Broken Wish - Star x Asha Original Concept Animatic
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- Опубликовано: 12 сен 2024
- Every story is obviously going to have it's flaws, but from a creative writing perspective one think I think could have been emphasized to make Magnifico 100% the bad guy was Simon's depression. Poor guy just wanted to wield some swords, and without his wish had a hole in his heart :(
Also love hearing your guys' ideas! Keep em up!!
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The Idea that Star can SEE the hole in Somebody's heart that taking away their wish leaves is absolute GOLD, and I think that it would be an AMAZING idea to see in a community remake of the movie.
Also, can I just say how much I LOVE the concept of Asha starting out more awkward and shy, but then the more carefree and confident Starboy falls out of the sky (literally) and Gradually brings Asha out of her Shell?
Thank you! Thankfully I've taken so many creative writing courses I've gotten better at character progression and story detail ^^' I just felt like the story was missing some stakes
ES CIERTO, DIOSSSS COMO AMO ESTO. Me gustaría leer una versión mejorada de la película, o ver ALGO más. No lo sé, solo se que esto me encanto
Ive thought about instigating this, but I have concerns about the logistics of making it happen....
You mean the hole where Nobody's heart was AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
*laughs in unhinged Kingdom Hearts because there were so many Disney references but WHERE'S THAT ONE*
Imagine being Simon: a glowing boy walks up to you, touches your chest, and apologizes. And you have no idea what he’s talking about 😂 Beautiful animatic, of course ❤
boy is sleep deprived and one of his hallucinations has become corporeal
@@sarahsworks my poor guy just needed a nap in the movie 😂
Literally, I didn't even blamed him when he accused his so called friends. With that kind of friends, who needs enemies? Apathy, boredom, feelings of emptiness is one hell of its kind.
Exactly what I was thinking
Es un chico, así que si pasa eso yo me sonrojo y quiero que sea mío
Fun Fact: in the concept art, Starboy's name is Earendel.
Sounds kinda like the kingdom from Frozen.
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@@sarahsworks Fun fact: Earendel is the most distant or farthest star of all cosmos and it means "morning star", "dawn" or "rising light".
@GwynethRoseCliff gracias por el dato 😊
Like Lord Of The Rings.
"im sorry"
Simon: ....about my chest...?
it is the only logical explanation
"hey, im trying to lose weight ok"
@@saudades1002 “no no no, I’m talking about your wis-“
*_then Asha interrupts bc they can’t know about him being a literal STAR_*
I love how this take gives Star depth. He is someone who loves to see people happy and fulfilled. This state that Maguinifico leaves others in would be another motivator for him as a character and it would be personal because he wouldn't be able to understand how someone could be so vile. And Asha was hilarious here too. With more personality than in the entire film.
Thank you! I really like asha, but I have a habit of adding some 'reluctant hero' stuff in personalities
Words cannot describe how much level of emotion and how hard this one scene hits then the entirety of the actual movie/film. The movie needs a fan remake, Pronto.
Thank you! I am simply an emotional person which is why these work
We'll wait till some team does a kickstarter for a Wish remake
There’s already full animatic versions of Hamilton and Dear Evan Hansen! (Even tho those two weren’t rewritten) We can do this >:) I just hope Disney doesn’t sue all the brilliant artists.. if suing does happen, shame on disney!
@@noobmasterruben5167 And to clarify have it be an animated remake not a live action one
Why does every single fan animatic of Wish have so much more heart and creativity than the actual movie?
Excelent work 💛
Thank you!!
Cause the Woke mind isn't creative or have empathy for other people except themselves. They don't want to make people feel anything except guilt and shame for actions they never committed.
The people of Rosas could see Asha and Star worthy to be their King and Queen
YES and magic star baby
@@sarahsworks I actually have a scene for this!
So Asha is tucking in her two children, Stella (she has golden hair like star and a complexion like Asha) and Cosmo (Looks just like Asha). Stella asks why they always look to the stars, Asha explains breifly about wishing. And as Asha leaves the room, Stella and Cosmo wake up, walk o the window, look to the sky and wave saying: "Hi daddy!"
IMAGINE THAT WAS THE FINAL SCENE BRO-
@@sarahsworks Oh heck yeah!!
@@CrazyCreator554 😢😢😢 OH MY HEART!!
@@sarahsworks IDK, I kinda like the Idea that Star gives up his Magic in order to be with Asha. It'd be a monumental sacrifice on his part, and basically the ultimate act of devotion, giving up infinite power to be with the person he loves. Plus I don't think the other stars would just... let him stay down on earth with that amount of power, so... I mean, maybe he gets to keep some of his magic, but it'd be more on par with a human sorcerer as opposed to a LITERAL WISHING STAR.
somebody should just fund you to remake the entire thing because THIS IS INCREDIBLE
Thank you!!
omg this is incredible, it also adds something the movie was missing, which was some actual stakes. if they wanted getting the wishes back to be such a big deal, why make it so that the people in rosas are just fine w/ out them!? great animatic btw, love the way u portrayed everyone :D
Thank you and I agree! I feel like there were a couple details missing from the movie that would have driven it home, but the bones were there
Literally, I didn't even blamed him when he accused his so called friends. With that kind of friends, who needs enemies? Apathy, boredom, feelings of emptiness is one hell of its kind.
It would make it the more reason why he betray his friends, not just wanting to get what he want but also fulfill the empty hole inside him. I did not watch the movie but I seen scene and people seem happy and ok without their wises.
as much as I love this and straight up just want you to remake the movie.
Imagine just having some random glow boy touch you, look you dead in the eyes and just go “im sorry.” With no context 😂
his sleep paralysis demon became real
@@sarahsworksAt least he’s a friendly sleep paralysis demon. Very polite
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!!!! We were so robbed from this concept :((
It would be so cool for Star to see how the people of Rosas feel and see what humans are like, not just Asha, but the whole kingdom and feels how important it is to defeat Magnifico
OH!! This is so moving - I love the idea of Star having a sort of second sight related to wishes and how deeply he feels the tragedy of what happened to Simon.
Once again proving how we were ROBBED 💜😤
Awwww the end is so adorable ^^ Star being able to see how empty Simon is after giving his wish is the best idea ^^ especially when we can see what Star see!
I can't blame poor Simon even after what happen in the movie. It must be horrible to miss a part of your heart...
honestly loved simon, boy was depressed and just wanted his wish back
@@sarahsworks yes
Can't believe I'm this early! Also this looks fantastic, I'm honestly really loving the internet's devotion to rewriting the movie (into something good)! Great work!
Thank you!! This'll probably be my last one (at least for a bit), but I really do love seeing what people do with them
According to someone online his name was supposedly going to be Earendel. If you look up the name it means "the morning star" or "the dawn." I could see two different but interesting romantic relationships here. I feel that Earendel is the more carefree and cofident one while Asha is shy but intelligent. However, when things goes wrong their roles kinda switch a bit. Earendel reveals to actually have a wise side underneath his cockiness and he kinda help Asha be more confident in herself. The two actually have something in common which is that both of them are family oriented but the different is that Asha also cares about her friends and community. Seeing this kinda help Earendel open up his heart more toward to total strangers.
I think that Earendel is overall a good-hearted person. He doesn't really want to harm anyone. But that also doesn't mean that he is going to gives out his heart just about everyone. That would be stupid and that actually is something that I've seen people complains about with Magnifico. While he does it in a selfish way, the part with him not granting everybody wishes is some level reasonable since people are not always capable making the best choices or may only wish something at that particular time. Nothing wrong with stars helping guide people in some ways but the people on some level need to work on getting their dream as well since they will feel better when they get their reward and they themselves grow as people. I think it would be a fair and mature way on both sides.
As for Magnifico and Amaya, I do not wish for some kind of betrayal between them. They are both completely confident and comfortable about their relationship. They're the only ones who relies on each other so that show lot of trust in one another. They are kinda like Gomez/Morticia or Clyde/Bonnie. They will fight and they will die together.
I am living for these re-imaginings of Wish coming from the fans who care. This would be such a cool trait for Star boy to have, and gives him a reason to help the people of Rosas.
I LOVE THIS. I WISH WE HAD THIS😭
My god, I’ve seen so many animatics with human Star as Asha’s love interest and I FANGIRL EVERY TIME❤️
I love this soo much RUclips really just going to remake this movie and I’m here for it, I love the little details in this.
Thank you! One animatic at a time
This is so creative! imagine a scene like this in the movie gosh
I really love this animatic! If you think about it, you're modeling Wish and giving it life at you artistic vew. I really like that Asha is talking and Starboy's just like "What on Sky is that thing?" And when he went to touch de cookers chest (I didn't watch the movie, I don't know if it's a character of the original one) without asking if he should, he just went. THANK YOU MUCH, SARAH, FOR BRINGING AGAIN AN ANIMATIC WISH, I LOVE WHAT YOU ARE DOING WITH THE CONCEPT OS THE MOVIE
Haha thank you!! We'll see what happens but I may have more ideas - all just depends on time
I wish we could go back in time and convince Disney to make this happen
Ya, me, too.
sonic 2.0
These two are adorable together. Great work.
Thank you!
0:32 As heartwarming as this is to see Star fill the whole in Simon's heart, I can just see him being like "Uh...yeah, you should be sorry. You just touched my chest, I'm not that kind of guy."
sometimes a glowing otherworldly guy looks meaningly into your eyes and u just gotta roll with it
Lol, cute animatic btw.@@sarahsworks
I could imagines Earendel being like Peter Pan, Jack Frost, Nick Wilde and the early Disney princes all rolled at one. What about you?
Plus the whimsy of Genie, wit of Mushu and aesthetics of the Blue Fairy
And the glowing of Tinker Bell.
By now we don't need Disney to remake the movie, the community can do it themselves
I imagines that the starboy (Earendel) comes from a huge family (ton of stars after all) and is quite a complex character. One hand he can be very fun-loving yet immature but on the other hand he can also have bit of cynical with the world due to seeing much selfishness. He doesn't hates humanity in general but he does feel that people uses stars for selfish reasons. Meeting Asha help him see that people can be selfless when they want to be and that sometimes it okay for people to ask stars for guidance which allows him to show a more wise side to her.
I imagines that he's truly something of a wild card here. He clearly cares a great deal about his enormous family but he doesn't really get why are they so willingly to grant humans wishes when in his mind they just takes. While a fair thought to have, he in fact is also kinda the same since he is quite carefree and somewhat self-centered as well. Still, despite everything when he find himself forced on actual Earth, he is quite tame to humans treating them at best as amusement and companions. However, it is only when he see Asha (whom he grows to respect during their journey) being affected by her family and friends being in danger is he is able to really relates to her and understand why his family do what they do. It is only when Asha start giving up does he really steps up revealing a philosophical and more noble side and encouraging her that despite her shy and bookworm personality, he is in awe of her for fighting for something that won't just benefits her family and friends but also for her whole community. It is through her that he see that sometimes people really do need help and guidance from another world.
It would be fun to see their personalities balance one another!
@@sarahsworks Indeed. Now tell me. What you think about Asha being an unknown niece to the king and queen and her mom not knowing that she married into royal bloodline?
Check your sources. His original name wasn’t Earendel. That name came from a Tumblr post. It’s a false alarm.
@@toukendanshiwarrior2846 Either way, it does fits well for him
Didn’t watch the movie but heard/seen this is concept. I love this, this is really we really need so much 😭❤
I know they designed him as comedic, but I really like the idea of Star being a more serious and wise love interest for Asha--he is super old, after all.
According to someone online his name was supposedly going to be Earendel. If you look up the name it means "the morning star" or "the dawn." I could see two different but interesting romantic relationships here. I feel that Earendel is the more carefree and cofident one while Asha is shy but intelligent. However, when things goes wrong their roles kinda switch a bit. Earendel reveals to actually have a wise side underneath his cockiness and he kinda help Asha be more confident in herself. The two actually have something in common which is that both of them are family oriented but the different is that Asha also cares about her friends and community. Seeing this kinda help Earendel open up his heart more toward to total strangers. As for Magnifico and Amaya, I do not wish for some kind of betrayal between them. They are both completely confident and comfortable about their relationship. They're the only ones who relies on each other so that show lot of trust in one another. They are kinda like Gomez/Morticia or Clyde/Bonnie. They will fight and they will die together.
@@user-ie8om9rr2g I'd prefer we don't have a cocky male lead (feels tired by this point), and I heard that in a comment, but I don't remember seeing his name in the art book.
@@OpticalSorcerer Well he doesn't have to be a complete cocky male lead. Some level of it is actually a front to hide his disillusioned with the world. He likely seen lot of bad that happened in the world so the cocky part is kinda to hide that from Asha. Asha's journey is to learn that there more to this boy than she thinks. He teaches her that stars shouldn't be everybody solution to their problems while she teaches him that sometimes stars are really needed to help guide people even if it just a little.
@@user-ie8om9rr2g Perhaps. It depends on the execution. I wasn't a fan of selfish Flynn Ryder, but I liked Naveen since his selfishness was more innocent. I'd like a mature male lead, though; most of the male leads since the renaissance are "boys" in contrast to "men," so to speak. An academic Star would be fun, or someone dutiful and serious like Shang. I imagine Asha more in line with Pocahontas' personality.
@@OpticalSorcerer True. I do feel like Eugene is overrated on the internet. When the tv show was going on I was the only person that pointed out if Eugene want to change others mind about him then he need to show that he really changes. But no people only cared about his cute relationship with Rapunzel and his friendship with Lance. I think that Earendel is overall a good-hearted person. He doesn't really want to harm anyone. But that also doesn't mean that he is going to gives out his heart just about everyone. That would be stupid and that actually is something that I've seen people complains about with Magnifico. While he does it in a selfish way, the part with him not granting everybody wishes is some level reasonable since people are not always capable making the best choices or may only wish something at that particular time. Nothing wrong with stars helping guide people in some ways but the people on some level need to work on getting their dream as well since they will feel better when they get their reward and they themselves grow as people. I think it would be a fair and mature way on both sides.
Incredible, I love to see the concept art come to life! I have said it before, and I will repeat it, someone needs to make this into the actual movie, like NOW!!
This is so emotional! What a fantastic idea for a scene!
Thank you!
You're going to end up making an entire movie out of these animatics! And I'll be the first to watch it!
i love the characterisation of starboy here 🥺
I need the entire movie remade by RUclips people this 30 seconds is so much more than "Disney's" whole million dollar movie
haha ty! the creatives were excellent though, just had too many leashes on them
im obsessed with ur star boy animatics omg
I love 0:09, where some stardust escapes Star Boy. I love the meticulousness, which I notice that Disney is lacking nowadays.
Y’know, I’ve been thinking that since Wish was meant to pay homage to Disney’s other films, I think the stardust radiating from Star Boy is supposed to be a reference to the pixie dust shown in the Peter Pan movie, the Tinker Bells movies, and also Jake and the Neverland Pirates.
*chanting* glitter glitter glitter glitter
This is honestly amazing, I love the writing the visuals and that idea that could have been in the movie. sucks that disney is really doing bad on the writing. it would be awesome if somebody could rewrite the whole movie and just do a concept of it like this
God Disney really fumbled the bag with this one, with all the fan and original concept art I would have been obsessed for WEEKS
I mean this with every fiber of my being. They should’ve hired you for the narration
I Like to think that the the size of the whole left by a wish varies and that’s why his wish seemingly changed more then average
Some wishes are to get a dog or help someone else but some wishes are like simons it was very personal and a big part of what made him who he was
So without it he became a different person and the magic made people around him forget to Not only was he different but the people around him were different to
Wait that ended too soon
I was invested
THANK YOU FOR SUPPLYING MY DAILY STARBOY &ASHA CONTENT🙇♀️🥹💖
This is brilliant. This needs a huge promotion ❤
Ty ^^
This looks phenomenal!! :O I love how the emotions of the scene are still perfectly conveyed even before the music and the voice acting is (hopefully) added 💙💜💛
Wow, this was such a good scene, showing that Star cared about Simon without even knowing him just adds so much more depth to him!
Also, kind of Ironic since one of Star's original powers was to heal people who's wishes were broken and their life force was slowly draining.
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"And that's how my goat ended up in a well." Lol, the funniest part is, that's literally what happened. Bet Asha had a moment where she went 'oh god, it sounds insane when I say it outloud.'
This is so good!! Also, good luck on your book!
Thank you!!
Book what book
I'm working on my own book series ^^ @@user-zz5xq8cg9c
This is amazing.. 💙💙 I wish we'd gotten this in the movie. Disney should be letting you make their storyboards lol
BET sending my app with this comment pinned
@@sarahsworks yoooo lessgo
Maybe by the end of the movie Asha would introduce Star to her seven friends
Even though I still loved the movie and it’s my favorite tbh here’s top 3 things we were robbed from:
3) Asha’s final dress for the ending.
2) Amaya and Magnifico being our first ever Disney villain couple along with their cat and they were gonna be Asha’s original parents.
1) the biggest robbery of all: NOT GETTING STAR BOY AND A LOVE INTEREST BETWEEN HIM AND ASHA CONSIDERING WE HADN’T HAD A LOVE STORY SINCE EITHER FROZEN OR TANGLED!😫😭
Your starboy is so adorable and cute btw❤️😍 if you ever plan of doing an entire fan made movie but with this concept I would seriously watch it over and over again!🙏🏼❤️
I don’t think we need a Disney villain couple.
Very beautiful and heartwarming.
Disney is not thinking well for scraping this idea plus removing the wonderful song "at all cost".
so your telling me THIS could have been the concept and THIS is the couple that i could have been fangirling over instead of frickin BAWLING my eyes out for it to become real. Disney why???????????????
Star would've been a sweet and fun character ✨
Aww! I'm in love with your animations
Glad to be of service ^^
That it's I'm going to animated de all movie
I salute you, I salute you
I love this!!! 😍😍😍
LOVE IT!!
Can the internet plz remake this move
This is so cute ❤
This is so moving. 😭
Still mad at Disney. 😡😡
Awesome Job!!!👏✨
Man, how can Disney drop the mfkin bag of gold like this.😤😭 This would've been an interesting film for people to rewatch over and over.
As a a writer of star boy/Asha at the moment, it’s so so beautiful to see everyone’s interpretation as well! ❤❤❤
Oh my gosh your work keeps getting better, I love this!
This is another nice animatic
ty ^^
Man, why couldn't we have gotten this movie?
The movie definitely needed some more scenes to show that taking a persons wish was actually a harmful act.
So far out of the entire kingdom we only had sleepy the dwarf seem to have any negative effects
Fan works coming in clutch to satisfy our thirst
Agh love this idea!!
Hello, Sarah's Works. I LOVE THISSSS!!!! I have same ideia about this filmmm!! Imagined the powers in the Magnífico King, he comes from the Star Boy. Fitted so good, want write new screenplay and animated...Thank you for animatic. This is good.
Thank you! And awesome idea ^^
And that is what would make Magnifico and Amaya a threatning villains - taking all wishes and absorbing their magic leaving people's lifes depressed and miserable (there could also be implied that some of them even commited su1c1d3).
So I guess Wish now goes in that collection of movies whose original draft was better than the finished product. Right alongside Rise of Skywalker 😟
Amazing😊😊😊
I LOVE HIM
You did soo good on this 😁😁
I WISH THIS STAR BOY CHARACTER WAS IN THE MOVIE
Your expressions are so good!!
I'm CRYING why didn't we get this version of Wish 😭
I recommended you to read Asha and the Kingdom of Wishes by MsAnneXia in Ao3 or Archive of our own.
This idea was better than the original
Disney really fumbled with this one
And the fact in the movie he’s the one to betray the group…….gosh that scene was shocking
Can you remake all movie please. I pay you
Sounds like they were in fact going for a much bigger story with actual good writing judging by this beautiful scene? Big, big, big mistake Disney
unfortunately corporate requests take away a lot of creativity :,)
OMG I LOVE THAT
Disney couldve used The weeknd to give Starboy his own song lol
AGHHHHH POR SIMON HE LOOKS MISERABLE 😭
Aw its so cute... Im torn... I want to see a silent star.... But this is cool too...
we need a sequel where star turns into a cute boy cause i would like to see starboy being asha's love interest.
wouldn't that be cool to see?
So, having their wishes removed is like having a piece of your heart missing? The lament of not having it granted? Did I get that right?
Yup
Bruh this concept would make the movie so much better, why Disney WHY
So pretty!
I seek the finest and worthy in the social media to join me to give Wish a second chance with its animation, story, songs and length. Will those out there join me? And I should say Haley Joel Osment would voice Starboy making his Walt Disney Animation Studios debut. That goes the same with Jesse McCartney as Starboy's singing voice. Ha! I made a ryhme. As for the length, I would say 2hrs and 15mins.
The couple we lost.
You could literally make a remake of wish, improving what was missing in the original.
at this point i wish Disney had just hired you to direct the movie
That moment when people on the internet write/animate something a 100 times better.
For free.
Gosh I feel silly asking this, but could I possibly yoink this idea for a Wish rewrite video essay I'm putting together(with credit to you of course)? The idea of him being able to see that Simon is missing a fundamental part of himself and really getting across to the audience how that's affecting him is so good and I'd love to include it!
absolutely! I don't own the idea so feel free to play with it ^^