Hello sir, I need to say a huge thank you. English was always my weekest subject. I was getting 3s in language and 4s in lit. I was so stressed for my gcses. I studied with your videos for hours and hours a day. In the end i got an 8 in lit and a 6 in language. I would have never thought i could get such good results. I had only passed 1 language paper before the actual exam. Thank you for everything!!!!!!!
Hello, mr salles just wanted to say thank you so much ur videos helped me get a 9 in literature and an 8 in language which I never thought would happen
I really love the point about the silver being linked to Judas and the Christian belief. I really appreciate how you don't just make videos based on the national curriculum and say the obvious points that they teach in school but you explore it much deeper on a more complex level. Thank you : )
Some extra notes here: (see more) water was used to clean the blade before the samurai committed seppuku (suicide), meaning that the plane he sat on was like a shrine/place to specifically commit seppuku The form's structure is also one large line of regular stanzas, similar to how there were 7 light carriers left in Japan's arsenal at the end of ww2, and us reading it gives a feeling as if the pilot was leaving his home behind, which were those 7 light carriers and into certain finality The light carriers would have probably been the home of the pilot for a long time as they were ships that were meant to launch aircraft and were useful for kamikaze because they can launch aircraft close to the enemy The banzai charges (land based suicide attacks), operation ten-go(water based suicide attack) and the kamikaze could be indicative to when Garland wrote the poem, like how it is in Ozymandias where the hinting of present events are presented through a lens of the last such as KGIII's tyranny represented by Ramses II in Ozymandias and in this poem, 9/11 indicated by another plane based suicide attack Bunting could also symbolise unwavering commitment to orders as ww2 fleets usually coordinated eachother by waving certain coloured flags to show orders such as no quarter or form a battle line The word "arcing" could also hint for the flash fires that Kamikaze pilots would result in if they crash into enemy ships. If a ship gets hit with a shell or a kamikaze plane, it usually doesn't split in half. But, if the shell or plane hits the ship's ammunition, it causes a flash fire that "arcs" since it's a geyser of flame that tears the ship apart, which could show a traumatic flashback from the pilot and a foreshadowing of his potential fate the asonance could be symbolic of a warcry of "tennou heika banzai" or "for the emperor" in which an "a" sound is stressed
Hi Mr Salles, I just wanted to thank you so much for helping me love English. I've always loved reading and writing stories, but when it came to high school and analysing literature I found it quite boring because I didn't understand the purpose of doing so or how to do it properly. Watching your videos has given me a much greater, in depth understanding of the purpose of literature which has helped me not only progress as a student but also as a person. I have realised that I have a much deeper knowledge of myself now, and that was a skill that I never thought I would learn from English. Thank you so much :)
could you link 'swivelled towards the sun' to the story of Icarus, perhaps suggesting that his attempt to escape his fate (as Icarus escapes from Crete) is ultimately futile as it results in his metaphorical death? or is this too far fetched?
It is an interesting comparison. Icarus also defied orders - at least his father's instructions - which led to his death. The Kamikaze pilot does the same, and chooses life. This is, as you suggest, an ironic victory, as it leads to another kind of death. I think it is a great idea - which I shall steal happily!
Nice to add on that actually the pilots didn't have one way fuel. If the mission would seem to be an unlikely success, maybe there were too many battleships which would shoot the plane down if they got too close, or if they couldn't find any ships, they could always turn back, because obviously they needed to save men.
Does this work? The use of assonance and sibilance in the beginning is confusing and overwhelms the reader. Perhaps, this is symbolic of the battle between the pilot's conscience and the world's expectations of him as a Kamikaze pilot???
My target grade is a 9 but i really think i will get a 6 and i’m quite stressed. English is just so hard!! I’m taking my exams this year and i am really grateful for your videos. Hopefully i can make a large improvement! ps is anyone doing romeo and juliet and jeckyll and hyde for lit paper1?? can’t find many resources for romeo and juliet
Mr Salles Teaches English we’ve just started jeckyll and hyde can’t wait to use your videos. thank you so much you are so thoughtful i wish i could pay you
Hello Mr Salles, I just wanted to say thank you so much for helping me in English but do you have a grade 9 analysis of Blood Brothers and Christmas Carol?
Hey there , I just got this really interesting idea and I want to know if I would be able to use it or if it makes sense . Maybe he didn’t come back as there was not enough fuel for one way, therefore dying but he came back as a spirit , suggesting that he did not finish him journey in life, and the poet is implying that the mission of kamikaze is stopping young men/soldiers from finishing their journey in life by being brainwashed and sacrificing their life for a place in history. I know it says the children were taught “to be silent” and that’s why I am asking if it would be okay to use this idea 💡. Anyhow thank you so much for helping me and many more students in our long and hard journey in gcse 😂😭🤦🏼♀️.
Thank you for your videos, could you argue that when the pilot emotionally dies(after being isolated from his family and community) that he ironically becomes a kamikaze pilot in the sense that they were taught to forget their emotions and ideas about war, to improve their fighting skills. So even though he turned back, could Garland be implying that ideas like living on in ‘history’ be failing people
The soundscape analysis... that's way too airy-fairy and abstract. Like, the "a" sound doesn't make an "ah" sound - you're just exaggerating it. And how does the 'i' sound reflect identity??? You were trying to analyse these sounds but had to result to this absurd interpretation because quite simply, she just chose these words, not for alliterative purposes. I do understand that sound analysis has its place, but it has to be more realistic and deliberate than that (some examples here, of course, were more deliberate than others). And I get how you're trying to contrast these sounds, but it just seems WAY too subtle and exaggerated.
You don't have to like them - take what works for you, and challenge the stuff that doesn't. Identity = I is what I was getting at, but I am happy for you to reject the idea.
MR SALLES PLEASE REPLY!!! Please mark this question out of 8, I just finished watching your English language paper 1 video- How does the writer use language to describe Rosabel’s bus journey home? The write uses a compound complex sentence to convey rosabels bus journey home as long and tiring. He does this by adding several pieces of punctuation to the sentence ‘ rosabel looked out the window;the street was blurred and misty, but light....’ This long compound complex sentence created the sense of chaos, perhaps reflecting how over wholeness rosabel was on her journey home. Perhaps this could be a message from the wrote to imply that public transport is not peaceful and empty like some of us readers may seem. However it could also suggest that rosabel is incapable of surviving a bus journey which involves crowds of people. The Writer also uses negative adjectives such as ‘black’ ‘greasy’ and ‘sickening’ to describe rosabels bus journey home. The adjective ‘black’ creates connotations of sinister and evil which could be suggested by the reader that public transport is not safe. The writer also uses pathetic fallacy to describe the bus journey as dreaded. The writer describes the weather as ‘dull’ ‘blurred’ and ‘misty’ which perhaps could foreshadow the outcome of rosabels journey home. This ultimately makes the reader feel sacred and increases the tension as public transport is very common so it being des tubes as negative makes the reader want to avoid it. PLEASE TELL ME WHAT MARK THIS WOULD BE!! I LOVE YOUR VIDEOS❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Hello sir,
I need to say a huge thank you. English was always my weekest subject. I was getting 3s in language and 4s in lit. I was so stressed for my gcses. I studied with your videos for hours and hours a day. In the end i got an 8 in lit and a 6 in language. I would have never thought i could get such good results. I had only passed 1 language paper before the actual exam.
Thank you for everything!!!!!!!
Well done for all your hard work!
Hello, mr salles just wanted to say thank you so much ur videos helped me get a 9 in literature and an 8 in language which I never thought would happen
I really love the point about the silver being linked to Judas and the Christian belief. I really appreciate how you don't just make videos based on the national curriculum and say the obvious points that they teach in school but you explore it much deeper on a more complex level. Thank you : )
Thank you very much for paying such attention to the content.
Some extra notes here: (see more)
water was used to clean the blade before the samurai committed seppuku (suicide), meaning that the plane he sat on was like a shrine/place to specifically commit seppuku
The form's structure is also one large line of regular stanzas, similar to how there were 7 light carriers left in Japan's arsenal at the end of ww2, and us reading it gives a feeling as if the pilot was leaving his home behind, which were those 7 light carriers and into certain finality
The light carriers would have probably been the home of the pilot for a long time as they were ships that were meant to launch aircraft and were useful for kamikaze because they can launch aircraft close to the enemy
The banzai charges (land based suicide attacks), operation ten-go(water based suicide attack) and the kamikaze could be indicative to when Garland wrote the poem, like how it is in Ozymandias where the hinting of present events are presented through a lens of the last such as KGIII's tyranny represented by Ramses II in Ozymandias and in this poem, 9/11 indicated by another plane based suicide attack
Bunting could also symbolise unwavering commitment to orders as ww2 fleets usually coordinated eachother by waving certain coloured flags to show orders such as no quarter or form a battle line
The word "arcing" could also hint for the flash fires that Kamikaze pilots would result in if they crash into enemy ships. If a ship gets hit with a shell or a kamikaze plane, it usually doesn't split in half. But, if the shell or plane hits the ship's ammunition, it causes a flash fire that "arcs" since it's a geyser of flame that tears the ship apart, which could show a traumatic flashback from the pilot and a foreshadowing of his potential fate
the asonance could be symbolic of a warcry of "tennou heika banzai" or "for the emperor" in which an "a" sound is stressed
Hi Mr Salles, I just wanted to thank you so much for helping me love English. I've always loved reading and writing stories, but when it came to high school and analysing literature I found it quite boring because I didn't understand the purpose of doing so or how to do it properly. Watching your videos has given me a much greater, in depth understanding of the purpose of literature which has helped me not only progress as a student but also as a person. I have realised that I have a much deeper knowledge of myself now, and that was a skill that I never thought I would learn from English. Thank you so much :)
That is more than I could hope for. Thanks for posting this!
please collab woth stacey reay that would be the ultimate grade 9 essay
Not a bad idea.
never have i been this confident with a poem before. Thank you so much!
sibilance could reflect the taunting idea of shame inside a samurai's mind, forcing him on
nice idea
@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish Thanks for all the great videos, you help so many!!!!
wow, you are the teacher i never had! thanks
i love your energy during the video, its really nice to see how passionate you are :D
the moment the video finished, the first thing I did was subscribe to ur channel. ur really helping, thank u so much
could you link 'swivelled towards the sun' to the story of Icarus, perhaps suggesting that his attempt to escape his fate (as Icarus escapes from Crete) is ultimately futile as it results in his metaphorical death? or is this too far fetched?
It is an interesting comparison. Icarus also defied orders - at least his father's instructions - which led to his death. The Kamikaze pilot does the same, and chooses life. This is, as you suggest, an ironic victory, as it leads to another kind of death. I think it is a great idea - which I shall steal happily!
Nice to add on that actually the pilots didn't have one way fuel. If the mission would seem to be an unlikely success, maybe there were too many battleships which would shoot the plane down if they got too close, or if they couldn't find any ships, they could always turn back, because obviously they needed to save men.
Thank you for the video!
It has really prepared me for my practice exam for tomorrow.
Does this work?
The use of assonance and sibilance in the beginning is confusing and overwhelms the reader. Perhaps, this is symbolic of the battle between the pilot's conscience and the world's expectations of him as a Kamikaze pilot???
Though I have one question, in what order is the poem being told (like first was the wife, and so on, and then it goes back to the wife's views)?
help whats the form and structure in this poem
Thanks, Mr Salles!
this is such a beautiful poem
Hi Sir
i am a little confused by the analysis on the figure of 8, can you explain it please
Thank you so much! Are you going to continue going through the poems?
Will do.
My target grade is a 9 but i really think i will get a 6 and i’m quite stressed. English is just so hard!! I’m taking my exams this year and i am really grateful for your videos. Hopefully i can make a large improvement! ps is anyone doing romeo and juliet and jeckyll and hyde for lit paper1?? can’t find many resources for romeo and juliet
I have lots on Jekyll and Hyde. I will do some Romeo and Juliet
Mr Salles Teaches English we’ve just started jeckyll and hyde can’t wait to use your videos. thank you so much you are so thoughtful i wish i could pay you
One day I'll get Patreon!
Hello Mr Salles, I just wanted to say thank you so much for helping me in English but do you have a grade 9 analysis of Blood Brothers and Christmas Carol?
Sorry, I don't
Helped me so much thank you ❤️
Do you reckon you'll have covered every poem this year?
Yes! I promise.
Hey there , I just got this really interesting idea and I want to know if I would be able to use it or if it makes sense . Maybe he didn’t come back as there was not enough fuel for one way, therefore dying but he came back as a spirit , suggesting that he did not finish him journey in life, and the poet is implying that the mission of kamikaze is stopping young men/soldiers from finishing their journey in life by being brainwashed and sacrificing their life for a place in history. I know it says the children were taught “to be silent” and that’s why I am asking if it would be okay to use this idea 💡. Anyhow thank you so much for helping me and many more students in our long and hard journey in gcse 😂😭🤦🏼♀️.
Daniela Nastuta sounds amazing
@Hardstuck Plat sounds like something i'd write to fill out an essay in the last 5 minutes of my English exam
great video, helped alot- thankyou.
Thank you for your videos, could you argue that when the pilot emotionally dies(after being isolated from his family and community) that he ironically becomes a kamikaze pilot in the sense that they were taught to forget their emotions and ideas about war, to improve their fighting skills. So even though he turned back, could Garland be implying that ideas like living on in ‘history’ be failing people
Could be
This is so helpful wow, thanks!
Glad it was helpful!
This poem makes me cry 😭
Samee
Thank you!
Please do one of these for Storm in the island sir
Wil do
@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish thank you for all your help and support.
Please can you do one of these for checking out me history?
yes
done my GCSE’s but love your videos
That's really kind. Thanks
Would u be able to cover a Christmas Carol ?? Thankyou !!
I think I have only 2 videos on A Christmas Carol
hi could you give me a good structure I can use and also can you write a grade 9 answer about Christmas carol
see my videos on comparing poems, and the boose method
Sorry, I am not teaching A level at the minute
Exam Tommorow guys
Yo I got a grade nine in English lit in gcse !!!
William neville-jones how?
The soundscape analysis... that's way too airy-fairy and abstract. Like, the "a" sound doesn't make an "ah" sound - you're just exaggerating it. And how does the 'i' sound reflect identity??? You were trying to analyse these sounds but had to result to this absurd interpretation because quite simply, she just chose these words, not for alliterative purposes.
I do understand that sound analysis has its place, but it has to be more realistic and deliberate than that (some examples here, of course, were more deliberate than others).
And I get how you're trying to contrast these sounds, but it just seems WAY too subtle and exaggerated.
You don't have to like them - take what works for you, and challenge the stuff that doesn't. Identity = I is what I was getting at, but I am happy for you to reject the idea.
@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish could you mention it and use it as an alternative interpretation
@@em8136 Yes
OK love calm down , if u don't like the idea , come up with you're own better ones
MR SALLES PLEASE REPLY!!!
Please mark this question out of 8, I just finished watching your English language paper 1 video-
How does the writer use language to describe Rosabel’s bus journey home?
The write uses a compound complex sentence to convey rosabels bus journey home as long and tiring. He does this by adding several pieces of punctuation to the sentence ‘ rosabel looked out the window;the street was blurred and misty, but light....’
This long compound complex sentence created the sense of chaos, perhaps reflecting how over wholeness rosabel was on her journey home. Perhaps this could be a message from the wrote to imply that public transport is not peaceful and empty like some of us readers may seem. However it could also suggest that rosabel is incapable of surviving a bus journey which involves crowds of people.
The Writer also uses negative adjectives such as ‘black’ ‘greasy’ and ‘sickening’ to describe rosabels bus journey home. The adjective ‘black’ creates connotations of sinister and evil which could be suggested by the reader that public transport is not safe. The writer also uses pathetic fallacy to describe the bus journey as dreaded. The writer describes the weather as ‘dull’ ‘blurred’ and ‘misty’ which perhaps could foreshadow the outcome of rosabels journey home. This ultimately makes the reader feel sacred and increases the tension as public transport is very common so it being des tubes as negative makes the reader want to avoid it.
PLEASE TELL ME WHAT MARK THIS WOULD BE!! I LOVE YOUR VIDEOS❤️❤️❤️❤️
First paragraph- ‘perhaps suggesting how OVERWHELMED rosabel was’ sorry typing error x
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Sibilance, soundscape. I- shows his individuality, he’s resolving his conflict, and realises he wants to preserve his identity
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