I was just listening to a creepypasta and the song played and for some reason my breathing became fast and i felt lightheaded just rememberong the pure dread this story made me feel. I hadnt listened to the story on over 4 years until now.
OMG this is absolutely terrifying. I've never dreaded the sound of that drumbeat more than I did in this story. It doesn't help that I started watching this at EXACTLY 11:00 P.M with my windows open.
My god this story was horrifying. I haven't heard a story recently that has made me so afraid. It is good to know that people can indeed still write a good Creepypasta that will actually frighten me. My heart is literally still beating fast. Holy crap was that a scary story.
Oddly enough, there is actually a moral to stories like this (although I'm not sure if the author really intended for there to be one). This one is don't just dismiss your kids when they have something to say. Most likely, it won't be the case that your child can hear a satanic ritual in the forest and you can't, but there are real life examples where people should give their children a little more credit. I know a girl whose stomach pains were dismissed by adults for a long time - including some doctors - until she was finally diagnosed with a serious disorder. There are also loads of kids who try to report when someone's abusing them but everyone assumes they're just making things up. So yeah, to all the future and current parents out there, remember to give your kids a chance to speak. That is all. Continue your creepypasta-ing. lol
Some Anon I said the same thing too, the parents always brush it off to dreams like they never went through the same shit when they were younger, luckily I did and paid attention when my daughter told me about her first sighting and we dealt with it promptly
I agree. It’s also frustrating how in this story, even after the police find a dead body of a guy wearing a goat head, the parents still don’t believe him and forbid the protagonist to look this stuff up only until he’s old enough to do it. So, no wonder he cut ties with his parents years later.
When I have kids one day, I’ll be damn sure to listen to what they say and take it to heart. Appreciate your kids and appreciate your parents. Everyone, hope you all have blessed lives.
It's been 2 years that I've been listening to your creepypastas and I'm very impressed by each and single one that you're made. They're all scary and it's something that you can picture in your head and get the creeps. Good job, man.
this is the first time in a while where a story has paralyzed me with REAL fear!!!! I think it's because of how long it is and how detailed it is, but the scariest part was the music that you played during the chanting sequences. My heart raced every single time I knew it was coming!! Listened to this last night at 3 am and refused to take out my ear buds, fearing I too would hear the chanting outside my house!!! Good Job, MCP!!! Hope there are more stories like these!!!
Since this is the first comment and I'm really lucky to do this I just wanted to say MCP you are my inspiration for any dark literature and I have really bad insomnia and listen to your calm voice no matter how dark the story always helps me fall asleep. I just wanted to thank you for that. Without you and your narration's I would only get maybe 2 hours of sleep a night or two. So thank you so much!
It makes these stories too predictable, killing the dog or cat has just become a trope. That one about something moving in the storm clouds really impressed me because the dog was totally unharmed in it 😂
I haven't even watched this yet but I'm giving it a thumbs up based solely on the length lol. You're voice is soothing enough that I wouldn't really give a shit if you were narrating Meine Kampf.
Holy shit this might be the best creepy pasta I ever listened to. This reminded me of the stick figure in the intro to American Horror Story: Coven. Such a shame those creatures weren't introduced in the show.
Oh man mcp your narration are getting really good. I got used to creepy pastas for a bit and i started to not get scared like i used to by them, but these recent have given me that gut fear I enjoy so much. Quality mcp, quality.
I have to say, this has become my favorite Creepypasta; right up there with Jeff the Killer. Kudos to the writer and your narration was wonderful, as always! :) Using 'Chase Pulse' for the changing bits and the encounter with goat man was an excellent touch. Neat!
i remember first listening to this as creepsmcpasta was reading. but now i really enjoy listening to this story were some one else narrates and ur narration is really really great
That drum beat music that plays when they are chanting freaks me out to no end. I actually find it difficult to listen. Its a bit like in your mr mix story when at the end it keeps repeating "mix mix mix" or something like that. I actually had to pull my headphones out of my ears it scared me that much
This was an ok story, the ending kinda sucked, but besides that it was pretty good. Also I nearly crapped myself because the band practice was going on outside my house at a college, and I heard the drumbeat continue when the story ended... I think I need new pants.
Creepypasta comments? Comedy? Well I don't come on here to get attention pal. I come on here to analyse minds like urs. And even if I was trying to be funny, thats not funny. Gee u guys shuld rly stop projecting ur flaws onto other people. Especially in a youtube comment section
I love MCP's stories he narrates. But if he ever sees this, probably not, but could you do a video on tips you know for new and starting out narrators? If not, oh well xD Great story still.
Wow I'm so excited to hear another pasta with the Goatman. The last Goatman story was my favorite, really the only pasta that REALLY creeped me out. I'm very happy to see another. P.S. MCP you rock dude
It's about to be 12 I started this story around eleven with my lights off .. my room is literally within the backyard, my windows are broken but at least closed and I'm terrified because the normal sounds I hear at night just got quieter but I have my doh to protect me
and I can always here the chanting when I'm alone....Ooga-Chaka Ooga-Ooga Ooga-Chaka Ooga-Ooga Ooga-Chaka Ooga-Ooga Ooga-Chaka Ooga-OogaOoga-Chaka Ooga-Ooga I can't stop this feeling Deep inside of me Girl, you just don't realize What you do to me When you hold me In your arms so tight You let me know Everything's all right I'm hooked on a feeling
Nuclear Shoes ba bada ba Im high on believing that your in love with meeeeeeee lips as sweet as candy your taste is on my mind girl you got me thirsty for another cup of wine got a bug from you girl but I don’t need no cure I’ll just stay a victim if I can for sure
I listened to your vids from the very beginning. I had a few sleepless nights, and in some cases, was afraid to walk out to piss. Nowadays, I can't get scared for jack. nothing scares me other than a flinch here and there from a jumpscare that makes people scream. I love the genera of horror, I've grown immune to fear. I now walk at 2 A.M. pitch black to pee. I jump in the face of danger in outlast whilst everyone screams and runs away. I have you to thank for my immunity to horror. So thank you, MCP.
Why is this one so much scarier than the others. The drums are unnerving me Thankfully I'm in a library with lots of lights and people, even if it is 1:30 am
Can we for a second note that these occultists are completely relying on a nine year old to complete their ritual. I mean seriously they couldn't have maybe gotten someone who is maybe a little more I don't know NOT A NINE YEAR OLD! This is a serious moment for these occultists so you'd think they would want someone who is more capable.
I know for a fact that I'm gonna think about that freaking drumbeat tonight and, well, I guess it's appropriate to say "well sleep it's been real, see you later"
This was pretty good. I got a little mislead for a second because when I saw "Goatman" I remembered "Anansi's Goatman" story, one of my all-time favorites.
In MCP's last video, I saw a comment that said this creepypasta was good so I watched Creepmcpasta's version, and now Mrcreepypasta narrates it... Great
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"Dad I'm getting stalked by a satanic cult that's threatening me"
"Shut up and leave me alone with my left hand"
"Dad strange men broke into my room and said they would kill one of my loved ones the day before Cash died"
"You were an accident"
It's stare-dad!
"Dad I'm going to kill everybody."
"Oh thats ok son its just your imagination."
Parenting 101 children: don't do that.
"MEH N MY HAIRY PAALLMMSS"
You're walking through the woods, there's no one around and your phone is dead, out of the corner of your eye you see him... Shia Labeouf!
"No please I don't want to be motivated!"
"JUST DO IT!!!"
"But it's haaaard!"
"Well you're gonna wake up AND WORK HARD AT IT!!"
actul canibal shia labeof
+Abby Avant *Gives dictionnary*
Youll need it, my child.
Honestly I would just take him up the ass but whatevs
Kriss lmfao!!! gross dude.
The drum-beat throughout the chanting scenes really increased my unease. Very good narrating as always Mr.CreepyPasta.
Nell Ross I really want to know what song that is
Walter Thomas If its what I think it is, its Chase Pulse by Kevin Macleod
I was just listening to a creepypasta and the song played and for some reason my breathing became fast and i felt lightheaded just rememberong the pure dread this story made me feel. I hadnt listened to the story on over 4 years until now.
OMG this is absolutely terrifying. I've never dreaded the sound of that drumbeat more than I did in this story. It doesn't help that I started watching this at EXACTLY 11:00 P.M with my windows open.
It's mid winter. Where you live at?!? Lol
OSU Bucks421 You know there is such a thing as the Southern Hemisphere, right?
Actually I live in Maryland
Shattered Anvil he's speaking English.
OSU Bucks421 So?
The hardest part to believe about this story is that the father got primary custody of the child.
Valchrist1313 hah ha yeah
Valchrist1313 that's the scary part lol
Well, not to me. I know someone, who lives with her father most of the time
Who Jesus from Mary JK lol
Yup. Poor kid won the lottery by not being stuck with a single mother and had this fuckery go down.
"Silence never comes alone." What a fantastic line!!
No one can hear you scream in space.
This very well may be the best one I've heard.
I agree, this one Is special
yea
am I the only one who likes to listen to these while napping?
MrCreepyPasta has such a relaxing voice :3
I love it
+Alice Ochoa I would like to but I try to nap you can hear these noisy fuckers chanting in the woods behind my apartment.
+Alice Ochoa it is nice till he puts one of the load ass bang noises xD
+Alice Ochoa He puts me right to sleep I swear every time I knock out listening to him.
+Alice Ochoa can't sleep without it.
My god this story was horrifying. I haven't heard a story recently that has made me so afraid. It is good to know that people can indeed still write a good Creepypasta that will actually frighten me. My heart is literally still beating fast. Holy crap was that a scary story.
my computer suddenly crashed at about 44:43 when everything was getting all intesne and i kind of panicked a little
That chanting noise is actually chilling...
The Creeps For some reason it's more terrifying than the actual story 😨
True
The Creeps that shits scary O _o
I know right? Honestly every time I hear it I get so uptight and chilled.
Ethan Sobol it's called chase pulse by Kevin Macleod
Oddly enough, there is actually a moral to stories like this (although I'm not sure if the author really intended for there to be one). This one is don't just dismiss your kids when they have something to say. Most likely, it won't be the case that your child can hear a satanic ritual in the forest and you can't, but there are real life examples where people should give their children a little more credit. I know a girl whose stomach pains were dismissed by adults for a long time - including some doctors - until she was finally diagnosed with a serious disorder. There are also loads of kids who try to report when someone's abusing them but everyone assumes they're just making things up. So yeah, to all the future and current parents out there, remember to give your kids a chance to speak. That is all. Continue your creepypasta-ing. lol
Some Anon I said the same thing too, the parents always brush it off to dreams like they never went through the same shit when they were younger, luckily I did and paid attention when my daughter told me about her first sighting and we dealt with it promptly
Not me. I'm the type of parent who when my kid says something I sit in their room with a rifle all night just so they can sleep.
Big Boss You sir, are a legend.
I agree. It’s also frustrating how in this story, even after the police find a dead body of a guy wearing a goat head, the parents still don’t believe him and forbid the protagonist to look this stuff up only until he’s old enough to do it. So, no wonder he cut ties with his parents years later.
When I have kids one day, I’ll be damn sure to listen to what they say and take it to heart. Appreciate your kids and appreciate your parents. Everyone, hope you all have blessed lives.
Am I the only one who thought of
"Oga oga oga chaka oga oga oga chaka"
Hooked on a feeling.
Cole Simpson NOT THE DANCING BABY
The way the air left my body-
It's been 2 years that I've been listening to your creepypastas and I'm very impressed by each and single one that you're made. They're all scary and it's something that you can picture in your head and get the creeps.
Good job, man.
You know he doesn't write these, right?
Yeah, I recall
***** The narrations are usually the best
Over five years later and this is still one of my favorite creepypastas to revisit
Oh, silly forsworn...
Yeup lol I just now saw this comment lol but those fuckers are strong
"The Reach will be ours again!"
"OH SHUT UP!"
I loved the "chanting" in the background
The Bridgewater Triangle in Massachusetts has long been the site of alleged paranormal activity, including supposed cult activity. Very Lovecraftian.
this is the first time in a while where a story has paralyzed me with REAL fear!!!! I think it's because of how long it is and how detailed it is, but the scariest part was the music that you played during the chanting sequences. My heart raced every single time I knew it was coming!! Listened to this last night at 3 am and refused to take out my ear buds, fearing I too would hear the chanting outside my house!!! Good Job, MCP!!! Hope there are more stories like these!!!
to all of the people criticizing his actions
HE'S ONLY NINE
Thank you!
sounds like he could have used the help of a witcher
send Leto :D , or the MC of the witcher franchise
He didn't toss a coin.
Bro the beat "chanting" audio at 10:23 slapped. Like I'm at work here practically jamming out to it omg
Since this is the first comment and I'm really lucky to do this I just wanted to say MCP you are my inspiration for any dark literature and I have really bad insomnia and listen to your calm voice no matter how dark the story always helps me fall asleep. I just wanted to thank you for that. Without you and your narration's I would only get maybe 2 hours of sleep a night or two. So thank you so much!
As soon as I knew there was a dog, I knew it was dead
Sort of like how, when the protagonist is an adult and there's a kid, you know the kid is going to die.
It makes these stories too predictable, killing the dog or cat has just become a trope. That one about something moving in the storm clouds really impressed me because the dog was totally unharmed in it 😂
that beat during the Chanting part
very well chosen
I reached under my pillow...and felt something *long and smooooooootthhh*.....
xD
I live near a forest... With a clearing.... With a large rock.... Good.
Yea me too... oh god
Me three
"Get the goddang' gun brother, the goatmans gon' be milked tonight!"
*Cocks Gun*
@@solidliquid8295 milking the goat man... Pretty fucking gay.
Woke up at 3:50AM, unable to sleep. Then this pops up on my recommended.
This story was pretty cool. The cult had a real presence. The dad was rather dumb but overall this was alright.
That chanting 'music' is really creepy.
it's called chase pulse by Kevin macleod
+Isaac Putra Thank you!
Oh lawd
The chanting music is the reason I won't be sleeping tonight
Isaac Putra thank you so much
8 years on, this is still one of the GOATs of the creepypasta world
I haven't even watched this yet but I'm giving it a thumbs up based solely on the length lol. You're voice is soothing enough that I wouldn't really give a shit if you were narrating Meine Kampf.
10:23 when your sleeping peacefully and then all of a sudden all the lights go out and you hear a corrupted fog horn
Holy shit this might be the best creepy pasta I ever listened to. This reminded me of the stick figure in the intro to American Horror Story: Coven. Such a shame those creatures weren't introduced in the show.
Lol I cant believe this is 3 years old I saw this in highschool when it came out :,) time flys this is my favorite creepypasta
FUCK COME ON WHY DOES THE DOG HAVE TO DIE
I FUCKING KNOW GOD DAMNIT MAKING ME CRY AND SHIT
*DRUM SONG STARTS PLAYING*
Oh man mcp your narration are getting really good. I got used to creepy pastas for a bit and i started to not get scared like i used to by them, but these recent have given me that gut fear I enjoy so much. Quality mcp, quality.
*thinks the dad is about to die* .... Aww... That's gonna suck...
*Cash dies instead* ..... *sniff* ... W-wow-- *sob*
Yeah I'm on that part now too. XD
I am not a bundle of sticks, sir and or madam.
Harmony Sayetta lmao
I thought it was funny so block out the haters.
vegehanku IRONY
Wow that was so good. I feel like this would make an AMAZING Ari Aster film.
Good job Magis.
Good job at listening to this at 11:43 p.m.
At a family friend's house who happens to live in the freaking woods.
Good job.
I have to say, this has become my favorite Creepypasta; right up there with Jeff the Killer. Kudos to the writer and your narration was wonderful, as always! :) Using 'Chase Pulse' for the changing bits and the encounter with goat man was an excellent touch. Neat!
Great story great narration its hard for me to find a creepypasta that actually scares me nowadays this was one of them a pleasure to listen too
Don't you just love when your lights go out while in the middle of a creepy ass creepypasta like this?
There were a lot of cases similar to this that I could have experience as a kid, but didn't. Thank God I have good intuition.
i remember first listening to this as creepsmcpasta was reading. but now i really enjoy listening to this story were some one else narrates
and ur narration is really really great
10:48 Ok but who can focus on the story when this hard ass beat is plaing tho
I got chills when he said bridge water... I live near there 😨
Bum bum bum bum bum bum nanananaa bum bum bum bum bum nanananaa
Va?
The woods are really haunted out there. It's on travel channel.
I'm here early I can finally express my opinions with the rest of youtubes.
I like tourtles.
spookysneeze A rare species of turtles or some shit
That picture creeps me the fuck out
this story almost made me chill great job
One of the best.
Yep!
That drum beat music that plays when they are chanting freaks me out to no end. I actually find it difficult to listen. Its a bit like in your mr mix story when at the end it keeps repeating "mix mix mix" or something like that. I actually had to pull my headphones out of my ears it scared me that much
2:15 **sees the image** *wHAT THE F--*
exactly what I thought 😂
Issa goat man 😃
@@macie1510 you're four years too late
I like to listen to it while doing chores.
Great story! well done.
Whew years later and this pasta is still a doozy I love it :)
its probably not heathy for me to be listening to this as I'm trying to fall asleep
Wow, this was awesome. I like the ending, how he believed he did somethig to stop it.
By far one of my favorite stories
Probably shouldn't have watched this at 2: 00am in the morning by Myself in the dark
This was an ok story, the ending kinda sucked, but besides that it was pretty good.
Also I nearly crapped myself because the band practice was going on outside my house at a college, and I heard the drumbeat continue when the story ended... I think I need new pants.
20 min in and I already have to stop for an ASMR break to calm down....This is ganna be a long night....
Why is it that the dog always dies.
........*cries in a corner cradling own dog*
who would go into those woods with me to record and show his Dad he was right
*Cocks Gun* Let's go
Only at 8:30 but I'm feeling like this is a mash-up of "chicken bones" and "anasi's goatman story"
To all parents and future parents: If your son talks about supernatural stuff, DON'T FUCKING IGNORE IT
+The Foxy Man You little fucking edge lord piece of shit
Yes, your opinion is very important to me
The Foxy Man Dude, no one find your sarcasm funny.
Creepypasta comments? Comedy? Well I don't come on here to get attention pal. I come on here to analyse minds like urs. And even if I was trying to be funny, thats not funny. Gee u guys shuld rly stop projecting ur flaws onto other people. Especially in a youtube comment section
+The Foxy Man when did I mention my flaws in life?
That sound made during the chanting legit scared me
great and soothing bed time story
i love love love this story and love the creepy beat (Chase Pulse By Kevin Mcleod) perfect combination for this creepypasta
Well, there goes my good night's sleep.
This is hands down my favorite story you've read.I LOVE THIS thank's dude
This has always been one of my favorite creepypastas, and I always enjoy coming back and listening to it.
The monolith in the forest is interesting and i wish there were more creepypstas with them
Gave me chills
I love MCP's stories he narrates. But if he ever sees this, probably not, but could you do a video on tips you know for new and starting out narrators? If not, oh well xD Great story still.
I love hearing about the Goatman.
Definitely worth an hour of my time. These long stories are the creepiest.
Also, does anyone else expect a jumpscare when theres like a whole minute of silence at the end?
Wow I'm so excited to hear another pasta with the Goatman. The last Goatman story was my favorite, really the only pasta that REALLY creeped me out. I'm very happy to see another.
P.S. MCP you rock dude
this was an excellent story i love the more extensive ones and the "goatman" is one of my favorite pasta monsters, keep up the good work.
It's about to be 12 I started this story around eleven with my lights off .. my room is literally within the backyard, my windows are broken but at least closed and I'm terrified because the normal sounds I hear at night just got quieter but I have my doh to protect me
and I can always here the chanting when I'm alone....Ooga-Chaka Ooga-Ooga
Ooga-Chaka Ooga-Ooga Ooga-Chaka Ooga-Ooga Ooga-Chaka Ooga-OogaOoga-Chaka Ooga-Ooga
I can't stop this feeling Deep inside of me Girl, you just don't realize What you do to me
When you hold me In your arms so tight You let me know Everything's all right
I'm hooked on a feeling
Nuclear Shoes ba bada ba Im high on believing that your in love with meeeeeeee lips as sweet as candy your taste is on my mind girl you got me thirsty for another cup of wine got a bug from you girl but I don’t need no cure I’ll just stay a victim if I can for sure
that drumming is horribly unnerving, awesome job mcp!!!!
Thanks Creep for reading my story ;)
This is probably my favorite creepypasta by far for some reason. Keep it up :)
Oh and Anasi 's goatman story. If that how u spell "anasi"
I listened to your vids from the very beginning. I had a few sleepless nights, and in some cases, was afraid to walk out to piss. Nowadays, I can't get scared for jack. nothing scares me other than a flinch here and there from a jumpscare that makes people scream. I love the genera of horror, I've grown immune to fear. I now walk at 2 A.M. pitch black to pee. I jump in the face of danger in outlast whilst everyone screams and runs away. I have you to thank for my immunity to horror. So thank you, MCP.
When I say jump, I meant the time I tried to give someone a chest pound ingame
Joob
Kid
I bet rereading this today you feel a bit cringey
Mr creepypasta you sir are amazing, keep these great stories coming.
Why is this one so much scarier than the others. The drums are unnerving me
Thankfully I'm in a library with lots of lights and people, even if it is 1:30 am
Please keeeping making more long stories !!!! I always listen to it while doing homework :)
Can we for a second note that these occultists are completely relying on a nine year old to complete their ritual. I mean seriously they couldn't have maybe gotten someone who is maybe a little more I don't know NOT A NINE YEAR OLD! This is a serious moment for these occultists so you'd think they would want someone who is more capable.
Years later and this is still one of my favorites
Had to come back to the original the better version
Damn, when that chanting begun, it stuck with me for days.
Most likely due to his narration and music, this one of the scariest creepy pastas he’s read.
I know for a fact that I'm gonna think about that freaking drumbeat tonight and, well, I guess it's appropriate to say "well sleep it's been real, see you later"
This was pretty good. I got a little mislead for a second because when I saw "Goatman" I remembered "Anansi's Goatman" story, one of my all-time favorites.
Nice to revisit an old favorite after 8 years
In MCP's last video, I saw a comment that said this creepypasta was good so I watched Creepmcpasta's version, and now Mrcreepypasta narrates it... Great
Well, if my loved ones didn't believe me, then, I guess it'd have to be their blood!!
This has to be one of my Favorite Goatman stories of all time!!
When the music went faster it gave me chills 😪