It was a true honor to be given the opportunity to voice Autumn Paradise. During the time of recording, I was struggling quite a bit with depression, and connected very much with Autumn and her mounting desperation to escape a life she simply wasn't happy with. Her speech towards the end was especially hard for me, and I'm happy to say I gave it my all. I hope you enjoy, and thank you again Scribbler; it was a pleasure to work with you again
It's really interesting to see through someone's eyes in a timeloop interacting with someone who's stuck in the timeloop but they remember the last loop, props to you
Damn time loops... First Twilight, now this, Autumn Paradise. Madness cannot be avoided forever... But with this, the fact that Autumn ages makes it so she can find freedom. Unlike Twilight in "Diary of a Time Looper", Autumn it seems can die, and thus, be free, though tragically.
A time loop, but she ages. Dang. Poor girl. And there was nothing anyone could do. I was kind of confused when it wasn't from the looper's perspective, but this hits a lot differently.
idk why but time looper darkfics are always so damn good! The idea of being stuck in the same scenario happening over and over again is honestly terrifying.
I have not cried about a fic for a long time, but damn. This hit too close to home. I want to make a mark on the world too, but I will always take the back seat, whether it be me being unnoticed or something else. I just have to grow content with the idea that in the grand scheme of things, I don’t matter.
Trust me you are far from being the only one. I used to be so unbelievably terrified of death because of how unpredictable yet certain it was and what that meant for me. I feared it everyday for years because for some reason I didn't want to fade away into obscurity, I didn't want to imagine that one day my world, the world I was brought into and had known my whole life up until that moment, would one day be filled with people that didn't know who I was, that once everyone I've come into contact with has died that I would essentially be completely and utterly erased and gone forever. I didn't want to think of the idea of being gone, to not see another day forever because well the simple fact is that I love being alive, I love experiencing life, I love the simple basic human functions like taste, smell and sight and hearing but in the grand scheme of things I love making memories, I love living and affecting the world around me, the fact that I could go to the store and do something so simple as moving a peice of clothing or miscellaneous knick-knack and it still be there in the same spot I had placed it in the day before despite how many people had gone to that store on the same day is something that I love and cherish because it proved that I existed and that I was there. The thought of being gone used to frighten me because I just simply didn't want to dissapear but over time I have mostly come to accept the fact that you too have come to and that fact is that indeed in the grand scheme of things I don't really matter and I'm okay with that. Well I had said mostly because I feel like no matter what I do or say there will always be a little part of me that still fears the day when I am long dead and my existence, my thoughts and memories will fade into obscurity and I know that it is still in me because of the fact that this comment is so long.
I really like this take on time looping, especially from one of the observer’s perspective. The way Autumn Paradise chose to use her time to help all of those ponies she ended up connecting with, even if they wouldn’t necessarily remember all of it, was very touching. At least she had one escape, even if it was Death itself. She was remembered for her kindness, a very bittersweet ending.
I remember reading this quite some time ago. Still one of my most favorite. It's a fantastically tragic story, with a very fresh perspective compared to most stories, from the bystander (AJ) looking at the time-looped pony. Heartbreaking, but somewhat bittersweet as well.
This is so sad that all her life was spent reliving the same day over and over. That all the poneys she conented with forgot her when the next loop began. But at lest in the end she chose to be kind and helpful to all the poneys she came in contact with. In a way she will never be forgotten.
This is so good normally in the time loop stories I’ve heard the looper doesn’t age but in this one she did and interacted with everyone too it’s heartbreaking in a way I can’t explain great read
I really like the idea of a time loop where you age but no one around you does. It makes your time to live very very short. You know the saying 'enjoy life to the fullest because you never know when it's going to end?' I feel like she did. Every loop she tried something different..
Three questions 1. Would you believe someone if they told you they where a time looper 2. Would you try to help them 3. What would you do if you where a time looper The ending 😢😭
I'm still wondering why poor autumn was stuck in a loop in the first place. Usually movies like groundhog day that involve a time loop explain the loop happening because the person has lived a vain or unfufilling life and is given many, many chances to rectify it or has disturbed some ancient relic/spell/curse. I guess it's up to interpretation here or maybe the answer is simply "magic" or "because it happened"
Interesting take on groundhog day. We get the story from an outside perspective rather than from the one afflicted. I'm more surprised Pinkie hadn't come into it with one of her weird explanations.
YAY! I'm early! Good thing I checked my notifications at the right time! I was hoping for a Friday the 13th upload! Great story, but even sadder and surprising than I thought it was gonna be; oof. Interesting to see a time loop from the side of the characters not experiencing it. Also, most ponies would be shocked, scared, or even excited to be in one at first, but Autumn Breeze/Paradise's one started with anger at her awful predicament.
I’m starting to really love time loop stories, but this one; this one touched my heart and broke it at the same time which I didn’t even know was possibly 😂 this is by far my top favorite this year❤❤❤
Well this takes a spin on the time loop idea. Kinda more depressing and scary to find out that when the day resets, you're the only one who ages. God I'd be freaking out if that version of the time loop curse hit me dude.
Wow. I am so glad this popped up. I have been trying to find this story since I first read it. Now I’m going to do what I should’ve done when I first read it and add it to my favorites. Thanks Scribbler.
So when I was 11 I really struggled with understanding Applejack now I am 13 and completely fluent in english--- but if I don't completely concentrate on AJ I still don't understand her
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It was a true honor to be given the opportunity to voice Autumn Paradise. During the time of recording, I was struggling quite a bit with depression, and connected very much with Autumn and her mounting desperation to escape a life she simply wasn't happy with. Her speech towards the end was especially hard for me, and I'm happy to say I gave it my all. I hope you enjoy, and thank you again Scribbler; it was a pleasure to work with you again
You did so well. You truely have a talent. Take care of yourself.
I loved your performance! Great delivery; I felt every emotion!
Agreed with the first two comments above! Hoping to see more of you in audiofics. /)
It's really interesting to see through someone's eyes in a timeloop interacting with someone who's stuck in the timeloop but they remember the last loop, props to you
Damn time loops... First Twilight, now this, Autumn Paradise. Madness cannot be avoided forever...
But with this, the fact that Autumn ages makes it so she can find freedom. Unlike Twilight in "Diary of a Time Looper", Autumn it seems can die, and thus, be free, though tragically.
A time loop, but she ages. Dang. Poor girl. And there was nothing anyone could do.
I was kind of confused when it wasn't from the looper's perspective, but this hits a lot differently.
“I’m glad you’ve finally got to see tomorrow”
I just got shivers from that, you’re a great reader
"Looking at our trees as if one might start tap-dancing on the spot"
Well, if Discord was in a joking mood, that *would* happen
idk why but time looper darkfics are always so damn good! The idea of being stuck in the same scenario happening over and over again is honestly terrifying.
In movies there is always a point to them. Here it's random and hopeless
A loop story from the perspective of the person not looping? That's interesting!
I have not cried about a fic for a long time, but damn. This hit too close to home. I want to make a mark on the world too, but I will always take the back seat, whether it be me being unnoticed or something else. I just have to grow content with the idea that in the grand scheme of things, I don’t matter.
Trust me you are far from being the only one. I used to be so unbelievably terrified of death because of how unpredictable yet certain it was and what that meant for me. I feared it everyday for years because for some reason I didn't want to fade away into obscurity, I didn't want to imagine that one day my world, the world I was brought into and had known my whole life up until that moment, would one day be filled with people that didn't know who I was, that once everyone I've come into contact with has died that I would essentially be completely and utterly erased and gone forever. I didn't want to think of the idea of being gone, to not see another day forever because well the simple fact is that I love being alive, I love experiencing life, I love the simple basic human functions like taste, smell and sight and hearing but in the grand scheme of things I love making memories, I love living and affecting the world around me, the fact that I could go to the store and do something so simple as moving a peice of clothing or miscellaneous knick-knack and it still be there in the same spot I had placed it in the day before despite how many people had gone to that store on the same day is something that I love and cherish because it proved that I existed and that I was there. The thought of being gone used to frighten me because I just simply didn't want to dissapear but over time I have mostly come to accept the fact that you too have come to and that fact is that indeed in the grand scheme of things I don't really matter and I'm okay with that. Well I had said mostly because I feel like no matter what I do or say there will always be a little part of me that still fears the day when I am long dead and my existence, my thoughts and memories will fade into obscurity and I know that it is still in me because of the fact that this comment is so long.
I really like this take on time looping, especially from one of the observer’s perspective. The way Autumn Paradise chose to use her time to help all of those ponies she ended up connecting with, even if they wouldn’t necessarily remember all of it, was very touching. At least she had one escape, even if it was Death itself. She was remembered for her kindness, a very bittersweet ending.
I remember reading this quite some time ago. Still one of my most favorite. It's a fantastically tragic story, with a very fresh perspective compared to most stories, from the bystander (AJ) looking at the time-looped pony. Heartbreaking, but somewhat bittersweet as well.
This is so sad that all her life was spent reliving the same day over and over. That all the poneys she conented with forgot her when the next loop began. But at lest in the end she chose to be kind and helpful to all the poneys she came in contact with. In a way she will never be forgotten.
This is so good normally in the time loop stories I’ve heard the looper doesn’t age but in this one she did and interacted with everyone too it’s heartbreaking in a way I can’t explain great read
Time loop stories are always so interesting! Especially with this one being from someone else's perspective. Well done, all of you! :D
"Her name's Autum Breeze"
Me: uh...
I really like the idea of a time loop where you age but no one around you does. It makes your time to live very very short. You know the saying 'enjoy life to the fullest because you never know when it's going to end?' I feel like she did. Every loop she tried something different..
Your the best at making these stories. They feel so interesting and relistic to read please don't ever stop 🫂❤️
Thank you for many years of amazing story readings, comic dubs, creepypastas and more of all kinds.
Awwww, thank you so much!
You this is the second sad fimfiction i read/listened where a pony is trapped in a time loop.
Three questions
1. Would you believe someone if they told you they where a time looper
2. Would you try to help them
3. What would you do if you where a time looper
The ending 😢😭
I'm still wondering why poor autumn was stuck in a loop in the first place. Usually movies like groundhog day that involve a time loop explain the loop happening because the person has lived a vain or unfufilling life and is given many, many chances to rectify it or has disturbed some ancient relic/spell/curse. I guess it's up to interpretation here or maybe the answer is simply "magic" or "because it happened"
Wasn't expecting this too be as impact full as it was 9/10 good job
Breaks the fourth wall not even thirty seconds in
Interesting take on groundhog day.
We get the story from an outside perspective rather than from the one afflicted.
I'm more surprised Pinkie hadn't come into it with one of her weird explanations.
Beautiful story, thank you Ms.Scribbler ❤
A tragic Ground Hog Day.
YAY! I'm early! Good thing I checked my notifications at the right time! I was hoping for a Friday the 13th upload! Great story, but even sadder and surprising than I thought it was gonna be; oof. Interesting to see a time loop from the side of the characters not experiencing it. Also, most ponies would be shocked, scared, or even excited to be in one at first, but Autumn Breeze/Paradise's one started with anger at her awful predicament.
AJ’s accent is a little more Australian than usual lol
Australia is full of Cowgirls also indont hear it
Cool video Scribbler!
Dang scribbles 😭 ya got me.... you got me......😭
I’m starting to really love time loop stories, but this one; this one touched my heart and broke it at the same time which I didn’t even know was possibly 😂 this is by far my top favorite this year❤❤❤
You are so amazing Scribbler, don’t stop being Lovely please
0:27 cute jump
Well this takes a spin on the time loop idea. Kinda more depressing and scary to find out that when the day resets, you're the only one who ages. God I'd be freaking out if that version of the time loop curse hit me dude.
You really made this special
its a great story and its bit like a sadder version of groundhog day - in a way
Wow. I am so glad this popped up. I have been trying to find this story since I first read it. Now I’m going to do what I should’ve done when I first read it and add it to my favorites. Thanks Scribbler.
Wonderful!
You seem to like these timelooping ones, I think this is like the third one you made
32:33 jump cut to autumn paradise death
I remember this story, well read
absolutely chilling, i almost wish applejack hadn’t figured it out in the end just to twist the knife a little bit more 😈
Ow waw Another Beautiful storry scribbler i love it and keep up the great Beautiful work 👏👏👍👍👍🤗😁
A pony version of groundhog's day...
Interesting.
Not my particularly favorite movies, but I suppose this could be earth a watch...
I found this pretty sad listening to it before bed last night. Beautiful nonetheless
Very well done narrative! Haven't listen to a narration in awhile. This was pretty sad :( someone not looping then ends up dying.
Damn, I'm only halfway thru and I'm in LOVE
Essentially ground hog day if it was a grimdark
I think this story has inspired me to write my own story that’s similar
This is beautiful.
oh no!! shes trap like Twlight sparkle in 'Diary of a Time Looper' !
That was an interesting and outstanding story
Pony…
I don’t remember you’re… TIME LOOPS…
Joke aside, this was a great…
Cute intro
This... Made me cry 😢
Ngl I tried to find what the oc looked like but I can't find anything
I’m in tears now xooxoox
...but no one came.
Time loops are insane.
This one is an old one Scribbler already did, right? I swear I hear it before
So when I was 11 I really struggled with understanding Applejack now I am 13 and completely fluent in english--- but if I don't completely concentrate on AJ I still don't understand her
This is sad than dark
Can we please get a eta on mlp history repeats ep4
Ta tudo bem Apple.
Darkfic darkfic darkfic darkfic!!!!! Hehehe
💗💗💗💗💗🧁
so sad
Sounds like a time loop...
Applejack afinal o que ha com voce
5:10 cute jump