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  • @amirreza9717
    @amirreza9717 10 дней назад +5

    Hello Lilie,
    This might be cliché, but it’s the very first comment I’ve ever made on RUclips. I found your channel and watched your videos just a few days before my exam. I was only hoping for a 6.5 because I thought I had bombed it. I was so stressed during the exam, and I didn’t even have an extra minute when I rushed through my writing at the end-but I got a surprising 8! I couldn’t believe my eyes. Thank you, thank you, thank you a thousand times! You’ve cracked the code on all the points that ACTUALLY matter in writing. It’s really not about all those fancy ideas that everyone thinks are crucial. You are an amazing person, and you deserve all the success for the videos you make. Lots of respect from Iran. 🙏🏼💙

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  10 дней назад +1

      Amazing, congratulations!

    • @amirreza9717
      @amirreza9717 10 дней назад +4

      @@LilieIELTS thank you 😇😇😇
      These are all my scores
      L 9
      R 8
      W 8
      S 7.5
      I had always thought that writing would be my lowest score 😄😄😄

  • @ЖанелБакытжан
    @ЖанелБакытжан Месяц назад +15

    hello, i got my results a week ago and got 7 in writing only with your videos. and also 8.5 in reading with your strategies. overall: 7.5
    thank you!

  • @rosmidavis9750
    @rosmidavis9750 19 дней назад +4

    Hey lilie today I got my ielts result.i scored overall band 7
    Reading 8
    Listening 7.5
    Speaking 6
    Writing 6.5
    And the most surprising thing is that I didn't complete the task 1. Additionaly my task 2 is a simple essay with no many complex vocabs .I Just followed your paragraphing techniques and got a 6.5 even without completing task 1.Thank u
    Thanks a lot.
    Hey guys just read the essays in her website. It is organised very well and there are many type of questions.
    And pray hard...all the best for upcoming candidates.

  • @user-zj4tx9xv1k
    @user-zj4tx9xv1k Месяц назад +6

    Hi Lilie! I just got my results last night and got 7.5 in writting! All big thanks to your tips in writting- I made a mistake of writting "the remaining" categories without ever mentioning their names at all from a bar chart but still got a 7.5 🥰
    I got an overall 8 🤗
    Listening 8.5, Reading 8, Writting 7.5, Speaking 7.5
    From all of the online lesson services, youtube videos, I could only say yours was the easiest to understand for writting. Ty so much!!! 😭

    • @nargizaslanova6849
      @nargizaslanova6849 Месяц назад

      Hello! Congratulations! I hope I can get the same results as you! Can you share your strategy regarding writing? I am really struggling and my exam is in 4 days. I almost write essays from task 2 every day, however, I don't see much progress:(. I am really scared.

    • @user-zj4tx9xv1k
      @user-zj4tx9xv1k Месяц назад

      ​@nargizaslanova6849
      A few things I kept in mind when I did my writting (while panicking 😅):
      Task 1 (not for maps or cycles):
      Avoid repetitions (what is already written in general paragraph doesn't need to be repeated in details)
      Organize + generalize
      - categorize what is similar. "Increase, decrease, etc." Write them in a sentence or two.
      - You can even write smth like "A and B increased slightly, but C skyrocketted from X to Y". I wrote smth like this for details paragraph + it fufills the need for comparison.
      Task 2:
      "Highlight" what is essential on the task
      exp: The government should make a "public transport" that is "free" and works "24/7" to "reduce traffic". Do you agree or disagree?
      "This will need to be explained and mentioned"
      Use example-led paragraph (A USEFUL TIP FROM LILIE 😭) basically explaining something using an example.
      Make your main topic clear in the first sentence
      Exp: making public transport that works 24/7 will help reduce traffic because bla bla bla
      Also try to make only 1 main topic in each paragraph (another useful tip from Lilie 🤗)

    • @nargizaslanova6849
      @nargizaslanova6849 Месяц назад

      @@user-zj4tx9xv1k Thanks a lot! I was asking how you practiced at home actually. 😅

    • @user-zj4tx9xv1k
      @user-zj4tx9xv1k Месяц назад

      ​@@nargizaslanova6849
      Pretty much similar to what you said, writting everyday. 😅
      Without anyone to examine my practices, I compared model answers to mine for task 1 (comparing your OVERVIEW with the model answer is essential)
      However, task 2 is a different story because ideas can vary person to person. So I only examined my answer by checking if I have fufilled the essential points (the ones I listed for task 2 previously)

    • @WeldonNieee
      @WeldonNieee 22 дня назад

      @@user-zj4tx9xv1kty to share your practical skills !hope i can get better grades than last time 😊

  • @Fa-vd1to
    @Fa-vd1to Месяц назад +2

    Hello Lilie, thank you for all of your videos! Your channel is literaly gold mine for those preparing to exam!

  • @rounab8853
    @rounab8853 Месяц назад +4

    Hi! I used your strategies for reading and writing and got 9 and 7 respectively, my overall is 8! Thank you so much for the helpful tips ❤️

  • @lengan156
    @lengan156 Месяц назад +1

    Hi Lilie, I watched all your videos in two weeks before the exam and I got 7.5 overall on my first attempt thanks to your strategies. Thank you so much!

  • @naginikp6965
    @naginikp6965 20 дней назад +1

    Hi Lilie!! I just got my results. Now I got 7 in writing . A huge thanks to you. I watched all of your videos twice it was very helpful so that now I can do my further studies again thank u so much !!!!

  • @ALiBaBa7uz
    @ALiBaBa7uz 9 дней назад +1

    Hello Lilie.
    Since i started to prepare for IELTS, i had two months before the main exam. I had to get 7 band score at least for my job prospects and thankfully i got 7 overall. Within this period of time, i used your techniques, learnt a lot from your videos. Actually, they are so practical and easy to understand. I want to express gratitude and thank you with all my heart 🙏. May God bless you in all phases of your life. 😊

  • @maiphuongnguyen4907
    @maiphuongnguyen4907 Месяц назад +1

    ready for my upcoming mock test!!!! Thank you so much, I've learned many new things since I watched ur videos

  • @nivbible5993
    @nivbible5993 Месяц назад +4

    Please create more videoss

  • @UrfavRed.
    @UrfavRed. Месяц назад +4

    My exam is on 24th aug. Thank you lilie this will b so helpful!!!

    • @ALiBaBa7uz
      @ALiBaBa7uz Месяц назад +1

      I am also taking on that day, wish you luck 😊

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Месяц назад

      Good luck!!

    • @ALiBaBa7uz
      @ALiBaBa7uz Месяц назад

      @@LilieIELTS thanks a lot 😊

    • @UrfavRed.
      @UrfavRed. Месяц назад

      @@ALiBaBa7uz good luck!! We r going to do greattt.

    • @ALiBaBa7uz
      @ALiBaBa7uz Месяц назад +1

      @@UrfavRed. Yeah, sure. Thanks 👍

  • @izbasaraitugan5333
    @izbasaraitugan5333 Месяц назад +1

    my queen please wish me luck! i am going to pass my exam in 2 weeks! i will use your writing and reading methods!

    • @EESQUAD-y9d
      @EESQUAD-y9d Месяц назад

      Good luck from me! I will take the probe of exam in September-October
      I want to watch how will i succeed in it and what i need to practice more, but generally i planned to take it in April

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Месяц назад +1

      Good luck!!

  • @ugurercan3944
    @ugurercan3944 Месяц назад +1

    thanks for advices and crucial informations your chanel has a huge importance for me

  • @evamendes-s9m
    @evamendes-s9m 24 дня назад

    Hi Lilie!! I got the score I needed, your videos were really helpful to me. I admire you a lot! God bless you!!!

  • @이영진-t6x
    @이영진-t6x 29 дней назад +1

    Hello. your videos, including your tips and advice, are wonderful and helpful. Please, keep uploading many types of videos for other IELTS candidates. Thank you so much.

  • @anoushkap4368
    @anoushkap4368 16 дней назад

    Hi Lilie I just got my results ! Got 8 overall with L 9, R 8.5, W 7, S 7. Thank you so much for your writing tips! They really helped me get this result ❤.

  • @Np_ak
    @Np_ak Месяц назад +7

    My exam is on August 17 😃🎇👇👇👇

    • @jenniferakoto3758
      @jenniferakoto3758 Месяц назад +1

      All the best 🎉.

    • @Np_ak
      @Np_ak Месяц назад

      @@jenniferakoto3758 thankyou 💗💗

    • @PrakritiBk-y7s
      @PrakritiBk-y7s Месяц назад +1

      us bro us

    • @Np_ak
      @Np_ak Месяц назад

      @@PrakritiBk-y7s hjr KAHA dekhi ho?
      Hjr pni IELTS preparation gardai hunu hunxa ke?

    • @PrakritiBk-y7s
      @PrakritiBk-y7s Месяц назад

      @@Np_ak yeah ktm ho sathi

  • @musyokachristine4678
    @musyokachristine4678 4 дня назад

    Watched this today in the morning, only to find the exact same writing line graph in my test... I just downloaded all of it from my memory... only thecountry had been replaced with a particular country.

  • @simranjitsingh3850
    @simranjitsingh3850 17 дней назад

    Hey lilie thank you so much i got 9 in reading and 8.5 in listening becoz of your videos

  • @Hiskyyang
    @Hiskyyang Месяц назад

    Hi Lilie, thank you so much.
    I got 6.5 in total. If I had studied your videos earlier, I am confident to get a higher score. But 6.5 is enough for at present.
    Thanks so much.

  • @alanemechinenyenwa7925
    @alanemechinenyenwa7925 Месяц назад

    Hey Lillie, thank you for your tips!

  • @Ilya_012
    @Ilya_012 21 день назад

    Lilie, genuinly i did not believe people here, but thanks to you I actually got 7.5 in writing. Got my results today

    • @Ilya_012
      @Ilya_012 21 день назад

      Thank you so much, if not you i could not do it myself

  • @diva1733
    @diva1733 24 дня назад

    Thank you so much Lilie, I just got my results today
    W - 7.5
    S - 8.0
    L - 8.5
    R - 9.0
    Overall 8.5 (my first try)
    You techniques really helped me, thank you so much. ❤

  • @AnandAbbigeri-vu1sq
    @AnandAbbigeri-vu1sq Месяц назад

    Hi Lillie ,
    Wanted to thank you for your true strategies , really helpful, keep up the amazing work , wish you the best

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Месяц назад

      @@AnandAbbigeri-vu1sq thank u😊

    • @pietacliched158
      @pietacliched158 Месяц назад

      ​@@LilieIELTSI am fervently and earnestly requesting you to upload q task 2 writing of band 7.5 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😢😢🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 please I'm sincerely requesting you 🙏🙏🙏🙏😢

  • @yasirarfat786
    @yasirarfat786 Месяц назад

    Hi lili,
    Your videos are very meaningful and informative.
    I want to request you to post videos regularly also about new topics and trends that are getting introduced.😊

  • @tobi_004
    @tobi_004 Месяц назад +3

    Guys, I have already booked IELTS test for 14th of September. I'm worrying💀 Wish me luck, please❤

    • @rreverde
      @rreverde Месяц назад +1

      good luck,hope u will get 7+

    • @samodgamer2012
      @samodgamer2012 Месяц назад

      ​@@rreverdehlo where are you from

    • @rreverde
      @rreverde Месяц назад

      @@samodgamer2012 why?

    • @samodgamer2012
      @samodgamer2012 Месяц назад

      @@rreverde just because of quriosity

    • @samodgamer2012
      @samodgamer2012 Месяц назад

      Im preparing for my ielts examination so if you can help me to make my English better

  • @evamendes-s9m
    @evamendes-s9m 24 дня назад

    Thank you LIlie!!!!

  • @zeinabgholamnejad1670
    @zeinabgholamnejad1670 28 дней назад

    Thanks 😊 please make more videos ❤

  • @جوادعماره
    @جوادعماره Месяц назад +2

    Hi Lillie, why we didnot use "by age group, and i think your strategy is a little bit different in this graph than we used to

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Месяц назад

      by age group and age distribution both work

  • @miss.sharminakterunkotgp-tu6qp
    @miss.sharminakterunkotgp-tu6qp Месяц назад

    Our Queen ❤❤❤

  • @hariprasath8818
    @hariprasath8818 27 дней назад +1

    Can you discuss the strategy for advantages and disadvantages type of question ?

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  27 дней назад +1

      @@hariprasath8818 I already have two videos on that topic.

  • @user-wd9mi5yk7n
    @user-wd9mi5yk7n 26 дней назад

    Lilie老師您好! 很感謝您提供各種寫作的技巧和精闢的切入觀點!
    在影片11:30處,In comparison開頭這段,淺藍色的線年齡是25-64歲,
    而不是under 14,
    這裡有疑惑,
    但根據三條年齡線的顏色配置和人口數,
    文章內容應該是正確的,
    但是圖片的折線顏色標示有誤,
    應為淺藍色是0-14,深藍色是25-64,
    想跟您確認,
    謝謝老師!!!

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  25 дней назад

      是的,我做图的时候把颜色标错了,文章里面写的是对的

  • @JohnsonNong
    @JohnsonNong Месяц назад +1

    hi Lilie! your English speaking is so fluent! how can u do that?

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Месяц назад +1

      by reading a script😁

    • @JohnsonNong
      @JohnsonNong Месяц назад

      @@LilieIELTS ah huh really? no way

  • @elifdemirkol859
    @elifdemirkol859 Месяц назад +1

    The colours dont sut with the explanation? Or am I wrong?

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Месяц назад +1

      I colored the graph incorrectly when creating the graph but what I wrote in the essay is correct.

  • @yurina1954
    @yurina1954 Месяц назад

    Hi Lilie, please make more videos for listening MCQ.

  • @umairkhan-xm7fd
    @umairkhan-xm7fd Месяц назад

    This is treasure ❤

  • @lalala-sf8yv
    @lalala-sf8yv Месяц назад +1

    oh i am first 🥰🥰🥰 thanks

  • @AnishaMeche
    @AnishaMeche 21 день назад

    Hi Lilie thank you so much can you please suggest how to improve vocabulary and where to read articles

  • @yurina1954
    @yurina1954 Месяц назад +1

    Just to acknowledge, I think you got wrong with under 16 group and 25-64 group. Apart from that, I rlly like your essay structure, Lilie.

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Месяц назад +1

      @@yurina1954 i colored the chart incorrectly but what i wrote in the essay is correct

  • @AlbertaGodsluv
    @AlbertaGodsluv 8 дней назад

    Hello Lillie, I’ve watched almost all yr videos and haven’t seen any abt the advantages and disadvantages, causes and solution or problems and solutions. Kindly do videos or tell me where I can find them if u have already done that.Thanks

  • @MrBringlove
    @MrBringlove Месяц назад +1

    I am curious that can we assume it "2024" while it is "2020" as shown in the chart?

  • @starzeyel
    @starzeyel Месяц назад

    Hi Lillie, quick note. Did you mix up the colors when describing the the proportion of those under 14? The 25-64 group should be 30% in 1960 not under 14.

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Месяц назад

      I colored the graph incorrectly when creating the graph but what I wrote in the essay is correct.

  • @anastasiakutateladze5653
    @anastasiakutateladze5653 Месяц назад +2

    This is so true, my brother took the exam a few years ago and got a 6.5 in writing. He went into the exam blind and had no idea that he had to write an overview at all, he also said that he wrote two paragraphs instead of four and reported every detail but still got a decent score.

  • @Simple_a18
    @Simple_a18 25 дней назад

    Hi Lillie ❤❤
    Can you please tell which sources did you use for reading?????
    What did you do to improve your reading?!?!?
    Can you please do video about Cambridge 19 readings!?! They are so difficult for me. My exam soon and you know the exam level be the same as the latest Cambridge. Yesterday I did it and the results were awful. I feel so bad. Can you just do them 😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢

  • @EESQUAD-y9d
    @EESQUAD-y9d Месяц назад

    Lillie! How do you think can we group this ages by increasing and decreasing?
    I mean in the first paragraph we write about people who over 65
    In the second paragraph we combine 0-14 and 25-64 and write about them in one paragraph
    Can we group ages by time period?
    In one paragraph we write about all ages in the period 1960-2024 (past and present)
    In one paragraph we write about all ages in the period 2024-2040 ( future)
    Or will be it too big amount of information in one paragraph?

  • @aytensalmanova5451
    @aytensalmanova5451 8 часов назад

    Can someone say why she use 2024? While there is no 2024 in graph

  • @youtuberboy005
    @youtuberboy005 Месяц назад

    Make a video about the speaking part.

  • @РасулКапезов-з8д
    @РасулКапезов-з8д 17 дней назад

    What app you use for reading practice in your videos?

  • @ngocthuyduongta813
    @ngocthuyduongta813 Месяц назад

    (PLEASE RESPOND AS SON AS POSSIBLE)Hey Lilie, i have a question, i will take a paper exam this weekend. I had booked it before i knew your tips is taking computer exam. And i realise that writing the 2 body paragraphs first really help me to finish my essay faster.😢 what should i do now? Should i leave blank in the introduction paragraph and finish it afterward? Is it okay😢

  • @ta2mscribbles
    @ta2mscribbles Месяц назад

    You have written the Summary on the first part.. would it be okay to have that pattern during the exam?

  • @samodgamer2012
    @samodgamer2012 Месяц назад

    You mentioned age group are undercharged under 14 and 24-64

  • @RiyaShrestha-qm1mv
    @RiyaShrestha-qm1mv День назад

    hello, I wanted your sites for samples of writing. tomorrow is my exam

  • @Tenger-ErdeneBattulga
    @Tenger-ErdeneBattulga Месяц назад

    Guys should i give paper based or computer based. Could you give me some advice

  • @yourvibz_
    @yourvibz_ Месяц назад

    Hi Lillie ! I hope you reply to this comment first of all I want to say thanks as I’ve scored 9 for listening in my mock test and I’m doing well in other modules as well but I’m struggling in reading even though I followed your tips I’m stuck at 6 in reading I’m not able to locate answer perfectly what should I do ? :(

  • @bahar897
    @bahar897 Месяц назад

    Lillie you are amazing! Can you help me😢 I usually get 7 in CC and TR but in Grammar and vocabulary 6 or 6.5. Pleaaaaaase make a video for getting7 in them ❤❤❤❤❤

    • @Princess-k4w
      @Princess-k4w Месяц назад

      Please tell me how uh organise ur CC AND TR becoz i only get 5 in that plz help me

    • @bahar897
      @bahar897 23 дня назад

      ​@@Princess-k4w
      In short, I would say answer the question exactly as it asks and then support it with related ideas, without deviating from what the question demands.

  • @chinnu_cj
    @chinnu_cj Месяц назад

    looking beautiful 😘

  • @prasunlama9496
    @prasunlama9496 День назад

    I have myexam tummorow and m scared~

  • @Flyingbabbu
    @Flyingbabbu Месяц назад +1

    Hi 👋

  • @emeeneeenee
    @emeeneeenee Месяц назад

    i really wanna join your 3 day challenge but i cant pay with dollar currency' , can i pay you with euro instead ?? like 1 euro instead of 1 dollar

  • @TrangPhạm-q3l
    @TrangPhạm-q3l Месяц назад

    I just had an IELTS test on 8/8 and I also messed up my task 1 TT

  • @AbhiSaini-w9h
    @AbhiSaini-w9h Месяц назад

    Hello mam kindly give me some sentence structure for task 1

  • @badrelhaitout1386
    @badrelhaitout1386 Месяц назад

    That this means that we could work with templates to try to finish fastely in task 1 since they don't focus on it a lot during examination ?

    • @user-so3en9ke1f
      @user-so3en9ke1f Месяц назад +2

      I advise you to first complete task 2 then task 1

  • @adhamjon_norkulov
    @adhamjon_norkulov 16 дней назад

    Hi Lillie, is there any chance I can connect with u, I have an upcoming test in 23the September, I just need ur tips for speaking and if it possible writing would be good. Plz sir, this is solely my final opportunity.

  • @Filmi.994
    @Filmi.994 Месяц назад

    Lille, ur 3day challenge course price is now 999$, why? Please change it soon.😢

  • @MrBringlove
    @MrBringlove Месяц назад +1

    It is "Japan has been aging rapidly" or "Japan's population has been aging rapidly?"

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Месяц назад

      @@MrBringlove both are correct

    • @EESQUAD-y9d
      @EESQUAD-y9d Месяц назад

      i suppose second will be more correct

    • @MrBringlove
      @MrBringlove Месяц назад +1

      @@EESQUAD-y9d oh she is right. I have checked again and know that this is the shorthand technique which is relatively common in writing. For example, it is believed that France won in the Olympics 2024, which means people of the country won it, not the country. It is like metaphor.

    • @EESQUAD-y9d
      @EESQUAD-y9d Месяц назад

      @@MrBringlove ok i will remember, thx

  • @daniofficial5002
    @daniofficial5002 Месяц назад +1

    How wonderful Explanation, But I think in details 2 must be the proportion of the population aged 25-64 and details 3 must be the proportion of the population aged under 14, you got switched by the color.

    • @pastelpearls_
      @pastelpearls_ Месяц назад

      Yes.. I was thinking the same 👍

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Месяц назад +3

      I labeled the age groups incorrectly when recreating the graph, but what I wrote in the essay is correct.

  • @pietacliched158
    @pietacliched158 Месяц назад +1

    Please write a Task 2 of band 7.5 please Please 🙏 😢 🙏🙏🙏🙏 @lilie 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😭😭😭🙏🙏🙏🙏 🙏🙏🙏Please 🙏🙏🙏🙏

  • @РисолатЛутфуллаева

    Hello do u have telegram channel?

  • @kaandoganknd
    @kaandoganknd Месяц назад

    How can i contact you ? Email ?

  • @Iamtrishna8
    @Iamtrishna8 18 дней назад

    Lilie can I get 7, watching your all videos within 2 days.🫥