"This is the Thanks I Get?!" (Jonah's version)

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  • Опубликовано: 21 ноя 2024

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  • @ADuckInBlack
    @ADuckInBlack 6 месяцев назад +3276

    this dude managed to make a better disney villain song using a snare drum, a piano, audacity, and a microphone

    • @EtamirTheDemiDeer
      @EtamirTheDemiDeer 6 месяцев назад +310

      I forgot audacity was an actual software

    • @Kalebsonyoutube
      @Kalebsonyoutube 6 месяцев назад +138

      @@EtamirTheDemiDeerLMAOOO I THOUGHT THE SAME THING

    • @_leaf-3525
      @_leaf-3525 6 месяцев назад +133

      ​@@EtamirTheDemiDeer I was not aware that it was and just assumed they were being funny lmao

    • @incoherentdrawings
      @incoherentdrawings 6 месяцев назад +12

      @@EtamirTheDemiDeer Hey! Memento Mori 🤍🖤

    • @EtamirTheDemiDeer
      @EtamirTheDemiDeer 6 месяцев назад +11

      @@incoherentdrawings memento mori : )

  • @Sonjaaa111
    @Sonjaaa111 6 месяцев назад +2089

    The relief i feel not hearing those “ba ba ba ba” noises 😭

    • @pianopaeonia
      @pianopaeonia 6 месяцев назад +115

      BA BA BA BA, BA BA BA BA, BA BA A BA 💥

    • @katherinesmallbean3594
      @katherinesmallbean3594 6 месяцев назад +42

      Ba baba ba ba

    • @selfryed
      @selfryed 6 месяцев назад +94

      THIS IS RHE THANKS I GET BA BAB AB AB. AB BA BA BA BABAB- (but no that shit was kinda annoying)

    • @-Galaxy-2695
      @-Galaxy-2695 6 месяцев назад +52

      @@pianopaeonia The fact that this translates to “NO NO NO NO” is HILARIOUS 😂

    • @-Galaxy-2695
      @-Galaxy-2695 6 месяцев назад +44

      @@katherinesmallbean3594 “Not Dad” 💀

  • @logdinafter383
    @logdinafter383 6 месяцев назад +3736

    this version has the absolute CORRECT VIBE FOR THIS CHARACTER, amazing

    • @Shannay.
      @Shannay. 6 месяцев назад +63

      Yeah, i agree with you! 😊

    • @AltUTimegod2006
      @AltUTimegod2006 3 месяца назад +12

      Starts off upbeat but slowly his visage crumbles showing the monster that he is

  • @nooshy805
    @nooshy805 6 месяцев назад +5952

    Imagine one person writing a song 10 times better than an entire team of writers who work for the #1 animation studio in the world.

    • @Yellowguy0619
      @Yellowguy0619 6 месяцев назад +188

      Imagine? Why imagine where it actually happened!? Lmao!

    • @aanimavilis1492
      @aanimavilis1492 6 месяцев назад +74

      Disney deserves less

    • @clumsy_zebra_97
      @clumsy_zebra_97 6 месяцев назад +103

      It's not that surprising considering every corporation in the world right now is prioritizing quantity over quality. Disney could care less if people love their movie, they just want people to tolerate it enough to take their kids to see it in theaters, and sit through it at home 100 more times streaming it on disney+

    • @Yellowguy0619
      @Yellowguy0619 6 месяцев назад +5

      @@clumsy_zebra_97 But Sykes.

    • @MamaBinturong
      @MamaBinturong 6 месяцев назад +4

      real 💀💀

  • @aussakagamine8862
    @aussakagamine8862 6 месяцев назад +3988

    Disney used to be the best at the music game for animated flicks. Now we got people on RUclips upping them so easily.

    • @Yellowguy0619
      @Yellowguy0619 6 месяцев назад +21

      Sykes will be missed. Oliver and Company.

    • @Kaazikin
      @Kaazikin 6 месяцев назад +31

      I just wish Howard Ashman had lived longer... Greatest Disney music writer of all time.

    • @CreeketsCreek
      @CreeketsCreek 6 месяцев назад +49

      Well this guy is really good with music, let's not be derogatory towards him by saying what he did was easy. The problem is that Disney should be hiring people like him and giving them enough time to cook, too.

    • @aussakagamine8862
      @aussakagamine8862 6 месяцев назад +7

      @@CreeketsCreek I wasn't being derogatory, atleast that wasnt my intention, I know Jonah is good

    • @platina1502
      @platina1502 4 месяца назад +2

      Ur pretnding as if encanto didnt happen before this one, one mistake (the way the wrote the film) doesnt nullify everything else they did and do

  • @CarpetBanana
    @CarpetBanana 6 месяцев назад +4302

    all it's missing is the British accent

    • @Yellowguy0619
      @Yellowguy0619 6 месяцев назад +93

      But Sykes is a Disney villain who doesn't have a British accent and yet he's good

    • @CarpetBanana
      @CarpetBanana 6 месяцев назад +167

      @@Yellowguy0619 but imagine if he had a British accent

    • @Yellowguy0619
      @Yellowguy0619 6 месяцев назад +47

      @@CarpetBanana I mean... Sykes's book counterpart WAS from London...

    • @Chopscrewyyy
      @Chopscrewyyy 6 месяцев назад +10

      ​@@CarpetBananait'd be as bad as the original

    • @matityaloran9157
      @matityaloran9157 6 месяцев назад +5

      @@Yellowguy0619In the book, he’s British

  • @evilmark7593
    @evilmark7593 6 месяцев назад +1267

    at this point youtubers should just remake wish from scratch

    • @Bunny_Bill
      @Bunny_Bill 6 месяцев назад +100

      I saw someone else rewrite the plot (just as a summary) and I thought it was pretty sick

    • @Emberz_hollow
      @Emberz_hollow 6 месяцев назад +31

      There are animations of scenes adding the scrapped concept ideas

    • @Sparklewolfgirl67
      @Sparklewolfgirl67 6 месяцев назад +38

      Like a multi animator project? Honestly I’d love to see RUclipsrs remake Wish but I don’t know if there’s enough people willing to do that animation takes a lot of time

    • @CuteLilEldritch1010
      @CuteLilEldritch1010 6 месяцев назад +16

      At this point I genuinely feel tempted to do so. The sole reason I haven’t made an animatic of any of his songs is because I’m already busy working on my own passion projects

    • @W.Gaster
      @W.Gaster 5 месяцев назад +1

      Lol

  • @statelyelms
    @statelyelms 6 месяцев назад +3597

    I know usually people exaggerate that a redo is "so much better than the original" but this really is, in many ways. There's parts that need polishing, but in that regard, the original is a god damned sea urchin

    • @Yellowguy0619
      @Yellowguy0619 6 месяцев назад +28

      What parts of this song need polishing if I may ask?

    • @ar-je9lv
      @ar-je9lv 6 месяцев назад +155

      ​@@Yellowguy0619watch the video where he shows his process of rewriting it, you will see just how bad the original was.

    • @Yellowguy0619
      @Yellowguy0619 6 месяцев назад +49

      @@ar-je9lv no no, I mean what was this guys criticism on the remake Jonah did.

    • @DrizzingSakuras
      @DrizzingSakuras 6 месяцев назад +140

      ​@@Yellowguy0619 like how the line about how he'd give you whatever you'd ask for (like clothes and stuff) is followed by a weird line, just small stuff like that

    • @Yellowguy0619
      @Yellowguy0619 6 месяцев назад +75

      @@DrizzingSakuras Well for my criticism in Jonah's version is when he still added "All I want is a little respect." Cause in the original movie, he was already getting respect so what's the point in saying that, and what's the point in adding it still if he is already respected??

  • @DirewolfMemento
    @DirewolfMemento 6 месяцев назад +1040

    It's almost like he enjoys being a martyr it's very interesting

    • @ezrastardust3124
      @ezrastardust3124 6 месяцев назад +62

      This king has a saviour complex the size of Sweden

    • @skell6134
      @skell6134 5 месяцев назад +35

      ​@@ezrastardust3124Which is pretty great thing to make villain out of yet Disney messed up doing that

  • @yep8362
    @yep8362 6 месяцев назад +912

    In the best way possible, this rewrite feels like a cross between “you’re welcome” from Moana and “Meant to be yours” from the Heathers musical.

    • @KKKKKKKKKKKKKKKkim
      @KKKKKKKKKKKKKKKkim 6 месяцев назад +54

      HEATHERS MUSICAL MENTIONED?!?!?!?!?!!?!!!

    • @emmatotaldrama
      @emmatotaldrama 6 месяцев назад +11

      YESSS

    • @katherinesmallbean3594
      @katherinesmallbean3594 6 месяцев назад +46

      That is SUCH a cursed description but honestly..... you're right

    • @fiftyways
      @fiftyways Месяц назад +1

      absolutely. the self-righteousness and borderline insanity in the last segment sounds so much like JD

  • @totallyNotOKguys
    @totallyNotOKguys 6 месяцев назад +303

    "At all costs."
    The way you delivered that line broke my heart. It really sounded like Magnifico understood what he was sacrificing, what he was about to lose... And it saddened him.
    This is the kind of line and delivery people cling onto when imagining the villain can be redeemed.

  • @Muna-Jlore0997
    @Muna-Jlore0997 6 месяцев назад +770

    At least it’s better than “I can’t help it if mirrors love my face. It’s genetics! Hey, I got these genes from outer space!”

    • @aroissomebodywhoexists
      @aroissomebodywhoexists 6 месяцев назад +182

      “I let you live here for free and i dont even charge you rent”

    • @Bunny_Bill
      @Bunny_Bill 6 месяцев назад +111

      "Im Always here if you need to vent" 💀💀💀

    • @meowmeow3532
      @meowmeow3532 6 месяцев назад +36

      @@Bunny_Billi have a burning hatred for that line 💀

    • @AnonymousFohYOU
      @AnonymousFohYOU 6 месяцев назад +28

      Look out world, here I are!

    • @Muna-Jlore0997
      @Muna-Jlore0997 6 месяцев назад +8

      @@AnonymousFohYOU there is no way corporate or whoever approve that.

  • @Med_itz
    @Med_itz 6 месяцев назад +923

    This is a much better version story-wise, it shows his descent into madness perfectly and makes more sense than the original. Someone get Chris Pines to cover it!!

  • @CoolScratcher
    @CoolScratcher 6 месяцев назад +1268

    Jonah I feel like you're underestimating your abilties because this is a genuinely really good rewrite. It just needs the professional mixing and mastering of the one we got and Chris Pine. Then it will be perfect

    • @sofiamorgan3756
      @sofiamorgan3756 6 месяцев назад +61

      He did make it clear that he’s not good with singing when he did his other video re writing this

    • @cubonefan3
      @cubonefan3 6 месяцев назад +26

      Let’s not involve Chris Pine! It’d be so much better and easier to get a real character voice actor - maybe even a VA with a British accent?

    • @grim_56
      @grim_56 6 месяцев назад +56

      ​@@cubonefan3
      Chris did a good job with what he got

    • @Bunny_Bill
      @Bunny_Bill 6 месяцев назад +19

      Chris Pine deserves a real villain song like this one

    • @feagerbrim.1744
      @feagerbrim.1744 4 месяца назад +2

      This is 100% how I feel about it, it's more than perfect but it still kisses a bit of professionalism mixing (for example the chorus and lyrics sounding more smooth), also while I do love the way he sings it a British voice actor is would totally sell it!!

  • @alexabridged
    @alexabridged 6 месяцев назад +214

    That lines after "at all costs." Is purely amazing

  • @mochaanderson2375
    @mochaanderson2375 6 месяцев назад +149

    I like how it kept the pop vibes while being an ACTUAL VILLAIN SONG WORTH LISTENING TO.
    LITERALLY SUPERIOR

  • @makeshifthuman8008
    @makeshifthuman8008 6 месяцев назад +219

    This is so much better. I really wish Caleb Hyles or Annapantsu would make a cover of this version.

    • @SomeoneIguess-fx5mt
      @SomeoneIguess-fx5mt 6 месяцев назад +41

      Oh!! Caleb would rock this re-write!!! And anna the re-write of Asha's songs

    • @ikimono7382
      @ikimono7382 5 месяцев назад +6

      Caleb Hyles released a rendition that goes so hard imo

    • @kitawnss
      @kitawnss 5 месяцев назад +3

      not the same but you should check out wish king and queen alternative universe song by milkymelodies ft caleb hyles

  • @zacselway5971
    @zacselway5971 6 месяцев назад +404

    Please, we NEED the instrumental of this version. This would be such a fun song to see covers of

    • @graphgiraffe
      @graphgiraffe 6 месяцев назад +38

      There's a google drive link in the comments of the video where he showed his process!

    • @zacselway5971
      @zacselway5971 6 месяцев назад +19

      ​@@graphgiraffe Oh, thank you! I'll be sure to check it out

    • @urMom-gi8ji
      @urMom-gi8ji 6 месяцев назад +2

      i can make it if needed

  • @JxzazeVA
    @JxzazeVA 6 месяцев назад +301

    This is my headcanon song

  • @BelleDraws-i5d
    @BelleDraws-i5d 6 месяцев назад +331

    Yeah the thing I like about disney musicals is the long note on the ending and the camera zooms out from the character. Like ariel's "part of your wooooooooorld" or genie's "never had a friend like meeeeeeeeee". That also applies to villain songs like the ending note of frollo's hellfire and scar's "be prepaaaaaaaaaaared"
    So Asha ending her song like "to have something more than.... this", I was like where's the rest of it? Lol I expected it to be longer. So Jonah doing the same long note to This Is The Thanks I Get was a big respect to the disney formula

    • @cubonefan3
      @cubonefan3 6 месяцев назад +8

      Yeah, i actually think the end of this song is a little too close to “friend like me’s” ending tune and cadence.
      My mind immediately went to Aladdin when I heard this for the first time.
      Besides that this song is perfect *chefs kiss.

    • @Faithluvskenny
      @Faithluvskenny 6 месяцев назад +6

      "Motherrrrr knows sss BESSSTTTTTT"

    • @devilshila5588
      @devilshila5588 6 месяцев назад +9

      @@cubonefan3 And I think that if this is what Disney had done it would have worked perfectly, Wish was supposed to be the 100 annyversary. Having winks in the songs too, and not just in your face easter eggs, would have been amazing because those songs where the ones to save the princess movies, withouth the good music Disney would be nothing.

  • @katherinesmallbean3594
    @katherinesmallbean3594 6 месяцев назад +303

    The "Just come on out. I'm sure that all of this is a big mistake" part made me genuinely nervous when I first heard it. The delivery is so subtly sinister. It 100% reads like he is baiting someone out of hiding so he can hurt them.
    ....Meanwhile in the original song, the line sounds like he genuinely just wants to talk it out 😂

  • @sliceofmaggpie
    @sliceofmaggpie 6 месяцев назад +1738

    The thanks *you* get is a prize for making a banger out of the most mediocre song in musical history

    • @Yellowguy0619
      @Yellowguy0619 6 месяцев назад +12

      Yodel-adle-eedle-idle-oo is a villain song people tend to forget

    • @sliceofmaggpie
      @sliceofmaggpie 6 месяцев назад +6

      @@Yellowguy0619 and I will defend it until the day I die (and yes I am fully aware Home on the Range is also mediocre but whatever)

    • @Yellowguy0619
      @Yellowguy0619 6 месяцев назад +2

      @@sliceofmaggpie I'm also aware that it's bad, but hey, I didn't say I didn't like Yodel-adle-eedle-idle-oo. I like it too, and I somehow enjoy that more than King Magnifico's song.

  • @samalmighty1313
    @samalmighty1313 6 месяцев назад +139

    My only suggestion is instead of "In this book I may have my mind lost", it'd be "In this book my mind may be lost". Feels cleaner and more direct putting focus on the mind

  • @cache_valley_cryptid
    @cache_valley_cryptid 6 месяцев назад +48

    This both makes him more sympathetic and more villainous at the same time i love it 😭

    • @ezrastardust3124
      @ezrastardust3124 4 месяца назад +10

      I couldn’t agree more
      The original had me thinking “awww this poor sweet old man” whereas this version has me like “yikes, this king’s clearly been through the wringer and needs therapy, but somebody bring him to justice first!”

  • @kobisen
    @kobisen 6 месяцев назад +105

    Not only does this sound better than the original, but it also gets the point of Magnifico's heel turn across way better. It's not just him randomly feeling disrespected due to his ego. He's been through the wringer to make Rosas as amazing as it is, and he wants to protect it. Framing his use of evil magic as a reluctant sacrifice instead of an irrational fit makes him seem like what he's supposed to be: a well-intentioned ruler who thinks he knows better.

  • @kristillemaepalma2233
    @kristillemaepalma2233 6 месяцев назад +888

    Disney went from Encanto, one of if not the most popular disney musical to this damn trash.

    • @PlatinumAltaria
      @PlatinumAltaria 6 месяцев назад +139

      They were chasing the success of Let It Go and We Don't Talk About Bruno that got radio play, and decided to make every song a pop hit. The problem is that pop songs are nothing like show tunes, and the crossovers were unique lightning strikes.
      The fact that they gave the love song duet to the hero and villain to sing after removing the love interest from the script really shows the priorities.

    • @angelap1778
      @angelap1778 6 месяцев назад +46

      @@PlatinumAltaria that definitely gives classic big coporation vibes -- in an attempt to make their music more marketable, they strip it of what made it popular in the first place

    • @infinitikokomorich
      @infinitikokomorich 5 месяцев назад +21

      Encanto should’ve been their anniversary movie instead of wish-

    • @ezelfrancisco1349
      @ezelfrancisco1349 4 месяца назад +4

      The difference is one is written by a musical theatre person (while Lin’s music is pop and rap, he’s first and foremost a musical theatre writer) to one that is written by the same people who wrote Justin Bieber songs

  • @desdar100
    @desdar100 6 месяцев назад +153

    Absolutely adore this version of the song.
    It's so passive-aggressive but you can definitely feel the anger building and building.
    I can speak to this truth since I found myself in the situation before

  • @Xverest_
    @Xverest_ 6 месяцев назад +72

    The "No hesitations, No regrets" hit SO HARD. Who knew four words could communicate more than Disney's entire song could.

  • @AGM-f5d
    @AGM-f5d 4 месяца назад +15

    2:22 This part is just GREAT. The slower pacing, the lyrics, the acting, the final note... Just WOW.

  • @hazeltree7738
    @hazeltree7738 4 месяца назад +13

    I like this, it's not just improving the song by making him sound evil. He sounds like he's well intentioned but has inner demons that claim him over the course of the song as he almost "Falls"

  • @kendrikkahler7944
    @kendrikkahler7944 6 месяцев назад +75

    2:19 Ok but the ‘at all costs’ line hit so hard👌

  • @rosa-san5259
    @rosa-san5259 6 месяцев назад +51

    It’s giving the You’ll Be Back vibes, and I’m all in for it!

    • @selfryed
      @selfryed 6 месяцев назад +8

      THIS! never have i ever seen a better description

  • @pixlv6384
    @pixlv6384 6 месяцев назад +93

    He really succeeded in making Magnifico more like the classic evil Disney villain that they said he would be

  • @RipVanFish09
    @RipVanFish09 6 месяцев назад +165

    This is the true version to me.

  • @abbycollins4820
    @abbycollins4820 6 месяцев назад +104

    Love the changed lyrics and more subdued music. It conveys its message more clearly.

    • @abbycollins4820
      @abbycollins4820 6 месяцев назад +19

      I like how every time at “this is the thanks I get?” the song continuously refuses to become a big bombastic pop song.

    • @abbycollins4820
      @abbycollins4820 6 месяцев назад +4

      2:13 - 2:21 - So Cool.

  • @ezrastardust3124
    @ezrastardust3124 6 месяцев назад +33

    This is not only a much better song than the original, but also the only Disney villain song aside from Hellfire that genuinely made me feel scared
    The piano and snare drum make me feel like I’m being hunted and that accompanied by the lyrics just triggers a fight or flight response
    Basically, this is absolutely fabulous and I love it

    • @RandomPianistt
      @RandomPianistt Месяц назад

      be prepared, hellfire, and this song are my favorite villain songs :3

  • @A_Great_Me
    @A_Great_Me 6 месяцев назад +249

    Much better than the original.

  • @acidtrip150
    @acidtrip150 6 месяцев назад +45

    If there were a team of artists that suddenly decided to redo the entirety of Wish, Jonah is the first person I’d expect them to ask to rewrite the music NO QUESTIONS ASKED

    • @allykat2.015
      @allykat2.015 6 месяцев назад +5

      There is, a youtuber named PinkieMachineStudios is remaking Wish, music and all.

    • @theriseofthesea6255
      @theriseofthesea6255 5 месяцев назад

      Thanks for mentioning it! I just watched the first 25 minutes of the storyboard animation they did along with a few other artists and it is so good!!

  • @iNotAnHacker
    @iNotAnHacker 6 месяцев назад +25

    I love how your song makes him less openly dickish and has an air of plausible deniability toward being the villain

  • @thetweefirebug
    @thetweefirebug 6 месяцев назад +20

    God, I love the delivery on the "and this is the thanks... I get?"
    The restrained anger is amazing. He sounds so resentful and tired.

  • @Rikrobat
    @Rikrobat 6 месяцев назад +765

    I love how your lyrics focus on keeping Magnifico’s arrogance about himself without getting distracted on things like his looks. Even though he’s done some kind things, he’s caught up on “how amazing he is” for them, which you balance well. It also helps to stitch together the pivot his character takes, rather than the switch coming out of nowhere.

  • @TheTorseHumtunja
    @TheTorseHumtunja 6 месяцев назад +102

    Dude?? If you could pair a matching instrumental rewrite with someone who could match the octave ranges (or just put yours, since you're also a great singer), it would be HEAVENLY. 😭😭

  • @annamaesapinit1645
    @annamaesapinit1645 6 месяцев назад +89

    i cant believe one guy made a better song than Disney 😭😭

  • @MasuxAnderson
    @MasuxAnderson 6 месяцев назад +37

    I do like that the internet is building Wish up on its potential and cut concepts rather than clown on and forget it. Very inspiring.

  • @seankim1592
    @seankim1592 6 месяцев назад +247

    I love the lyrics here, I really do. But I do miss having the King act pissy by screaming "THIS IS THE THANKS I GET?!" It just would have been funny, though I do get that it would clash with the vibe that this revision is trying to achieve.

    • @mossyrocks3967
      @mossyrocks3967 27 дней назад

      honestly that was the one good part in the song

  • @Ummwatdesigma
    @Ummwatdesigma 6 месяцев назад +26

    There's something about this version that makes the song much more creepy and sinister especially the main chorus and I'm living for it

  • @splendisdude
    @splendisdude 6 месяцев назад +135

    Jonah!! You’re giving Lin Manuel Miranda 😍😍

  • @gambam07
    @gambam07 6 месяцев назад +59

    As I said before this rewrite does a better job of showing the king going mad. I love that this song gives more time to show him slowly breaking down. Better the song bring it back to his origin story being the catalyst or reason behind him going mad with paranoia. Nicely done!

  • @kazoo22
    @kazoo22 2 месяца назад +4

    So in love with how the lyric "this is the thanks I get" is less of a question and more of a statement, assuming a sense of correctness and superiority

  • @SugarTheBee
    @SugarTheBee 4 месяца назад +8

    thing is, if he grants a wish every month, fourteen wishes a year IS generous

  • @winisning
    @winisning 6 месяцев назад +84

    This is a banger flows better than the original

  • @namecomingsoon9517
    @namecomingsoon9517 6 месяцев назад +105

    You should make this a full series of taking songs from other musicals you think could be reworked and try them your way. This is really good stuff

  • @waffler-yz3gw
    @waffler-yz3gw 4 месяца назад +3

    the delivery of "at all costs" was some genuinely professional stuff

  • @scythina
    @scythina 6 месяцев назад +20

    The ending to this song rewrite was literally villainous-ly magestic. How could Disney miss so badly. I'm glad someone's doing justice in this platform

  • @isabell3_sc479
    @isabell3_sc479 6 месяцев назад +14

    1:51 ahhh your change of the chorus makes it so much better! this is such a bop now like…

  • @jimpickenscultmember2073
    @jimpickenscultmember2073 6 месяцев назад +25

    I feel like "I give you shelter, I'd give you clothes. If you really needed those" would be a better rhyme + fits the message better. The next line is also a bit clunky, maybe instead its "I offer kindness, I offer hope, (and yet) all you want is trouble, I can't let this Kingdom crumble"

  • @Kalebsonyoutube
    @Kalebsonyoutube 6 месяцев назад +19

    THIS ATE DOWN SOOO BADDDD!!! You literally just inspired a freshman to take music theory and start making my own songs, in just like 2 weeks. YOURE AWESOME DUDE

  • @hannahr2824
    @hannahr2824 5 месяцев назад +8

    Your version also brings out the cooler ideas the original melody was going for (trouble…crumble). It’s clever. I also like that the instrumental overhaul doesn’t strip the song of the original “upbeat villain” idea, and the snare helps maintain the integrity of the song while elevating it. This is extremely impressive work.

  • @corneliah.arentz2783
    @corneliah.arentz2783 4 месяца назад +3

    Honestly, this is a much more menacing version of the song

  • @platina1502
    @platina1502 4 месяца назад +6

    Very interesting version

  • @WhyMeWaa1
    @WhyMeWaa1 6 месяцев назад +19

    It’s not PERFECT, but it’s definitely BETTER

  • @queentamer9095
    @queentamer9095 6 месяцев назад +31

    I don’t say this to stick it to Disney’s wish… but this is a legitimately better song. You conveyed exactly what magnifico is all about what he seeks to protect. Flow beautifully and the cadence is on point. You wrote poetry where the original was AI shlock. Keep it up! Maybe, if we’re lucky and all subscribe hard enough, we can blow yer channel up

  • @amandacarvalho3527
    @amandacarvalho3527 6 месяцев назад +47

    This is great, love the bitter frustrated feeling we get from him

  • @ApoIIo_
    @ApoIIo_ 6 месяцев назад +29

    “This is the Thanks I Get!?” (Jonah’s version)
    I can’t help it if you can’t see the way
    It’s pathetic!
    You think you know best? You think you know pain?
    I’m the king! I work magically!
    When it comes to looks, no one matches me!
    Yeah, I’m passionate, I’m not petulant!
    Someone praise me for my benevolence!
    Ahem- just look,
    I’d give you shelter, I’d give you clothes
    If you really need them most
    I’d be the first one to volunteer my troops
    If ever you’re in trouble, I can’t let this kingdom crumble
    I welcome you all here from nearby cities and distant lands
    I clean up all your messes
    And I keep you safe any way I can
    I give, and give, and give, and give
    There’s no need to pay me back!
    All I want is just a little bit of respect!
    And this is the thanks I get?
    Oh, come on don’t worry about them
    You’re a great king!
    Is that so?
    Of course!
    I mean, where to even begin
    You’re so brilliant!
    That’s the least that you could say
    There’s more
    Oh, come on now!
    Yeah, you’re cute, and strong, and bold, and brave!
    Thanks, fellas
    I’m a saint, it’s true
    I built this whole city just for you
    And now you’re complaining? You’ve got no clue
    How hard it is to do what I do!
    I did fourteen wishes last year
    That’s impressive, would you agree?
    And now you question my methods
    While you reap of my generosity
    You know I’ve always had your back
    So why can’t you just trust me?
    I’ve been nothing but gracious and kind since the day that we met!
    And this is the thanks I get?
    No hesitations, no regrets
    I didn’t wanna do this
    I swore I’d never do this
    But I’m hypnotized by how these pages flip
    I refuse to have my power stripped
    A portion, a spell, a summon, a curse!
    Anything to make that light reverse!
    In this book I may have my mind lost
    But I must protect my home at all costs
    There’s a traitor in our midst
    An errant, insidious snake
    Just come on out
    I’m sure that all of this is a big mistake!
    I’ll find you soon enough
    And til then, I will take no break!
    The sacrifices that I must make
    No, nothing can ruin this claim I’ve staked
    I’ve been through the storm for all your sakes, and yet
    This is the thanks I get?

  • @cheesydinos
    @cheesydinos 6 месяцев назад +32

    thank you!! this is so amazing though!!
    disney needs to get their game up.

  • @Grey_3438
    @Grey_3438 6 месяцев назад +39

    I've been dying for someone to sing a rewritten version of the fvck ass original song ✋🏾😭💕

  • @MadilynMeiFan
    @MadilynMeiFan 6 месяцев назад +20

    The only note I have for this is that I feel like there’s not a lot going on with the background music, but I mean ITS SO GOOOOOOOOODD AAAAH-

  • @AbsolutelyAri1
    @AbsolutelyAri1 5 месяцев назад +5

    I love how it sounds less like pop now

  • @CapedCrusader77
    @CapedCrusader77 6 месяцев назад +23

    Bravissmo! I've actually watched your rewrite on this one and the city of Rosas, but holy shit, that long note is perfection! Chef's kiss!

  • @T_Lewis
    @T_Lewis 6 месяцев назад +34

    Thank you.

  • @Frankie_and_fwoggie
    @Frankie_and_fwoggie 4 месяца назад +2

    I love how some lines are kept cause they are just good line as he said in the full video it had reminence of a good song by a rushed deadline

  • @j2415
    @j2415 4 месяца назад +2

    The Frolo section was absolutely amazing!

  • @jesserobb399
    @jesserobb399 4 месяца назад +5

    With proper vocals, sound mixing and more backing, this would be so much better than the movie version.

  • @karathewolfsfanficchannel933
    @karathewolfsfanficchannel933 5 месяцев назад +3

    Sometimes i think “how does Disney mess up this bad?” And then i remember they made the “I’m the alpha im the leader” song

  • @makenzieleigh1365
    @makenzieleigh1365 2 месяца назад +1

    Dude your version made me legit tear up, which is so far from the emotion the actual movie gave me

  • @AUCreatoer
    @AUCreatoer 6 месяцев назад +12

    THIS IS ART AND 100% BETTER THAN THE PREVIOUS ONE. This is the official Magnefico villain song for me.

  • @pinkytheofficial5904
    @pinkytheofficial5904 6 месяцев назад +6

    this was literally only posted a day ago (not the video of him fixing it, im just talking about THIS upload) and i had it stuck in my head ALL DAY TODAY AND YESTERDAY. i think that tells you how AMAZING this version is!!

  • @fhernok
    @fhernok 6 месяцев назад +13

    gonna be belting this instead of the original for sure 💀

  • @tipsyGn0stalg1c
    @tipsyGn0stalg1c 6 месяцев назад +27

    better than the og 🤞🤞

  • @petros6013
    @petros6013 6 месяцев назад +7

    Time for this guy to write a full musical

  • @daumnitboy
    @daumnitboy 4 месяца назад +2

    I listen to all your remakes so often i forgot how originals sounds like

  • @aquaperi4848
    @aquaperi4848 4 месяца назад +1

    The "At all costs" Parallel gave me chills. Nice job on all these rewritten songs!

  • @Crystalis39
    @Crystalis39 6 месяцев назад +7

    i hope the cover artists and arrangers get their hands on this one bc this is already a 7/10 but with even a little more polish it could be a 9/10 easily

  • @Yochi-uj4bk
    @Yochi-uj4bk 6 месяцев назад +5

    Disney hire this man

  • @Salamander_rose
    @Salamander_rose 4 месяца назад +3

    This sounds like it could be in Heathers, you did an amazing job!

  • @creepykidandinfinitedreams2987
    @creepykidandinfinitedreams2987 6 месяцев назад +4

    I loved the "At All Costs" line, what a great throwback that hits hard.

  • @SweetOrangeGirl
    @SweetOrangeGirl 6 месяцев назад +8

    Now THIS actually makes sense!

  • @Buddy_Duck
    @Buddy_Duck 6 месяцев назад +5

    Your revamp really highlighted just how catchy the original song could have been if the professionals working on it were just given more of a clear vision. I would love to see someone with more intimidating vocals do a cover of this version

  • @abbycollins4820
    @abbycollins4820 5 месяцев назад +3

    The fact that I listen to this song on loop instead of the original says a lot.

  • @ArielBBS2779
    @ArielBBS2779 6 месяцев назад +22

    DisneyVevo just uploaded the actual This Is The Thanks I Get on RUclips 14 minutes ago
    COINCIDENCE I THINK NOT
    They knew your version would defs beat the original, there's no doubt about it

  • @BeccaCalaRoarr3
    @BeccaCalaRoarr3 25 дней назад +1

    Menacing yo, well re-wrote buddy
    ~ Roarr!

  • @LiterallyLyn
    @LiterallyLyn 6 месяцев назад +3

    I love how more villainous this is omg. The "this is the thanks I get?"(s) sounds so ominous.

  • @Daniel-e8g2q
    @Daniel-e8g2q 6 месяцев назад +4

    I like how it sounds annoyed and sinister, and never has a huge note.

  • @anonview
    @anonview 3 месяца назад +1

    Thank duck somebody had the balls to make this song make sense and sound a bit more villainous. And it actually uses words that go with the movie's setting.

  • @Grey8270
    @Grey8270 6 месяцев назад +3

    I love this the time and effort you put into this clearly shows

  • @GraciousPiety
    @GraciousPiety 6 месяцев назад +2

    This is what I have stuck in my head. Such a great revision.

  • @sadstardust
    @sadstardust 6 месяцев назад +3

    THANK YOU! I have been manually clicking on the chapter marker to listen to this on repeat until now.

  • @SeaAngel24676
    @SeaAngel24676 6 месяцев назад +8

    2:17 I love this reference

  • @Tayden-md1sq
    @Tayden-md1sq 5 месяцев назад +5

    I love how he got rid of the "Oh wait nvm im good again !!" aspect in the song, simply because it made no sense and didn't work with the plot OR the song. I like this much better

  • @aviatoons
    @aviatoons 6 месяцев назад +7

    Thank you, I’ve been waiting for this since I saw your rewrite video! My brother and I have had this stuck in our heads 😂