Thanks a lot Adrian sir..... You inspired me to achieve my desire score....I received my ielts result of overall 6.5......I would like to thank moderator caroline as well as Adrian sir for helping me out sort out my errors..
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I have written the first paragraph of this question. Please share your views. Q: Many governments spend a lot of money on art. Some people think this investment in art is necessary, but others say the money is better spent on improving health and education. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. A: Art has been a social indicator of any civilization and played a significant role to understand mankind's history. Rulers have used art for their propaganda to extend their reach and show their authority and one may see statues of Confederate generals in the streets of the Southern states of America. Thus, the government deems fit to invest in art as a medium to conserve their history for future generations to come. Meanwhile, Black Americans object to the spending on preservations of art relating to the Confederacy government active during America's civil war. Their viewpoints are subjective, as the Confederates were pro-slavery and argued that a better part of this funding can be diverted to improving healthcare and education sectors. I am personally inclined that the policymakers should improve the state's Human Resources department which is already underfunded.
: ) It is not my essay, I assure you. However, it is a solid piece of writing. It's not my strategy or Johns, it is simply following the standard rules of essay writing in English.
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There is not agreed formula on how to answer those types of questions. Your goal should be to convince the reader as effectively as possible. Learn how at www.aehelp.com
3:24 reason for this doesnot use the hook to capture rhe reader not natural 6:10 better hook not concise intro. too long, too general 9:40 MBP 1 too mechanical mixed tense in paragraph 13:20 risky for examiner to give band 9 15:00 paraphrase in conclusion, to bring readers back. the writer should have restated the main point. bring back the HOOK
Keep practice and practice, atleast two listening test do it in a day as per my opinion. In addition, section 2 and 3 listen twice and deep concentration with improve own mistakes.
There is too much noise in many public places in cities. What are the causes of this problem? What can be done to solve the problem? In our globalization era, noisy is increasing dramatically. In my opinion, overpopulation is one of the main reasons for the rise in noise in the country and the best solution would be wearing earplugs and it is also cost-effective way. The underlying reasons for high noise levels in country is population growth. In country, there are so many cars and other vehicles, that traffic noise accounts for most polluting noise in cities, after all, the more public means that the more transportation noise, even though, if not all people have a car. Another cause would be social events, just like marriage, parties, discos, pub or place of worship, people normally break the rules by the local administrations. Or they play the songs on full volume or even until midnight, in the markets, there are we can hear, music or they selling out their products via a/the loud noise for attracting other people’s attention. As for the solution to this problem, there are many ways like wearing earplugs, stay away from the noisy area, lower the volume. But dealing with this situation, authorities should manage the noise in country. Such as they can ban things like talking loudly in public places or putting music out loud, and, thereby, reduce noise pollution. Trees and plants also would be effective way, and they have been established for reducing noise levels in urban areas. In conclusion, the growth of noise is globally, huge problem and the reasons for this are people. In the future, all we hope that this issue will become more pressing. 🙂can you rate this essay and please of course write if there are any errors or other things! PLEASE🙏🙏🙏
Now students will get why don't they score more than band 6
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Thanks a lot Adrian sir..... You inspired me to achieve my desire score....I received my ielts result of overall 6.5......I would like to thank moderator caroline as well as Adrian sir for helping me out sort out my errors..
Congratulations on the great result! I'm glad to have been an aid in your success. On the website, you may have noticed the "testimonials" block near the bottom. Unlike many websites out there, we fill this section with real user testimonials and real pictures of those users. Because of your awesome score and feedback, we'd love to be able to use your first name/picture. If you could send us a picture of yourself (face, like the ones on the website), we would be greatly appreciative. Also, please include your nationality. If you are willing, please send this to admin@aehelp.com. This allows us to encourage other students to use our products and reach their goals and dreams. I look forward to getting your picture, nationality, and I wish you the best in your future endeavors.
Wow, John's essay is perfect, scoring band 9 is not easy
Wow! What a nice and clear comparison. Thank you very much.
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I would like to thank you all, these feedbacks are really helpful to understand how my essay is remark and how to avoid mistakes.
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I hope i am the one with band 9 writing. It is really very helpful
Great content, gave good insights into an examiners mind.
Very much helpful.
Glad to hear that!
I noticed the confusion too in the case of Jane
Getting band 9 seems to me a piece of cake after watching this video 🤣🤣🤣, but in reality, I am not able to write an essay which is worth to reach 7🤓
I have written the first paragraph of this question. Please share your views.
Q: Many governments spend a lot of money on art. Some people think this
investment in art is necessary, but others say the money is better spent
on improving health and education. Discuss both these views and give
your own opinion.
A: Art has been a social indicator of any civilization and played a significant role to understand mankind's history. Rulers have used art for their propaganda to extend their reach and show their authority and one may see statues of Confederate generals in the streets of the Southern states of America. Thus, the government deems fit to invest in art as a medium to conserve their history for future generations to come. Meanwhile, Black Americans object to the spending on preservations of art relating to the Confederacy government active during America's civil war. Their viewpoints are subjective, as the Confederates were pro-slavery and argued that a better part of this funding can be diverted to improving healthcare and education sectors. I am personally inclined that the policymakers should improve the state's Human Resources department which is already underfunded.
I got 7 in writing recently .7.5 all over
Incredibly useful video
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Very Helpful video for writing sections 👍
Agree
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Thankew sir love from punjab 💙💙❤❤❤
John's strategy to write an essay is similar as yours,( I even thought u wrote it) thank u so much I really appreciate it 💯🔥🙏
: ) It is not my essay, I assure you. However, it is a solid piece of writing. It's not my strategy or Johns, it is simply following the standard rules of essay writing in English.
Thank you soo much sir.. This is great.. ❣️
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Thanks allot, mir Adrian
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Thanku
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I respect you 👍🏻
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Hi teacher. Thanks for everything
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The 9 band essay person didnt use comma before conjunctions like but or and
What does Adam wants?
Where is second body paragraph bruh?😂
Hi teacher. Will my Points be deducted if I forgot to space 1 line between paragraphs in ielts writing
For agree or disagree type of essays what should be the pattern? Intro para and then 2body paras with reasons?
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3:24 reason for this
doesnot use the hook to capture rhe reader
not natural
6:10 better hook
not concise intro. too long, too general
9:40 MBP 1
too mechanical
mixed tense in paragraph
13:20 risky for examiner to give band 9
15:00 paraphrase in conclusion, to bring readers back. the writer should have restated the main point.
bring back the HOOK
Can someone tell me..whether to take IELTS coaching or to practice through youtube channels?
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Hi everyone. Who has the useful advices for Listening, 😭😭😭 My Listening is very weak, please someone help me. 😔😔😔😔😔😔
Keep practice and practice, atleast two listening test do it in a day as per my opinion. In addition, section 2 and 3 listen twice and deep concentration with improve own mistakes.
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@@Aehelp I appreciate your time and answering me back. 🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷
@@mayurpatel888 thank you so much, I'll do that, but is it normal When I can't paraphrase part 2 and 3?
@@farnaz97 when it's normal you can avoid that.
Sir how to see full interview?
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This is mine essay lol 😂😂😂
There is too much noise in many public places in cities.
What are the causes of this problem?
What can be done to solve the problem?
In our globalization era, noisy is increasing dramatically. In my opinion, overpopulation is one of the main reasons for the rise in noise in the country and the best solution would be wearing earplugs and it is also cost-effective way.
The underlying reasons for high noise levels in country is population growth. In country, there are so many cars and other vehicles, that traffic noise accounts for most polluting noise in cities, after all, the more public means that the more transportation noise, even though, if not all people have a car. Another cause would be social events, just like marriage, parties, discos, pub or place of worship, people normally break the rules by the local administrations. Or they play the songs on full volume or even until midnight, in the markets, there are we can hear, music or they selling out their products via a/the loud noise for attracting other people’s attention.
As for the solution to this problem, there are many ways like wearing earplugs, stay away from the noisy area, lower the volume. But dealing with this situation, authorities should manage the noise in country. Such as they can ban things like talking loudly in public places or putting music out loud, and, thereby, reduce noise pollution. Trees and plants also would be effective way, and they have been established for reducing noise levels in urban areas.
In conclusion, the growth of noise is globally, huge problem and the reasons for this are people. In the future, all we hope that this issue will become more pressing.
🙂can you rate this essay and please of course write if there are any errors or other things! PLEASE🙏🙏🙏
You should written a solution of problem those, which you mentioned in body paragraph 1
Try to keep example add with .
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