A question: Why is humanity's plan to strike a huge blow - a plan supposedly born out of desperation and a will to survive - revolve around sneaking onto their homeworld using cutting-edge stealth technology and fighting in close combat using guerrilla warfare tactics? I mean, if they're desperate, why not use stealth technology to sneak into range to wipe out their orbital defenses and then bombard military targets on the planet from orbit? That may seem cruel and involve massive enemy causalities. But these Kraliens already bombarded Earth and inflicted massive human causalities.
Because the author has no imagination? That plan is not insane, it's just bad. If you have stealth tech, then assassinations, sabotage and hit-and-run strikes are the obvious choices.
Please give us a follow-up program and tell us what happened to all those involved. Including the judges and lawyers, even the people that swept the courts inside and outside the university, before and after the trial. . Please please please. . . . TGC Blessings :)
Likes the story except for the last 2-3 minutes. It's like the story was stuck on repeat with the same few details being said over and over but with different words lol.
While I like these stories, its curious how so often then human military leader is usaully portrayed as a woman. Frankly while there have been some great women military leaders, they are the exception rather than the rule.
you're correct. How many times can someone reinforce the same theories time and again. I mean how many times can they use the words, "despair, testament, spirit, destiny, resilience, et cetera." It is exceedingly tedious.
If this was made part of a drinking game where participants had to take a swig every time the words "humanity's resolve" or "spirit" came up, well... I'd worry that'd be a dangerous game.
I only recently discovered this channel and have been binge watching the older stories. I much prefer the newer stories with human narrators. A lot of the older stuff is so obviously more of the AI generated and narrated BS that it hurts. The concept was good, but there was so much repetitive crap that it ruined the story.
Not a bad story, but use a thesaurus ffs Workshopping with peers before publishing would cut out a LOT of the redundantly repetitious repetitions -- good work, get better
Sometimes good stories but the phrases of "testament of"or "the human spirit"etc make me want to barf. Tell the story and stop trying to be a wanna be poet.
I made a drinking game out of the words "resolve" and "determination". I was hammered by the end
Lol agreed
A question: Why is humanity's plan to strike a huge blow - a plan supposedly born out of desperation and a will to survive - revolve around sneaking onto their homeworld using cutting-edge stealth technology and fighting in close combat using guerrilla warfare tactics? I mean, if they're desperate, why not use stealth technology to sneak into range to wipe out their orbital defenses and then bombard military targets on the planet from orbit? That may seem cruel and involve massive enemy causalities. But these Kraliens already bombarded Earth and inflicted massive human causalities.
None of these stories use logic or like any real world experience its just human circle jerking
HUSSSSH, human... don't give them ideassss....
Because the author has no imagination?
That plan is not insane, it's just bad. If you have stealth tech, then assassinations, sabotage and hit-and-run strikes are the obvious choices.
I like how this story is being read. Not so much high and low pitch overacting. Great story too.
I wonder if the author wanted us to know they were resolved and determined. Was it a deep resolve?
Lol I determine it was indeed a deep resolve
There might have been some resolve involved, i'm not sure.
I am binge watching all of his stories. I must like the abuse...heheh, but I love sci fi stories...these are much better than others I have watched.
Primo story. Fascinating premise. Well written story and narrated. I liked it. Thank you, creator. 😮
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Well gee. Let's tell the entire Counsel the entire invasion plan.
I'm sure no one will tell the Krell what's coming.
Please give us a follow-up program and tell us what happened to all those involved.
Including the judges and lawyers, even the people that swept the courts inside and outside the university, before and after the trial. .
Please please please. . . .
TGC
Blessings :)
Endless repetition with no substance.
Awesome inflections at the right time. Subscribed and looking forward to more.
I like the approach - very cool 😎
This is great! Are you using Murf or something else? Love the voice and the stories, keep them coming :)
Something else! Thank you - new vids coming every day! :)
@@StarboundHFY I tried to use murf for game development but looking for something even better. Would appreciate any recommendations :)
Likes the story except for the last 2-3 minutes. It's like the story was stuck on repeat with the same few details being said over and over but with different words lol.
Great story!
Glad you enjoyed it!
While I like these stories, its curious how so often then human military leader is usaully portrayed as a woman. Frankly while there have been some great women military leaders, they are the exception rather than the rule.
Because of a lack of opportunities. These stories imagine a future where humans offer equal opportunities for all
@@TheMitchellExpress that would still be a role where main may still reign supreme
@@rakheem351 maybe but not in this world
Dude, it's science fiction
Enjoying the story however I thought too many phrases were repeated too often.
you're correct. How many times can someone reinforce the same theories time and again. I mean how many times can they use the words, "despair, testament, spirit, destiny, resilience, et cetera." It is exceedingly tedious.
yeah that’s fair enough, i’ll take that feedback on board for the next one :)
Don't get me wrong, I enjoyed the story. @@StarboundHFY
If this was made part of a drinking game where participants had to take a swig every time the words "humanity's resolve" or "spirit" came up, well... I'd worry that'd be a dangerous game.
I only recently discovered this channel and have been binge watching the older stories. I much prefer the newer stories with human narrators. A lot of the older stuff is so obviously more of the AI generated and narrated BS that it hurts. The concept was good, but there was so much repetitive crap that it ruined the story.
Way. WAY too much filler dialogue.
Not written very well or skillfully but good concept. Feels like the plot could have been better and cooler from the getgo though.
ty for the feedback though, i’ll improve for next one :)
@@StarboundHFY OH, were you the one who wrote it? I thought this channel just posted other people's stories.
how did this channel go from 600 to 750 subs in 1 day
Why is every hero a woman not very convincing
Not a bad story, but use a thesaurus ffs
Workshopping with peers before publishing would cut out a LOT of the redundantly repetitious repetitions -- good work, get better
Really weak storyline
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I'm glad you went to human narrators because the AI stuff is shit
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Sometimes good stories but the phrases of "testament of"or "the human spirit"etc make me want to barf. Tell the story and stop trying to be a wanna be poet.
GPT3 issue.
dont listen to these idiots, theyre being rude, just use a dictionary and you can find about 5 different variations of a word.
BOOOOOORING