"The Gristers" | CreepyPasta Storytime
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- Опубликовано: 17 сен 2024
- I did this I want to say like my second if not first year of narrating. and Really I wanted to revisit it again. for some reason at the time I was doing videos in like 15 minute and I broke this into two parts. the sound was wonky. The acting was subpar. and surprisingly I got a lot of messages from people about how this was a story that was their favorite. This is the one that brought them into Creepy Pastas and online horror. I feel like I owe it to them and all of you to give you a Better quality version. So here's the new and updated. Gristers
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"It was pitch black. The moonlight gleamed off the linoleum."
"Pitch black"
+REX UNKNOWN sandvich
I remember when sentences made sense
Pepperidge Farms remembers all of your sins
I read this just as he said it
Gasp, a creepypasta telling us not to listen to creepypasta
ITS A PARADOX!!!
It's CreepyPastaCeption lol
I'd see that movie
ikr lol
A Paradox, As I Know Is...You Go Back In Time, Kill Your Grandfather, He Dies, You Aren't Born And The WHOLE UNIVERSE IMPLODES AND...I Don't Know All I Know Is That's A Paradox
+Trainkid07's Bad RUclips Channel that's a type of paradox. that's a time paradox. Also a paradox is being contradicting yourself.
At the end when he said "dont check those sounds in your house" my mom dropped a pot on the ground downstairs and Im pretty sure I shit my pants.
lol
My sons fucking buzz light year fell off the bed DX
7 years ago. Now that’s impressive
"It had no neck just 14 chins" Arin is that you?
omg
bunney no no no no! it's gaben!
omg thank you
You have made my day XD
Bunney fukin roasted toasted and boasted
Imagine the gristers as mini shreks.
You're welcome.
nnOOO
😂😂😂😂
Yes
+Jackbuilder02 Gristers are love, Gristers are life.
Ruined the story
Blind people are immune to them.
They are attracted to fear though.
dandy dasyt omg woke
@@dandydasyt4766 but yhay only atack you if you can see thim so
Helen Keller Swag
@@chainsawash4566 they attack you if you're aware of them, and apparently they can make you aware.
I hate getting scared by these things, but the stories that people come up with are so intriguing I love to listen to them.
after listening to too many you feel like your being watched
I've got an S.O.G knife... so I'm good
Nah gun is better
I love his readings of Vincent vena cava for that reason. The things that man writes are so unbelievably disturbing and terrifying just makes me wonder how a mind can come up with it.
Goth Kween It's called you've been through some fucked up shit in your life. I know because I have an equally horrifying imagination....which chooses to present itself to me in very vivid nightmares....
Catch one and train it to kill other gristers pokegristers gotta grist em all
Or just hunt and eat them gristers make good eats kinda salty gristly meat like deer
YES THANK YOU FOR THINKING OF THAT
Or catch one an experiment on it to see what can hurt them.
Or send the photo to the government. If they can see it gristers will be dropping like flies. Also this is why you should own a pistol,
"It moved quickly but so awkwardly."
Are you sure that wasn't me?
Guys the mitochondria is the power house if the cell.
of
+Seth Christian SCIENCE!
Richard L Biology
YOUR PFP
👍🏻
Gristers no gristing, gristers no gristing, gristers no gristing!
+demarius bridgeforth *hellish screech*
then a soft whisper in your ear...... "Oh man......"
+GeakGuySheldon I bet you didn't feel me lick your ear :)
Nuclear ClusterFunk I did and I just enjoyed it to much to say anything
+demarius bridgeforth That's what I though every time he said "grister" and I've only seen Dora a couple times while I was babysitting. You'd think the writer would have figured that out and renamed them.
I heard you shouldn't feed them meat after midnight.
fake n gay
erikponciano it's sorta always after midnight
Make sure you dont get water on them
SOME BODY FUCKED WITH MY CHAIR
+xX kayden124124 Xx FUCK THIS SHIT I'M OUT
mrcreepypasta [subs 966,590] - 1
+xX kayden124124 Xx nobody cares
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+xX kayden124124 Xx the Gristers are coming for you (:
Its you again!
Soooo tell me why.... when he said (around 16:24) "They began to touch me".... I felt somrthing brush up against my damn ankle?
Shiiiiiiih
oheard something at 5:23 well im not sleeping tonight
Shaqueile Carson They just wanna act it out for you so you know how he felt 😉
@@chaxygaming4652 ye my door whent boom boom like thump thump wich happenes sumtimes cus the slitest wend or tuch makes it push against the hole that ceeps the door closed its like too big for the thing in the hole
I didn't know my nana had a creepypasta written about her. It depicted her 14 chins so accurately it's scary.
😆🤣😂😹😆🤣😂
so close to one million subscribers
+Carlos martinez *fingers crossed*
+MrCreepyPasta
You deserve it, man. Keep serenading us with horror, and you'll get there soon.
+MrCreepyPasta wow unsub
+MrCreepyPasta Senpai? :D
+MrCreepyPasta you deserve it, man. Real good narration, pleasent voice, nice selection of stories ( Think I've found like 3 I dont like in the whole channel) and the little touches like the sounds to set the mood realy make you stand out
Hey soul Grister
THIS is why I always have sea salt, sage, and a hella lotta other metaphysical atom-bomb equivalent herbs and totems in my room-ALWAYS. You don't play in the shadows and not expect to get burned.
damn straight
Moon Melon Connected right to Earth Mama, that's like an army of GI JOEs out there.
Ryan James you're kidding right?
Amber 69 Try me bitch.
Ryan James lmao
4:50 I would've made it my child and we would have many adventures together like an 80's sitcom
Same
fuckin same
"Like a spider" NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOPE NOT HAVING ANY MINI-HUMAN SPIDERS SEE YA LATER EARTH SPRAYING ALL THE ONES THAT FOLLOWED ME WITH RAID BUG SPRAY AND GOING TO MARS!
+UnknownRevenge2XD /Destiny Rose Watch out for the space spiders!!!
"It's not like I could call the cops or any of my friends, its not like they'd believe me" Time to figure out Sam and Dean's number
Yep, this makes sense. I need to stop people being scared, what'll I do? I'll scare them into not being scared! Flawless logic.
"I was scared that one might crawl up out of the bowl and bite me on the asshole..."XD I....am....dying
Is anyone actually scared by reading creepypastas? I just play them in the background to listen to some cliches I haven't found anything that scared me in a long long time.
I'd say so, I've found I prefer radio dramas more, not scary but really plays hard on the thriller factor, not fear.
and I dont blame creepastas for not being scary, how scary can you expect them to be using just audio (no jump scare) and on average sub 30 min. how scary could you expect them to be?
if you want something similar but different look up the truth (profile pic is of a tobacco pipe) on sound cloud. I'm always impressed by production quality and story.
I'm not scared of the creepy pastas. they are just interesting stories that I listen to while I work.
+Lucas Gorski I'll check it out
+wowDragonsoul
More interesting than scary. I usually listen to them while I'm cooking, or driving.
only one I remember really scaring me was one about someone find radio signals from a parallel world and the last few lines from Russian sleep experiment
soooo at the very beginning of this video, I cleared my throat....the narrator cleared his. I thought it was kinda weird so I said "...ok?" then the narrator said the same thing....I almost shit myself.
It had no neck . Just 14 chins . 😂😂😂😂
maybe it was a rat sized spider, good enough for me to go back to bed... NOPE!!!
that sounds like my level of commitment, hey honey did you hear that window breaking noise, it's just a robber FUCK THAT
Bored :I Ahahahahaha I laughed so much! 😂
INORITE!!!!
That was one of the best creepypasta I have read or heard in awhile!
sounds like a homunculus
Kylie The Jellyfish and then they started breeding like rats and that's why there are so many
Kylie The Jellyfish true
no homo pls
Oh god, are we about to see Pride e.e I hate that guy, his shadow faces are creepy as all hell.
jk, i know what you mean. Homunculi are basically small humans, I know this.
This is my absolute favorite story you ever did aside from Penpal. So glad you re did it, freaked me the HELL out when I was younger.
Classic pastas are the best on rereading them years after your first time.
I must say, MrCreepyPasta has THE best voice thus far (just my opinion). He has the ability to draw me into a story and have me hanging on like a salivating dog. Thank you
wow best Story ever I really got scared when I was listening to this
+Marissa Pantoja same, but that's what's fantastic about MrCreepyPasta. :)
Omg this scared the shit out of me
You are an incredible narrator! You really know how to make a creepypasta come to life.
doesn't want people to be scared by creepypasta to prevent them from seeing gristers - writes creepypasta about seeing gristers to scare people.
Why did he never try to kill a grister?
They were 3spoopy5him
they didn't do nuthin wrong... probably... idk, I'm not done listening to the story yet
Did the guy from Diamond City Radio write this?
hahaha
+GRAND DAD nice one
😂😂😂😂😂
Great one
Rofl
Hell to the naw to the naw naw naaw heell naw naw to the naw naw naaaw
Ditch The Bitch Killary Cuntin U dank bro?
The gristers sound a lot like the rake when you describe them...
This really fuckin got me lol. WARNING:DO NOT WATCH BEFORE YOU GO TO SLEEP...
+DarkMoon Pack! Technically we are all watching before we go to sleep. Unless you never go to sleep after watching this...
Too late :C
I told myself not to watch too many creepypastas before bed but here I am. Bring it on nightmares lol 😅
(Sees your comment) SLEEP IS FOR THE WEAK
Too late, I've been watching them all night. It's 4:00 am here!!!
"3:00am"- The Witching hour. That's when things are likely to happen that are out of the ordinary.
Yikes!
3:33 am is the witching hour, its set as such time to mock the holy trinity
I had to laugh, I grew up in Rhode Island and just moved to Florida. Perfect timing!!
Kinda reminds me of those little guys in Bloodborne, only more violent.
dannylamb456 You mean the little things that always drop blood gems and are really hard to kill? Or the amygdalas (they hang off the buildings, and try to grab you)?
+Throwaway Account Nah, more of the little messengers.
"YOU NEED TO STOP!"
Me-*listens to another couple hours of creepypastas*
"the grister was groaning maybe even sexually" I burst out laughing 😂
This legit creep ed me out and scared the crap out of me. I kept on looking behind me as I watched this video. I kept on thinking to myself, If I keep on watching this video and any other creepy pasta will the gristers come for me if they are real which they are probably not. Great narration, this is my new favorite creepy pasta. Keep up the good work man.
You to!
Get a kukri, shotgun, ammo and your set.
+Simon Peterson AMR pls
+Simon Peterson that's what i'm saying, if they're smart the'd see you stop by the gun store and leave your shit alone
+Simon Peterson well if you attack them more and more would come and more aggressive due to you attacking them and acknowledging they are there and when you fall asleep they will due a full out night assault.
Duke of Carrots not if you sleep in a cage and set traps :P
bro don't you get it? get a kukri, a shotgun, ammo and your "set" of balls XD
I literally started listening to this at a little past 3am last night trying to get my baby back to sleep. That was scary at all..
And I'm not huge into these pastas but I just can't stop listening in hopes of a good one and I can say aside from the Russian Sleep Experiment this is the only other one I've loved! Great story and most excellent narration!!
Dude I listen to creepy pasta late at night and all the time..... Does this mean I will see gristers 😭😂
Yup
ohhh gosh i needa keep listening than.... i will pump some led in their ass with my 30-06 and 30-30
***** ok lol, i will be sure to get one asap
Great story! I just finished reading this out in rural Australia when something started scratching around in the roof, nearly gave me a heart attack till I recognised that gurgling growl for what it actually was, a brushtail possum!!
ok I'm going to stop investigating those strange noises I've been hearing around the house at night, I was convinced someone was hiding out in my shed a few nights ago and about 2-3 weeks ago at about midnight I heard what sounded like someone breaking into my daughters room (who where asleep next to me on the couch) it was so loud that it woke up my 8yr old who then refused to leave my side as I investigated, it was weird because even though we found nothing, we could hear this weird ticking noise all around us that we still can't explain, also the dog refused to enter the house while this was going on. this story just reminded me so much of my own recent experiences!
you need a pastor and you need to report a break in
+Memorible werd Lol what good is an old guy in a gown going to do
+Hollow Ichigo yeah and what's typing on your keyboard gonna do huh
Lmao
Lol
DUDE! The voice acting on this pasta was just AMAZING! The little patter sound after he stopped talking almost got me too.
Fuckity fuck fuck fuck!
The amount of times fuck was said in this is hilarious 😂😂
You'd enjoy the Goatman story
I love the kind of emotion he puts into these
okay...Who cloned voldemort
thank you for making my day
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This story was always a really good one and you did an awesome job the first time you narrated it, but this time you've mastered it. Well done, luv. ;)
You never disappoint us with your incredible acting and we're all very grateful for the time and effort you put into your videos, and the characters you give a voice to. I couldn't be more proud of you.
Keep up the great work!
Well I guess this is a message to not listen to creepypastas and un sub. Right?
Take away the aga in ur name
Are you confessing anything?
Dun dun dyuuuun
+ChocoPlays AndDraws I have been exposed
I remember reading this for the first time, it really shook me. My second scariest experience!
i dont get scared, i just like listening to creepypastas, there gud
they're
+MS. HENTAI LOV3R Why
James Melon *They're
This was the first narration of yours I've ever listened to, back when the pasta was fresh.
Unsubbed because I don't want the gristers to get me. Thanks for the warning man.
+Georgepapa Reeeeeeeallly?
This is so epic as always MCP!
listen to the original one he did. on his playlist
greatgallade I shall! ^-^
You know I hate it when they say they live by themselves in a 1 bedroom apartment cause I'm like great, I'm next
IVE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS ONE. Your first time reading it made me subscribe, but I listened to quite a few others before that.
For some reason it reminds me of odd Thomas
Same
Fereal!
+Element gaming I was thinking of that 80s movie The Gate, myself.
Hmm, I haven't heard of that movie, but I will check it out, is a horror movie?
It is. Its about a bunch of kids finding a hole in their backyard that is a "gate" to a dimension full of demons (possibly Hell). At one point they are chased by a bunch of little demon people kind of like the ones in this story. I'm not sure how well the movie holds up, but I really liked it.
well done, a quite frightening one! by 15 minutes, your voice narrating this story makes it terrifying (imo)
A creepypasta telling us to not listen to creepypastas.
Lel
every time i hear your stories, you get a little better at narration. keep it up mr. creepy
pretty good story but now I'm a little paranoid too. lol DO NOT WATCH IN BED
too late
Noooooooo
To late
dam behind the toilet shit i was gonna shower😂
Ok I'll watch on my couch:)
i remember when this was first uploaded ugh... amazing work mcp loved u since 2011 never will stop.
gristers are love, gristers are life, gristers a pets, gristers are spiders
mogwi gremlins
yo this is such a throwback! like the new update. great job man!
I can remember the name of it, but there's a movie really similar to this creepypasta.
***** Yes! Thank you! That has been bothering me ever since I posted that comment. I kept searching google for a movie called, "Tom". lol.
+I_Own_Cows If you happen to remember it, let me know. I wanna watch it.
*****
The movie is called "Odd Thomas".
I_Own_Cows Thank you!
***** It's a pretty good movie. Hope you enjoy it.
i listen to your stories to go to sleep, your voice is perfection
8:32 favorite part in video
Same
Mad Hatter :3
wut
THE THROAT CLEARING AT THE BEGINNING SCARED THE SHIT OUT OF ME
+TheGirlInFandomWorld same here omg
*HOOOOLYYY SHIIIITT!!*
was that a sound in my bathroom??!!
no kidding X_____X
... hell no... I'm not going to check
+oriana garrido
Gristers are just like internet trolls they love the attention so just ignore them.
+Kai Jenks Perfect xD
and she never returned to reply dun dun dunnn
Memorible werd
yes she did...
but...
IT WASN'T HEEERRR!!!
+Memorible werd Ahhh lol
I loved this the first time you narrated this. and its only gotten better this time around!! keep being great ok
It's well written, I'll give the author that.
But, too much gore and blood, and fucking rape dungeon.
If you don't like gore how the hell do you like creepy pasta
Let's face it.
Blood and gore rarely deemed "frightening," it just comes a childish way to try to scare the reader and rather make him feel disgusted.
Nameless Avenger I'll give you that
I really hope you don't genuinely think this was well-written. I read the actual story, and let me tell you, it was a grammatical mistakes galore.
What a cool story with the most complimentary voice. Your style is PERFECT with this tale
Mr.Creepypasta you should do PenPal [COMPLETE REBOOT] That would be so awesome!
That would be awesome, that series was great
It was a great story the second time to, MCP you are an inspiration to narrators everywhere
being scared is like porn for me
😐
+imani Alice idk either
I think the gristers would be scared of you not the other way around xD
+TrolliePollie true...
I saw one killed it cooked. it had sex with it then ate it jk
I keep forgetting how much I loved this intro
wait jabba the hut cameo?😂
I remember this story when you told it way back when, great videos keep it up MCP
Aaaaaand I'm off to watch asmr vids...
This had me paranoid for days FOR DAYS keep it MR. Creepypasta!
It says "Bright" instead of "brought" in the description. Just to give you a heads up!
"Hello, police?" "Theres a dangerous unknown animal in my house"....problem solved
Lol, watch, he looses 1,000 subs
+PootisPigeon XD
Creeps you make every video new and old, worth listening to. Thank you you amazing human being 🙌🏻💀
Dude I actually remember when you uploaded this narration years ago. Has it really been that long? Wow, kudos to your current and growing success, MCP :]
Gotta confess, this bowl of pasta has been part of my deep-dark secret fears since first reading it. I avoided mention, sight or analysis of it, since fear is what triggers them. Now in the years between that first Reddit mega dump of crepes and narwhals baconing at midnight, the feeling faded, and I decided to give this a listen.
I now regret all the choices I’ve ever made concerning gristers.
This was the first EVER Creepypasta I ever listened to. This got me into this beautiful world of spooks. I used the story as a link in a shitty web page for Halloween I made in a class.
One of my all time favorite creepypasta, excellent job MCP
This is one of the best creepy-pastas ever.
I smiled when he told "stop now , don't read, that feeling of dread in your stomach draws them to you" .
love your stuff mcp! thanks so much!
I will never stop listening to Creepy Pastas!