Lovely ending... try putting the conclusion at the beginning. RUclips is all about retention. Your best lines are at the end. So put them up front. RUclips is like a shop. You put the shiny new exciting things in the window to pull people in. I am an opinionated old sod so feel free to ignore me. You do you. Just a thought not a criticism. No offence intended.
@@Wheretheriverbends Oh good for you... the story telling is excellent and your voice is to die for. Would that I had your baritone. Its mesmeric. I think you have the video length about right too. Not so short its inconsequential and not so long that the audience will drift off. Everyone is going to tell you to go to 8 minutes and one second. Don't do it. At least not yet. As ever just the opinions of an idiot.
To be honest you don't need my feedback.... you seem to have arrived fully formed. Its a very impressive channel already. I hate it when people give me praise and no criticism. But listen to me .... already a fawning fan boy!
It’s good to get feedback to reflect on. See what others like or don’t. Where to make adjustments and so forth. And I appreciate the feedback you have provided me!!
@@Wheretheriverbends You are a gentleman and a scholar - all the very best to you and yours. The tricky bit is the critique of the visual style. Your voice and script are there. Your visuals need to have space and character. Big wide shots of verdant landscapes juxtaposed with close ups of flies and reels springs to mind. I wonder if that is too obvious...
Wow.. so good
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Britt and Ryan did some great photos for this amazing story thanks for putting it together!
Yeah they took some amazing photos and were kind enough to let me use them
You’re welcome!!
Second... !!
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Lovely ending... try putting the conclusion at the beginning. RUclips is all about retention. Your best lines are at the end. So put them up front. RUclips is like a shop. You put the shiny new exciting things in the window to pull people in. I am an opinionated old sod so feel free to ignore me. You do you. Just a thought not a criticism. No offence intended.
I appreciate the feedback. I have been experimenting with doing just that on some of the new stories that are heading towards video production.
@@Wheretheriverbends Oh good for you... the story telling is excellent and your voice is to die for. Would that I had your baritone. Its mesmeric. I think you have the video length about right too. Not so short its inconsequential and not so long that the audience will drift off. Everyone is going to tell you to go to 8 minutes and one second. Don't do it. At least not yet. As ever just the opinions of an idiot.
To be honest you don't need my feedback.... you seem to have arrived fully formed. Its a very impressive channel already. I hate it when people give me praise and no criticism. But listen to me .... already a fawning fan boy!
It’s good to get feedback to reflect on. See what others like or don’t. Where to make adjustments and so forth. And I appreciate the feedback you have provided me!!
@@Wheretheriverbends You are a gentleman and a scholar - all the very best to you and yours. The tricky bit is the critique of the visual style. Your voice and script are there. Your visuals need to have space and character. Big wide shots of verdant landscapes juxtaposed with close ups of flies and reels springs to mind. I wonder if that is too obvious...