How To Write Conflict In A Scene \\ Writing Great Scenes, Video 3

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  • Опубликовано: 5 июл 2024
  • Welcome back for video 3 in our Writing Great Scenes series! Today, we're going to discuss the most crucial element of a great scene - conflict. Let's dive in!
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    A few articles on types of conflict:
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    blog.reedsy.com/guide/conflic...
    www.dailywritingtips.com/7-ty...
    Timestamps:
    0:00 Intro
    3:36 Types of Conflict
    8:29 Example 1
    13:54 Intensity in Conflict
    16:41 Example 2
    19:34 Final Thoughts on Conflict
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  • @HeartBreathings
    @HeartBreathings  Год назад +9

    I hope you're enjoying this series!!! Don't forget: Publish and Thrive starts on Saturday! Learn more here: heartbreathings.teachable.com/p/publish-and-thrive

  • @lycia5354
    @lycia5354 Год назад +15

    thank you so much for actually explaining exactly what a scene is made of, instead of just saying, you have to write deeper scenes. Yes of course, but how ? I see now what i'm doing wrong after years of trying to write intense scenes.
    🧡🧡

  • @mjwritesbooks
    @mjwritesbooks Год назад +4

    "conflict stems from what's come before and effects what's coming next" boom, there it is! Thank you for creating this series. It's super helpful for a beginner like me that generally has no idea where to start with writing a scene!

  • @mamuchaexpress
    @mamuchaexpress Год назад +2

    Every time I watch one of your videos about writing, I get three new ideas to write about. Loved it!

  • @carolynprunkl1359
    @carolynprunkl1359 Год назад +4

    can you do videos on backstory

  • @bluemacaroons
    @bluemacaroons Год назад +1

    I like how you explained how to get readers to care about the story using layers of conflict, I was always confused about how I could make my characters more interesting and it sounds super useful

  • @zivahrose3068
    @zivahrose3068 10 месяцев назад +1

    Love all your videos. Literally only person I watch that actually makes me feel better instead of more stressed lol

  • @ddlorenzo
    @ddlorenzo Год назад +1

    Thank you, Sarra. I'm going back to my WIP to see where I can add more layers of conflict. :)

  • @Melanie-my6qi
    @Melanie-my6qi 10 месяцев назад +1

    Great information thank you

  • @salomebeukes
    @salomebeukes Год назад +1

    Thanks so much for this video! I always struggle immensely with the first/opening scene - to include enough conflict to ensure the reader keeps going. I either add too much (too much jammed into one scene) or just a this happened, then that happened kind of mess 😖

  • @charlotteeverett6404
    @charlotteeverett6404 Год назад +1

    Another great video to help with working out my scenes. Creating conflict on a scene by scene basis is one of my issues, so this video has come at the ideal time! Can't wait for publish and thrive too; it's going to be fantastic xx

  • @abundancemindsetloading
    @abundancemindsetloading 6 месяцев назад

    I adore these videos!

  • @nildam.bonilla5849
    @nildam.bonilla5849 Год назад

    Love your explanations on how the scenes need to be. Now I see what some scenes are missing

  • @beverlyjdesigns1410
    @beverlyjdesigns1410 Год назад +1

    Thank you so much Sarra! You are a true inspiration!♥

  • @francineh.7825
    @francineh.7825 Год назад +1

    Great video! I like the idea of the girl who needs rent money from her sister! I imagine her needing to sell something dear to her heart and she has to hitch a ride with the good looking vagabond guy who take her across the country to deliver the item she needs to sell for money. 😁

  • @blinkofaneye4451
    @blinkofaneye4451 Год назад

    Great explanation with concrete examples. Than you.

  • @SallyBosco
    @SallyBosco Год назад

    This is really helpful! I'm struggling with scenes that don't have enough conflict. Thanks, Sara!

  • @susanring7634
    @susanring7634 Год назад

    Great stuff Sarra, thank you!

  • @russellmarvin2850
    @russellmarvin2850 Год назад

    I am enjoying inserts that you have you put together. I’m writing a science fiction/religion book. I’m at the point where I need to flesh out my antagonist ( the devil) so my readers can see him in a different way and understand why he is the way he is.

  • @lannya_5822
    @lannya_5822 Год назад

    This is incredibly helpful! I've been binge-watching this series and i LOVE your content ❤️

  • @MsMotherWolf
    @MsMotherWolf Год назад

    Fantastic, thanks for this!
    what I haven't liked is where an author just piles drama after drama on a character that doesn't seem to come in a realistic manner and has that feel of it's there for sake of tension and doesn't add to the story let alone its enjoyment.

  • @natyboops
    @natyboops Год назад

    I want to add that there are also small conflicts. Like in my novel there is an overarching large religious / community values conflict. There's conflict between comfort and truth. There's also the main character's internal conflict of wanting to quiet and obidient and fit in, but not being able to take the status quo any longer. There's a physical /outer obstacle conflict. But there's also a million other small conflicts on just about every page: contrasting personality conflicts, contrasting sizes and ages, the conflict between the motifs of water and fire, conflicting life views, conflicting emotions, conflicting actions, conflicts between beauty and danger, etc. I think conflicts both large and small are what keeps the reader turning the page. Just my two cents.

  • @fralou_sind_kreativ
    @fralou_sind_kreativ Год назад

    WOOOW! Those examples were amazing!! Ultra helpful. I know better now what to look for and what to take care of while writing. Thank you!!

  • @MSOHare1981
    @MSOHare1981 Год назад +3

    How do you create a scene list based on your plot outline?🤔

    • @HeartBreathings
      @HeartBreathings  Год назад +2

      Great question! Not something I can answer in a short comment but a good future video idea, though we will touch on this in the next video

    • @MSOHare1981
      @MSOHare1981 Год назад +1

      @@HeartBreathings I thought you'd touch on the subject in one of these videos, but I wasn't sure. It's the biggest hurdle I have in outlining. I can come up with plot, character, conflict.... I just don't know how that easily translates into various scenes.

    • @woodlandlady7011
      @woodlandlady7011 Год назад +3

      Check out "Story Genius" by "Lisa Cron" It is a lot to digest but if you persevere you will understand how to plot your scenes based upon your character's goal. Remember that character drives the plot. Best of luck.

    • @MSOHare1981
      @MSOHare1981 Год назад +1

      @@woodlandlady7011 I've been looking into getting that, but I need to wait for a bit for personal reasons.

  • @ninamimi6622
    @ninamimi6622 Год назад

    I've seen so many scenes in books and tv where you just have characters arguing for what seems like the sake of having conflict. It just doesn't seem believable and comes across like the writer wanted some conflict but it's not natural.

  • @anthonycosentino463
    @anthonycosentino463 9 месяцев назад

    Why have we done away with the word natural? The word Organic is ANNOYING.