Divine Crusader - Test trailer (Warhammer 40K Fan Movie)

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  • Опубликовано: 17 окт 2019
  • I'm an amateur and an enthusiast, I don't make a living from this job.
    This short clip is my first entry into animation (I think you can tell from movement of astartes.) I started learning 3D myself about two years ago and this is the result. The clip itself is basically a training and rehearsal for graphics and animation ... I am a little handier now than you can see in this clip :) and I will continue to improve until the final fan movie - Divine Crusader.
    If you want to know more, follow my projects on IG page.
    / gabrielchristtiane
    Or FB:
    / divinecrusaderfanmovie
    I hope that you enjoy my work and that you looking forward for more. Hit like or follow so more of fans can see this and you are mostly welcome to leave some comment.
    Music in video:
    Prometheus - Background Music from / @co.agmusic
    / coag-music-14633978590...
    End This - / end-this
    ******
    100% unofficial and in no way endorsed by Games Workshop.
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  • @GabrielChristtiane
    @GabrielChristtiane  4 года назад +490

    I would like to thank you all for such positive responses and, most importantly, for your sincere criticism. It gives me not only a great motivation for further work, but also a very necessary feedback. I really didn't expect such a big response in such a short time, especially when there are amazing projects on the air like Astartes or Death of Hope. Speaking of this, I do not want to (and with my experience I can not) face these greats :)
    But I want to work on the Emperor's great work and tell stories about his immortal Imperium. I know my animation is very robotic for the time being, but I'm learning to handle it better. But I have to admit that it is not my goal to achieve 100% realistic movements, models or textures. That's too much for an one enthusiastic amateur. I want to focus more on the image's atmosphere, storytelling, image composition, and so on. Let's just remember for example the cut-scenes from Diablo 2 ... From today's perspective, very unreliable animation and 3D work. But you still chill on your back when you look under the hood of a Dark Wanderer. That's my goal!
    Now I'm working on another training video that should be ready around Christmas this year. Meanwhile, I am finishing the screenplay for the final film - Divine Crusader. From the new year on, I want to start working on the project. In the course of this, I will give more small or large information and stuff for feedback. Thanks again.
    The Emperor protects.

    • @bastich4225
      @bastich4225 4 года назад +3

      You're the Chosen One sir

    • @teambellavsteamalice
      @teambellavsteamalice 4 года назад +4

      Years ago I saw artwork that was a mix of a comic, with beautifully rendered 3D models, scenery and landscapes and some cutscenes for part of the story.
      That might be nice if animation, especially walking are hard to pull off. Instead of still renders like comic you could use tricks with minimal animation in many scenes. Just zooming out or in can work wonders to get a sense of scale, and a first person view switched to panning around (so you then see the no longer walking model) can avoid some animation and still work for the story.
      Hope that helps!
      *Looked it up*
      The artwork was Sinkha Hyleun or the Sinkha project by Marco Patriti:
      en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sinkha
      Old but maybe very nice to get ideas from!

    • @newzealandhardcore
      @newzealandhardcore 4 года назад +1

      Bloody awesome work mate

    • @tiamat4964
      @tiamat4964 4 года назад +1

      I like it and i love this video😍 i hope this work continue...you have doing a great job❤👍

    • @user-gt7qh4xu1p
      @user-gt7qh4xu1p 4 года назад +1

      Прекрасная работа, статические ракурсы интересны, содержательны, красивы.
      Но вот динамика...
      Дружище, с этим нужно что-то делать. И не забывай что в этом будущем есть место только войне. А война как известно...

  • @axewishox
    @axewishox 4 года назад +1092

    While movement is choppy the lighting effects on the armor from the eyes is wonderful

    • @GabrielChristtiane
      @GabrielChristtiane  4 года назад +67

      Thx. :) Its mean lot for me...

    • @robertnelson9599
      @robertnelson9599 4 года назад +21

      Luckily, movement can be worked on. this was amazing

    • @winterdrake1046
      @winterdrake1046 4 года назад +10

      yeah everything is amazing once you get the movement smoothed you won't know the difference between this and a high end video the detail is just amazing maxes me want to see more

    • @BTArnold100
      @BTArnold100 4 года назад +3

      I love the glow from the eyes off the armour. This is so promising!

    • @winterdrake1046
      @winterdrake1046 4 года назад +1

      the glow is great but there is so many details in it as well like the waving flag to the voice recording running in the background really setting that warhammer 40k vibe

  • @LittleMaskot
    @LittleMaskot 4 года назад +662

    I like the vibe. Tho the space marines movment are well choppy.

    • @GabrielChristtiane
      @GabrielChristtiane  4 года назад +78

      Thx. Yeah movement is still "work in progress" for me... But I gonna do better ;)

    • @GabrielChristtiane
      @GabrielChristtiane  4 года назад +40

      @Daniel Drew On the one hand, yes. Primaris made a "nice" hole in the story. On the other hand, you can't take it back. I'd like to use that and tried to create a new story that will move our favorite world a little further... But I understand your point of view :))

    • @ewanrodger8067
      @ewanrodger8067 4 года назад +16

      @@GabrielChristtiane I got kind of a Dead Space 1 vibe from the scenes showing of the hallways. That alone has peaked my interest, but your clean and high quality animation has my attention. I look forward to seeing what comes of the series.
      BTW, what chapter is the Marine from? Is it a custom chapter or maybe I just don't recognize it.

    • @cakeboss4194
      @cakeboss4194 4 года назад +3

      I want to say it's an Fire Angels marine (ultramarines successor), but I can't be sure. I don't recognize the heraldry.

    • @fudgeyman99
      @fudgeyman99 4 года назад +8

      @Daniel Drew grow up

  • @kingkong381
    @kingkong381 4 года назад +655

    Atmosphere: Great.
    Lighting: Great.
    Colours: Great.
    Detail: Great.
    Voice Acting: Decent.
    Animation: Not great; not terrible.
    Keep it up! Hope to see more of this.

    • @GabrielChristtiane
      @GabrielChristtiane  4 года назад +22

      Thx. :)

    • @loganb7059
      @loganb7059 4 года назад +3

      Gabriel Christtiane I give the animation a 3.6 roentgen out of 5 haha.
      (Everything looks really great. Animation is a bit choppy as others have pointed out but that’s just a matter of refinements)

    • @juliand6317
      @juliand6317 4 года назад +6

      Don’t forget sound design and effects! I thought the bolter was appropriately boomy. Footsteps were great too. Although I might add, some variation in footsteps would be even better to account for changing environmental acoustics from a moving source.

    • @gaborfabian1239
      @gaborfabian1239 4 года назад

      You speak the words of the Emperor, brother.

    • @user-kh4jc2kk9o
      @user-kh4jc2kk9o 4 года назад

      @@GabrielChristtiane nice. не Astartres, но работу уважаю.

  • @lordnaton6492
    @lordnaton6492 4 года назад +285

    I see great potentia in this. Carry on, for the emperor!

  • @ChapterMasterValrak
    @ChapterMasterValrak 4 года назад +148

    Great video, loved the atmosphere, mate!

    • @supersaiyandiclonius3056
      @supersaiyandiclonius3056 4 года назад +7

      Great Chapter Master, would you please lend aid to our valiant battle brother by throwing up a video on your channel telling people about this? (He doesn't even have 500 subs yet)

    • @GabrielChristtiane
      @GabrielChristtiane  4 года назад +15

      Ohh :) What a honor Chapter Master. I'm glad people like the atmosphere ... It's the main thing I want to work with. Because I will never have animation or modeling on the same level as other projects like Astartes or Death of Hope.

    • @ricosintron2075
      @ricosintron2075 4 года назад +1

      Keep it up and refine your art then maybe this could be the next Astartes several years down the line

    • @ChapterMasterValrak
      @ChapterMasterValrak 4 года назад +4

      @@GabrielChristtiane Great, if you can come to my discord and send me a PM :)

    • @daviddickson412
      @daviddickson412 4 года назад +1

      Glorious!

  • @swordbrethrenmordred1230
    @swordbrethrenmordred1230 4 года назад +51

    The emperor protects.
    And having a loaded bolter never hurt eighter.

  • @RyanCunningham
    @RyanCunningham 4 года назад +257

    Keep at it, you're doing great. I can't wait to see the evolution of the vids

    • @GabrielChristtiane
      @GabrielChristtiane  4 года назад +8

      Thx :) Well I looking foward for more work. Now I working on script for final story.

    • @benjaminschabel4847
      @benjaminschabel4847 4 года назад +1

      thats what i wanted to write. Keep going on, emperor protects!

  • @MajesticDemonLord
    @MajesticDemonLord 4 года назад +222

    Love it.
    Others have pointed to the movement and missing Magazine.
    My critique is on the PA announcement in the beginning- we know the Imperium is highly censured. Therefore any bad news is unlikely to be broadcast, if it does make it, the information is likely to be either vague or sanitized. There is also scope for attributing any issues to failings of Faith.
    The first part about a new shaft and exceeding their Quota is spot on.
    I get that you are setting the scene, but consider the following instead:
    "The accident in Shaft 4 has been stabilized and mining will continue. Look to the Emperor and he shall protect. Idleness leads to Heresy."
    Followed by "All workers injured in Shaft 4 are expected to make full recoveries so long as their Faith holds."
    Then you can add something like "Anyone heard spreading rumors of self-mutilation or hallucinations from the shaft 4 will be judged as committing Heresy and will be executed on the spot"
    That way - all bad news is downplayed and given a positive spin, and the Audience (understanding the dystopian 40K setting knows that all is never right) gets the picture that something happened (probably heresy....)
    Finally the last transmission "they are here" could be said with a little more franticness

    • @MajesticDemonLord
      @MajesticDemonLord 4 года назад +4

      @Lord Admiral Spire fair points, but I disagree - this isn't one of the more 'liberal' planets in the imperium, it's a mining planet, where the workers are barely one step above Slavery.
      Could the administration be fully open and transparent? Sure, they could, but it's highly unlikely, not only due to the risk of rebellion, but more so that too much knowledge might lead to heresy and the attention of an Inquisitor.
      On top of that, a planetary Govenor is unlikely to be wanting to cause panic in the workers - so a message of 'everything is fine' or more likely.

    • @ramazantekin4144
      @ramazantekin4144 4 года назад +4

      @Lord Admiral Spire wow i have not seen such a civil discussion on the internet for a long time. No insults, just kind disagreements. But i shouldnt be suprised. Warhammer 40k's average fandom is older and therefore more mature than other franchises. Carry on brothers and remember: the emperor protects.

  • @LebenderPanzer
    @LebenderPanzer 4 года назад +84

    Astartes, the death of hope and hellsreach: Finally, a worthy opponent!

    • @GabrielChristtiane
      @GabrielChristtiane  4 года назад +7

      Well... I can only wish that. :D

    • @brightestlight9462
      @brightestlight9462 4 года назад +8

      Astartes is head and shoulders above death of hope and hellsreach

    • @MetalsirenIXI
      @MetalsirenIXI 4 года назад +2

      @@brightestlight9462 That helsreach finale tho was great!

    • @UGNAvalon
      @UGNAvalon 4 года назад

      A worthy aspirant to join our chapter!

    • @mentoss2197
      @mentoss2197 4 года назад

      @@brightestlight9462 unfortunetaly astartes account was hacked and stolen

  • @ODST576
    @ODST576 4 года назад +121

    Very impressive so far looks really good though the marine needs to fit a magazine into his bolter.

    • @GabrielChristtiane
      @GabrielChristtiane  4 года назад +15

      :D And you are winner!! :) Believe me or not, I recognised this thing in the middle of work, when part of animation already rendered :D So yeah... Next time its gonna be with magazine :)

    • @ODST576
      @ODST576 4 года назад +8

      @@GabrielChristtiane i hate pointing things out like this as i could never do anything like this. Still looks awesome through.

    • @GabrielChristtiane
      @GabrielChristtiane  4 года назад +8

      @@ODST576 No no :)
      I'm a slacker and I didn't want to remodel it anymore. So I left it there as an Easter egg. You are the first to point it out :) I'm glad because it means somebody really is watching it.

    • @inquisitorzane3815
      @inquisitorzane3815 4 года назад +3

      @@GabrielChristtiane I saw it too but the assumption I made until i saw this comment was that he just had some sort of weird short mag in it, lol. BTW really love how this is looking so far, can't wait to see the end result.

  • @peterrasmussen394
    @peterrasmussen394 4 года назад +139

    The lack of attention on this is heresy of the highest order. Make more please!

    • @GabrielChristtiane
      @GabrielChristtiane  4 года назад +16

      :D well to be honest I really didn't expect so much views in this short time, and I love that people are interested... Its fuel for my work

    • @chairmeme6231
      @chairmeme6231 4 года назад

      Lack of attention?
      Boi if can create that l don't think you have a lack of attention. Even if it's not funded by some big outside source it's still good.

    • @peterrasmussen394
      @peterrasmussen394 4 года назад +4

      Chair Meme I am saying the video deserves more attention. It’s a compliment.

    • @chairmeme6231
      @chairmeme6231 4 года назад +3

      @@peterrasmussen394 oh shit my bad m8

  • @thetribunaloftheimaginatio5247
    @thetribunaloftheimaginatio5247 4 года назад +87

    "They will be my Space Marines... and they shall know no fear."

    • @dablakeboy5877
      @dablakeboy5877 4 года назад

      I believe it was "they will be my Angel's of death"
      I may be wrong on that

    • @Banana_Jesus_
      @Banana_Jesus_ 4 года назад +5

      @@dablakeboy5877yeah, you're right about being wrong

  • @smellyflounder7544
    @smellyflounder7544 4 года назад +80

    love the atmosphere and the detail in all this
    great Job : )

    • @GabrielChristtiane
      @GabrielChristtiane  4 года назад

      Oh, thx. Love to hear that the atmospher wich I wanted to create is working

  • @KeishinB237
    @KeishinB237 4 года назад +18

    Detailing is incredible! Lighting, reflections, absolutely amazing!
    Animation can use some work but this looks incredible!
    Hope to see some more soon!
    The Emperor Protects

  • @nickypenn5841
    @nickypenn5841 4 года назад +7

    By the Emperor...
    This is gold, *as golden as the Custodian Auramite Power Armor itself.*

  • @Marc-hm6bz
    @Marc-hm6bz 4 года назад +4

    This is the golden age of 40k (and 30k) animation, and its all fan made. Good job man. Keep it up!

    • @GabrielChristtiane
      @GabrielChristtiane  4 года назад

      Yeah... To be honest works like lord inquisitor, helsreach, Astartes, Death of hope are such a gigant inspiration for me, that I started working with 3D and animation bymeself.
      Thx for your post. :)

    • @Marc-hm6bz
      @Marc-hm6bz 4 года назад

      @@GabrielChristtiane thank you for your work!

  • @Hayabusa777
    @Hayabusa777 4 года назад +6

    Wow I'm surprised how positive everyone is. I was expecting people in the comments nit picking it to death. Glad to see a great community and can't wait to see more videos

  • @mushfrombush9053
    @mushfrombush9053 4 года назад +1

    I like the atmosphere you created and there's nothing better than watching a space marine shoot unclean scum. The emperor protects

  • @captainanus8131
    @captainanus8131 4 года назад +14

    Alongside the badass SCP inspired content, this is a great surge in cool warhammer content too. Great job!

  • @czarus_the_sniper9924
    @czarus_the_sniper9924 4 года назад +12

    "Sounds promising..."
    - Sgt. Sidonius // Ultramarines

  • @king0vitrial
    @king0vitrial 4 года назад +4

    This has the feel of an opening cinematic from a late 90s video game. Great stuff.

    • @GabrielChristtiane
      @GabrielChristtiane  4 года назад +1

      Pepperidge Farm Remembers... And me too :) Love to heard, that you remember this videos.

  • @TheOzTurkish
    @TheOzTurkish 4 года назад +1

    God the static and the beeps are harrowing, it really sets the mood... It sounds like the fire brigade phonecalls from the Chernobyl meltdown, fantastic start

  • @phantom-5132
    @phantom-5132 4 года назад +2

    I like the atmosphere of this video. Keep it up, brother!

  • @shadowstrider8295
    @shadowstrider8295 4 года назад +56

    One Space Marine vs a horde of Tyranids? Unfair odds... For them. Or as the Space Marine would say
    "Me against a horde of Xenos? Then it is a fair fight."

    • @Yingyanglord1
      @Yingyanglord1 4 года назад +14

      I dont think those are nids

    • @kidmanwalters4236
      @kidmanwalters4236 4 года назад +6

      @@Yingyanglord1 looked like a little nurgling or some zombie. The head shape does remind me of a genestealer tho

    • @alekjanowski9847
      @alekjanowski9847 4 года назад +2

      @@kidmanwalters4236 Genestealer cult mayby?

    • @doomdave475
      @doomdave475 4 года назад +5

      Nurgling for sure

    • @iconicusensign9624
      @iconicusensign9624 4 года назад +2

      Genestealers probably
      Because look closely on the head and its face also the hands.
      The red eyes reminded me of genestealers bit has molds on its forehead, so maybe a nurgle infestation

  • @blitzkrieg8776
    @blitzkrieg8776 4 года назад +32

    Pretty good start, work on the "choppiness" of the animation and you're well on your way to making a movie better than the Ultramarines one.

  • @solidsundowner615
    @solidsundowner615 4 года назад +2

    3:25 holy shit that gave me goose bumps it was soo awesome, the glowing eyes in the distance as you hear the mighty steps of an astartes, I only imagine that terminators walking by are actually shaking the ground 😍😍

  • @Gurfbagel
    @Gurfbagel 4 года назад +1

    Amazing! So glad to see the fans stepping up and making incredible shorts like this. Can't wait to see more of your work. Thank you!

  • @asonofhoruslegionary
    @asonofhoruslegionary 4 года назад +8

    Our war is endless, our crusade eternal!

  • @blacktemplar5970
    @blacktemplar5970 4 года назад +3

    Don't forget about the sound....the sound of foot steps and breathing and pipes dripping all create a very important atmosphere....keep it up

    • @GabrielChristtiane
      @GabrielChristtiane  4 года назад +1

      You're right! I didn't really think about the breathing at all ... Thank you very much for this comment :) I must definitely work on the sounds as well as on animation and other things.

    • @blacktemplar5970
      @blacktemplar5970 4 года назад +1

      @@GabrielChristtiane hey man your welcome....I'm glad to get a reply and hear that my comment is useful and helpful....he could be breathing quite heavily when he is kneeling and then he can hold his breath as he notices the Xenos behind him...kind of anticipating the upcoming fight....I wish you all the look with the whole project another Idea is to seriously try a crowd fund...or reach out to some RUclipsrs like Arch, Kirioth or Valarak and see if they will review the video and also ask for any sound engineers or FX guys or coding guys or anything like that

    • @GabrielChristtiane
      @GabrielChristtiane  4 года назад +2

      @@blacktemplar5970 In fact, I did not expect such a response. I'm a little taken aback. Anyway, it is still fan-made. Out of enthusiasm. We will see how the work goes on and I will work with what is :)
      PS: great idea with the breathing...again :)

  • @linadecaseleycarloss5838
    @linadecaseleycarloss5838 4 года назад +1

    Absolutely excellent start! I echo the other comments here regarding the Marine's movement, but otherwise on the money. Excellent atmospherics, totally walks all over the GW film. In the name of the Emperor, the Inquisition demands MORE.....!!!!

  • @777CDH
    @777CDH 4 года назад +1

    Holy crap wow, his eyes coming out of darkness and the thud of his mass along with the music soundtrack gave me the chills. Can’t wait to see more!

  • @Keemperor40K
    @Keemperor40K 4 года назад +30

    First time that I know that we have animated Primaris Space Marines, awesome.
    Great Job, I want to know where this goes.

    • @RustyARMPIT12
      @RustyARMPIT12 4 года назад

      I think that's just a mark V head, not primaris

    • @Keemperor40K
      @Keemperor40K 4 года назад +4

      @@RustyARMPIT12 it isn't just the helmet, though that is the most distinctive feature.
      The Marine is clearly using a bolt rifle, those are only used by Intercessor Primaris Marines

    • @Keemperor40K
      @Keemperor40K 4 года назад

      @@RustyARMPIT12 it isn't just the helmet, though that is the most distinctive feature.
      The Marine is clearly using a bolt rifle, those are only used by Intercessor Primaris Marines

    • @olivierhoude1589
      @olivierhoude1589 4 года назад

      ruclips.net/video/qyGDo1ARpjI/видео.html
      give this one a look! this one is clearly a primaris.

    • @puttster3
      @puttster3 4 года назад

      @@RustyARMPIT12 Mark IV if anything. The Mark V's are the Heresy set, which was just cobbled together Power Armour. Mark IV was the design best suited for close combat while having both pressure seals and helmet movement. It was for this that the Primaris Armour was based off of the Mark IV Maximus. Black Templars are the only chapter that makes such heavy use of the Mark IV... though that could be due to their numbering over 6000.

  • @SianiAnne
    @SianiAnne 4 года назад +4

    Well done! The animation will smooth out with time and practice. A very good start, this. Keep at it!

  • @Jaythirteenhunter
    @Jaythirteenhunter 4 года назад +2

    When the marine appeared from the shadows and that epic music sounded really nice

  • @alet2691
    @alet2691 4 года назад +1

    this is still better than Ultramarines, you manage to doing far better than a bunch of professional guy. Great atmosphere, attention for the detail and a freat love for this animation

  • @SADDDsteve
    @SADDDsteve 4 года назад +6

    Can’t wait to see where this goes looks great

  • @Venneroth
    @Venneroth 4 года назад +4

    Pros: Excellent tension building. Good use of Imperial sayings to put us in the mindset of the people in story, even the ones we only hear about over the vox. Epic music uplifted my spirit. Marine's armor looks very good. Lovely chapter symbol on pauldron. Perfectly shows "and they shall know no fear" without having to say it. Holy shit wtf is that thing?!
    Cons: Our marine's movements are very clunky. He moves too stiffly to be a living person. The shot of the hand disappearing into the dark doesn't really add much. You were really building the tension of an unseen threat, then that prolonged shot broke the momentum. A brief, smooth pan from the alter down to an arm lying still at the base of the alter with the body off camera would do the same without breaking the flow.
    This deserves more views.

    • @GabrielChristtiane
      @GabrielChristtiane  4 года назад +1

      Thx a lot for the thought with the hand... Now I must admit that you have a point!

  • @miketeeveedub5779
    @miketeeveedub5779 4 года назад

    This is a great first start - I will be glad to see how your art progresses in the future. FOR THE EMPEROR!!!

  • @mikemyon3570
    @mikemyon3570 4 года назад +2

    I got the chills when the Space Marine was shown up close with all his heraldic stuff. :) Very well done, looking forward for more

  • @nathanring5048
    @nathanring5048 4 года назад +15

    Excellent work. While there's room for technical improvement, the atmosphere of this short was exceptional for how brief it was. The camera angles chosen were exceptional, especially the shot upwards from the shrine looking into the statues faces (that was eerie AF). The color palette and textures on the environment were very well chosen as well. Some critiques: space marine movement is choppy (others have noted this in the comments as well). The model for the marine could use some work (the gorget at the front of the neck is super thick, the lenses glow too brightly, and the vents in the helmet faceplate should be a bit more delicate). Point of Lore: when he kneels down in front of the shrine is he praying to the emperor? Space Marines as a rule don't follow the ecclesiarchy / imperial cult, with a very few exceptions / edge cases like the Black Templars. Of course, I don't know which chapter it is so it could be one of the exceptions
    Overall I was impressed and I hope to see more. Is this going to be a series like Astartes or Helsreach?

    • @GabrielChristtiane
      @GabrielChristtiane  4 года назад +4

      Thx for you comment. This kind of stuff is what i need to know to get better.
      Animation of movement is little tricky, but now I little bit farer than before and still working on it. I planing make whole new model of armor, so I definetly remember your points.
      About lore... Yeah its Divine Crusaders chapter, and even if they are from Gene-seed of UM (smurfs power) they in the past work very closely with Black Templars and they were affected with the believe that Emperor is Divine being (more lore about them will come later, and I thnik that its gonna be with some - errors - so I planing to share it little bit before its gonna be finish. And because the lore is huge I definetly gonna look for advise.)
      Iam very happy that you like the "camera work", lights etd. This kind of stuff is very important for me and in the final work I gonna keep lot of atention to this.
      And well... Yes I planning something like series, but more like 3-4 little movies, each like 15-20 min with own story that loosely linked together. (We will see, how its go)

    • @ricosintron2075
      @ricosintron2075 4 года назад

      Gabriel Christtiane Great work, the points made by this guy and another commentator about the radio broadcast is the only things I see wrong.
      It’s awesome how you did this.

  • @zypherskunkworks6508
    @zypherskunkworks6508 4 года назад +5

    I like the armor, can't wait to see the final product.

  • @zayl777
    @zayl777 3 года назад

    That's one weird cat
    Joking... I love the animation and the detail, it feels so real and present!

  • @johnivanoplimo5172
    @johnivanoplimo5172 4 года назад +2

    Well, since The Lord Inquisitor flaked out on us (press F), your work will be a replacement along with dedicated others. Don't rush this, Brother.
    The Emperor protects!

  • @xXGuiltySmileXx
    @xXGuiltySmileXx 4 года назад +11

    Regarding the helmet, the respirator should probably have some insets instead of dark textures, if not, make a high poly with an AO bake. The light looks really odd going smoothly across what is normally an uneven surface. It looks like you only covered those slits black.
    Otherwise well done and fantastic atmosphere.

    • @GabrielChristtiane
      @GabrielChristtiane  4 года назад +1

      Thx. that makes sense... I gonna do whole new armor so this comes handy.
      I sometimes wonder where the right ratio mesh/textures...

    • @graven2508
      @graven2508 4 года назад +1

      @@GabrielChristtiane you should try to get a heavier more metallic footsteps to replace the current footsteps. It looks great though

  • @jean-philippebobin3732
    @jean-philippebobin3732 4 года назад +3

    Nice work, gg, i love the atmosphere

  • @texasallstar6969
    @texasallstar6969 4 года назад +1

    For a first time offer. This is great. You captured the grittiness of the setting well

  • @jerrys1923
    @jerrys1923 4 года назад

    I would still watch a full 1 hour movie of this quality, it's obvious you care about the lore and the game so keep going my man

  • @markintrona5170
    @markintrona5170 4 года назад +15

    Looks like a cut scene from an old game.

  • @MrAwsomenoob
    @MrAwsomenoob 4 года назад +4

    all in all i give it a 9/10 can't wait to see more

  • @UGNAvalon
    @UGNAvalon 4 года назад +1

    “Be strong and faithful. Redemption is on its way.”
    Now that certainly gave my ecclesiarchical hat a hard-on! Keep it up!!

  • @jstr5818
    @jstr5818 4 года назад +1

    A fantastic start, it's beginnings like this that lead to the types of greatness the Astartes series has reached. Keep up the promising work!

  • @danielhaire6677
    @danielhaire6677 4 года назад +6

    "...No way endorsed by Games Workshop..."
    Actually, they should hire you for the next time they TRY to make a full-length movie.

  • @Jasina85
    @Jasina85 4 года назад +4

    This is pretty great! Although I think the mighty Space Marine forgot to put a magazine in his bolter. :P

    • @GabrielChristtiane
      @GabrielChristtiane  4 года назад +1

      I am glad you will notice my mistake :) I only figured it out when I had half of the things drawn. I was lazy to remodel it so I left it there as a little Easter egg ... you found it :)

  • @bongodrumzz
    @bongodrumzz 4 года назад +1

    For a first attempt, you show good potential. The story so far has the most appeal so this will keep me and hopefully others satisfied. Well done, the emporer protects.

  • @anxioussamurai9017
    @anxioussamurai9017 4 года назад

    This was awesome! I'd love to see more of it. Keep up the good work and LONG LIVE THE EMPEROR!

  • @brendanmcclelland8457
    @brendanmcclelland8457 4 года назад +4

    And now coming to your local vox is "Titans on Ice" staring the Cadian regimet XXth

  • @gorbash1072
    @gorbash1072 4 года назад +4

    For the first time that really really good, the space marine for his animation is a little robotic i think (i'm not good in english ^^) bug keet it up the angle of camera is really pleasant, the sounds is perfect and the choice for the entrance with this music is perfect ^^, really happy to see more vidéos animate from you, good luck ^^

  • @seelenverkaufer4861
    @seelenverkaufer4861 4 года назад +1

    Awesome work. Thank you for sharing this with all of us.

  • @Sol_Invictus510
    @Sol_Invictus510 4 года назад +1

    Keep up the great way work!!! Looking forward to the complete film.

  • @louiswilkins9624
    @louiswilkins9624 4 года назад +4

    Nice , not bad at all

  • @Tyrnak_Fenrir
    @Tyrnak_Fenrir 4 года назад +4

    Looks great, but the movements are very abrupt. Try to have some subtle acceleration and deceleration. Also have small movements to give it more life.

    • @GabrielChristtiane
      @GabrielChristtiane  4 года назад +2

      Good advice ... I'll remember it.
      Now I can animate the movement a little better :) But still a lot of work si before me.

  • @aaronboss7570
    @aaronboss7570 4 года назад +1

    I love the atmosphere you were able to create in the beginning. The vox recordings were excellently done. Outstanding work setting the tone and creating a situation we can feel invested in. I can't wait to see what the finished product looks like.

  • @madara4447
    @madara4447 4 года назад +2

    Keep going my brother this work pleases the Emperor

  • @TheSPACECOWBOY33
    @TheSPACECOWBOY33 4 года назад +4

    Beautiful modelling, texturing, lighting, and camera work. Just need to work on the character animation.
    I can see a lot of care in this.

    • @GabrielChristtiane
      @GabrielChristtiane  4 года назад +1

      Thx. Yeah in animation I am noob... In the modeling and camera work, I am hitting on 5+ :) But in future hopefully, with more experience, I gonna hit on 3+ with automatic wound. ;)

  • @xeriustacticus2542
    @xeriustacticus2542 4 года назад +3

    The models are great, the Space Marine’s eyes are stunning and the details magnificent
    But the animations are terrible which really puts me off

    • @GabrielChristtiane
      @GabrielChristtiane  4 года назад +2

      I'm still learning. It will be better! I promise! For the Emperor!

  • @Astralwolf23
    @Astralwolf23 4 года назад +2

    Brilliant work my friend! I loved it and the custom Astartes was brillant too. Love the vibe and kept you guessing. Look forward to more.

  • @AR15UserRev1
    @AR15UserRev1 4 года назад +1

    Excellent vibe. I’m looking forward to the segment.

  • @slightlyperturbedricktofen7376
    @slightlyperturbedricktofen7376 4 года назад

    *a new fan animation of 40k is released*
    The 40k community:"we will watch your progress with great interest"

  • @christopherreoch9627
    @christopherreoch9627 4 года назад

    This looks amazing. :) I can't wait to see more

  • @iang257
    @iang257 4 года назад +1

    Low key, this looks more like a video game trailer. Awesome either ways.

  • @Shadowhunterbg
    @Shadowhunterbg 4 года назад +1

    New trailers keep coming and i keep screaming.

  • @robertbuckey6517
    @robertbuckey6517 4 года назад +1

    Love it! Looking forward to seeing more, and learning more about your chapter!

  • @displeasedsociopath5939
    @displeasedsociopath5939 4 года назад +1

    You're doing great. A good story, a love for the material, and sincere effort transcend whatever medium you work in. It's plain to see you love 40k, and you want to share with the world... Keep at it. You've done a hell of a lot more with a 5 minute video then most people ever bother to do.

  • @stefangondosch30
    @stefangondosch30 4 года назад +2

    Truly grim. The emperor protects!

  • @Cap7171
    @Cap7171 4 года назад

    Excellent work! Can't wait to see more.

  • @BohdanKaiba
    @BohdanKaiba 4 года назад

    This looks great, I love fan works like this, I am subbed and looking forward to more!

  • @Anthoninoatletico
    @Anthoninoatletico 4 года назад

    I thought I had seen everything on your facebook but not this video!
    I will just add: DIVINE CRUSADER!! more crosses!!! yes!!
    Now I will watch the plague.

  • @MercenarianWolves
    @MercenarianWolves 4 года назад +1

    Great job with this animation and setting! Can't wait to discover what abomination lies there in the darkness to face the warriors of humanity.

  • @st1mp0
    @st1mp0 4 года назад +1

    Well done dude! You've created something which has pleased a lot of people.
    Brilliant job, this animation made me feel anxious and excited in a short time, bringing me back to how I felt first watching Aliens or playing dead space! I can not wait for further clips of this.
    Be proud of yourself good sir as many others are :)

  • @Speersums
    @Speersums 4 года назад +1

    Great work! Can't wait to see what comes next. Loved the lighting and ambiance in the video. Perfect for the setting.

  • @dankovskimark4540
    @dankovskimark4540 4 года назад +1

    Looks like a cutscene from 90s videogame. Love it.

  • @moody3266
    @moody3266 4 года назад +1

    You are verry talented Gabriel i look forward to see your fan movie and you next projects good luck in everything you do ^_^ .

  • @TK-xm4en
    @TK-xm4en 3 года назад

    Loved the atmospherics and opening storyline, very well done! I’m looking forward to seeing more of this story!

    • @GabrielChristtiane
      @GabrielChristtiane  3 года назад

      Slowly getting there :) Iam still learning on others projects before I start with this...is a really big story so i dont want to haste it

  • @Piston1937
    @Piston1937 4 года назад +1

    Great texture work. Like really the textures look really amazing. As most have pointed out the movements are robotic but everything else is great. Keep up the good work and your going to have something amazing.

  • @dfgndfghdfghdfgh
    @dfgndfghdfghdfgh 2 года назад

    This was ridiculously atmospheric and built up some anticipation from the get go. Good stuff

    • @GabrielChristtiane
      @GabrielChristtiane  2 года назад +1

      Hehe :) Glad you like it even my oldest work :) I really trying to focus not on just graphic but on that atmospher and visual story-telling also :)

  • @ChEILoZ
    @ChEILoZ 4 года назад +1

    I'm all for more Warhammer things but Astartes has set the bar so high it's hard to appreciate anything else

    • @GabrielChristtiane
      @GabrielChristtiane  4 года назад

      Yeah, I totally understand you ... But maybe in a few years, for many, many hours of work, I'll get closer to it. However, it is probably not my goal to defeat or overcome Astartes. Rather to acquire (over time) something else.

    • @ChEILoZ
      @ChEILoZ 4 года назад

      @@GabrielChristtiane Yeah absolutely man, the more Warhammer art the better I say. Keep it up!

  • @kaziaki
    @kaziaki 4 года назад +1

    This was dope, hope to see more :)

  • @bongochongopongo
    @bongochongopongo 4 года назад +1

    Good vibe, impressive. Especially as a learning project. Must feel good to see the fruits of your efforts come together, looking forward to more :)

  • @kitten2799
    @kitten2799 3 года назад

    I love this. The atmosphere is on point.

  • @Nelson-ng8vr
    @Nelson-ng8vr 4 года назад +1

    Honestly great work, love the atmosphere. Can't say I have any love for primaris what so ever bit good non the less.

  • @thebuttonfactory2306
    @thebuttonfactory2306 4 года назад +1

    It was very good. you have stiff competition. Astartes web series and Death of Hope.
    The detail was excellent. The Astartes shoulder guard had nice gold border etching. The flags waving and the weaving in the cloth showed a lot of attention to detail.
    Conversely, very choppy movement of the space marine. Antiquated. Like from the Ultramarines movie. The scale of the space marine is off. He looked short from the waist down. Although you got the head to body ratio correct. There is debate about how big an Astartes head should be with and without his helm. I think you got the proportion right.
    Regardless, I was hooked and wanted to see more. That is the main goal of every fan film and you accomplished that task.
    Always good to see new content and your film was exceptional.
    Well done. Nice job

    • @GabrielChristtiane
      @GabrielChristtiane  4 года назад

      Thx a lot :) And thx for feedback! I gonna remember your's advice.

  • @mouseketeery
    @mouseketeery 4 года назад +1

    Your first crack at animation? Amazing. Others have made constructive criticisms so I'll not repeat them, but I'm really looking forward to seeing how this project and your skills and experience progress. Subscribed.

  • @TheDyslexicDragon
    @TheDyslexicDragon 4 года назад +2

    This would make a great intro for a game :) Keep up the good work,

  • @igegan1
    @igegan1 4 года назад

    Yeah okay you called out the movement. Love the mood, sound and importantly you got the bolter sound right. Keep going brother... :-)

  • @azerel83
    @azerel83 4 года назад

    well impressed good work love these fan made vids. keep up the solid work

  • @AfterhoursKC14
    @AfterhoursKC14 4 года назад +1

    Pretty amazing. Please continue. I'll watch it.

  • @drew9759
    @drew9759 4 года назад

    WHATEVER YOU DO. DONT STOP TRYING TO MAKE THIS. WE NEED AS MUCH WARHAMMER FAN MVOIES AS POSSIBLE. GW ONLY CARES ABOUT A PAY CHECK. LETS KEEP THIS WONDERFUL SERIES ALIVE. I SUPPORT YOU 100%

    • @GabrielChristtiane
      @GabrielChristtiane  4 года назад

      Thx :) Soon i will release small animation... So hope you gonna see improvement. :)

  • @tamator7651
    @tamator7651 4 года назад +1

    Aside from the helmet and arm proportions, this looks great so far and I can't wait for the final project.

  • @kingjonstarkgeryan8573
    @kingjonstarkgeryan8573 4 года назад

    Impressive, most impressive.
    Great work, can't wait to see more.