[Violence] End war music track

My first track I created, so tips would be appericiated!

[@Turioyt]

I think it's a good track actually. It's simple but in a good way. I like the melody. However, there are a few things that bug me.
Firstly, the drum pattern doesn't really fit imo. Secondly, a lot of the instruments seem out of sync with each other. It sounds too 'off'.
Besides that, for your first track, I think it's fine. Hope this helped.

[@Slendiboi]

Yeah, that really helped! I will use those tips for the next track I create if I do (I hope)!

[@thecoolspaceguy5823]

@@Slendiboi👍