"The Black Friday Incident" by Patrick Donohue | CreepyPasta Storytime
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- Опубликовано: 12 сен 2024
- This might not be the Black Friday You're thinking of but it's a great lost episode or theory creepy pasta for Toy Story
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The director walked out, muttering to himself "Edge, it needs less edge."
Ha! Good one!
+reagan paulino You just made my day! 😂
Awesome one please check out my channel
RJ Moss no
"The Black Friday incident" :the Cashier was trampled to death by a gang of overweight mothers.
I CAN SEE THIS HAPPENING
+DeeBee R I'm sure it happened, somewhere before...lol
+Kaitlin Crosslin most likely a Walmart
duhhhh (*0*)
+Kaitlin Crosslin I'm dead xD
"edge. It needs more edge."
And then Shadow the Hedgehog was created.
Wow lmfao (slow claps)
lol
As well as Dark Pit
Ow, the edge.
Vile Still Kills You OHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO,Yes.
everyone's talking about the edginess of the pasta but (from the looks of it) no one has talked about:
"Don't you want it?"
*"Don't you want it?"*
*DoN'T You WANt IT?!!?!?!?*
XD
Last one is suppose to be: don't you love it?
SpongeBob: IIIIIII NEEEED IIIIIIIIIT!!!!!!
The Fake Slim Shady that's what she said.
insertclevernamehere I don't need it,
I don't need it,
I Don't Need It,
I DoN't NeEd It,
I dOn'T nEeD iT,
IIIIIIIIIIIIIIII NEEEEEEEEED IIIIIIIIIIIIT!!!!
Disney: Needs more edge.
SEGA: *walks in and slams shadow the hedgehog on the table* Eeeh? Eeeh?
enough edge i think im bleeding from the edge
Wow
Nice one
+Michaela Robertson it's OK Michael
Disney: That will work!
Sega:YES
Pixar: Wait you want us to have HIM in the film!?
+Georgia Cox the
"sunglasses wearing pizzas"
don't you mean pizzas wearing sunglasses?
XD
I didn't even realize he said that until now!
Don't eat pizza Steve!
Rachelle no listen to how he said it you will get it I promise
I would really REAAaaAaaaLlllllly like to see sunglassses wearing pizzas 030
This creepypasta needs more edge
MOOORRRRE EDDDGGGGEE!!
+Kaitlin Crosslin MOAR
MOARMOARMOARMORMORMORMORMORMORMORMORMORMORMORMORMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
you......
Oh...I'll give it more edge...you'll see.....
*draws a triangle* there's your edge.
Wade Wilson it should have been a big joke with woody drawing a triangle then cuting his hand with it then saying "there's your edge bub." Not some gore pasta although it was a good pasta.
*pulls out sword
This baby has more edge!
AAAAAAA OWWWWW FUCK FUCK FUCK THE EDGE
7.8/10 Not enough edge, couldn't cut myself on it.
+Crawfishness 10/10 dont you want it? - IGN
+Crawfishness 1/0
69/10 ign
9/11 out of 420
YOUR COMMENT NEEDS MORE EDGE
6:55 "The claw machine was filled with sunglasses wearing pizzas." LOL
+Michael Avila I think he ment Pizzas Wearing Suglasses
I know. I am the all knowing Ronwei.
+Georgia Cox DONT FUCKING BRING UP PIZZA STEVE.
Kole Pundrich Jeez dude I don't even LIKE UG
me too a bit
Has anyone seen the one deleted scene from Toy Story where Woody pushes Buzz? It's not as dark as this story but it's pretty interesting...
Like, Tom Hanks sounds like a real asshole and it's genuinely disconcerting, the stuff he says to the other characters. Glad Pixar stuck with the final project, but that clip is totally worth a watch.
droma lloma it’s interesting how in some ways, this story is kind of true.
Not as dark? Its the exact same as this creepypasta if not worst
Eccept the ending of course
The creepy thing is that while Ralph and the creepy woody at the end aren't true, the weird personalities of the toys, the scene of woody pushing buzz out the window, and the pizzas instead of aliens were actually considered in the making of toy story until they decided to make it more kid friendly.
Wow, this pasta really overdid the real Black Friday Incident. And yes it did happen.
Now I'm scared... What if this story actually happened as well..??
0-0
;-;
It did happen it just wasn't as severe as this story makes it to be, look it up on google or RUclips, they did a video about "the Black Friday incident"
Needs more edge.
On an unrelated note, as i was reading the comments (after the vid), i heard three piano notes. All three the same, 1second interval, getting softer with each note. It sounded somewhere between mid-way and the right side of the piano.
Don't get your panties in a twist, all the Black Friday Incident was was a bad test screening at a mall on Black Friday. All the participants hated the movie because Woody was a compleat dick to Buzz. This lead to the Pixar team rewriting the movie. It's considered
an "incident" by John Laceder because they had only 1 year not only to rewrite it, but to animate it.
wow
Eh. Needs more edge.
xD
I saw what you did there
I mean... It could be "okay" But.....NEEDS MORE EDGE.
Good.
Sebastian
Is this what happened at Sega HQ when they were making Shadow The Hedgehog?
omg dude...
No when they were making sonic r
+Bobby Hill Dangit Bobby.
Lol
Lol
I got a fever
And the only prescription
Is MORE EDGE
+Mike Fortier I NEED MORE EDGE!
+Michael Carvajal I NEED MO EDGE
+Michael Carvajal EEEEDDDDDGGGGGEEEEEE
Mike Fortier Ow the edge.
+Michael Carvajal Which edge is best edge?
Ralph then went on to create Microsoft edge.
More edge they said.
And Hot Topic was born.
As an artist, this is actually pretty disturbing. I get massive insomnia from art block; feeling the need to fill that empty page with lively, expressive characters, but not knowing what to make them do or say. So many possibilities, but so little inspiration and motivation. This is a really interesting story, thank you for sharing! Your narration is really soothing even with the dark overtones.
wow this is so scary that by the end of the story I was at the EDGE of my seat.
The_Embodiment_Of_Evil hmm, the pun is strong with this one
The_Embodiment_Of_Evil nice picture
Michelle Montes thank you
Aaaayyy
(Ba-dum-tss)
guys guys imagen when the screening of the movie ended after seeing EDGE the head of Disney stands up and yells "PERFECT!"
Otaco Bunny LOL XD M8 1 W0NT D@T!!
*IT NEEDS MORE FREAKING EDGE GODDAMIT*
nice one
Nah, it needs more cowbell.
this has nothing to do with black friday
yes
i did
*****
No reason to get mad...
***** replaying?
you are in no position to call me a fuckhead. you here are the only fuckhead.
learn what words mean before you use them
victor bui
um, you really don't need to say anything...
7.8/10 TOO MUCH EDGE.
- IGN
Dubsta ツ gr8 b8 m8, IGN r8 8/8 no h8
To be fair, I would watch a parody of an edgy Toy Story.
............. y-you got a friend in me........
Lol lol lol
NEVER HAD A FRIEND LIKE ME!
you got a freind in meh
Y-YOU GOT-T-T A friend in YOUR SOUL
Not bad, but kinda silly.
Disney demanding more 'Edge' is like an Orthodox Jew demanding more ham.
Did happen though.
It did happen, but this story is a highly-exaggerated account.
Hey I'm Jewish but I don't care
Hallie Keezer
Same with Spongebob, if you pay close attention to a few episodes a couple dirty jokes and political jokes are hidden in there. They are pretty clever too. When spongebob and patrick sell candy, "what can we do to sell more chocolate? I know! lets get naked! Nah we'll save that for real estate." Classic
Hallie Keezer
Not really as much "subliminal" messages, as it is hidden, but yeah. Hidden jokes are the best in cartoons.
Having worked on the first two "Toy Stories" from the Disney end of things, this is fascinating and carries some verisimilitude with the names of the key players on the executive end of things. Pixar didn't fly across country to Disney, though. They flew from Northern to Southern California. It just sometimes feels like cross-country. Sadly, Joe Ranft--later the voice of Heimlich the caterpillar in "A Bug's Life"--was killed in an especially upsetting car accident a few years later.
+Amelie Frank By the way, by more "Edge," they meant they wanted the guitarist of U2 to do the original film score, but Randy Newman wound up with the gig.
@@TheCynthiahawkins Not what I thought that meant
You can tell this isn't real because Disney is as edgy as a pair of toy safety scissors.
+Ziaheart edgy as lipstick
Edgy as a ball
+cora newton edgy as a cloud. No fucking edges there, not a single one.
+SuperToad128 *cough*TheBlackCouldren*cough*
+Kurt Crockenberg but they haven't been "edgy" for children's movie for a long while. plus, even if they wanted edge, the idea that someone would interpret that as a mess of demonic collages of scenes is a bit ridiculous for the companies who want to tell stories.
the scene of Woody throwing Buzz out of the window is definitely real. but the plot itself they came up with was very close to what the final product was; the only difference was that Woody was a massive dick, like that bear character in one of the sequels.
Jontron: ECH the show needs more ECH
I guess you could say that making the movie pushed Ralph Thomson, off the edge...
I'm sorry...
You should be >:(
*Sl0w Clap*
Lolyouwinsinternets
BA DUM TSS
HA
It needs to be about 20% edgier.
XD reference gotten
Me too omfg love you people.
inb4 brony argument
what a bunch of broneys.
flutterfly Clearly It's a horse, not a pony.
The moral of the story: Do not push your workers too hard.
Moral: Always Needs More Edge
Moral : "DONT YOU WANT IT "
Papruys No longer belives in you OH MY GOD WHY!?!?
EDGE!!!!!!!! NEEDS MORE EDGE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
slenderman dude *draws a cube* gimme a promotion.
ninja creeper warrior exotec butter
slenderman dude less edge
Meme Lord MORE EDGE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
now that's edgy
People at Disney: "Needs more edge."
Me: *pushes them over edge of cliff*
XD Me: "Why didn't we Think Of That?"
So it was basically Pixar telling Disney to shut the fuck up and let them do their thing or they'll show them what real edge is?
Sounds typical in sister companies.
Exactly
"Edge it needs more edge"
Me: *Replaces Friend in me with Panic at the disco*
This turned out more comedic than creepy.
+Starnana Guy That's what I was thinking... "Well, you asked for edge." XD
I like it for that reason, though. 😃
Starnana care
To
Evaluate?
'The machine is full of sunglasses wearing pizzas'.
...
uhm...
...
Are you sure you read that correctly?
I was thinking that to! I mean, how does one wear a pizza?
I think he meant the pizzas were wearing sunglasses. Like, sunglasses-wearing as an adjective, and pizzas being a noun. Maybe? Idk.
He read it fine. The pizza was wearing the sunglasses.
+Jason Greene this is unrealistic: "smoking 3 cigarettes at once"?
PIZZA STEVE??
They should have put a bunch of middle-class 14-year olds with Black hair and Black Veil Brides T-shirts in the film.
Oh, that's messed up: an advert for Black Friday just popped onscreen.
years of childhood torn apart like flesh.
+Rachel Shulsinger I know right.
+Rachel Shulsinger BUT BUT BUT BUTBUTbutbutbutbutbut......you got edge
You can't ruin something that happened in the last. -.-
plz your making me get shivers down my spine
+Flaming Star in know
Needs more edge.
I gotta have more cowbell-
Briana Hooper Ooooooh, yes! *knock knock knock knock*
legomaniac248 :D
Btw, I love your screen name.
Briana Hooper :D
That was soooooooo edgey that it was sharp enough to cut with words
Shadow the Hedgehog, DMC Dante and Ryoko (Kill La Kill) decided to write a Toy Story Creepypasta
Lord Slicer plus Reaper from Overwatch. And every edgelord ever.
@@Morningstar91939 not every edgelord :( I wasn’t invited
I bet this was the start of Disney's hatred for Pixar. Bet none of you ever knew that Disney hates Pixar despite owning them and the fact that Pixar had made Disney millions. I bet this also was the start of all that whining that happens when a movie that's SUPPOSED to be edgy is released.
After the creepy woody thing, one of the people in viewing room was like "... needs more edge."
Don't you want it?
Maybe idk
You mean Acid- I mean Apple Juice?
NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO
I read this just as that was being said lol
Little did Pixar realize, that what Disney ment by "edge" was getting the WWE wrestler in there.
XD
philmp6 I’d recommend the Ultimate Warrior.
edge was not even in the wwf in 92.
I'm pretty sure this shares the same development as Shadow the Hedgehog.
that is true.
You know, I was thinking about it for a second, and as opposed to a lot of creepypastas, the excess of gore actually makes sense. It's not used to try to shock the reader, but rather to express how it would be shocking to people reviewing the footage. In most cases I would throw a "lost footage" creepypasta to the dogs, but this one is actually pretty good.
The fact that it works actual moments from the film’s production into the story makes it better imo
Eh, needs more edge.
your profile picture matches your comment
+3Musketeers Cinema lol
+3Musketeers Cinema OH SNAP!!!!
+3Msketeers Cinema Agreed
+Hispanic Hood Inc. I think she's cute.
Twas good until the gore. Why all the goddamn gore? it makes it less creepy and uninteresting.
gore is not a good thing for creepypasta's srsly
***** well its stupid. Dont authors understand that less is more?
I totally agree with you. Gore is the ultimate killer for any creepypasta story. So much as a dead body at ALL can kill a story for me. And when the body decomposition started, I started to get disappointed. But then, when Woody stuck his fingers into his eye sockets, as weird as this sounds, I kind of understood it. Woody was doing what Ralph felt like. Ralph had to redo and redo storyboards for so long that he felt like shoving his fingers into his eyesockets. I believe the body decomposition was sort of his way of saying "So, you want edge, eh? I'll give you some fucking edge." I've personally been in situations like Ralph (Nowhere near as severe, but I've had to work for hours before and have become a very angry and needlessly offensive person) and I think that's what Ralph became. Through the lack of sleep and endless work, he decided to go to a last resort to achieve edge- disturbing content.
Icantdothatrightnow honestly gore in real life is scary but in stories it's just kiler
shock value
EDGE,IT NEEDS EDGE!!!!
*Edge rolls in and does his 30 Second Pose*
NO!!!! Not That Edge!!
*Edge Gives me the Spear*
The Black Friday Incident?
More like The Development of Shadow the Hedgehog! XD
OOOOOOHHHHHH SSSSSSNNNNNNNAAAAAAAAAAAAAPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP
DONT YOU WANT IT!?!?!?!?
I WANT IT!!!
IIIII NEEEEEEEEEEEEEED IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIT!
What exactly are you all talking about (Are you all talking about edge or something else entirely for that matter)!
NO NO NO, STOP!!! PINKY, PINKYY!!!!
+Dylan Smith, They're referring to the bit said in a deep voice by Woody in the video. 😃
1987? FNAF FANS UNI-
im just kidding get out
...
***** more like get in haha i am funny
H. Muhammad why is it when something happens in 1987 little fanboys go nutz
***** what flavor!
Barely noticed but two edgy
Anyone else notice when he said "Sunglasses wearing pizzas" instead of "pizzas wearing sunglasses"? xD
This comment section needs more edge.
6:55: Pizza Steve confirmed
Wait, Ralph joined in the winter of 1987?! So Ralph joined during the bite of 87! illuminati confirmed. Half life 3 confirmed!!!
WELL
9+8-7-1 is 9....and in illuminati there are 3 i's! In your name there are 3 capital letters!
9/3=3! So you are correct!
no more half life 3 now.... FIVE NIGHTS AT FREDDY'S 3 CONFERMED!!!
But fnaf 3 is actually coming out...
Scott already said it is
fine fanaf 4 confermed
But then its not 3's any more....and it wont catch on........also*fnaf not fanaf
It was doing so well, SO WELL! And then BAM! Gore and blood from the eyes!
*sigh* Yet another victim to Disney. At this rate of creepypastas, I know baby seal poachers less cruel than this company.
no.
How do you know baby seal poachers?
Can you get one of your friends to make me a new coat?
To be fair, Least it wasn't Slimebeast. I love the guy's Disney pastas, but I've read comments of people getting tired of his take that at Disney through the pastas.
AtrocityEquine
Slimebeast hates MCP.
1/9/8/7 WOODY DID THE BITE OF 87 CONFIRMED
FNAF sucks so bad
Goddamnit. Nothing is safe.
NO ILLUMINATI CONFIRMED
Chica Bonnie Freddy? 3 illuminati confirmed?
+Sean Woods lol
No
Rather interesting story. I like how there's a reason for the film to be creepy instead of just having it be creepy for no reason.
The movie became so edgy the writer accidently chopped his finger off and somebody replaced him
da end.
75% comments: MORE EDGE.
20% comments: IM WATCHING THIS BECAUSE TODAY IS BLACK FRIDAY!
5% comments: GODDAMN.
GODDAMN! This is edgy
Damn Son!!!
The Creepypasta community REALLY loves demonizing Disney don't they?
This one is a little far fetched even for a Creepypasta. Mostly because Disney practically feeds off of "kid friendly." If any company would be demanding more edge in their animated movies it would probably be Dreamworks (since they were the ghetto Pixar at the time).
If you knew who was running It.
Well, this pasta is a extreme of a actual event. The guy in charge during It was Katinburg (Of dreamworks fame) he kept telling them to make it more adult and edgy. But, came out with a product that would not sell. So, they remade it.
That is maybe one of the reasons Katinburg did not get a seat at the head of Disney due to the money he wasted wanting to "Have more edge" .
Which actually makes your statement funny.
Cause, he droped from Disney and made dreamworks. And only had one good movie with his edge idea (Shrek). The rest flopped.
However, i think It was for the better. Because after eating the humble pie. He came back and made better movies. He learned the adduice is not dumb and he is a follow a odd version of how dreamworks does their stuff. He focuses on things that he likes. Other then edginess and adult themes.
Now, for why. Disney. Because Slimebeast did it and got really well known for It. However, from what i am hearing, Slimebeast is very funny about his work.
Carzeyday every other Dreamworks movie flopped? REALLY?
Antz
The Prince of Egypt
Chicken Run (distributed)
Madagasger
Wallace & Gromit (distributed)
Over the Hedge
Flushed Away (distributed)
Kung Fu Panda
Megamind
Puss in Boots
Rise of the Guardians
The Croods
Captain Underpants
Still think every Dreamworks movie "flopped"?
+Phantomskyler You are aware of the fact that Disney is not 100% child friendly like you all made them out to be right.
Given that this is the same company that made an Animated segment Where Satan himself cast undead souls into the fires of Hell while showing off winged females showing their breast (Night On Bald Mountain From Fantasia).
The Same company that Made a live action film where a child get's his head chopped off and a man is electrocuted to death with other freaky as Hell imagery (Something Wicked This Way Comes).
Made a film where one old religious nut (Judge Claude Frollo) want's to bring about mass genocide one race. Who Also is lusting after the films female and sings a song about how if he can't have her. The pits of Hell will while jerking off to a fire place (The 1996 Animated Version of The Hunchback Of Notre Dame).
Has a habit of murdering parent's in their older films in the most depressing/messed up way possible (Tarzan, Hunchback again, Bambi, The Lion King, ect).
Has a whole bunch of ghost haunting their theme parks with a few horror stories of people getting killed or seriously injured. All while declaring that no one can die at Disney Land/World.
Made a bunch of racist cartoons and animated shorts that depicted Nazism during World War 2.
And made a very creepy as Hell sequel to a beloved children's film (The Wizard Of Oz) that has a bunch of little people having their heads decapitated and being worn on a headless body. Along with the main character receiving shock therapy at the beginning of the film (Return To Oz).
So in short. Disney is a pretty fucked up company and I can see why the Creepypasta community would have a field day writing stories about them.
this did happen. minus all the creepy stuff.
This is an exaggerated version but it’s true that Disney executives wanted the movie to be edgy, didn’t like what came out of it and let Pixar remake the movie like they wanted to.
WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH PEOPLE WHO DESTROY CHILDHOODS?!
Now a days lots of people just like doing that for fun. Sometimes I do wonder if some things back at the childhood really were that dark before they were shown. I guess we'll never know.
It's fun.
The sad thing is: Half of this is true.
Disney was forcing Pixar to give Toy Story more "edge". This made the film originally uncomfortable and unlikable. By this: This made Woody horribly unlikable, the other characters hyper actively negative, and Buzz an idiot (instead of just naive)....Oh yeah, and they actually DID show the reel on Black Friday.... Of 1993.
The other stuff (such as the death of the storyboard artist at the end, the Mr Potato head perverted-ness scene, etc,.) is not true. Just look up "The Toy Story you never saw" on RUclips... Or something like that.
Its worse that *Woody* said *Don't you want it?*
You Know Something's Up When A Guy Talking Is Scarier Than A Game That Makes Me Pee Myself.
No Joke.
Why Do You Type Like This
Waldo Hunter Because I Can.
Ok
I Feel Retarted Typing Like This. I'm Making A Movie Every Time I Say Something SomNo OCD.
Basically Ralph sacrificed himself to scare Disney into letting Pixar do the movie their way.
It is creepy. But fortunately I can be sure it is not true because Disney didn't have any involvement with the first Toy Story movie. It was Steve Jobs.
Actually it did happen, just none of the gore or shit. It was a bad test screening that lead to Disney almost canceling the project. There are videos of the test footage on youtube. Also, Steve Jobs was merely an investor, he had no hand in creating Toy Story.
1kenny30 Got any youtube links?
Jesus. That makes this ever creepier. O_o
Saber Wolf Damn right.
Disney didn't own Pixar; but they worked with them at the time.
I don't like this creepypasta. It needs more edge.
*draws an triangle* *slits wrists* There's your edge bud.
Honestly I love MrCreepyPasta's voice, he's my favourite CP reader, other than CreepsMcPasta. His voice is so soothing and calm, and sometimes it makes chills run down my spine. I love it. I don't understand why people keep commenting hate on his videos about how they hate his voice, I mean if you hate it so much or hate CP readers in general and prefer to read, then read and stop hating on them. Damn.
IKR thank you most people I want to slap the shit out of them with a tortilla
I've been seeing more hate on various things lately than usual. Guys, I think it's Hate Season ._.
I don't like him very much, but that's because I'm used to CreepsMcPasta's voice.
Electro Hipster me too
DONT ABBREVIATE CREEPYPASTA 😭🙏
Knowing the actual history of Toy Story's production, this whole thing was really weird to listen to
This is like EA when they push dice to release Bf4
Wait, how is it a mystery? The bosses were jerks, the animator snapped, people were disgusted, and the animator died in a way that made sure the bosses knew how big of jerks the were. Is it because the death and animation were superposed to be "covered up"? :3
I'm sure they tried to give it as much Edge as possible. But, somehow, I don't think The Rated R Superstar would have taken a role in a kids movie.
DAMMIT!!! MORE FUCKING EDGE!
"Ehh it needs more edge"
Mass effect 3's ending
"THIS GOOD?!"
More edge???
:draws a weird jagged line:
eh, eh?
Lmao
+Pokegal
Yay people think im funnyyyy
Still needs.... More edge, fast!
This is sort of why I don't wanna work for Disney since I'm studying for my degree in art and cartoons.
Needs more edge...
*team starts playing crawling in my skin with a black and red loud speaker with a skull on it*
6:54 Pizza Steve?!
I always come back during November and December to rewatch these creepy pastas, they feel so nostalgic.
The Black Friday Incident: the reason why you should never tell animators to give you edge. But you can definitely ask them to make waffles. They're good at that.
MORE EDGE
IT NEEDS MORE EDGE
EDGEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
+Maynard Bussell
-Disney
edgy
O_O........ My god....... this is more darker......than the one in the DVD version of Toy Story.....
no shit
When you said Lunar Larry was more deluded, it reminded me of the theory that Batman is imagining everything in an asylum (maybe Arkham) after facing the trauma of his parents' deaths
Damn, this is twice as creepy since most of the "Black Friday Reel" actually happened.
Hmm. I think it still needs MORE EDGE.
I have a theory about this pasta: Ralph is working hard on the movie but the heads of disney keep telling him to change things and add more edge. Ralph stays up many nights working on the movie, trying to get everything just right. He then gets so annoyed and stressed that he ruins the film by giving just what they wanted: edge. But he on purposely adds to much of it, making the film incredibly disturbing. He adds the ending where edge is written on the screen to show how he added exactly what he wanted.
[insert generic 'edge' comment here]
Reaper
Shadow the Hedgehog.
VideoGame Fan15 I'm slenderman dude so you better not look at me or else
slenderman dude well hello I'm Clockwork
NEEDS MORE EDGE!!!
Whenever my friend sends me a weak meme I tell him
“Edge, the meme needs more edge”
6:55 "The claw machine is filled with sunglasses wearing pizzas."
"EDGY EDGY EDGY ITS GOTTA BE EDGY MCEDGE YOU NEED SOME FRICKITY FRACKIN EDGE."-Disney
As I was watching this, I coulda swore I saw my Woody action figure grinning sadistically at me from the corner my eye.
My Woody looked at me as I became very close to 9/11 and I swear I heard him say “You’re obsessed!” thank god my 9/11 turns to Woody with an angry look saying “No she’s not! She’s only 21 you know and Is probably very depressed about what happened!” They started fighting over me but thankfully my 9/11 movie won and said “Your done Woody, you’re so done; imagine if you were on the United 93 plane, what would you do then huh?!” Woody finally forgives 9/11 but he still causes stress for us today
I don't like MrCreepyPasta's voice. He can also only read in three different ways it seems... The first is how you would read normally, the second is where he sounds at times unnecessary angry or in a rush and the last is his silent voice...
His "silent voice"? Lolwhut. I think he's the best creepypasta narrator. There are lots of other people on RUclips who do the same thing but I can't really get into the story as much without him reading. I think it's down to personal taste, all different people like different stories/narrators and stuff.
I like his Narratoring (is that a word? Maybe not x3) and He got a New Sub :3
~Izzy
***** I like CreepsMcPasta alot better
william moseholm He's okay, to me his voice is overexaggerated, but then that might just be 'cause I'm used to hearing normal English accents.
OK....
I work at FedEx on Black Friday and I'll be splitting the boxes to the right chute for the loaders to load up in the trucks. I will be starting at 12PM to end at about 10PM. This is a part time job and that is how bad it is on Black Friday.
You have my deepest sympathies.
Oh goody we both work 10 hours. The difference is I'm 15 with a summer job working at a warehouse starting at 7am ending at 5pm.
FlamingTeddyGamer And another difference is you don't work on Black Friday.
I feel very bad for you
I used to work for them too. You have my empathy.
They:Edge its needs more edge Me: slams a knife with real blood on it.IS THIS GOOD FOR YA
I wrote an essay at school, and my teacher only gave me a C+. You know what she wrote on the paper?
C+ NEEDS MORE EDGE!