop
    @Suggarypop 6 лет назад +1

    Gave me the chills

  • @LesbianFroggy
    @LesbianFroggy Год назад +1

    Damn this was awesome and sad

  • @lowtiershadowyt9008
    @lowtiershadowyt9008 6 лет назад +3

    alright after having looked over what you guys said you may have a point and i,m sorry in my agression towards anyone its just the one thing that bugs me cause there is no grave or memorial on the farmi just find it stupid that they would say yes parents are dead thats kinda dark for a kids show and in the clip was that megan mcarthy?

  • @calamitykate1982
    @calamitykate1982 6 лет назад +3

    This is awesome

  • @LosOcmasoriginales
    @LosOcmasoriginales Год назад

    Sad, I think I discovered that my favorite stories include the apple family or Twilight

  • @timothystowell3122
    @timothystowell3122 6 лет назад +3

    question if a Ouija board Texas in Equestria and how in the world do they not know about it

  • @gahdue5363
    @gahdue5363 4 года назад +2

    A demon

  • @Spyro757
    @Spyro757 6 лет назад +5

    Can someone fill me in here

  • @KyrianeCreates
    @KyrianeCreates Год назад

    This is such a besu😮story!

  • @quintonjones2699
    @quintonjones2699 2 года назад +1

    That was amazing

  • @Meringuesnake
    @Meringuesnake 6 лет назад +3

    26:00 could come from the show

  • @amedotuniverse652
    @amedotuniverse652 Месяц назад

    11:47 Shoel is the underworld and the place of the dead after death in the Hebrew bible. The word is derived from a word that means "hollow", and is often described as a subterranean "land of gloom and deep darkness". The Book of Job describes Sheol as the farthest place from Heaven, where all the dead go, regardless of their earthly lives.

  • @alicornredrainbow7921
    @alicornredrainbow7921 Год назад +1

    So let me get this straight in the end all of the cmc died or just applebloom?

  • @GAMMAGOMA
    @GAMMAGOMA 6 лет назад +1

    Well done.

  • @lowtiershadowyt9008
    @lowtiershadowyt9008 6 лет назад +3

    on top of the fact that before anyone said anything all proof anyone went off of was 2 shooting stars and to me thats not good enough give us a memorial or a grave or they aint dead but i digress i,m off see you guys sorry again for the hostile first comment never meant to be that rude thats really me i just get really passionte about the show since its over in 2 seasons

    • @mercenaryminor
      @mercenaryminor 4 года назад

      Shadow Strike it’s okay, you get passionate and angry over the theories over the show and I’m getting passionate and livid about people in the comments saying “burn the ouija board” because you should NEVER burn a CONDUIT because it opens a DOOR and lets things IN THAT SHOULDNT BE LET IN AHHHHGGG! Being a witch and a medium this bugs me so hard. This anger is not at you, I’m just venting lol.

  • @DiamondTheKillerShadowFanGirl
    @DiamondTheKillerShadowFanGirl 6 лет назад +3

    Who made the picture in the video?

  • @yoshiguy35
    @yoshiguy35 11 месяцев назад

    12:36 among us remix motif

  • @annemarieroberts1449
    @annemarieroberts1449 2 года назад +1

    Oh god she should not have ouja bord that’s bad news 😱

  • @lunnaflame12
    @lunnaflame12 7 месяцев назад

    The rules you MUST follow,
    No graveyard sessions
    No sessions by yourself
    No asking personal questions
    No questions about death
    Always, ALWAYS end the sessions with goodbye
    NEVER say any details about yourself
    If you feel anything bad IMMEDIATELY END THE SESSION. No ands, ifs, or buts.
    Alway give boundaries, such as, "we do not permit you to touch, harm, or enter us".

  • @jamievogles5336
    @jamievogles5336 2 года назад +2

    Sheol

  • @johnkoji8910
    @johnkoji8910 2 года назад +1

    You're being talked to from beyond the grave but finally shall we wake up I can feel ghost communication ghost communication from this world I fought the ghosts real was dormant waiting for the next pony debit head to the graveyard to possess until noon hour Celestia trap them down yes so shall we don't cash it be my honest guest nightmare medic you communicate from a plane is the inscription of how to get in the hell drop the paper on the floor and disappear

  • @thinglet2478
    @thinglet2478 3 месяца назад

    SHEOL

  • @yoshiguy35
    @yoshiguy35 11 месяцев назад

    harsh

  • @lowtiershadowyt9008
    @lowtiershadowyt9008 6 лет назад +3

    i need to vent cause this story pissed me off there is no proof that the apple parents are dead Dhx and hasbro never said they were so fans grow the shit up they are not dead if you want a great theory from me i,ll be glade to tell it

    • @Sparrow9642
      @Sparrow9642  6 лет назад +5

      Shadow Strike There is actually a hidden story within this that you have to think hard about, and it's relevant to the parent's. It took me listening to it three times to catch the hidden story. How did Pear Butter know who Abbadon was without Apple Bloom addressing it? Think about it from there and you'll get your answer

    • @AuroraRoseWinters1995
      @AuroraRoseWinters1995 6 лет назад +5

      You do know that they said that they were dead right? No need to get all angry over something like this. Life's not worth it, trust me. Take a deep breath friend and just let your anger vanish. You have way better things to do then get angry over ponies. Like waiting for the new episodes excitedly!
      ruclips.net/video/YG0Ibe-8q6c/видео.html&t=1h6m24s
      ruclips.net/video/YG0Ibe-8q6c/видео.html&t=1h8m12s
      The confirmation is right here.

    • @StarSugar-e2x
      @StarSugar-e2x 6 лет назад +3

      Shadow Strike people will believe what they want Hasbro has left what happened to the parents open to imagination so some people believe there dead others believe there not don't tell people to "grow the shit up" when you don't really know either a theory is a theory not fact no matter how great it is does not mean it's right they could be dead they could be alive only Hasbro can decide which is fact not you.

    • @Sparrow9642
      @Sparrow9642  6 лет назад +11

      Shadow Strike I have to agree with the others here, considering Lauren Faust confirmed it herself. Not only that, but hints were given in "The Perfect Pear" many times. For one, when Big Mac asks Burnt Oak if it would be ok to return to hear more stories, he responds with visible tears in his eyes. If that's not enough, Apple Bloom states that the intertwined apple and pear tree that was planted at their parent's secret wedding was a way to "remember" them by, which basically means that they have passed. If the parents were still living, why wouldn't they live at the farm with their children?

    • @lowtiershadowyt9008
      @lowtiershadowyt9008 6 лет назад

      and that brings me to the theory i had is they knew they'er kids would have better luck running the farm on they'er own but with help from granny smith
      so they left to find a new farm to live a peaceful life i know it makes no sense but its happier then saying oh btw they are dead fora show like my little pony its just to dark and a little messed up when you sit down to think about it

  • @Jay_hates_his_readers
    @Jay_hates_his_readers 3 года назад +2

    for a second therr i heard "some daylight despair" instead of "some daylight to spare" :V