Fixing RWBY Part 4: Volume 2 [Episodes 7 ⮚ 9]

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  • Опубликовано: 4 дек 2024

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  • @c-puff
    @c-puff 3 года назад +159

    As someone who’s never watched RWBY I’m just going to pretend this is the canon plot.

    • @elfireii328
      @elfireii328 2 года назад +45

      If anything, i suggest watching the action scenes up to season 3. Monty's fight scenes are phenomenal.

    • @shazarakk
      @shazarakk Год назад +6

      As someone who gave up halfway through volume 5, when it went completely off the rails insane, keep it that way.

    • @imgvillasrc1608
      @imgvillasrc1608 10 месяцев назад

      Wise decision
      Better to just ignore canon RWBY to save braincells or just wait until the whole series is done.

  • @crazygamer_1082
    @crazygamer_1082 4 года назад +94

    I always find the line funny about how “rude” Weiss is being asking Blake an honest question. Because we’re all thinking it! It’s not rude to ask someone a question if you have a genuine interest in learning more about something you have no clear understanding of.

  • @kumbi8368
    @kumbi8368 5 лет назад +55

    Weiss to Blake: “How do Faunus function?”

  • @devegas4910
    @devegas4910 3 года назад +51

    Like I said on a previous video, you took a forgettable character and gave him some meaningful value. By writing Tucson and attaching him to Blake the way you did, it gives us a better opportunity to get to know her, him, the white fang, and those who leave it. And he gets to be more than just some character murdered by Emerald and Mercury who otherwise could’ve been replaced by anybody
    Also while the scene of Pyrra beating the shit out of Team CRDL was good enough on its own, you gave it a greater value too. You again further fleshed out these characters and Velvet in order to build up to this fight and come to a resolution to a problem that began back in season one. This is how these characters should’ve been handled from the beginning in the show itself.

  • @adimiss
    @adimiss 5 лет назад +160

    It always frustrates me when i watch rewrites of RWBY. Everyone seems to do it better justice than the actual writers of RWBY.

  • @stoneheart3625
    @stoneheart3625 11 месяцев назад +4

    I wish i found this sooner. Ive been watching a lot of evaluations of RWBY after the very controversial "Volume 9". This is amazing and I love this so much. Also RIP Tucson :,)

  • @ArrowVI
    @ArrowVI 5 лет назад +30

    The Hitler edits with Weiss... They're so wrong but so right at the same time...

  • @TJCID22
    @TJCID22 3 года назад +32

    Hell to the NO on removing the Mercury messing around with Emerald bit. That was hilarious and really played up his badboy, devil-may care "Smirkury" attitude, as well as her jealousy of having to have to share Cinder (remember she had a crush on her) with him.

  • @abezevlag7337
    @abezevlag7337 5 лет назад +58

    7>Damn, a week and some change into the semester and students are still asking Pyrrha for autographs. The publicity Pumpkin Pete’s can give is no joke.
    7>You did a really good job of pairing off RWBY with JPNR. I can easily see Yang being Jaune’s wingwoman and Ruby and Pyrrha being paired off is very fitting considering Pyrrha will be in the spotlight for a bit. A more interesting pairing for Weiss would’ve been Pyrrha since Weiss actually wanted her on her team back in the day, it doesn’t really matter for an outline but in a fully fleshed out episode it’d be easier to make more interesting.
    7>Hold up… Velvet doesn’t socialize with anyone outside of RWBY or JNPR? Do you mean she doesn’t socialize with anyone else in the class or in general?
    7>Penny randomly bumps into Ruby… again.
    7>Pyrrha already met Penny back in Volume 1, timestamp 41:16. I guess Pyrrha left right after telling Ruby that she was looking for Jaune instead of sticking around for introductions. Ruby and Pyrrha were both also looking for supplies so I assumed she stuck around, guess not.
    7>Rip Tucson, weren’t around for long but your death was well set up.
    8>Damn it, whenever I rewatch these episodes I usually just listen to the audio so I completely forgot you made twink Jaune canon. Well if nothing else this helps explain why he was so weak physically when he got to Beacon.
    9>I thought Cinder already found out Pyrrha’s semblance, what else did Mercury get out of it?
    9>Why is Jaune eating rocks?
    9>Lol Blake fits the stereotype of catgirls liking fish.

    • @CelticPhoenix
      @CelticPhoenix  5 лет назад +25

      -That cereal mascot popularity, son
      -Velvet is actually pretty sociable when she isn't the one to initiate. She's not very outgoing, so she's limited to about three teams of friends. Maybe a few more, but none in that class, for sure.
      -Penny does that, and I kinda like that about their dynamic.
      -It's more of a formal meeting than a passing hello.
      -That was a single data point. For all she knew at that moment, it was just a telekinesis semblance or something else. Mercury helped confirm what it was so they had a clearer picture of what they are working with.
      -A boy needs his fiber

  • @LooneyLei
    @LooneyLei 3 года назад +16

    Ah beans, even if I knew it was better if he died I still kind of hoped Tukson survived
    I can’t believe you made me care about Tukson.
    Rest in Pepperonis Tukson, you will be remembered as Blake’s adoptive dad.

  • @roccotherayquaza2468
    @roccotherayquaza2468 5 лет назад +16

    9:51 don’t worry I think it’s cannon too. 🤣🤣🤣🤣 Mostly because it hilarious! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

  • @ShinigamiSparda
    @ShinigamiSparda 3 года назад +12

    Damn. Actually gettin some use out of Cardin.

  • @pining_tree6788
    @pining_tree6788 Год назад +4

    I like how you did the situation with Weiss and Blake at the end. It’s a realistic way that someone who doesn’t know how to ask something would try to ask, an untinentional rude comment but making it clear that they didn’t mean to be rude just curious

  • @tommystegemann4274
    @tommystegemann4274 Год назад +2

    the thing with the first crusade, i always thought it was some kind of extreamly sensetive or even forbidden kind of book like mein Kampf, because of how tougsten reacted to the name, and that is why it wasn't in stock.

  • @absol102
    @absol102 2 года назад +2

    I'm hooked, and I'm totally into all these changes! So well written!

  • @danielsurvivor1372
    @danielsurvivor1372 Год назад +1

    14:47 It's still confusing af

  • @your_dar_ling
    @your_dar_ling 5 лет назад +15

    Uhhh how are Sun and Neptune partners for this assignment? Or am I missing something.

    • @blindbeholder9713
      @blindbeholder9713 3 года назад +3

      Maybe they're not and just hang out anyway???

    • @silberkatze2326
      @silberkatze2326 3 года назад +6

      I think the extra rule didn't count for Exchange students

  • @metaldragon8632
    @metaldragon8632 5 лет назад +12

    McNeil I need some advice do you know the Trails series?? If you don’t then the monster hunters in that series the bracers are almost exactly like the monsters in my story the guardians and I do NOT want to get hit with the rip off insult on a story of mine so what do I do if I find a part of my story that is Eerily similar to another well respected one plz tell me

    • @CelticPhoenix
      @CelticPhoenix  5 лет назад +6

      You've got to retool the idea at the base, or find a way to bury it. Try to give the element a different level of importance in the story than in Trails. If it's super important in Trails, make it a background element, if it's a background element in Trails, make it absolutely central to the world. That's the quickest way to handle it, but sometimes you just gotta bite the bullet and take the risk. That said, consult a lawyer if you're that worried about it.

  • @Ccthesergal
    @Ccthesergal Год назад +2

    oh nooo OHH NOOOOO rip tuxin >.

  • @danielsurvivor1372
    @danielsurvivor1372 Год назад +1

    9:52 Awww it's so cute who is it?

  • @sero9673
    @sero9673 2 года назад +2

    Hello so... there is gonna get a fanfic for all of this?!? Or audiobook because i want this

  • @ketch117-2
    @ketch117-2 3 года назад +3

    Isn't Velvet a year older?

    • @Starcro
      @Starcro 3 года назад +10

      yeah but she skipped history class so had to redo it with rubys class

  • @dirtyrat886
    @dirtyrat886 2 года назад +2

    E

  • @purplespades9632
    @purplespades9632 2 года назад +1

    Kid?Tuxson looks like in his 20’s

  • @masonsucksatwriting1914
    @masonsucksatwriting1914 3 года назад +23

    This rewrite has been phenomenal so far! I love how you’ve added more interactions between RWBY, JNPR, and other people and I love even more that you’ve taken side characters like CFVY, Cardin, Tukson, and Banesaw and developed them more. This may be my favorite rewrites if RWBY that I’ve seen so far😄❤️