Love On Social Media

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  • Опубликовано: 28 сен 2024
  • This is the first piece of writing that I have ever published, and to be honest I never imagined that this day would come. Creating a video around my words was way harder than I expected but at the end of the day, it was kinda fun. For this project, I teamed up with LO.OSE, the musicians of this video. When the production started the poem wasn't ready so I told them that this will be a video about "modern distance relationships" and to this day I'm amazed at how they managed to capture exactly the feeling that I was aiming for. I'm also really grateful for the collaboration with Iness, the narrator of the video, who added so much depth in each sentence. I hope you like our final result.
    Forever Humbled,
    a kid with a camera
    🔰Support me on Patreon: / illneas
    🔰Find me here 🔗 / _illneas
    🔗 / illneas
    🔗 / illneas
    Second channel
    🔗 / @akidwithacameraorjust...
    🔰References
    -The narrator is Iness J.
    Her email.
    🔗ijprojects.side@gmail.com
    -The music is this:
    LO.OSE - Mirror Self
    🔰Communities
    - / discord
    - / 2314655172176122
    - / searchingformeaning
    🔰My equipment:
    I film handheld with a Panasonic Lumix
    G80
    amzn.to/2uGqmQZ
    GX80
    amzn.to/33e5Tye
    📷Olympus M.Zuiko Digital 45mm F1.8 Lens
    amzn.to/2vr9P3N
    🔰How To Love On Social Media by illneas
    An out of focus figure behind my coffee steam softly touching my childhood wounds
    A half-empty bed and gentle touches on a bright glass hoping my touch could be felt through it
    how was your day?
    did we accidentally eat the same food?
    Is your dog beside you right now?
    I think I fell in love with a stranger that kind of looked like you today but something doesn't feel right
    These screens may carry our whispers but they cannot feel what it means to be present and absent at the same time.
    These keyboards may translate soft taps into words but they will never feel what it means to be truly untouched
    Information streams may carry invisible data but they will never experience the blood in our veins that rushes to our cheeks and makes them blush.
    I'm haunting the cage of my existence
    and you are unable to cast a shadow here
    I told you "promises are pointless" but I lied
    So when the soundwaves of our voices meet in the same room
    When we cast a shadow under the same sun
    When the word "distance" in the term "distance relationship" becomes obsolete
    Turn off your phone and look me in the eyes

Комментарии • 427

  • @illneas
    @illneas  3 года назад +142

    Hey Internet Friends, this is on Spotify as well sptfy.com/9QIc

    • @SIX06_
      @SIX06_ 3 года назад +7

      *Immediately adds to playlist* 😌 Beautiful work. I hope you continue to post originals!

    • @illneas
      @illneas  3 года назад +6

      @@SIX06_ thank you so much for supporting me trying new things

    • @amanmaan324
      @amanmaan324 3 года назад +1

      @@illneas have u written this?

    • @illneas
      @illneas  3 года назад +2

      @@amanmaan324 ye :)

    • @amanmaan324
      @amanmaan324 3 года назад +1

      @@illneas I wanna tell u it is really butiful and sad at the same time . I luved it and lived it .Any suggestions on how should I improve my writing skills btw I m just a beginner

  • @kaeyana8541
    @kaeyana8541 3 года назад +368

    "They can't feel what it means to be absent and present at the same time" these are some golden words

    • @akshidashottar8842
      @akshidashottar8842 3 года назад +1

      Indeed, very well put.

    • @user-ng3bg7qw2d
      @user-ng3bg7qw2d 2 года назад

      ....absent and present at the same time....

    • @user-ng3bg7qw2d
      @user-ng3bg7qw2d 2 года назад

      But I can. Just don't know that I have the strength to overcome it. 😥🙏🤘

  • @deadpoet5260
    @deadpoet5260 3 года назад +149

    “I am haunting the cage of my existence, and you are unable to cast a shadow here” WOW

  • @axolotled6031
    @axolotled6031 3 года назад +340

    um excuse me who gave you the right to brighten my day like this and write this lovely poem you absolutely brilliant minded bean

    • @illneas
      @illneas  3 года назад +32

      Hahaha ❤️❤️❤️❤️

    • @pushparahi5681
      @pushparahi5681 3 года назад +15

      Excuse me who gave you the right to question ilneas and praise him like that 😭😂

    • @86oldbehave
      @86oldbehave 3 года назад +7

      I know he is a beautiful soul and I always anxiously await his creations! 💜

  • @metamorphosis_77
    @metamorphosis_77 3 года назад +42

    "Look me in the eyes." The most powerful way to connect with someone. The most ignored ought-to-be habit of our times.

  • @inessjlibene9110
    @inessjlibene9110 3 года назад +727

    It's been a year now that I am narrating for this channel, and no poem hit as much as this one. It was a pleasure working with you as usual

    • @sheshimmers9681
      @sheshimmers9681 3 года назад +16

      You have a soothing voice♥

    • @noorabd6185
      @noorabd6185 3 года назад +3

      You have a deep soothing voice🥰

    • @LC-jq7vn
      @LC-jq7vn 3 года назад +4

      You’re gorgeous and I like ur voice. Keep putting in that work, girl.

    • @johnsrome8459
      @johnsrome8459 3 года назад +2

      Another beautiful narration, Iness. You two artists work together as one. Long may it continue❣️
      PS. Hope the problems with new single get resolved soon. Have you looked at Bandcamp.com as an alternative distributer, btw? They cover all genres, are very highly regarded by independent creatives & are very efficient. It's more of an immersive platform than just a distributor, really.

    • @asyouratty13
      @asyouratty13 3 года назад +4

      Your voice carries the words to some other place

  • @simantakalita9061
    @simantakalita9061 3 года назад +19

    "I'm haunting the cage of my existence" and then the level of the poem increased exponentially.

  • @introvertedjamaicanpoet3768
    @introvertedjamaicanpoet3768 3 года назад +104

    I just love the poetry community on RUclips. So glad I found you all♥️

  • @XxTobiiObito
    @XxTobiiObito 3 года назад +13

    The voice of the girl is incredibly good . It touched me deeply . Thank you

  • @omangkalra7556
    @omangkalra7556 3 года назад +18

    I have never experienced a long distance relationship, but after this, I want to be in one just to send the other person this video 😅

  • @a.m.scape_5133
    @a.m.scape_5133 3 года назад +7

    Do not go gentle into that good night. If you are going to try, go all the way!

    • @illneas
      @illneas  3 года назад +1

      Unless it comes out of soul like a rocket

  • @Vc-ot1bt
    @Vc-ot1bt 3 года назад +4

    I'm a grandmother and this brought tears to my eyes. Your poem speaks of 2020/21 with haunting beauty.

  • @mapleleaf922
    @mapleleaf922 3 года назад +8

    Its going to be really good. Oh no im tearing.

  • @65-ayshasiddiqua8
    @65-ayshasiddiqua8 3 года назад +3

    Played the video multiple times,noticed every word of the poem & was amazed...of course i will be as It's written by you🖤 hope you are gonna gift us more & wanna appreciate the narrator too! She has a heavenly voice that hits on different level🥰

  • @jesseijvj5891
    @jesseijvj5891 3 года назад +1

    Love this... The more the better. Love is the best thing you can find any where. I live for love and I'll die without it...💚🌴

  • @You-co5cv
    @You-co5cv 3 года назад +1

    Please keep writing, those two and a half minutes were precious.

  • @pacoperez1012
    @pacoperez1012 3 года назад +1

    You managed to not just create a beautiful poem, but also somehow connect past and present with those words.
    Federico García Lorca wouldn't understand it and actually would indeed understand it at the same time... It would for sure make him smile :).
    Brillante.

  • @Shivi__04_
    @Shivi__04_ 2 года назад +1

    When the term distance is "distance relationship" becomes obsolete ....⏳🦋❤

  • @ladysolitude9978
    @ladysolitude9978 3 года назад +2

    "I'm haunting the cage of my existence"
    DAMN

  • @mamathaahemanth6276
    @mamathaahemanth6276 3 года назад +2

    Oh goddddd, this hit deep. I can't tell you illneas, these words hit home, this is what I always felt, and you've put them into words, thank you.

  • @toph3487
    @toph3487 2 года назад +1

    My online friend means so much to me, this poem went by my soul. Thank you

  • @marytsaou9517
    @marytsaou9517 3 года назад +1

    I loved every single word you wrote!!! You should share more of your poems (if you feel comfortable) cause multitalented artists like you deserve to be in the spotlight!!! Love ya illneas❤❤

  • @karangill6787
    @karangill6787 3 года назад +2

    Illneas pack: Acoustic, heartfelt poems, recited by the most heartfelt voice and CATS (and more cats)

  • @noorabd6185
    @noorabd6185 3 года назад +6

    Oh God perfect time... can’t wait 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😍

  • @sayantanbose5981
    @sayantanbose5981 3 года назад

    I found your channel last month and since then i have been watching your videos , i just want you to know that a stranger far away loves your work and want to tell you that you are brilliant and as Bukowski would have said art chose you.

  • @rajshreepardeshi_
    @rajshreepardeshi_ 3 года назад +2

    OMG, This is SOO BEAUTIFUL AND SERENE !! Made me cryy sm !! I’m in a Long distance Relationship and I can relate to this soo much !! Long distance relationships are really tough but they are the most beautiful kinds of relationships and when you love someone too much the distance doesn’t matter !! I ABSOLUTELY LOVEE THISS !! MY LOVES, SENDING Y’ALL LOADS OF LOVEE, BLESSINGS, POSITIVE AND BIG HUGSS !! ❤️❤️❤️🥺✨

  • @cristinacontreras.8630
    @cristinacontreras.8630 3 года назад +2

    I was waiting to see this work of yours and it is brilliant, I loved it.

  • @susanass4373
    @susanass4373 3 года назад +2

    Dear Illneas, I was waiting for this, and like always, you never disappoint me. It's beautiful and very revelant to this time that we are living.

  • @Saturns48
    @Saturns48 3 года назад +1

    That was really beautiful. I was truly moved by this piece. Bravo! Bravo! Bravo!❤

  • @esiriel
    @esiriel 3 года назад

    I enjoy your work, really ! Glad to see some of your new content ! There is a very elegant balance between the narrative and the background music, and the video clips are good without being distracting ! good job :D

  • @muhtashmaaziz9302
    @muhtashmaaziz9302 3 года назад +1

    Looks like an indoor shoot ! Told you you will rock it 😍
    And that composition is wow (for the lack of better words)*

    • @illneas
      @illneas  3 года назад +1

      Covid restrictions you see

    • @muhtashmaaziz9302
      @muhtashmaaziz9302 3 года назад +1

      Restrictions converted to exploration of new ways 👐

  • @jessepinkman7535
    @jessepinkman7535 3 года назад

    None of the poems you have put on this channel have hit me personally harder than this. Im in an online relationship now and every word of this poem reflects what it is like to feel so close to someone but be so far apart, a mixture of happiness and loneliness and the sorrow that comes with the combination of those feelings

  • @derjer
    @derjer 3 года назад

    Superb! All this time you have been nurturing our poetic garden by taking in and learning from so many...and now is your time to step up...first home run right out of the poetry park. We are not surprised.
    Looking forward to more. Thank you for all your hard work.

    • @illneas
      @illneas  3 года назад

      Damn man, that's moving, thank you so much

  • @gaurangisharma2178
    @gaurangisharma2178 3 года назад +2

    Unable to express the wave of emotions that rushes through my veins after listening this❤❤

  • @rihambakkali9463
    @rihambakkali9463 3 года назад

    I loved it!!! It describes many things we feel and try to ignore.. Also the music and the portray I love everything about this vid!!!

  • @blakealexander9729
    @blakealexander9729 3 года назад +1

    So beautiful illneas. This is amazing. I had a past long-distance relationship, and this hit home for me. Regrets, old love, and happy memories are all rushing up as I think of who I used to be, and how I used to want mine and her "shadows cast under the same sun". Thank you for pouring yourself into this. It inspires me to create.

  • @cynthialeaman3114
    @cynthialeaman3114 3 года назад +1

    I've got chills, amazing old wise beautiful soul, a gift, Thankyou!

  • @thunderboom3362
    @thunderboom3362 3 года назад

    Wow, please make more videos based off your own writing you really have a gift for it, I connect so much with your words and style.

  • @AnaMurcia99
    @AnaMurcia99 2 года назад +2

    my gf sent me this video back in august and now 4 months later here i am watching it and missing her because she hasn't texted me in 6 days, i'm so scared and worried for her... i hope i have the chance to come back and edit this comment saying she's okay. now i'll cry myself to sleep. Te amo Inés.
    PD: everything is fine, I just forgot to come back here 😭 (January 31st, 2022)
    Thank you to the person who liked it for reminding me 😅

  • @roryasrorri701
    @roryasrorri701 3 года назад

    So proud to be one of your subs, man!

  • @Nidhi-ll3yq
    @Nidhi-ll3yq 2 года назад

    This was beyond beautiful ! one of your best works so far :)

  • @lorettagrey7383
    @lorettagrey7383 2 года назад

    The last line hit me like a freight train. From one poet to another, well done ❤️

  • @rickykilmer1331
    @rickykilmer1331 3 года назад

    Exquisite. Beautiful poetry. Sky's the limit dear one. Keep doing all of it. Bravo.

  • @rosaartemisg5027
    @rosaartemisg5027 3 года назад

    Truly incredible 👏
    Modern poetry with an ancient soul
    Im deeply moved!

  • @jiji.1038
    @jiji.1038 3 года назад

    Thank you for making us happy from miles away❤️

  • @batesonrow
    @batesonrow 3 года назад

    I'm glad it took me this long to get here, 'cause I don't think I'd have understand it so well as now ❤️

  • @CatherineMac93
    @CatherineMac93 3 года назад

    That was amazing! Actually speechless! Always loved your videos and this one is my new favourite ❤️

    • @illneas
      @illneas  3 года назад +1

      Awww thanks

  • @scottmacquarrie5809
    @scottmacquarrie5809 3 года назад +1

    Sorry it took me so long to listen to this one , my head was all over the place , this , this is wonderful, ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️keep on writing , you are so talented

  • @Arjun-xv7zm
    @Arjun-xv7zm 3 года назад +1

    I remember i put a comment on your video, asking you to put your own words in the videos too
    and here we are :)

  • @apocryphablackwood1281
    @apocryphablackwood1281 3 года назад +1

    Absolutely love it, what a marvelous piece of art. It can be said about every video you make - I'm sure every single subscriber of your channel can feel how much heart you put in it. Stunning music. Tried to find it everywhere but I couldn't. Does anybody know where to listen it?
    Greetings from Ukraine, kid with a camera ;)

  • @sarahellen4378
    @sarahellen4378 3 года назад

    Beautiful and haunting,, I'm in love with all of it: the incredible words, the shots, the music, the voice. Absolutely wonderful job!!

  • @simranshastri4926
    @simranshastri4926 3 года назад

    This went too deep inside my heart 🥺❤️

  • @katibee2365
    @katibee2365 3 года назад

    WAWAWIWA
    W O W
    okay, first of all, that was a _beautiful_ piece. those lines hit me right in the gut, my goodness. it made me tear up a little.
    second, those SHOTS, oh my G O D- like,,,,, _wow_ . the way you paired some of those beautifully taken shot with the words is just *chef's kiss*
    third of all, MUSIC????? the music was amazing!!!! it increased the mood and made it even more amazing!!!
    you did a great job!! kudos to you and the musicians; you really made something beautiful (like you always do) ❤️

  • @isolace4285
    @isolace4285 2 года назад

    This is.....awesome, I love this and all your works are the best❤

  • @supriyomandal762
    @supriyomandal762 2 года назад

    Wow ..so touched to hear those true words

  • @Camiloonn
    @Camiloonn 3 года назад

    thank you very much for your art and creation ! I feel so identified with your work. I have spent a lot of time in my head daydreaming about creating videos and poems. Maybe someday I will be able to do it! Thank you so much for the inspiration!

  • @juliamoisei1997
    @juliamoisei1997 3 года назад

    Great poem, my friend. ❤️ Give yourself to your creation and you will become it, leaving us speechless each time.

  • @perisaizidanehanapi7931
    @perisaizidanehanapi7931 3 года назад +3

    I feel this poetry, but english isn't my first language. It's a bit hard to understand the implicit messages and I just wish someone in the comment section will give us a bit of commentary. Keep up the good work!

  • @usagitsukino608
    @usagitsukino608 2 года назад

    Wow...I felt that...I really did, it hit deep

  • @wajihzaidi9648
    @wajihzaidi9648 3 года назад

    just one word, BEAUTIFULLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • @n.e.o.n3983
    @n.e.o.n3983 3 года назад +1

    Woah I'm excited

  • @andrewhillhousekellypoetry4144
    @andrewhillhousekellypoetry4144 3 года назад

    Beautiful 💙🙏✌️🏴󠁧󠁢󠁳󠁣󠁴󠁿

  • @shanemeasor5474
    @shanemeasor5474 3 года назад

    Broooooo so moving got them tears going soo beautiful 👏👏

  • @shashanktiwari8772
    @shashanktiwari8772 3 года назад

    Exquisite!
    Here's to hoping that this one of the many more masterpieces to come, mate.
    Keep going.

  • @xatiter
    @xatiter 3 года назад

    I am wonderfully impressed

  • @hannegeyik
    @hannegeyik 3 года назад

    This last scene.. 🖤

  • @artabayani7217
    @artabayani7217 3 года назад

    Love this channel, Its unique.

  • @nniirmall5496
    @nniirmall5496 3 года назад

    This hits different

  • @ireenj6432
    @ireenj6432 3 года назад

    Perfectly Balanced ❤️👏🏼

  • @Jasmine_1hA
    @Jasmine_1hA 3 года назад

    U mean if I liked ur poem? I actually loved it! Keep publishing.

  • @lliw4934
    @lliw4934 3 года назад

    This poem speaks for a whole generation.

  • @rozaSkroza
    @rozaSkroza 3 года назад

    kid with a camera, may god bless you. 🖤

  • @eth4rcores
    @eth4rcores 2 года назад

    Beyond beautiful

  • @WeWillBeDream
    @WeWillBeDream 3 года назад +2

    ♥️

  • @ujjwal_y
    @ujjwal_y 3 года назад

    Masterpiece ! We want more of your writings.

  • @dwaynegibson7379
    @dwaynegibson7379 2 года назад

    @illneas This was incredible. You stand among greats. ghosts in your presence. Can't wait to hear more. I say this because I don't want to be rude but I WILL be stalking your channel(s).

  • @yoshita.11
    @yoshita.11 3 года назад

    so so beautiful, a kid with a camera. 💌

  • @gurleenksandhu
    @gurleenksandhu 3 года назад

    My heart is hurting... Thank you for this! 😩❤️

  • @sweet_rose7020
    @sweet_rose7020 3 года назад

    Wow, your poems are inspiring 😌

  • @ame8710
    @ame8710 3 года назад

    Beautiful. I love it ❤️❤️❤️

  • @galperasar6436
    @galperasar6436 3 года назад

    It heals me

  • @trundleforcetv4485
    @trundleforcetv4485 3 года назад

    Your videos are amazing!!!

  • @meursaultscourtroom8886
    @meursaultscourtroom8886 3 года назад

    A kid with a camera is now also a kid with a pen. Looking forward to more!

  • @nadinesamaha4842
    @nadinesamaha4842 3 года назад

    In love with this creation! Iness's voice is soft and touching but I wonder how it would sound if you pour your heart with your own voice. I hope to hear something from you.

  • @mayannecacdac8183
    @mayannecacdac8183 3 года назад

    Beautiful! ❤️

  • @lartedeiricordi1024
    @lartedeiricordi1024 3 года назад

    This is gorgeous

  • @iqraaltaf4922
    @iqraaltaf4922 3 года назад

    I feel contected. Thankyou❤

  • @manavdahra207
    @manavdahra207 3 года назад

    Love your work ❤️

  • @leilavangogh5067
    @leilavangogh5067 3 года назад +2

    I was here and I miss you.

  • @oliviagrudniok8401
    @oliviagrudniok8401 3 года назад

    Oh I love it!

  • @deathbyme2333
    @deathbyme2333 3 года назад

    My whole life, my relationships been over the internet and I have been heartbroken many times, i've woken up blocked and unfriended. It may not be a face to face relationship but it really hurt when you open up to some and the next day outta the blue their gone.

  • @Meow_________
    @Meow_________ 3 года назад

    “I’m haunting the cage of my existence”

  • @tulipjan
    @tulipjan 3 года назад

    Masterpiece

  • @dighost4110
    @dighost4110 3 года назад

    I feel all that energy what was put on that, I guess even see the part each of you all put in. I didn't believe in distance relationship because I didn't get it. But you showed me.
    I joined you a few months ago and now I really want to thank you for doing what you're doing. So thank you! Keep it up
    you've earned a foreign subscriber :)

  • @hope.69
    @hope.69 3 года назад

    🥺♥️💯✨ don't know what to say.... speechless.

  • @honestlyimnotsure8045
    @honestlyimnotsure8045 3 года назад

    That was amazingly beautiful!

  • @atupe
    @atupe 2 года назад

    Beautiful

  • @fatmaelzhraashaaban6581
    @fatmaelzhraashaaban6581 3 года назад

    Very touching 💛🌺.... Keep going waiting for the next one... i really like it ☺️ just arrived home and only opened the youtube to search for this video... curiosity 😌😌😂😂

  • @mrpizza1201
    @mrpizza1201 3 года назад

    This is amazing

  • @elliotropio
    @elliotropio 3 года назад

    Πέρυσι στην παγκόσμια ημέρα ποίησης ανέβασα κι εγώ το πρώτο μου ποίημα. Καλή αρχή❤️