Character Goals In A Scene \\ Writing Great Scenes, Video 2

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  • Опубликовано: 5 июл 2024
  • Welcome back to Video 2 of our "Writing Great Scenes" Series! Today, let's talk about one of the main elements of a great scene: A point-of-view character with a clear goal or desire.
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    0:00 Introduction
    0:21 Goal or Desire
    2:27 The Stakes
    6:32 Six Questions To Ask
    8:40 Example: The Bourne Identity
    14:22 Choosing POV Character
    17:18 Closing Thoughts
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Комментарии • 29

  • @HeartBreathings
    @HeartBreathings  Год назад +14

    I hope you're enjoying this series. Don't forget to grab your workbook! (Link in Description) and I'll be back next week for a discussion on conflict and tension in your scenes.

    • @joannaholden943
      @joannaholden943 Год назад +1

      Loving this new series so far. ❤️ Thanks for all the amazing content you share!

    • @megdalena01
      @megdalena01 Год назад

      I love this series!!

    • @Diane281
      @Diane281 Год назад

      being a first time writer i wish i could talk to you in person because i'm seriously struggling with what i want to write

  • @lennemitincan
    @lennemitincan Год назад +11

    Me : Can t write today. No motivation, depressed and on my period.
    Sarra: how to write a scene
    My brain : fine ill try a little..

  • @nicolelee1717
    @nicolelee1717 Год назад +4

    This series is exactly what I need right now. I wish the entire series was available for me to binge!! Love your work!!!! Thank you so much.

  • @SallyBosco
    @SallyBosco Год назад +4

    Thanks Sara! Great series!!! I'd love it if you could analyze some of the quieter scenes that don't have a lot of apparent conflict.

  • @28hadassa
    @28hadassa Год назад +7

    You're a great teacher, Sarra! Thank you for the step-by-step!

  • @heathercamacho5721
    @heathercamacho5721 Год назад +7

    Love the video, and KM Weiland’s writing resources are my absolute favorite! Her writing is so comprehensive and thorough I hardly ever have questions after reading her content. I also enrolled in your upcoming course - can’t wait.

  • @keertanaanand2451
    @keertanaanand2451 Год назад +2

    It is so fun to wait for these videos...the happiness of seeing that notification 🤗

  • @nildam.bonilla5849
    @nildam.bonilla5849 Год назад +2

    Already know that when the series is done I will rewatch it all❤

  • @debpaynepurnell6131
    @debpaynepurnell6131 Год назад +1

    This advice is great for playwrights, too.

  • @fralou_sind_kreativ
    @fralou_sind_kreativ Год назад

    While watching I took so many notes!!!! The cool thing is, that I was just about to edit my children's novel and go for it scene by scene. So what a perfect timing to see you video! Thank you!

  • @sunshinejulie5687
    @sunshinejulie5687 Год назад

    Love this!

  • @BonnieDragonKat
    @BonnieDragonKat Год назад

    Oh your timing Sarra! Just when I needed this! Thanks ans well done!

  • @brittany_wmsb
    @brittany_wmsb Год назад

    So helpful, thank you!

  • @debrahorst8154
    @debrahorst8154 Год назад +1

    Thank you, Sarra! Looking forward to implementing in my WIP.

  • @OwnYourPowerTV
    @OwnYourPowerTV 10 месяцев назад

    Thank you. Very helpful!

  • @reginabusboom8271
    @reginabusboom8271 Год назад

    Thank you for the great video! I’ve learned so much!

  • @truebookaddict
    @truebookaddict Год назад

    Loving this series! Thanks for all the book recs...I actually own, and have read, several of them. 😊

  • @tamidawn8383
    @tamidawn8383 Год назад

    Thank you for this series! This little video is packed with helpful nuggets that felt like treasures revealed. You have a way of explaining things that opens mind boxes for me. And I’m definitely adding the book recommendations to my “study the craft” list.

  • @judewalsh500
    @judewalsh500 Год назад

    Great segment Sarra, I am learning so much about scene writing! You mentioned a link to KM Weiland's blog posts about scenes but I don't see it? Looking forward to #3!

  • @mariajromaley
    @mariajromaley Год назад

    hi thx ! It was very interesting. For the question of who speak (pov), I ask myself too what do I want to show to the readers, and who will be the funniest in this situation ? (sorry for my english). XD

  • @krisbrick3089
    @krisbrick3089 Год назад

    In two of my five opening chapters, my MC doesn’t have a goal. Instead, he’s meeting important side chapters. The point is to establish how they relate to him. This is so when they die/go crazy in the future, the reader understands how much of an impact it has on the MC and why he makes the decisions he does from that point. Curious what your thoughts are on this?
    -Brick

  • @josieann4390
    @josieann4390 Год назад

    💜💜💜

  • @lesliemoiseauthor
    @lesliemoiseauthor Год назад

    I always ask my character what she wants and what she fears.

  • @rileytuawai7241
    @rileytuawai7241 Год назад

    Im a bit confused. These questions don't align with the workbook