"Stratagem" - Lackadaisy: An Example Of Perfect Dialogue

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  • Опубликовано: 20 окт 2024

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  • @SecondTimeVA
    @SecondTimeVA 8 месяцев назад +1880

    Stratagem had no reason to be that entertaining

    • @TrueLocalEnthusiast
      @TrueLocalEnthusiast  8 месяцев назад +96

      THAT'S WHAT I'M SAYING!

    • @SecondTimeVA
      @SecondTimeVA 8 месяцев назад +31

      @@TrueLocalEnthusiast I honestly think I prefer it over the Rocky and Freckle short

    • @Stroodle_dus_Doodles
      @Stroodle_dus_Doodles 8 месяцев назад +16

      It was only like a minute.
      *and Mordecai and Viktors dynamic ate the entire time.*

    • @SecondTimeVA
      @SecondTimeVA 8 месяцев назад +2

      @@Stroodle_dus_Doodles REAL

    • @glamrockfoxy6667
      @glamrockfoxy6667 8 месяцев назад

      Because Morcedai and Viktor is my favorite

  • @lucasjuliard4929
    @lucasjuliard4929 8 месяцев назад +1464

    Imo, Mordecai was clearly losing so he pissed off Viktor on purpose!

    • @garg4531
      @garg4531 8 месяцев назад +380

      I read a comment of someone who analyzed the chess board and said he *was* losing, slowly, with no way to win, so he tricked Viktor into literally throwing the game

    • @athens5664
      @athens5664 8 месяцев назад +126

      @@garg4531 Damn, what amazing attention to detail!

    • @fireknight4151
      @fireknight4151 8 месяцев назад +118

      @@garg4531 Oh man amazing detail to the Lackacrew. This shows that Mordicai is a poor sport and possibly gives some foreshadowing for his potential defeat in the future

    • @ashtimbog
      @ashtimbog 8 месяцев назад +32

      @@garg4531i tried putting the game onto a board, it's pretty hard to do but i've found a few issues with the game. eg. the queens are not on the same file. it's also extremely early in the opening

    • @mrexists5400
      @mrexists5400 8 месяцев назад

      Respect the bong cloud opening

  • @blytheanneliese5408
    @blytheanneliese5408 8 месяцев назад +1512

    You know it's good when every line has depth and character behind it

    • @TrueLocalEnthusiast
      @TrueLocalEnthusiast  8 месяцев назад +88

      Definitely the best way to keep dialogue interesting

    • @lazybones8962
      @lazybones8962 8 месяцев назад +18

      it's genius from a animation standpoint, they can have lots of information in one short film, saving resources with the power of good writing
      Take notes spindlehorse

    • @wolfyakubo148
      @wolfyakubo148 8 месяцев назад +1

      if you read the comics you'd know they have history, If you know you know

    • @ethanlyons3571
      @ethanlyons3571 8 месяцев назад +5

      @@lazybones8962 When you apply the rule of 'no swearing' or 'use swearing sparingly' to writing dialogue for characters, creative limitations can be resourceful to add depth into interaction, resort to how each react to one's response instead of constant F-words like teenagers.
      Fun fact: This actually happened with Will Smith at the age 12 when he began rapping. After his grandmother found his lyric notebook and notices that it contains profanity, she then added a note for him in the book that reads:
      "Dear Willard, truly intelligent people do not have to use words like this to express themselves. Please show the world that you're as smart as we think you are".
      Thanks to her feedback, The Prince of Bel Air theme song sings like poetry, hence a timeless classic!

  • @IronycheinPain
    @IronycheinPain 8 месяцев назад +1016

    actually, it's funnier when you realize that Viktor's move actually won him the game (i dont remember who said it, but the end result was going to be Mordecai slowly losing their pieces if the game went on. that's probably why Mordecai started insulting Viktor by naming strategies because he was baffled that he lost to a guy he couldn't think was intelligent enough to beat him)

    • @TrueLocalEnthusiast
      @TrueLocalEnthusiast  8 месяцев назад +150

      That's actually really cool!

    • @gaopinghu7332
      @gaopinghu7332 8 месяцев назад +26

      It's not. These are merely the first moves. If anything, it could be a sign of how much Mordecai demands from everyone else. To be absolutely perfect, even in such an irrelevant time.

    • @IronycheinPain
      @IronycheinPain 8 месяцев назад +60

      @@gaopinghu7332 two things:
      1. three pieces have been taken in the game
      2. you can end a game with 3 moves at keast

    • @gaopinghu7332
      @gaopinghu7332 8 месяцев назад +20

      ​@@IronycheinPain I can tell you that I am a 1744 elo player, who peaked at 1789, well above, even now, the 99 percentile.
      It's not. 3 pieces are nothing, in the grand scheme of chess.
      And while a chess game _can_ end in 2 moves, that's only if your opponent intentionally does it. It's never going to happen. Especially with Mordecai.

    • @anosmibell6473
      @anosmibell6473 8 месяцев назад +17

      ​@gaopinghu7332 Hey, since you're a more experienced player at chess than I am maybe you can clear up something that's been bothering me. We see from black's perspective (Viktor) that the queens are on the left and the kings on the right, but shouldn't that be reversed? On the same note, isn't the board sideways? Every reference I could find show the board square colors inverted compared to how they are in the short. (I think, like I said I'm no expert which is why I thought I'd ask)

  • @broskydoodle6697
    @broskydoodle6697 8 месяцев назад +678

    Lackadaisy's strength, aside from its breathtaking art and animation, has always been it's dialogue for SURE

  • @garg4531
    @garg4531 8 месяцев назад +314

    There’s also his delivery of the line “…Checkers??” along with an expression to match, and notably how his brow furrows and he glares in annoyance before saying it.
    And let’s not forget his brilliant remark at the end, with the two looking over to the bystander lying on the ground after being struck by the chess board, with Mordecai commenting “I wonder why the ballistic aspect of this game was never formalized”, with the two of them showing a complete of concern for the guy.

    • @princessthyemis
      @princessthyemis 8 месяцев назад +11

      “I wonder why the ballistic aspect of this game was never formalized”....haha!!! That's a genius line XD

  • @hyperdreamer9483
    @hyperdreamer9483 8 месяцев назад +275

    Honestly these two were way more fun to watch than I expected. Two emotional distant characters just bouncing off each other is so freaking funny to see especially when everything else about them is opposite

    • @TrueLocalEnthusiast
      @TrueLocalEnthusiast  8 месяцев назад +33

      Agree 100% on that one, they seem like friends who insult each other for giggles

    • @hyperdreamer9483
      @hyperdreamer9483 8 месяцев назад +17

      @@TrueLocalEnthusiast Yeah the two have definitely worked together for awhile, though I think later it was revealed that Mor broke Victor’s legs but I could be remembering that wrong

    • @Rid_Of_Thee
      @Rid_Of_Thee 8 месяцев назад +12

      ​@@hyperdreamer9483 well technically he kneecapped Victor. But yes. The Slovaks knees no longer work

    • @teamtx1578
      @teamtx1578 8 месяцев назад +6

      I always loved the little one off comics with Mordecai and Viktor. The comedy between these two is pure gold.

  • @YorkJonhson
    @YorkJonhson 8 месяцев назад +57

    "In a trench...." Is such a good line. Tells you so much about the character in one exchange.

  • @davejack3763
    @davejack3763 8 месяцев назад +129

    I love mordecai as a character he's abrasive and cares for little else than completing the task at hand but is bewildered and infuriated by situations he can't make sense of. It's difficult to tell in this short if he's deliberately trying to annoy victor or genuinely disgusted with his strategy because he never makes an effort to express his intention. He doesn't seem to care what other's feel he's just focused on making sense of what they think. I don't believe he's trying to belittle victor he won't give him the respect of personally disrespecting him nor would he even gain joy from doing that, he's just trying to make sense of an illogical move because he's annoyed by things he doesn't understand.
    Great pair the most disrespectful character and the most irate character. Lackadaisy could be a dedicated sitcom with just these two.

    • @davejack3763
      @davejack3763 8 месяцев назад +12

      Mordecai definitely expresses how he feels but I think it's only to further relish in his own ego, not because he wants to get his thoughts across to whoever he's conversing with.

  • @ItzzzBeamo
    @ItzzzBeamo 8 месяцев назад +24

    What I love about whats revealed here is how the characters are approaching chess.
    Mordecai sees it as a challenge in mental acuity, via a game. He wants to pick apart the strategy, see what kind of play is currently besting him (because it absolutely is).
    Viktor, having learned chess during the war, probably treats it *like* he’d treat anything else during the war. As a battle. And you do not tell your enemy what your strategy is, thats common sense in a war. Don’t expose weak points, don’t negotiate.
    Then of course, Mordecai resorts to winning via a ragequit.

  • @rhymenoceros3303
    @rhymenoceros3303 8 месяцев назад +413

    Man the indie animation scene is so good right now. Hazbin, Lackadaisy, Digital Circus and many more. Can't wait to see them all.

    • @TrueLocalEnthusiast
      @TrueLocalEnthusiast  8 месяцев назад +23

      I KNOW RIGHT!

    • @josephholt4736
      @josephholt4736 8 месяцев назад +18

      Hazbin Hotel isn't indie anymore.

    • @kingofwaffles13
      @kingofwaffles13 8 месяцев назад +6

      Helluva Boss*

    • @ItsAmaliaB
      @ItsAmaliaB 8 месяцев назад +8

      lackadaisy absolutely CLEARS its not even close

    • @bjwill9047
      @bjwill9047 8 месяцев назад +16

      ⁠@@ItsAmaliaBpeople have opinions, there all good. For lackadaisy I’m expecting good things but I need to see at least another episode outside of the pilot to say it clears.
      Though if we’re talking animation easy dub

  • @gamerstheater1187
    @gamerstheater1187 8 месяцев назад +132

    I always assumed it was just two best friends insulting each other

    • @josephperez2004
      @josephperez2004 8 месяцев назад +14

      From my very loose understanding, Viktor and Mordecai used to work as muscle for the same boss. They learned to work together to survive, but had very different outlooks on life that cause them to irritate each other but never to the extent they refuse to cooperate because they don't have that luxury in their line of work.

  • @SnarkNSass
    @SnarkNSass 8 месяцев назад +320

    Cats are devious and always plotting their next move. 😼

    • @TrueLocalEnthusiast
      @TrueLocalEnthusiast  8 месяцев назад +25

      You never lied XD

    • @garg4531
      @garg4531 8 месяцев назад +12

      You can really see it with Mordecai’s tail constantly swishing behind him

    • @Sagittarial-A-
      @Sagittarial-A- 8 месяцев назад +8

      Reading this as my roommate's cat just jumped face first into a door. Clearly devious creatures.

    • @SnarkNSass
      @SnarkNSass 8 месяцев назад +2

      @@Sagittarial-A- there are always outliers 😹

  • @Fanartist-Kitty
    @Fanartist-Kitty 8 месяцев назад +61

    It shows that victor has more of the thinking now in the moment to survive and Mordecai think ahead, they will play well of each other.

  • @taqresu5865
    @taqresu5865 8 месяцев назад +59

    If you read the comics, you will in fact see these two have some history together and will see their dynamic play out in a number of comics. Some of them are even voiced by their VAs on the Lackadaisy channel.

    • @TrueLocalEnthusiast
      @TrueLocalEnthusiast  8 месяцев назад +14

      Looks like I have some comics to read...

    • @taqresu5865
      @taqresu5865 8 месяцев назад +1

      @@TrueLocalEnthusiast On the Lackadaisy channel, you can watch Lackadaisy Massacre / Valentine / Quick Fix.
      It's three of their short comics, voice acted as the panels are shown sequentially.

    • @ComedicLetter
      @ComedicLetter 8 месяцев назад +6

      @@TrueLocalEnthusiast read the comic.
      This is not a request

  • @litepaw7
    @litepaw7 8 месяцев назад +45

    From this interaction, we know
    - Mordecai and Victor used to be friends
    -Victor is a WW1 Veteran
    - Mordecai is a sore loser and an Overthinker
    -Mordecai is a pro in Chess
    -Victor is a Causal player of Chess
    - There's a slight chance they also set up their “argument “ to kill the Janitor with the Chess board to make it look like an accident since they are both Skilled Assasins/Hitmen

  • @kikiqt2442
    @kikiqt2442 8 месяцев назад +55

    The best part of this is that victor is “winning” the game currently. by this I mean he has taken more pieces and is playing offensively, which is a big deal considering he’s playing black. 9/10 times whoever is playing white will be offense because they always move first and start the game. I’m no chess master, I actually play like victor without an opening strategy most times, but this scene was so fun to dissect!!! 😆😆

    • @TrueLocalEnthusiast
      @TrueLocalEnthusiast  8 месяцев назад +6

      How fun, surprised I missed this XD

    • @СарраКарагозян
      @СарраКарагозян 8 месяцев назад +3

      Oooh, I figured it was the case by how worked up Mordecai was and how collected and sinister Victor's "Victor. Takes. _Your. Bishop."_ was, but was never quite certain! This is so much funnier and works even better for this comedy gold duo

    • @gaopinghu7332
      @gaopinghu7332 8 месяцев назад

      He's not winning, because on Mordecai's turn he would've recaptured. It was a trade that was delayed until the board got thrown away.
      Victor was not winning. Far from it.

    • @gaopinghu7332
      @gaopinghu7332 8 месяцев назад +2

      It's really not like that.

  • @Spark_Chaser
    @Spark_Chaser 8 месяцев назад +15

    From the web comic, Viktor and Mordecai are (were) former coworkers and friends. They worked as heavies for the Lackadaisy Speakeasy, and did it very well. Mainly this is because of their different approaches. Mordecai is precise and surgical, like a scalpel in the hands of a surgeon. Viktor is a hammer, and he's sent after nails. They do manage to drive each other up the wall on many occasions, leading to events like this, but notice they settle back and Mordecai makes a note of how well the board can be used as a thrown weapon in Viktor's hands. There's mutual respect and friendship between them. They just frustrate each other due to very different views on things.

  • @inkblooded1058
    @inkblooded1058 8 месяцев назад +9

    A big thing I loved is how Victor threw the board and Mordecai basically compliments his action, by asking why the ballistic application of Chess hadn't ever been considered. It shows a common connection to them; a underlying point of agreement. Victor is good at violence and Mordecai respects that.

  • @axlemoo
    @axlemoo 8 месяцев назад +33

    In the original comic, Mordecai and Viktor used to work together before Atlas died. So, yeah! They definitely have history 😁

  • @Splonton
    @Splonton 8 месяцев назад +29

    I literally can't hear "Mordecai and..." and not expect the second name to be Rigby 💀

  • @cryptidnip
    @cryptidnip 8 месяцев назад +6

    Lackadaisy is a *masterclass* in near perfectly written dialogue. Every single line manages to have a very specific purpose to serve, even the most simple ones.

  • @MarxistMomentum
    @MarxistMomentum 8 месяцев назад +180

    I love black cats, chess, and sophisticated men in suits. Mordecai is a sophisticated black cat who wears a suit and is a very talented and well studied chess player. We're married now!

    • @TrueLocalEnthusiast
      @TrueLocalEnthusiast  8 месяцев назад +25

      Truly the epitome of character Design XD

    • @bacht4799
      @bacht4799 8 месяцев назад +6

      Just be careful he doesn’t try to kill you …!

    • @yannydreammor3193
      @yannydreammor3193 8 месяцев назад +11

      ​@@bacht4799It's ok, you just need iron everyday your and his clothes, keep a straight cleaning routine and make strong coffee every morning. Then the two of you gonna be ok Xd

    • @nicreven
      @nicreven 6 месяцев назад

      @@bacht4799 He will!

  • @swordheartstudios
    @swordheartstudios 8 месяцев назад +16

    I was amazed with how good this short was with Mordecai and Viktor's dialogue exchange while playing chess as I find it a unique interaction between the two with the backgrounds they come from. As I always love it when writing crews for animation set up unique interactions like this for a short or a full episode.

  • @ech0lal1a
    @ech0lal1a 8 месяцев назад +15

    I was introduced to lackadaisy through the pilot, so i was very surprised to see how angry mordecai got in the comic. Im glad to see more of that here!

  • @camerondavids2481
    @camerondavids2481 8 месяцев назад +7

    Back in the first world war, most of the life of an average soldier consisted of months spent bored and helpless in a trench occasionally interrupted by days of wanton and abject horror.
    Since they often found themselves with lots of free time and in desperate need of distraction, soldiers would play games like cards, dice or chess.
    Viktor, see, is not an incredibly intelligent man, but he has plenty of experience with chess. As shown by how he was winning the game, despite not following any predetermined strategy that Mordecai could ever hope to find in a book.
    One of the things I respect most about Lackadaisy is how well studied and recreated the time period is, not for the sake of being pedantic but for the sake of being faithful. Like how this neat little fun fact is actually used as a component of a character, while also being a set up for a well written gag tastefully played for laughs.

  • @dontlookatme6395
    @dontlookatme6395 8 месяцев назад +3

    Tracy Butler is a BEAST at dialogue in the Lackadaisy comic, it flows so naturally and authentically. Pair that with great characterization and solid research of the world of that time and you get a fantastically enriched webcomic.

  • @beathecat6604
    @beathecat6604 8 месяцев назад +8

    This exchange is really heightened when you know both of their backgrounds. Viktor grew up on a farm in Austria-Hungary, and the war very well could’ve been his introduction to chess overall. While the war was terrible and Viktor has serious problems from it, there was a moment of reprieve (to him), or at least an opportunity to gain from it. Mordecai grew up impoverished in New York City, where he and his family were subject to the disgusting and unsanitary conditions of the time. His first remark “in a cave” is him trying to gain superiority over Viktor, yes, but his doubling down “in the dirt” very well could be a sign of Mordecai’s own feelings of inferiority due to his upbringing (something he tries to distance himself from). Chess, considered a game of brains, is something Mordecai wants to take pride in and revel in a strategized defeat, while Viktor isn’t really overthinking it, instead going with the most simple and straightforward approach he can muster.
    Excellent video, I’m so glad Tracy’s writing and pacing are being recognized by a wider audience! If you want to see more Viktor and Mordecai, her mini comics with them are pure gold, filled with the same comedic clashes seen here. Can’t wait to see more of your analysis on Lackadaisy!

  • @ZephLodwick
    @ZephLodwick 8 месяцев назад +4

    Came for an analysis of dialogue, stayed for the _Walking with Dinosaurs_ music in the background. I sure hope i'm not the only person to appreciate your nod.

  • @singingcrow439
    @singingcrow439 8 месяцев назад +2

    They actually do know each other.
    Lackadaisy made some animatics featuring these two.
    They are called "lackadaisy massacure, valintino, quick fix."

  • @TrueLocalEnthusiast
    @TrueLocalEnthusiast  8 месяцев назад +18

    Keeping up with the daily uploads and I feel FRESH AS A DAISY!

  • @Nightlight_EditZ
    @Nightlight_EditZ 8 месяцев назад +61

    I never thought that a 1 min long video of two cats playing chess could be so entertaining for me.

    • @TrueLocalEnthusiast
      @TrueLocalEnthusiast  8 месяцев назад +5

      It's amazing what can be accomplished in a minute with good story telling

    • @Nightlight_EditZ
      @Nightlight_EditZ 8 месяцев назад

      @@TrueLocalEnthusiast Ikr. It was so goooodd!

  • @nateharder2286
    @nateharder2286 8 месяцев назад +6

    They do have history together. They worked as hitmen for Mitzi's husband before his death.

  • @garrettviewegh9028
    @garrettviewegh9028 8 месяцев назад +3

    Indie cartoons have been cooking lately, and man is it good.

  • @herothecrow994
    @herothecrow994 8 месяцев назад +4

    I love how Mordecai lists a dozen high-level plays Viktor could be doing, then realizes who he’s playing with and goes “…checkers?”

  • @mx_nana_banana
    @mx_nana_banana 8 месяцев назад +2

    this animation also shows the difference between the people in charge, and the people in the trenches actually experiencing it all

  • @thewebsurfer2919
    @thewebsurfer2919 8 месяцев назад +3

    “I wonder why the ballistic aspect of this game was severed considered.” 🤣

  • @foxxyguy2681
    @foxxyguy2681 8 месяцев назад +1

    That animation made me even more hyped for Season 1 after watching it like 10 times and watching the ambience loop well on loop for an hour or two god I cannot wait for Season 1 of Lackadaisy.

  • @PotatoPatatoVonSpudsworth
    @PotatoPatatoVonSpudsworth 8 месяцев назад +3

    Lackadaisy's dialogue has always been its strongest feature.

  • @faenhi
    @faenhi 8 месяцев назад +8

    i cant believe theres already an analysis video on this short so quickly

  • @dianapl6432
    @dianapl6432 8 месяцев назад +4

    The funniest thing for me is that I was watching a video about High Guardian Spice’s terrible dialogue and got the notification of this Lackadaisy short. Decided to watch it, and got blown away with the whiplash of atrocious writing vs something that has intention and thought behind it. It really added to my experience, in a way.

  • @124myth
    @124myth 8 месяцев назад +2

    The poor guy hit with the board was ignored in the short to make it funny. I absolutely love how its still going on.

  • @xxohanzeexx
    @xxohanzeexx 8 месяцев назад +4

    I saw a lot of people in the comments of the short saying that Mordecai got annoyed cuz Viktor actually made a really good move that pinned him in a way he'd have a lot of trouble with but wouldn't lead to a clean victory for Viktor either, clean victories being something which Mordecai is also clearly more inclined towards.

    • @gaopinghu7332
      @gaopinghu7332 8 месяцев назад

      Viktor didn't have any significant advantage, at all.
      Below are the explanations of why. It's relatively complex, so maybe get yourself Google before reading.
      At best, one could say that bishop and knight are slightly better than double knights, and that now Mordecai's pawns must be doubled, reducing their effectiveness, but on the other hand it activated Mordecai's rook, which is actually quite significant.
      Overall it's very much equal. Just that Mordecai sees the value of the rook's activity, while Viktor likes bishops.

  • @JeanBeanStudios
    @JeanBeanStudios 8 месяцев назад +3

    I think that their immediate relaxation in the chair is a sign of their friendly bickering. So like- they’re the type of dudes to be ok with it if one of them had to kill the other in a zombie apocalypse.
    That kind of relationship.

  • @fluffycat2728
    @fluffycat2728 8 месяцев назад +1

    I absolutely adore Lackadaisy for soooooooo many reasons.

  • @alanabyss9246
    @alanabyss9246 8 месяцев назад +2

    Viktor is someone you don’t want to piss off

  • @Suthek
    @Suthek 8 месяцев назад +3

    I'd like to imagine that the guy they knocked out was a spy or assassin from another organisation and the whole thing was improvised to get him by surprise.

  • @emeraldphoenix5868
    @emeraldphoenix5868 8 месяцев назад +1

    Mordecai and Viktor have a really good Dynamic in this Short and I love it.
    I honestly think that Lackadaisy would be a perfect fit for either Adult Swim,Paramount+,Max,Peacock,Netflix or Hulu.

  • @mathieugervais501
    @mathieugervais501 8 месяцев назад +7

    WAIT. . . Wait. . . There is another lackadaisy where my popcorn i need to watch it

  • @denizwithz9589
    @denizwithz9589 8 месяцев назад +2

    If you look closely at the chess board you can see, that Viktor was actually winning the game. Mordecai angering him was just a tactic to not lose

  • @dspace4514
    @dspace4514 8 месяцев назад +2

    It is interesting how much depth an animation about two cats playing chess has.

  • @TheKnifeRaven
    @TheKnifeRaven 8 месяцев назад +4

    This short was masterful.

  • @mrspacy
    @mrspacy 8 месяцев назад +2

    Lackadaisy deserves the budget that Hazbin is blowing on Broadway talent

  • @ElJorro
    @ElJorro 7 месяцев назад +3

    I can't wait for the show.

  • @craz2580
    @craz2580 8 месяцев назад +13

    Hell yeah!!! I love the fact that you are able to branch out! Also i know this is your style of video, but maybe longer videos? So i can play minecraft while listening lol

  • @Thunderfox32
    @Thunderfox32 8 месяцев назад +3

    That video was so awesome! I wouldn't want to be in EITHER of those guys faces when their mad. Plus, got to hand it to Mordecai for not being fazed when Vktor threw the chess board. He just sat back all calm like "Yeah whatever."

  • @Koubles
    @Koubles 8 месяцев назад +1

    I definitely consider Lackadaisy to be (so far) the most well-written indie animation to come from RUclips of the many shows that I've seen, and has the strongest, most cohesive identity of what it wants to be from the characters, setting, dialogue, art style, and story.
    As someone who has now had the privilege of being able to work along industry-leading animation directors in the film industry, and from the insights that I have gotten looking into the indie animation pipeline; There are certain practices among good animation studios that lead to more consistently quality results that indie animation groups simply cannot and have not been able to afford. And despite that Lackadaisy has achieved what I had mentioned earlier in regards to their level of quality not just among indie animation but also against some more established studios at this point.
    I believe it's a miracle an animation with this level of quality in all aspects including writing exists online, and I do hope that Lackadaisy continues to truly impress.

  • @meganmcdonald3333
    @meganmcdonald3333 6 месяцев назад +1

    Stratagem really showed how Mordecai and Viktor’s somewhat partnership and although it was short we see how their dynamic sorta works! You have Mordecai who’s literally the brains of the operation and Viktor the brawn who gets ticked off as soon as Mordecai pulls out the intellectual card an someone gets put in a coma!🤣

  • @CharellDavis-x4z
    @CharellDavis-x4z 8 месяцев назад +1

    It’s nice to see a content creator giving more credit to these Independent Animated series. I think we could use more positive critiques. Everyone is so quick to tear down new ideas nowadays.

  • @soleo_sfx
    @soleo_sfx 8 месяцев назад

    Coming from a tweet Lackadaisy reposted, watching that analysis again makes me super happy to see how mainstream Lackadaisy has come and hasn’t fallen into the fandom that TADC fell into

  • @King_Kavin25
    @King_Kavin25 8 месяцев назад +2

    1:53 "Either they have history- "
    Meanwhile the events between then that took place before the comic (including a wide variety of murder) :
    yeah buddy they got some history together alright...

  • @LittleGoldRose
    @LittleGoldRose 8 месяцев назад +1

    I Loved It! It was so good to see Mordecai and Viktor interact more together! I swear they both have the dynamic of an Old Married Couple, arguing one minute and then forgetting about it the next. Definitely one of my Favorite Duos. I’m a Massive Lackadaisy Fan and It brings me so much Joy to see these Shorts roll out! I can’t wait to see more! 💛😻😻😻💛

  • @MewGirlZ
    @MewGirlZ 8 месяцев назад

    I love these short animations. They're basically never becore seen side comics, but animated. I love Tracy's characters and writing so much, and they shine so much in motion!

  • @naotokamigire-terumi9912
    @naotokamigire-terumi9912 8 месяцев назад +5

    I agree with you.

  • @Dejroslaw2448
    @Dejroslaw2448 8 месяцев назад +1

    To show how brutal guy victor is if it comes to work is part of flashback in comic where victor and mordecai raid a headquarters of some gang and victor literally pushes one of enemies in the furnace and burns him alive

  • @ChimeraLotietheBunny
    @ChimeraLotietheBunny 8 месяцев назад

    Best lackadaisy short and the voice acting delivery is the best

  • @inzane101room
    @inzane101room 8 месяцев назад

    I love Mordecai so much. His demeanour and voice always sounds so calculated and clever!
    Then I remember his voice actor also voices Badcomputer in Batwheels and I remember how goofy that fella is

  • @princessthyemis
    @princessthyemis 8 месяцев назад +2

    I'm just so freaking impressed by the mouth animation here!!!! It's all incredible! I tried to do my first lip sycn animation and it was awful. Obviously these guys have so much experience, and I can't wait to improve mine!! :D

  • @Ch1_p3r
    @Ch1_p3r 8 месяцев назад

    Finally a short video about this series, I've been waiting for a while, this series has great potential.

  • @whomst855
    @whomst855 8 месяцев назад

    I also like the nod of history in the "in a trench" line.
    In WWI, most of the time soldiers would wait until hell breaks loose, so many did in fact learn games such as chess to pass the time.

  • @sarahlail2516
    @sarahlail2516 8 месяцев назад

    I'd love to see more shorts of Mordecai and Viktor when they were working together, they have such an interesting dynamic

  • @brandongilbertson3552
    @brandongilbertson3552 8 месяцев назад

    The fact that this video is longer than the short itself really says something to how great the Lackadaisy team is at… well everything really.

  • @vibechecker3168
    @vibechecker3168 8 месяцев назад +2

    I don't know which nation he fought for, but he either fought in the western front in the AEF, or the Eastern front, as a Austro Hungarian in a Slovakian unit. Now that is a DIRE state of affairs, and highlights how tough and warbitten this old cat is. Also Viktor does not overthink. Viktor does to need to second guess. Viktor does.

    • @mill2712
      @mill2712 8 месяцев назад

      Considering Victor is likely a Siberian Tiger, I'd say he fought for the Russians.

  • @flyingtiger4808
    @flyingtiger4808 8 месяцев назад

    “Victor Takes Your Bishop!”
    My fav quote from the short 😂

  • @toastykabuto6720
    @toastykabuto6720 8 месяцев назад +1

    FOR SECOND I THOUGHT MARKIPLIER REACTED TO THIS

  • @Flame-rp6yq
    @Flame-rp6yq 8 месяцев назад

    also makes sense because sometimes strategy is thrown to the wind in the hardships of war, an unpredictable opponent is the most dangerous

  • @sprites4ever482
    @sprites4ever482 8 месяцев назад

    I'd like to add a few points of my own:
    - One of the most important things of visual storytelling, which the Lackadaisy artists absolutely nailed is that cartoon characters need to ACT IN CHARACTER at all times.
    From the first two lines between the two, even if you have no clue who these characters are, the most important aspects of their personalities are communicated immediately.
    Viktor is unmoving and to the point, relying on his strength to achieve his interests and while he doesn't explode immediately when provoked, he is very confident that his strength is a persuasive argument in most situations, even if he's not good with words. His strength mirrors his personality in that regard - unmoving and to the point.
    Mortdecai is scrawnier than Viktor, but not intimidated by him, as a result of both his natural superiority complex and actual experience and knowledge.
    The voice actors for both also do heavy lifting in communicating these traits.
    - The first point is essentially elaborated upon as their dialogue progresses, as Viktor insists that he's taking Mortdecai's Bishop and doesn't care about details, while Mortdecai starts obsessing over Viktor's potential strategy.
    Mortdecai getting seriously worked up while naming potential strategies shows not only that he does indeed have the intellect and experience to justify some of his arrogance, but that he also legitimately doesn't understand people who are more simple-minded. He's not just arrogant, he is legitimately disconnected from people far below his intellect.
    Mortdecai only realizes this at the end of his rant when he asks if his strategy is "...Checkers?"
    - We then see what happens when Viktor runs out of patience, as he repeats himself, but now clearly aggressively.
    - Mortdecai, unimpressed, as stated above, takes to personally insulting Viktor, implying that he is stupid and knows nothing, to which Viktor responds by bringing up where he actually learned to play Checkers - in a trench. As in, on the battlefield during WWI.
    This further shows why Viktor doesn't even bother trying to understand Mortdecai's analysis, as he's certain that he has a lot more experience with the worst hardships than his opponent.
    - Mortdecai's intellectual nature is then shown, when he matter-of-factly spins Viktor's answer into a confirmation of his accusatory insult, that he learned to play in the dirt. Responding like so to a war veteran again shows that he is unimpressed, and also lacking empathy.
    - Viktor then finally loses it, and throws the board away, but calms down afterwards.
    This and Mortdecai's comment imply a bit of the goings-on beyond this coffee shop.
    We've learned that these two are clearly not friends and most likely not around each other much. Mortdecai not being upset with Viktor upending the game and instead having the last word with sarcastic comments, (the "Viktor Offensive" also being his way of asserting his superiority by essentially answering his own question) also shows that these two most likely didn't meet for a game of Checkers and that it more likely was their attempt at butting heads without some major disturbance of the peace.
    Ironically, Viktor hitting someone with the board ends up doing that.
    Viktor's way of throwing the board also displays something that I've noticed with Lackadaisy, which is that they have a great way of including typical cartoon slapstick humor in a more grounded story, even though it follows a much more cohesive logic than most slapstick cartoons.

  • @shaunarundle8614
    @shaunarundle8614 8 месяцев назад +2

    !Spoiler Alert if you haven’t read the comic!
    These two do indeed have history as the worked together at one point.

  • @jadaw644
    @jadaw644 8 месяцев назад +1

    I didn't get as much enjoyment out of the skit. Probably because I've read the entire comic so I already know the characters, so this pretty much read like them establishing the obvious. Mordecai's a pretentious snob and Victor's a short-tempered veteran. But I'm glad people who are cartoon-only are finding out more about them!

  • @SpectreCiNW
    @SpectreCiNW 8 месяцев назад

    Also great expression of the era, where there was a lot of heat between traumatized veterens who came back from WW1 and nobles who think themselves tall... who has more authority? Those who own much of the country or those who fought and died for it

  • @etherealdragon207
    @etherealdragon207 8 месяцев назад

    Mordecai grew up in a bug and rat infested apartment and worked for the local Mafia at a young age after his dad died. He even acted superior to his sister, who wasn't as refined as him and would mess with him using insects, which freaked him out.

  • @capitanspoiler7393
    @capitanspoiler7393 8 месяцев назад +1

    Viktor
    Takes
    Bishop

  • @xeroh9894
    @xeroh9894 8 месяцев назад

    I see that you utilized the Rithm of Al Gor to reach my view. Brilliant play!!

  • @Baldwin-iv445
    @Baldwin-iv445 8 месяцев назад +1

    I honestly wonder what Viktor went through in WW1 and presumably the Russian Civil war.

  • @davidharder7024
    @davidharder7024 8 месяцев назад

    This was a great animation. Also, there’s a comment on the video itself that gives us some more insight. The commenter (can’t remember their name), says that Mordecai was going to lose. He can take Viktor’s knight, but it leaves him open from then on to constant mate and eventual checkmate. If the person is right, we can also tell that Mordecai is a poor loser. He decided, instead of accepting the loss, to antagonize Viktor, as you said, into forfeiting the game.

  • @DeesDNP
    @DeesDNP 8 месяцев назад

    As a chess player I was laughing when Mordecai was saying openings/gambits that don't even exist

  • @brianachim2670
    @brianachim2670 8 месяцев назад

    Mordacai is really risking his nine lives pissing off Viktor 😂

  • @Blacknight6577
    @Blacknight6577 8 месяцев назад +4

    Whenever I see videos like these, I’m kinda taken back how people praise this kind of dialogue and the scene itself when I just see it as a regular scene or like when they dissect the scene it just comes across to me as common sense or like I got all of that and took it as normal information.
    I’m not down playing this video and I do agree with what ur saying, but I guess my point is that to some people they would be like “oh I don’t think of it that way” or “oh I missed that part” where in my POV I got all of that information right away and I guess it was “perfect”.

    • @TrueLocalEnthusiast
      @TrueLocalEnthusiast  8 месяцев назад +4

      If anything I praise your observation. The reason video essays are a thing is that people can miss things pretty commonly, but even when it IS obvious taking the time to praise proper world building, dialogue, writing practices, etc. Is a great way to build up a community and make future writers adopt a similar method. Basically, praise builds progress

    • @Blacknight6577
      @Blacknight6577 8 месяцев назад +2

      @@TrueLocalEnthusiast ya that’s true. Plus I was always into movies/shows/games and I pay attention to the details and what’s going on. On top of that it’s what inspired me years ago to be writer as I been told my writing skills were great at a young age and still even now. Hopefully I can get my motivation back and go back to making that a career possibility for myself in the future.

    • @TrueLocalEnthusiast
      @TrueLocalEnthusiast  8 месяцев назад +2

      @@Blacknight6577 I hope so too, hey if you write something I'd be happy to make a video on it one day :)

    • @Blacknight6577
      @Blacknight6577 8 месяцев назад

      @@TrueLocalEnthusiast thanks I’ll keep that in mind. Keep up the good work!

  • @batman8618
    @batman8618 8 месяцев назад

    I'd also like to point out how their playstyles go hand in hand with their experience. Mordecai is prepped for long-winded games, that could possibly last more than a day, mirroring how as an assassin he has the liberty to carefully plan out and snatch his targets with prep time. Viktor, simply goes for the first move he sees as possible. Being in a trench, you can't exactly have much strategy beyond "see, aim, fire" lest you die for overthinking it to long.

  • @Wildash
    @Wildash 8 месяцев назад +3

    Local Enthusiast: "What could this mean!? Do they have history?! Are they making assumptions!? Does this guy have a superiority complex!?!"
    Me: "... They. play. chess."

    • @TrueLocalEnthusiast
      @TrueLocalEnthusiast  8 месяцев назад +2

      I have ELA Teacher Syndrome...bare with me XD

    • @Duskbound
      @Duskbound 8 месяцев назад +2

      @@TrueLocalEnthusiast "The curtains were blue" *tears up*

    • @Wildash
      @Wildash 8 месяцев назад +1

      @@TrueLocalEnthusiast I've learned to comment on videos, in a trench

  • @Raghetiel
    @Raghetiel 8 месяцев назад

    You can see on the board, that Mordecai is locked and has no way of winning, draw at best. So there is a possibility, that he pissed Victor so that he would "forfeit" in such manner.

  • @luizhenriquebarbosadasilva8667
    @luizhenriquebarbosadasilva8667 8 месяцев назад

    shows how cooked it is

  • @cjbroskin1327
    @cjbroskin1327 8 месяцев назад

    I noticed the BG music, Walking With Dinosaurs, Cruel Sea. Odd choice for this specifically but hey its an underrated soundtrack.

  • @dinoboyo6639
    @dinoboyo6639 8 месяцев назад +1

    Is that the Cruel Sea Theme from Walking with Dinosaurs in the background? If that's the case, excellent music choice.

  • @dayzie657
    @dayzie657 8 месяцев назад

    Viktor and Mordecai do have a past together. In the comic, it has shown us that when Atlas was alive Viktor and Mordecai were helping him with his work. I don't really remember much but that is what I know, I think.

  • @maksymilianziele28
    @maksymilianziele28 8 месяцев назад

    Victor: "Dude, it's just a game..."
    Mordechai: "It's my life!"
    Victor: "Okaayy..."

  • @ryleeculla5570
    @ryleeculla5570 8 месяцев назад

    Their is some lore on striker that says he was a ww1 veteran and got his missing right eye from a “strikers rally”

  • @MASTEROFEVIL
    @MASTEROFEVIL 8 месяцев назад

    Imagine cats fighting in world war 1

  • @Xx_Tuberculosis_xX
    @Xx_Tuberculosis_xX 8 месяцев назад

    A good theory I heard was that Mordecai intentionally pissed Viktor off to force the latter into a draw. Any move Mordecai could take at that point would end up in a lose or a draw he himself would have to put in place. By having Viktor be fed up with his taunting, Viktor himself concedes the game and therefore Mordecai does not lose. He doesn't win, but he doesn't lose, and him proving his superiority of keeping his emotions in check gives his ego the "win" it needs in this particular game.

  • @themidnightbanshee5927
    @themidnightbanshee5927 8 месяцев назад

    I need more