Part 2 would be difficult since the author never wrote a part 2. (The original reddit story is linked in the video description and the author only posted 3 stories overall that don't seem to be connected to each other)
@@ThisIsMego I think we all know the outcome, seeing as the Terrains kicked everyone's backsides the first time around. Plus most of the best stories keep people wondering what happened next and wanting more.
I teared up at the end when the ships came out of cloak. I've been listening to lots of amazing short stories I wished were movies. This one in particular kinda resonated a bit. I hope a second part comes out.
@@stevenredpath9332 I disagree, I already know what my imagination can come up with. I read/listen to these because I want to see what others come up with.
@anilwang I guess there's no reason to watch any movies then, because we've seen it all before. The hero either wins or loses. The entertaining part is finding out how the author gets to the conclusion and to see it described in a manner I haven't thought about. See "why Humans Avoid War" and " Nature of Predators" by Space Paladin 15 as examples.
His buddies laugh at him. Then the Human fills the sky thousands of ships hundreds of meters long. Broadcasting this world and its people are NOW under our protection leave NOW or DIE. The pilot turns to his friends and says they followed me home can I keep them.
I Imagine this Scene to Unfold: The Human Ships appear and Broadcast This is Ambassador Chuck Norris from the Terran Empire. The Balkan are under our Protection. If you Value your Lives ......RUN....
@@Zaluskowskythat was great lol Speaking of Chuck I was thinking this morning about the time two dumb dumbstruck tried to rob Chuck when the law showed up the said dumbs begged the law to help them
That was the most perfectly timed commercial: "Angry, Jav'een yelled into his communicator. _Safelight repair, safelight replace_ " I laughed for the entire length of the commercial!
technology ALWAYS moves faster during a time of war. Ever notcied how when we come out of a HUGE conflict. technology has changed beyond belief. Knowone wants to fund expiremental stuff during peacetime. Its to expensive, but during wartime, everyone want the next big weapon. After war, IF we survive it, the tech then gets repurposed n research goe sin a differant direction
@@1DerangedWarrior "I do not know with what weapons World War III will be fought, but World War IV will be fought with sticks and stones." -- Albert Einstein
Damn! Galaxy be cold man. Humans get smashed left and right, galaxy says nothing Humans stand up and fight back, galaxy says nothing. Humans tell the galaxy "We are closed. Leave us the HELL alone! Don't come near us, don't speak to us, don't even think of us." The galaxy : That's war! The hell. Really. At least the humans were able to stand up and prove it.
While imagination is a good thing, I seems to wonder at stories similar to this is there any more? You have a really good beginning; now give us the "beef" or the rest of the story. Please complete them! Thank you for your talents in writing this tag beginning.
Of the short stories like this you did an amazing job with this one. Loved it would love to see a part 2 for his race's reaction when the "help" arrives and turns the war on its heels.
That depends how he arrives home. If alone they might laugh or give him a dissertation court marshal. But if the humans show up with him he would be a hero. Well he is a hero. He did it that's what heros do. Thier duty take a chance might die. So many others are in need for something to be done so I guess it's me. No time to wait got to be now or never. Failure is not an option.
Part 2 isn't really needed, it is implied that the humans would win. Let your imagination decide how they arrive at victory, then change your mind and experience a whole new end to the story.
I don't think this one has it in it for a part two, though feel free to prove me wrong author. Considering the type of Short Story this is, it works best to leave what happens up to the reader, especially given the rest is likely to be sound and thunder, but little else, unless the galaxy has indeed grown stronger, which, given humans are still able to do impossible things, seems unlikely. No, this is a good stopping point, showing that sometimes, having faith and even yelling at the gods themselves can move the heavens. After all, this one came with neither war nor peace at its calling, but instead a desperate plea for help, something not quite the same as either of those, and it will likely usher in a new era, as the 'elder' races learn what it is when the younger have their own champion.
Well, i would certainly like to know, how the higher-ups reacted, when Jav'Een drop in with a "Don't worry! The cavalry is here!" attitude, and an army of battleships from the most feared race... And we doesn't even needed to be very smart to became that. The thing, what gave us that level of terror, was the released pathogen - and viruses main talent lies in adaptibility. Our current world wasn't able to eradicate all of them yet, mostly by the fact, that viruses can mutate with an extraordinary rate. If they found a compatible, but different kind of virus, two different strain can blend together, creating a third, even more dreadful one - given enough time them to do that. In this story, the fabricated alien virus had a compatibility with leprosy, and the needed time was about one to one and half years. After that they only needed to transit it to their targets... And i am not sure, humanity could stop that virus, even if they would accept to do so. As i already said: viruses mutates constantly, and even if there would be one effective medicine against it, that could be a deadly poison to other races...
I wanna see the humans use Star Trek transporters to fuck with people. Like piss in a frisbee, freeze it solid, then pop out the piss puck and teleport it into someone's bed so it melts and they're like "who pissed in my bed while I was at work?"
I just discovered these kinds of short story vids the other day, and I gotta say, "they are a blast!" Anyone got any recommendations? I've watched the 3 parter on HFY SciShow, about Admiral Thompson, the Eliani and Xencin uniting against the Insectoids and the Galactic COmmonwealth.
We are a species capable of amazing good. We are also a species capable of great evil. No other has the infinite potential of malice than the human heart
Incredible story! Loved every moment of it. Can't wait to see more from this universe! By the way, I've recently started my own 3D animation project in the sci-fi genre.
It reminds me of another short story I read years ago. Maybe it was a James Blish story or Theodore Sturgeon or in a anthology edited by Arthur C. Clarke. Someone ventured into a interdicted area of space, no one was supposed to go there. They brought back images of the species found there and there was a collective shitting of the pants when they realized they had found humans again. I am thinking it was a James Blish story though since that is my first thought/educated guess.. Now if I could only find the one where aliens returned with a cure for those who were afflicted with the disease that turned their skin white.
Imagine the effect of a race so feared, so absolutely unstoppable, arriving alongside your weak and prostrate victim. Realising that your chance to stop, to leave them alone to survive yourself, has evaporated.
Give them some time to compile a great part 2. Now you know how us old farts had to wait YEARS for the next Star Wars. So we played read the novels LARPed. Best of all dream of how you would make the next part go.
"Six large angular vessels shimmer and appear from seemingly nowhere, huge and bristling with weapons..." Star Destroyers with cloaking devices... y'all are fucked! 😂
You got me thinking of the Deep Space Nine episode where the lone Klingon D7 asked for shore leave. Then the rest of the fleet decloaked. Great shot 90s CG
vote for part 2! or rather make it a series! bro, we all want this to continue, for gods sake! you are really onto something!
Part 2 would be difficult since the author never wrote a part 2. (The original reddit story is linked in the video description and the author only posted 3 stories overall that don't seem to be connected to each other)
@@ThisIsMego I think we all know the outcome, seeing as the Terrains kicked everyone's backsides the first time around. Plus most of the best stories keep people wondering what happened next and wanting more.
Agreed. This story deserves to be finished.
@@ThisIsMego That doesn't mean that someone else can write a second part.
I teared up at the end when the ships came out of cloak. I've been listening to lots of amazing short stories I wished were movies. This one in particular kinda resonated a bit. I hope a second part comes out.
The Galaxy Learned what "f*ck around and find out meant."
No shit . Lol
I think that's the name of one of the terron empires dreadnaughts... "Phuq around and find out"
"Don't look at our planet, don't talk to our planet, and dont even THINK about our planet!"
...and definately don't touch our boats.
@@ephemispriest8069 WAR CRIMES! WAR. CRIMES. DON'T TOUCH MY BOATS! /MandatoryFunDay
@@Diana2112Gamingwhat's this boats reference?
@@VikingVern7 RUclipsr MandatoryFunDay, he does videos similar to HLC but without the talking countries and equipment. Humor trends a bit darker.
@@ephemispriest8069 space boats
Should definitely be turned into a space opra/ novel. Would buy 10/10.
Need a part 2 sooo bad haha
I messaged the author on Reddit. No reply, and this story is years old. I'm sad.
Doesn’t need a part 2. Your imagination will tell you everything about what happened next.
@@stevenredpath9332 I disagree, I already know what my imagination can come up with. I read/listen to these because I want to see what others come up with.
Part 2 is essentially humanity genociding the tits off of the universe, while blasting Pantera and megadeth.
@anilwang I guess there's no reason to watch any movies then, because we've seen it all before. The hero either wins or loses.
The entertaining part is finding out how the author gets to the conclusion and to see it described in a manner I haven't thought about. See "why Humans Avoid War" and " Nature of Predators" by Space Paladin 15 as examples.
Their best ship has fled. Their soldiers are falling apart. The war is ours. One month later guys I’m back and I brought the humans
His buddies laugh at him. Then the Human fills the sky thousands of ships hundreds of meters long. Broadcasting this world and its people are NOW under our protection leave NOW or DIE. The pilot turns to his friends and says they followed me home can I keep them.
@@GrantWaller.-hf6jn Emperor of Mankind has deem you exterminatus !!!
I Imagine this Scene to Unfold:
The Human Ships appear and Broadcast
This is Ambassador Chuck Norris from the Terran Empire.
The Balkan are under our Protection.
If you Value your Lives
......RUN....
@@Zaluskowskythat was great lol
Speaking of Chuck I was thinking this morning about the time two dumb dumbstruck tried to rob Chuck when the law showed up the said dumbs begged the law to help them
@@Zaluskowskyso you liked the B5 scene when Delenn showed up to protect the station and her boyfriend.
These histories validate that peace only can be achieved through strength. Not everybody will agree but it is what it is
‘A good king is respected, a strong king is feared. A true king is both.’
Not histories. Fictional stories.
As a scifi fanatic, I would really enjoy to see part two. Nicely done my friend, nicely done.
Me too.
Is there apart two?
Part two surely is being pennedyou can leave it there😮
@@MrAnubis51 I know not, if there is one - yet. But it should be, at least in the making...
the story was written 3 years ago so i don't think there will be a part 2
The “they kept saying they wouldn’t do it again” reminds me of the snap story. That’s so well done
With that backstory...this is a universe that will have other civilizations ground into the dust.
For those wondering. The original author of this short never made a part 2. This story is a few years old.
Noooooo
That’s okay. We each get to make our own Part 2.
That was the most perfectly timed commercial: "Angry, Jav'een yelled into his communicator. _Safelight repair, safelight replace_ "
I laughed for the entire length of the commercial!
Sick story. Can't wait for part 2 . Pleaseeee
That was awesome. It puts you in mind of the terrible damage that the human empire will inflict once it goes to war.
Yes wars make us kinda of nuts. WW2 started with biplane and calvary charges and ended with jets and nukes.
technology ALWAYS moves faster during a time of war.
Ever notcied how when we come out of a HUGE conflict. technology has changed beyond belief.
Knowone wants to fund expiremental stuff during peacetime. Its to expensive, but during wartime, everyone want the next big weapon.
After war, IF we survive it, the tech then gets repurposed n research goe sin a differant direction
Sadly it true
"You send us a virus. We find a mate to it. Now they gonna spend their honeymoon visiting all of your planets!"
@@1DerangedWarrior
"I do not know with what weapons World War III will be fought, but World War IV will be fought with sticks and stones."
-- Albert Einstein
I liked this story alot! Humans taking revenge on aliens that screwed us over is sweet! Wouldnt mind a part 2 of this!
Terran empire in this story sounds like that one tribe that kills anyone who lands on thier island.
or gets really mad when you touch their boats.
That's the US Navy
In their defense, they were given good reason.
I don't blame them. Don't tread on me. 🐍
@@GrantWaller.-hf6jn You do not step on snek!
I am rarely captivated by simply words coming from a still screen. Completely engaging. Thanks !!
Damn! Galaxy be cold man. Humans get smashed left and right, galaxy says nothing
Humans stand up and fight back, galaxy says nothing.
Humans tell the galaxy "We are closed. Leave us the HELL alone! Don't come near us, don't speak to us, don't even think of us."
The galaxy : That's war!
The hell. Really. At least the humans were able to stand up and prove it.
Wow. Please make part 2. I'm sure i am not alone in wanting this.
Excellent story. No need for a part 2. my imagination will fill in the rest.
I need closure tho :(
I really hope there’s a part 2 eventually where they just kick ass
Same :)
that cricket sound effect killed me 9:04, great inclusion
it was so out of place and unexpected
This is one of the better stories. Need a part 2.
This story needs to be fleshed out into a whole book/series.....
Humans : you Fu*ked around and found out !!
Humans do have a talent for War.⚔
I love hearing stories from other perspectives. Well done!
I can listen to this all day... Thank you! awesome!
Part Two.... Terrans kick enemy ass and make a federation with the Balkans
Now that's a good story. I would buy the audio books if there were any.
this is my favourite of all the hfy stories
While imagination is a good thing, I seems to wonder at stories similar to this is there any more? You have a really good beginning; now give us the "beef" or the rest of the story. Please complete them! Thank you for your talents in writing this tag beginning.
I already saw some "We want a part 2!" comment before, but never phrased like this! But i agree! 😁
I hope to see a part 2 very soon. This story needs to continue.
Oh yeah! Defiantly need to hear more of this story!
Thank you for this story 💙💚❤️ and for all your effort & the time you put in when uploading this. It is really truly appreciated 🙏
Of the short stories like this you did an amazing job with this one. Loved it would love to see a part 2 for his race's reaction when the "help" arrives and turns the war on its heels.
Oddly I can see the humans appearnce. A song being broadcast on all frequencies “guess who’s back” 😂
@@Allantitanmy boyfriends back . Ride of the Valkyrie would be good as well
@@GrantWaller.-hf6jn as well as DOOM
That depends how he arrives home. If alone they might laugh or give him a dissertation court marshal. But if the humans show up with him he would be a hero. Well he is a hero. He did it that's what heros do. Thier duty take a chance might die. So many others are in need for something to be done so I guess it's me. No time to wait got to be now or never. Failure is not an option.
@Allantitan that would be perfect :)
Excellent, would love to see part 2, Hollywood needs writers like this.
Too busy being woke
I disagree. Let the perverts of hollyweird flop. Let's support independent authors like this one.
@@diaperjoeisaped1723I second that motion. All in favor aye
@@diaperjoeisaped1723I have not gone to a movie since Solo and I'm glad much better fan films out there.
Part 2 isn't really needed, it is implied that the humans would win. Let your imagination decide how they arrive at victory, then change your mind and experience a whole new end to the story.
PART TWO!!! PART TWO PLEASE !!!🙏🏻
Damn!!! So Azimov!!!
Great work.
Keep it coming.
A very, very nice rendition of the story. I very much hope the author continues the storyline.
Wtf is going on with these stories?!?!?
Why are they so good?!?!?!
Thank you for sharing this great story
I don't think this one has it in it for a part two, though feel free to prove me wrong author. Considering the type of Short Story this is, it works best to leave what happens up to the reader, especially given the rest is likely to be sound and thunder, but little else, unless the galaxy has indeed grown stronger, which, given humans are still able to do impossible things, seems unlikely.
No, this is a good stopping point, showing that sometimes, having faith and even yelling at the gods themselves can move the heavens. After all, this one came with neither war nor peace at its calling, but instead a desperate plea for help, something not quite the same as either of those, and it will likely usher in a new era, as the 'elder' races learn what it is when the younger have their own champion.
I know this is probly true. But one can hope.
I agree. I "know" the humans will kick butt. My imagination will fill in the details.
This is a years old one, never seen a sequel to it
Well, i would certainly like to know, how the higher-ups reacted, when Jav'Een drop in with a "Don't worry! The cavalry is here!" attitude, and an army of battleships from the most feared race...
And we doesn't even needed to be very smart to became that. The thing, what gave us that level of terror, was the released pathogen - and viruses main talent lies in adaptibility. Our current world wasn't able to eradicate all of them yet, mostly by the fact, that viruses can mutate with an extraordinary rate. If they found a compatible, but different kind of virus, two different strain can blend together, creating a third, even more dreadful one - given enough time them to do that. In this story, the fabricated alien virus had a compatibility with leprosy, and the needed time was about one to one and half years. After that they only needed to transit it to their targets... And i am not sure, humanity could stop that virus, even if they would accept to do so. As i already said: viruses mutates constantly, and even if there would be one effective medicine against it, that could be a deadly poison to other races...
This was awesome!❤ I desperately wanna see the humans stomp the galaxy into shape, though.
I wanna see the humans use Star Trek transporters to fuck with people. Like piss in a frisbee, freeze it solid, then pop out the piss puck and teleport it into someone's bed so it melts and they're like "who pissed in my bed while I was at work?"
Same :D
This is begging for more!
Part 2..... where's part 2 ???????????????????
We definitely need a Part 2!
Thank you for a very well told story. The image with it is excellent as well.
Not really sure how this ended up in my feed, but glad it did.
I just discovered these kinds of short story vids the other day, and I gotta say, "they are a blast!" Anyone got any recommendations? I've watched the 3 parter on HFY SciShow, about Admiral Thompson, the Eliani and Xencin uniting against the Insectoids and the Galactic COmmonwealth.
We are a species capable of amazing good. We are also a species capable of great evil. No other has the infinite potential of malice than the human heart
I love this channel, the writing and stories are super unique, I'm always left waiting for more after each story.
Heard this story countless time already, but it's a good story so it's always worth listening to.
Well written and expertly presented. I look forward to a continuing saga.
I need more of this ❤ part two and three and more, shoot a movie 🎬 of it would be cool too
Brilliant… this needs to be a series. Reminiscent of the Lensman series by Arthur C. Clark 👍
my favourite story
Is there a part 2?
this was great - we demand part 2 to this great story - thank you!!!
These stories are all stunning....well done!
I need the second part... Although this story has an ending of sort...
Best channel ever ...
Thank you RUclips algorithm. Liked! commented and subscribed!
Look me in the Eyestalks, I laughed at that.
After that I was thinking a warrior mr Crabs
Ah. I have encountered this story before. It doesn't really have a resolution. This is just the first portion.
This is definitely one of the better ones!
its like a taste of the uplift wars........
by David Brin
more of this story, please!
Great story. Hope I can find the next part here on You Tube.
better AI than most, at least.
Incredible story! Loved every moment of it. Can't wait to see more from this universe! By the way, I've recently started my own 3D animation project in the sci-fi genre.
Damn i wish the author had written a part 2
We do not come in peace.WE COME IN NUMBERS
Peace...through superior firepower.
Fight for peace prepare for war. And that's for the cold war flash back
Damn auto correct
Back in 80s I had a Tshirt with what you said with a F15 on it.
It reminds me of another short story I read years ago. Maybe it was a James Blish story or Theodore Sturgeon or in a anthology edited by Arthur C. Clarke. Someone ventured into a interdicted area of space, no one was supposed to go there. They brought back images of the species found there and there was a collective shitting of the pants when they realized they had found humans again. I am thinking it was a James Blish story though since that is my first thought/educated guess.. Now if I could only find the one where aliens returned with a cure for those who were afflicted with the disease that turned their skin white.
When a human says run. RUN!!!
Subscribed just on the slim chance that it'll yield for me more of this.
Fantastic, completely love the concept and execution of the story. Well done
Please don’t leave us hanging…..I was hoping they yelled “This is SPARTA!”
Wow, I hope this was a part one, with more to follow.
Imagine the effect of a race so feared, so absolutely unstoppable, arriving alongside your weak and prostrate victim. Realising that your chance to stop, to leave them alone to survive yourself, has evaporated.
Give them some time to compile a great part 2. Now you know how us old farts had to wait YEARS for the next Star Wars. So we played read the novels LARPed. Best of all dream of how you would make the next part go.
Thanks I have been looking for this story for a while.
Man this need part 2! And more!!!
I just found your channel! I'm liking the story telling and the plots. Looking forward to next parts. Also, who is the author?
Wow this is so good. Thank you for the story !
great stories, very professionally presented
I have to say, this is excellent story telling.
far out . . . love this story, I go to sleep listening to this kind of storys..
Wow. More please.
Definitely need a part 2
It was a Beautiful story . it brought me to tears .
Me too
I love a good hero story. Chivalry is not dead its the heart of every hero.
Part 2 please and thank you!
"Six large angular vessels shimmer and appear from seemingly nowhere, huge and bristling with weapons..."
Star Destroyers with cloaking devices... y'all are fucked! 😂
Super star destroyers 15 kilometers long
You got me thinking of the Deep Space Nine episode where the lone Klingon D7 asked for shore leave. Then the rest of the fleet decloaked. Great shot 90s CG
Thank you. That was well done.
Laugh at me if you will those who have wronged me I better never find you
need part 2!!!
Yeah I'm gonna need a part two to this one lol
Part 2 PLEASE!!!
Yes please make a part two!