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  • Опубликовано: 26 окт 2024

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  • @houdamiftah8996
    @houdamiftah8996 4 года назад +7

    One of my fav youtubers❤. I really think u deserve more subscribers!

    • @DyllenNellis
      @DyllenNellis  4 года назад +1

      Thank you so much!! I appreciate it! 🥰

  • @averyjackson3199
    @averyjackson3199 4 года назад

    Hi Dyllen! Thank you so much for these series! I really wish I could afford to pay for your course but I’m continuing to learn and grow and get better at my essays because of your concise and clear videos 💖

    • @DyllenNellis
      @DyllenNellis  4 года назад

      Aw thank you so much! I’m glad my videos can be a free alternative :)

  • @DyllenNellis
    @DyllenNellis  2 года назад

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  • @rishibhatnagar7116
    @rishibhatnagar7116 4 года назад

    Amazing video truly inspiring would like to see more content of this sort

  • @quinzelhuang5036
    @quinzelhuang5036 4 года назад

    Thank you so much!🥰🥰 I am applying to Stanford this year through early action with a portfolio, but I just started to write my first draft of my college essay😭 I don’t know if I have enough time or not, but I’ll try and see what happens . Again, THANX for your videos! It really helped me to have an idea of what I am going to do next! Thank you so much!!🥰

    • @DyllenNellis
      @DyllenNellis  4 года назад +2

      Yes!! Keep going, you can do it! Let me know if you'd like me to edit your essays :))

    • @quinzelhuang5036
      @quinzelhuang5036 4 года назад

      @@DyllenNellis I will!! 😭🥰

    • @jennydeng593
      @jennydeng593 2 года назад

      Well did u get in?

  • @uwu7999
    @uwu7999 3 года назад

    Thank you so much!

  • @gabrielcasuco7448
    @gabrielcasuco7448 2 года назад

    That's her who play the roll of amber von tussle

  • @nikhilpurbey7168
    @nikhilpurbey7168 3 года назад

    Thanks!

  • @anya-kq7gw
    @anya-kq7gw 4 года назад

    that theatre pizazz shining through
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  • @abigaileun7755
    @abigaileun7755 4 года назад

    thank you for this!

  • @bow5.
    @bow5. 4 года назад

    thank you so much

  • @cameronkrouch8278
    @cameronkrouch8278 4 года назад

    Hi dyllen! I’m a huge fan of your videos. I have a question. In my common app essay, I briefly mentioned one cs project i worked on for 2-3 sentences to show how I overcame a problem. What would u think about using that project as my topic for the Stanford intellectual virtuality essay? Is that too redundant? Thanks!!!

    • @DyllenNellis
      @DyllenNellis  4 года назад

      Hey, thanks so much!! And no I don’t think it’s redundant at all! If anything it makes your application more cohesive. Just as long as you’re sharing new information in the IV essay and you keep the part in the common app short :)

    • @cameronkrouch8278
      @cameronkrouch8278 4 года назад

      Dyllen Nellis Also, how did you know when your essays were done? This is something I’m struggling with a lot on my roommate essay - not knowing when to put the pen down and admit that I have an honest, good essay.

    • @DyllenNellis
      @DyllenNellis  4 года назад

      @@cameronkrouch8278 I talk about this in this video! It's most likely a gut feeling, but you can ask others for additional validation

  • @bri-4059
    @bri-4059 4 года назад +1

    great video! if i want to put a number in my essay like the number 30 should i write "thirty" or 30? does it matter? lol

    • @DyllenNellis
      @DyllenNellis  4 года назад +2

      Thank you! I would recommend using the word version, so "thirty".

    • @bri-4059
      @bri-4059 4 года назад

      Dyllen Nellis great thanks!

  • @sasikalat7776
    @sasikalat7776 4 года назад +1

    My phone malfunctioned, even before the video ends it's leaving the like...

  • @wongshari88
    @wongshari88 4 года назад

    Do you edit essays? Checked out the website but it doesn't show info on how to contact you and your essay services/fees Thanks!!

    • @DyllenNellis
      @DyllenNellis  4 года назад

      Yes! Visit dyllennellis.com/collegeapps

    • @wongshari88
      @wongshari88 4 года назад

      @@DyllenNellis there might be a problem with you website. It doesn't list your services and also says the website is "not secured".

    • @DyllenNellis
      @DyllenNellis  4 года назад

      @@wongshari88 ah. Sometimes the link has troubles when you click on it. Try typing it into your browser! Also, for essay proofreading, my rates are $25 for essays 250 words or less, $30 for 350 or less, and $35 for 650 or less. You can email me at dyllennellisbusiness@gmail.com if it's easier.