The KEY to IELTS Academic Writing Task 1: LINE GRAPH

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  • @FasTrackIELTS
    @FasTrackIELTS  10 месяцев назад +10

    Guys, don't forget to download the full sample answer: bit.ly/pdf-graph

    • @salmanhossainanas-01
      @salmanhossainanas-01 7 месяцев назад

      Dear Honourable Mam, i Don't Open this Link. Have any alternative Way open & download this Link🙏

  • @fadaabraham5483
    @fadaabraham5483 10 месяцев назад +39

    Had my results last week. Got 7.5 in writing. 6.5 in reading, 7.0 in listening and 8.5 in speaking. With an overall band score of 7.5… Preparation for the exam was just about 5 days. Thanks to some of your lovely tips here.

    • @JaluNisha
      @JaluNisha 10 месяцев назад +6

      How do you get 8.5 in speaking 😮

    • @JaluNisha
      @JaluNisha 10 месяцев назад

      Please give some ideas for me 😢

    • @fadaabraham5483
      @fadaabraham5483 10 месяцев назад +24

      @@JaluNisha I was natural. I’m neither British nor American, so I didn’t try to sound like them. Corrected myself immediately I made any mistake. Didn’t panic. Never stopped talking till I was told to stop. Used simple and not too complicated vocabularies. And I smiled and responded to the interviewer like I was having a chat with a friend.

    • @noraliahmed6255
      @noraliahmed6255 7 месяцев назад

      Amazing grade!

    • @Linishamohandas
      @Linishamohandas 18 дней назад

      Can you tell me How to begin to writ essay for the first time like I have no idea

  • @MukhammadmirzoAkbarov
    @MukhammadmirzoAkbarov 10 месяцев назад +33

    The line graph provides data regarding the proportion of urban dwellers in four nations over the period spanning from 1970 to 2020, along with projected figures for 2030 and 2040.
    Generally, in 1970, the percentage of Uruguayans and Ecuadorians was noticeably less than other nations, whereas Argentina took the lead in terms of residents in percentage terms. Additionally, in 2040, Uruguay and Argentina are forecast to be the most populated countries, while Ecuador is predicted to take the bottom-most position.
    Over a 50-year period, starting from 1970, Uruguay and Ecuador showed similar patterns, with both of them accounting for 20%, after which both witnessed a huge increase from 1980 to 2020(from nearly 40% and a bit over 20% to almost 100% and over 60% in turn). During the same period, Argentina and Brazil gradually climbed - despite some fluctuations at the beginning of the period, especially being true for the latter: just over 80% and 60% respectively in 2000. The figures for both of them in 2020 were nearly the same.
    Over the duration of forecasts, ranging from 2030 to 2040, the percentage of people living in Uruguay and Argentina is expected to elevate up to nearly 100%, meaning that they will be the most populous countries over the given period, alongside the data being somehow similar to Brazil. However, throughout the projected period, Ecuador is anticipated to occupy the last spot, making up the smallest percentage of inhabitants in 2040 - 80%.

    • @vikmod3825
      @vikmod3825 10 месяцев назад +7

      Now try to squeeze it in 20 mins in your exam😁😁😁😁

  • @neoangel5694
    @neoangel5694 10 месяцев назад +10

    Thanks for your lectures...scored a 7.0 in The IELTS test last week

  • @kieranliu4778
    @kieranliu4778 10 месяцев назад +1

    The line graph presents the proportion of city inhabintant in four nations, namely Argentina, Brazail, Uruguay and Ecudor over the 50-year period ending in 2020, along with projections in the next two decades. (my tying practice )

  • @manozchand6893
    @manozchand6893 8 месяцев назад +8

    After 2 hours there is mly LWR exam, wish me luck everyone 😊✨

  • @kinnagill9224
    @kinnagill9224 10 месяцев назад +6

    Thank you Asia.Your videos helped me a lot and today I got my required band score in ilets.keep up your good work.

  • @PraveenKumar-fp6km
    @PraveenKumar-fp6km 10 месяцев назад +1

    Hello Asiya. I had like to thank you for all your videos and insights on IELTS. I didn't have any idea about this exam and I solely relied on your insights and the standard practice tests to score a 8.5 band in first attempt. Thanks much for all that you have been doing and truly appreciate your efforts. Good luck

  • @borhanuddin681
    @borhanuddin681 10 месяцев назад +4

    Yeah,it makes sense ma'am.
    Thank a ton.

  • @iqravirk296
    @iqravirk296 10 месяцев назад +3

    The chart provides statistics regarding the number of people in four territories residing in metropolis between 1970 and 2020 and foretell between 2030 and 2040.
    Overall, it is clear from the chart, that Uruguay had shown great increase in percentage and it surpasses in the future whereas,Ecuador's percentage was around Uruguay and it had also shown slightly increased and expected to progress in the next ten years. Furthermore,Argentina and Brazil had moderately progressed over the time with little variations and expected to remain stable for a decade.
    In 1970, Uruguay had twenty percent population which had reached around 95 percent surpassing the other nations and in the next decade its inhabitant's percentage is predicted to remain stable. However, in 1970, Ecuador's percentage was nearly twenty percent. In the year 2020, it had grown around forty-five percent. After that, in the period of two decades it had oscillated and reached around sixty-four percent. It is predicted that Ecuador's number of citizens will rise from 2030 to 2040.
    In 1970, the number of people in Argentina was approximately sixty-five percent and had grown slightly till 2020 and reached around ninety-four percent,while, Brazil's percentage had risen approximately to sixty-five percent. It had commenced to varies until it had reached the year 2020. The percentage population in Argentina and Brazil is predicted to stay steady for next ten years.

  • @sandugashyussupova3563
    @sandugashyussupova3563 7 месяцев назад +1

    My test is tomorrow morning. I am watching these videos now as a preparation. Hope it helps. Wish me a good luck!

  • @luicrislloren1541
    @luicrislloren1541 10 месяцев назад +1

    Thank you Asiya.. I passed the IELTS examination..💯🧑‍🎓🇬🇧
    TO GOD BE THE GLORY🙏

  • @opeyemibadirat6582
    @opeyemibadirat6582 10 месяцев назад +2

    The graph illustrates the rate of people residing in urban areas in four South American erican countries over 50 years and forecast for the next two decades.
    Overall, the rate of people living in Argentina and Brazil started at high level, whereas, Uruguay and Ecuador began with a lower population but had a surge over the years to attain their peaks at the end of the time frame.
    It can be observed that Argentina had the highest population in 1970, witnessing a steady rise in the next 50 years to reach 90% in 2020, meanwhile, Brazil started slightly below 50% but had a progressive rise to a little below 70% in 1990, however, it experienced a sudden dip but later had a gradual rise to over 80% in 2020. Meanwhile, both countries are forecasted to show a steady rise in population in the next 20 years.
    In contrast, Uruguay and Ecuador began with a low population at a level slightly below 20%, however, both countries continue to have a surge in people to reach slightly above 90% and almost 70% in 2020 respectively. Furthermore, these two countries are predicted to have a slight increase in population in the next two decades with Uruguay reaching the highest point.

    • @meetmachhi1234
      @meetmachhi1234 10 месяцев назад +1

    • @cathyubom9573
      @cathyubom9573 10 месяцев назад

    • @heartz6437
      @heartz6437 8 месяцев назад

      ig you've used too much linking words that doesn't make it seem smooth and natural ykwim. So ig you need to work on that part. Overall, it deserves at least a band 7 .Thank youu

  • @4d0jananireddy24
    @4d0jananireddy24 9 месяцев назад +1

    Thank you asiya mam your videos had a great impact on me. Apart from the monk test we need some guidance and concepts to get ready for the exam . Asiya videos are very helpful.

  • @mohammadidhrisidris6856
    @mohammadidhrisidris6856 10 месяцев назад +4

    Thank you mam for your giving suggestions

  • @ЯЧеловек-ю8ы
    @ЯЧеловек-ю8ы 4 месяца назад +1

    thank you so much!!

  • @JaluNisha
    @JaluNisha 10 месяцев назад +2

    Good video mam . I learned lot of ideas . Thanks a lot

  • @ilangilang7185
    @ilangilang7185 5 месяцев назад

    Thank you for the very understandable instructions.

  • @SanjitaBasnet-f7s
    @SanjitaBasnet-f7s 10 месяцев назад +87

    The day after tomorrow is my exams 😢 wish me luck

    • @lazizaasadova
      @lazizaasadova 10 месяцев назад +6

      Mine too😢

    • @SanjitaBasnet-f7s
      @SanjitaBasnet-f7s 10 месяцев назад +2

      @abduvalioka thanks a ton
      🙏🙏

    • @faxriddinrahmatov9174
      @faxriddinrahmatov9174 10 месяцев назад +9

      Break a leg! Iʼll look forward to your comment that you will have a Band 9 certificate ❤❤❤🎉🎉🎉

    • @SanjitaBasnet-f7s
      @SanjitaBasnet-f7s 10 месяцев назад

      @@faxriddinrahmatov9174 means a lot 🙏🙏

    • @AnhPhuong-sx3tu
      @AnhPhuong-sx3tu 10 месяцев назад +2

      wish you all the best :D

  • @Mb_editz396
    @Mb_editz396 3 месяца назад +1

    My exam is after 5 days 😢please pray for me guys and wish me luck

  • @yorqinoyhasanova736
    @yorqinoyhasanova736 5 месяцев назад

    O my god she can write essay,describe and teach in 18 minutes 😮

  • @thechillphil
    @thechillphil 7 месяцев назад +1

    I watched a couple of your writing videos and they helped me a lot. I took IELTS this week and got 7.5 for Academic Writing. Keep up the good work!

  • @SunShine-nh2ip
    @SunShine-nh2ip 10 месяцев назад +1

    Hello, Asia, Thank you very much for your lessons🌹🌞
    Why did you say "Ecuador" instead of "Uruguay" on 9:00?

    • @yigitbstn3301
      @yigitbstn3301 10 месяцев назад +1

      qardasimmm türkiyeden selamm

    • @SunShine-nh2ip
      @SunShine-nh2ip 10 месяцев назад +1

      @@yigitbstn3301 Aleykum Salam❤

  • @tchh6068
    @tchh6068 4 месяца назад

    Hi Asiya,
    Thank you for your tips. Can we use the collocations- fell heavily (for 'plummeted') and spiralled up (for 'rose sharply'). Thank you.

  • @k_____007
    @k_____007 10 месяцев назад +1

    Damn ur sentences are so high level 🫠

    • @FasTrackIELTS
      @FasTrackIELTS  10 месяцев назад +1

      You don't need to take it to this level to pass ;)

    • @k_____007
      @k_____007 10 месяцев назад

      @@FasTrackIELTS in pen & paper, if in writing task 2 word count is around 245 words, how many marks will be deducted for not achieving task ? 🙃🙃😶‍🌫️😶‍🌫️😶‍🌫️😶‍🌫️😶‍🌫️😶‍🌫️

    • @serhatyldrm8736
      @serhatyldrm8736 9 месяцев назад

      @@k_____007 how much score do you want

  • @shahanememmedli2045
    @shahanememmedli2045 15 дней назад

    Tomorrow is my exam. Wish me best of luck.

  • @MukhammadmirzoAkbarov
    @MukhammadmirzoAkbarov 10 месяцев назад +2

    Hope you won't ignore that report of mine

  • @aruka_engpen2500
    @aruka_engpen2500 6 месяцев назад

    Hello,Asia bunch of thanks❤️ you are really an expert. I have a concerning question. Don’t we need a conclusion here in this task?

    • @FasTrackIELTS
      @FasTrackIELTS  6 месяцев назад

      Hi! Thank you so much. You don't need a conclusion in Task 1, so you can save time not writing one. Some may have their overview at the end, which is fine too. Good luck with your exam!

  • @fatehakbar4626
    @fatehakbar4626 5 месяцев назад

    Now it's my time.😂 Tomorrow is my exam . Wish me Good Luck❤

  • @shuvomdshahidarman6909
    @shuvomdshahidarman6909 9 месяцев назад

    70 years we can say here approximately platinum jubilee ending in 2020.

  • @shamalysarkershimo7182
    @shamalysarkershimo7182 10 месяцев назад +1

    Is it okay to write 255 words here? Then how much words should I use in part 2?

  • @rinzarasheed2021
    @rinzarasheed2021 10 месяцев назад

    Hi Asiya, for do you think the development is positive or negative type esaay, was that same as advantages and disadvantages essay. Can you elaborate on how we can write this type of writing task 2 essay as this type is rarely asked

  • @Usmanliaqatgujjar
    @Usmanliaqatgujjar 6 месяцев назад

    Going to appear on 13 june exam wish me good luck 😊

  • @DipanDahal-v1y
    @DipanDahal-v1y 10 месяцев назад +2

    My exam is tomorrow 😭

  • @archanagill4915
    @archanagill4915 3 месяца назад

    I have always been told to write task one in past tense but u r writing it in resulting instead of resulted, making etc isit correct?

    • @FasTrackIELTS
      @FasTrackIELTS  3 месяца назад

      You need to look at the dates. You may need to write in the past, present or future. "Resulting" and "making" are either gerunds or participles. You can check how to use them in English Grammar in Use by R.Murphy

  • @maameanane978
    @maameanane978 10 месяцев назад

    Hello teacher,
    I took my ielts exam on 27th Jan, i have gotten an email saying my results have been withheld and under scrutiny for security and quality checks. They asked that i scan a handwritten statement and email it back to them....what does this mean please?

  • @Kainatfatima147
    @Kainatfatima147 10 месяцев назад

    Please add Shopping and language topics in your IELTS library pdf

  • @biskit_oliver
    @biskit_oliver 6 месяцев назад

    Mine also but i guess that i am ready

  • @Fatemejahangirie
    @Fatemejahangirie 6 месяцев назад

    It was really complicated. I need a band 7. How can i write it in that way? I appreciate if you provide writing s with a band 7 too. They're often at 8 or 9 which is complicated.

    • @FasTrackIELTS
      @FasTrackIELTS  6 месяцев назад +1

      Working on one right now. Thank you for your feedback!

  • @sushildas1399
    @sushildas1399 10 месяцев назад +1

    Aray Bhai... Ab mujhe Nahi Jana Australia America.. yeh demo Dekh Kar kya karunga😢

  • @劉恆策
    @劉恆策 10 месяцев назад

    Hey Asiya, I purcharsed your online course, however it is possible to provide editing writing, otherwise test takers won't know where and how they need to improve or fix. I am willing to pay extra.

    • @1koti
      @1koti 10 месяцев назад

      Hi, im thinking to purchase academic pack, but im not sure is it really worth it? Do you think it is worth it ?

    • @劉恆策
      @劉恆策 10 месяцев назад

      @@1koti As I said yo will get useful information and how to organise your essay in the test. However you are more likely to find someone or AI-based application to editing your generated ietls essay.

    • @FasTrackIELTS
      @FasTrackIELTS  10 месяцев назад +1

      Hi! At the moment, we don't provide an easy checking service and have thousands of students who successfully passed their test after taking them. If you'd like to have your essay checked, textranch.com is a great place where proofreaders can check your vocab and grammar for a couple of dollars. Indeed, ChatGPT can help with that too, but double check it. Just never ask an AI to grade your answers. What I've seen so far is simply wrong and an accurate model hasn't been created yet

  • @nexusfreefire6166
    @nexusfreefire6166 10 месяцев назад +1

    Plese help i need to ralk with you I haven’t got my result i live in japan 😭😭😭😭

  • @UsmanSiddiqui-rv6mb
    @UsmanSiddiqui-rv6mb 10 месяцев назад +2

    I have my IELTS exam tomorrow. Wish me Good Luck specially in Writing and Speaking🥲

  • @ashus705
    @ashus705 10 месяцев назад

    I don't know how to improve tenses and i get confuse which tenses to use .

  • @HaileeN25
    @HaileeN25 8 месяцев назад

    My exam is in 3 days , feeling a little bit overwhelmed

  • @khushikhushi2318
    @khushikhushi2318 10 месяцев назад

    Ma'am .I am from Asian country I can understand English but I am having difficulty in writing my basic is not good can you please help me

  • @PriscillaOriri
    @PriscillaOriri 10 месяцев назад

    My exam is tomorrow
    Ma wish me well

  • @aynurbakmirzayeva3292
    @aynurbakmirzayeva3292 10 месяцев назад

    I stuck intermediate level and can't improve it. How can I do it?

  • @reellover5697
    @reellover5697 10 месяцев назад +2

    Mam where are you living

  • @SarikaBalami
    @SarikaBalami 10 месяцев назад +1

    Today is my exam 😢

  • @salahaldese8990
    @salahaldese8990 10 месяцев назад +2

    Allah created us for a sublime aim to worship Him and whatever good we do in life is a kind of worship, thanks a lot for your message

  • @elmurodnumonov
    @elmurodnumonov 9 месяцев назад

    Now is my exam 😂

    • @heartz6437
      @heartz6437 8 месяцев назад

      @Mudiam_yaswanth hairband

  • @kimyoongi7733
    @kimyoongi7733 10 месяцев назад

    Tomorrow is my exam wish me luck

    • @heartz6437
      @heartz6437 8 месяцев назад +1

      luck!

    • @kimyoongi7733
      @kimyoongi7733 8 месяцев назад

      @@heartz6437 ahh thank you I already got the scores I wanted

  • @cirrussaravia1176
    @cirrussaravia1176 6 месяцев назад

    Tomorrow is my test day 😢

  • @mahsayarizadeh7373
    @mahsayarizadeh7373 6 месяцев назад

    I have a question, how can 2030 and 2040 be two decades??? It's one decade from 2030 to 2040

    • @FasTrackIELTS
      @FasTrackIELTS  6 месяцев назад

      The latest information is for 2020, right? From 2020 to 2040 is two decades ;)

  • @notesam3698
    @notesam3698 9 месяцев назад

    where did the 8 percent come from

  • @FATHEEL123
    @FATHEEL123 3 месяца назад

    But isn't a lengthy? Bcz they just demand 150 words and you presented it in 255 words.

    • @FasTrackIELTS
      @FasTrackIELTS  3 месяца назад

      150 words is the minimum and high-scoring answers (8-9) are often longer, especially when the chart is complex. For most students, however, I recommend targeting 170-190 words

  • @sajeendranrajakumar5957
    @sajeendranrajakumar5957 8 месяцев назад

    Is it ok to write 250 words for task 1

    • @FasTrackIELTS
      @FasTrackIELTS  8 месяцев назад

      High-scoring answers are often longer. However, for most students, I'd recommend writing 170-190 words to have more time to think and check your answer

  • @ctimshorts_
    @ctimshorts_ 10 месяцев назад

    Hi there, I gave my ielts exam in Bangladesh and i got overall 5.0, speaking 4.5, reading 4.5.I want to give again ielts exam in uk, I need 5.5 , I have only one week, my grammar not good, please how i improve it one week, i am very depressed now. Please reply my comment.

  • @maryamseif2910
    @maryamseif2910 10 месяцев назад +1

    Isn't 255 words too much for task 1? Will it deminish my score if I write as much as this sample?

    • @straytan78
      @straytan78 10 месяцев назад +1

      yes I think so about 200 is fine for task 1. I got band 7 in writing recently

    • @FasTrackIELTS
      @FasTrackIELTS  10 месяцев назад +2

      No, it won't reduce your score and high-scoring answers (Band 8-9) are often longer. However, for those who are not yet fluent, I recommend targeting 170-200 words as writing more takes more time, which you don't have

  • @a7meds7d61
    @a7meds7d61 6 месяцев назад

    My exam after month and I think it is not enough time 😢

    • @FasTrackIELTS
      @FasTrackIELTS  6 месяцев назад

      Have you downloaded our free study plan? It'll give you step-by-step plan to prepare in one month ;) It's linked in the video description and on the channel page

    • @a7meds7d61
      @a7meds7d61 6 месяцев назад

      @FasTrackIELTS OK I saw your course you said you make it in writing and speaking but the problem how I can know my mistake in writing I need teacher to correct me

  • @A-ash1998
    @A-ash1998 10 месяцев назад +1

    ❤❤❤❤

  • @healthwithdr.sehrish5380
    @healthwithdr.sehrish5380 5 месяцев назад

    she over-complicated this task and way too lengthy.

  • @opeyemibadirat6582
    @opeyemibadirat6582 10 месяцев назад

    Please kindly help vet my work @Asiya. Thanks in anticipation.