Hello there Lovelies! This was a sample of work a subscriber had given to share with you all. The Author is simply looking for feedback on the sample chapters and verbal/written support on how you liked/disliked the writing as an audience. Please send any feedback to: raisondetre4m@gmail.com A full preview to the book can also be found here: issuu.com/denisekieffer5/docs/preview?e=30681958/61487190 The Author found ASMR in 2015 and is an avid user, the book, noticably, has some trigger words when softly spoken/whispered! A little note from the Author: "I myself suffer from anxiety and depression, a lack of me-time, and amongst the chaos of life. This book will come in 2 page short story like chapters, so a chapter a day will get you enough story in smalltime setting. And hopefully enjoy 😊 And that me, as the author, supports sophiemichelle asmr, for her dedication to the practice itself 😊"
This was wonderful, thank you so much! As an author myself, I know how valuable honest opinions are. You've given this talented author quite a platform to receive reviews on her book. That's incredibly kind of you!
Some bookmarks to help you find where you left off! 3:35 preface 8:06 chapter 1 11:20 chapter 2 15:23 chapter 3 19:21 chapter 4 I'll add more as I progress through the video :)
“Two possibilities exist: either we are alone in the Universe or we are not. Both are equally terrifying.” -Arthur C. Clarke Not sure if she was just *alluding* to this quote or straight up plagiarizing.
Fiona G. The preface has some allusion to it, for the emphasis of achieving the whole idea of the book. As this quote was. But the main material will not include but very little allusion, for originalty. The character, Eric, has a personality of curiousity, and often will remember things through questioning memory. This preface was made for this emphasis, to "pack the punch" much like trailers are for movies. Very fresh to the process and as this is sample work, this is also considered to be 'rough draft.' Work continously changes as I progress with the story. As this is just for feedback, this is also helping me see what needs improvement. But i do thank you for addressing this, my intentions for this work are to be 100% original, and improvement is still taking place!
Im sure there is more life somewhere in the space. Earth seems huge but its a wery small place if we compare it to the universe. Universe is so massive and long. I bet there is something is watching us out there.
Your voice is soooo relaxing. Coupled with your accent you’re perfect for Asmr vids. I love book readings especially and this story had me hooked. Great job Denise!
Yeah as relaxing as this is.. I was so into the story. It sounded very well written and fascinated me! Great use of unusual or uncommon words, not in a pretentious way, but an intelligent subtle way. Very intrigued. Good job Denise! ❤️ & thanks Sophie for sharing, what a great person you are to help a writer in need of input.
I can’t believe I just found this! First off; Sophie. I adore your voice! It’s so relaxing and I got so many tingles! Second; Denise! You’re writing is amazing! I can’t wait for the entire book and I will wait however long it takes for you to finish it. You have a gift!
I love how the book contains so many trigger words. There's all sorts of beautiful consonants. The parts of the story I followed sounded very well written. Alas, I got to much into the triggers to follow the whole story. My compliments to the author! Great job!
Sophie, this is excellent as a sleep helper. Thank you. You have this habit, on most of your videos, where you look around or close your eyes then look back into the camera. Not particularly this video because you are reading but on other videos when you do that and look back into the camera, it is like a sweet treat. When you do that, it's like looking into our eyes with your big baby blues. I think eyes can be very expressive. Sometimes with a smile, sometimes not, but every time a treat...
Speaking of the universe, think a Brian Cox style universe, astronomy inspired video would be great. Always find them interesting and relaxing especially with your voice.
Hi Sophie, Im a new subscriber and I can’t tell you how much I’ve enjoyed your videos. This one especially. I like to listen at work to keep me from getting anxious and it helps me so much. Thank you so much for these videos.
Great Sophie Michele. You should do more reading videos. When I am stressed out I want to be read to in a soft whispering voice. It calms my nerves and helps me to relax. Thank you again. Your voice is wonderful and calming.
Yep, your intro alone is tingly and relaxing like your vids. I listen to asmr to relax and to help me sleep. I’ve yet to get to the end of any of your vids without drifting off, as well as a very softly spoken voice, you have gorgeous hypnotic eyes. And well done on supporting Denise and reading her book story. I enjoyed the story and this video. 👍
I'm sure this story is great, but my brain is so tingly and relaxed from the sound of your voice that it is physically impossible for me to actually process any of the words ♡♡♡
Sophie I went down a sleep meditation rabbit hole and found your channel and I'm so glad I decided to listen because your voice is Sooo soft and soothing which helps me fall into a good sleep, beings I've listened to other sleep channels but the music and sounds just don't do it for me.. I'm a happy subscriber now and being of Christian faith I think that book is interesting also... Ty😇✌
The preface made me cry as I instantly thought of the first moment I looked into the face of our daughter just moments after she was born. I’m sure this wasn’t the author’s intent, but it describes beautifully my feelings and emotions at the time. The story was enthralling and your voice gave it life. Beautiful 💕
My heart ❤❤❤💘. Im glad this brought joy to you! im wanting to jump back into the book but about a month after this was posted, life got pretty hectic, but i want to supply and get back to it soon! thank you so much for your feedback!💖
Poor chaps missed the like button huh? Lol not sure why anyone would dislike if they stuck around long enough. Anyway wassup random comments scroller !!!
I just now discovered you and this video when I searched “fall asleep to relaxing voice”. You are EXACTLY what I was hoping to find. It doesn’t hurt that you are stunningly beautiful as well. And I also connected with the story as it touches esoteric subjects that interest me. Amazing find today.
Perfect time for a video here in Sweden! I'll really try to listen to the book tomorrow but for now I will just watch the video, fall asleep and enjoy a good nights sleep. Good night!
Hey you! Yes you🌹. Close your eyes and relax, everything is okay right now. Be happy.🥰😴👍🏼start believe in you🙏🏻,and let's change •and remember: if it doesn't challenge you, it doesn't change you 💪🏻😍💪🏻🧚🏻♂️
Hey you! Yes you🌹. Close your eyes and relax, everything is okay right now. Be happy.🥰😴👍🏼start believe in you🙏🏻,and let's change •and remember: if it doesn't challenge you, it doesn't change you 💪🏻😍💪🏻🧚🏻♂️
Something strange is that yesterday when I ready to go to bed I thought this was really relaxing. But now it’s morning, and it doesn’t really seem that relaxing. Does this happen to anybody else?
Hello there Lovelies!
This was a sample of work a subscriber had given to share with you all.
The Author is simply looking for feedback on the sample chapters and verbal/written support on how you liked/disliked the writing as an audience.
Please send any feedback to: raisondetre4m@gmail.com
A full preview to the book can also be found here: issuu.com/denisekieffer5/docs/preview?e=30681958/61487190
The Author found ASMR in 2015 and is an avid user, the book, noticably, has some trigger words when softly spoken/whispered!
A little note from the Author:
"I myself suffer from anxiety and depression, a lack of me-time, and amongst the chaos of life. This book will come in 2 page short story like chapters, so a chapter a day will get you enough story in smalltime setting. And hopefully enjoy 😊
And that me, as the author, supports sophiemichelle asmr, for her dedication to the practice itself 😊"
awesome!
That's so great Soph!!
SophieMichelle ASMR Yupiii I am so happy about this reading video:) I wanted so much this kind of video from you:) Thank you:)
This was wonderful, thank you so much!
As an author myself, I know how valuable honest opinions are. You've given this talented author quite a platform to receive reviews on her book. That's incredibly kind of you!
SophieMichelle ASMR these last few weeks have been a nightmare for me and your videos have lifted my spirits so thank you
Thanks for helping me sleep lovely lady. Helps my sobriety, 1 year sober today.
James Craig congrats!
That is so awesome! Seriously well done James!
Congrats!
Wonderful xx
Nice bro, I’m happy for you
That mic can pick up barbs last breath from the upside down
Lol from stranger things lol you funny
I wonder if it could hear spiderboi disintergrating into nothing
Omg rip Barb :,(
😭😭😭
SophieMichelle ASMR Nooo it’s a good thing ❤️❤️
A horror movie ad played before this. I almost shit myself
Rachel m 😂
Oof 😂
(8/26/18)
Rachel m I really wonder if RUclips targets ASMR videos on purpose
Lmao!!!!🤣🤣🤣
LOL 😂 That happened to me before *does slow clap*
Some bookmarks to help you find where you left off!
3:35 preface
8:06 chapter 1
11:20 chapter 2
15:23 chapter 3
19:21 chapter 4
I'll add more as I progress through the video :)
Did that never happen?
Me too
He fallen asleep and is sleeping since 😅.
lol
i almost never get tingles and your intro is literally the ONLY thing that reliably gives me tingles :))
For real
Silhouette Skies for real
For real though ! Accurate
Silhouette Skies ikr she should do a video just doing that intro.
Fr!!
“Two possibilities exist: either we are alone in the Universe or we are not. Both are equally terrifying.”
-Arthur C. Clarke
Not sure if she was just *alluding* to this quote or straight up plagiarizing.
Fiona G. The preface has some allusion to it, for the emphasis of achieving the whole idea of the book. As this quote was. But the main material will not include but very little allusion, for originalty. The character, Eric, has a personality of curiousity, and often will remember things through questioning memory. This preface was made for this emphasis, to "pack the punch" much like trailers are for movies. Very fresh to the process and as this is sample work, this is also considered to be 'rough draft.' Work continously changes as I progress with the story. As this is just for feedback, this is also helping me see what needs improvement. But i do thank you for addressing this, my intentions for this work are to be 100% original, and improvement is still taking place!
It’s good to see these things before the final product, beta readers really help to flag things that need a citation or revision
Im sure there is more life somewhere in the space. Earth seems huge but its a wery small place if we compare it to the universe. Universe is so massive and long. I bet there is something is watching us out there.
YES. THIS. 👏👏👏👏👏
Not terrifying I would like to back to my sleep before I was born .
I feel like she’s so underrated, i found her a while back and she has grown-but i feel like she’s incredible and more people need to see this!!!!
Me- i love this how relaxing
My brain- I’ll love to fart into that mic
🤣🤣🤣
You killed me bro hahahah
I can't stop laughing 🤣😂🤣
Oh lard 😂😂😂😂
😂😂😂😂😂
Ohhh my God, this girl is marvelous, she makes me sleep
Do you know God?
Boy
Thats so nice
Same here
God
This is my favourite Asmr channel. Sophie Michelle has the most calming voice and may I ad a very beautiful look.
Your voice is soooo relaxing. Coupled with your accent you’re perfect for Asmr vids. I love book readings especially and this story had me hooked. Great job Denise!
Yeah as relaxing as this is.. I was so into the story. It sounded very well written and fascinated me! Great use of unusual or uncommon words, not in a pretentious way, but an intelligent subtle way. Very intrigued. Good job Denise! ❤️ & thanks Sophie for sharing, what a great person you are to help a writer in need of input.
Emma Madsen thank you so much!
Hey Emma u are like such a point proover
Reminds me of my English teacher
Very cool of you to read a subscriber's material, you're awesome, Sophie. Thanks for another great vid!
Your voice is very calm and is very satisfying to listen to. Thank you for stopping my stress
Just such a lovely voice. I don't know how to explain this. I always listen to a video before going to bed!!
Me: **clicks new video**
Ad before the video with the volume turned all the way up : WE ARE *DESTRUCTION*
LMFAO 😂
😆
EXACTLY . Its evil. I zoomed to the end to check if a LOUD ad would be at the end too, just great for gaining trust@!!
@LindenKusserow is your name just swedish lisa kudrow?
I can’t believe I just found this! First off; Sophie. I adore your voice! It’s so relaxing and I got so many tingles! Second; Denise! You’re writing is amazing! I can’t wait for the entire book and I will wait however long it takes for you to finish it. You have a gift!
Imagine that you're right about to sleep and she suddenly sneezed right at the mic jshsksjjsjs
Loool
bro
She’d edit it out, like are you dumb?
Wtf learn to write lol
Thanks for ruining my sleep session.. I was noticing during the video.. If she's going to sneeze..
I love how the book contains so many trigger words. There's all sorts of beautiful consonants. The parts of the story I followed sounded very well written. Alas, I got to much into the triggers to follow the whole story. My compliments to the author! Great job!
Sophie, this is excellent as a sleep helper. Thank you.
You have this habit, on most of your videos, where you look around or close your eyes then look back into the camera. Not particularly this video because you are reading but on other videos when you do that and look back into the camera, it is like a sweet treat. When you do that, it's like looking into our eyes with your big baby blues. I think eyes can be very expressive. Sometimes with a smile, sometimes not, but every time a treat...
Goosebumps and tingles. This is perfect for listening to when trying to sleep. Enjoying the story!
8:07 just a time stamp for chapter one because i want to listen to this book later
searched: soothing voice
so I could get to sleep.
It worked. You’re like an angel.
Why isn't this woman at the top of the ASMR scene yet?
Oh my god...ur a asmr goddess...i never heard a voice so soft and calming
Speaking of the universe, think a Brian Cox style universe, astronomy inspired video would be great. Always find them interesting and relaxing especially with your voice.
Very good I finally found my zen. Took me long enough. Yay thank you!
this is it. great. i love the way she speaks. i find whispers unbearably annoying. This kinda soft speaking is the perfect amount
Hi Sophie,
Im a new subscriber and I can’t tell you how much I’ve enjoyed your videos. This one especially. I like to listen at work to keep me from getting anxious and it helps me so much.
Thank you so much for these videos.
I fell asleep and woke up with a sheet of paper with questions in it🤧.
The British accent gives me tingles out of asmr too. So this combination of accent and asmr is faaacinating and marvelous! Thank you, Sophie.
The simple sound of your voice was enough for me :)
The introduction of reading is amazing ..I keep re watching the video ..its so real. love it
Should definitely do more reading videos like this. 10/10 I fall asleep fast every time.
Yay! Thank you!
Great Sophie Michele. You should do more reading videos. When I am stressed out I want to be read to in a soft whispering voice. It calms my nerves and helps me to relax. Thank you again. Your voice is wonderful and calming.
You look like an absolutely gorgeous combination of Molly Burke and Zooey Deschanel
more erica carroll than molly burke for me :)
I LOVE MOLLY BURKE AND AGREE!!!
Normally I don’t really like soft spoken videos but your voice is just so soothing 😍 I love your videos and i just enjoy watching you! 💜💜
Yep, your intro alone is tingly and relaxing like your vids. I listen to asmr to relax and to help me sleep. I’ve yet to get to the end of any of your vids without drifting off, as well as a very softly spoken voice, you have gorgeous hypnotic eyes. And well done on supporting Denise and reading her book story. I enjoyed the story and this video. 👍
ik Denise irl btw
I'm sure this story is great, but my brain is so tingly and relaxed from the sound of your voice that it is physically impossible for me to actually process any of the words ♡♡♡
mk
I really enjoyed this, I'd love if you could do some more whispered reading. This was so relaxing!
Sophie I went down a sleep meditation rabbit hole and found your channel and I'm so glad I decided to listen because your voice is Sooo soft and soothing which helps me fall into a good sleep, beings I've listened to other sleep channels but the music and sounds just don't do it for me.. I'm a happy subscriber now and being of Christian faith I think that book is interesting also... Ty😇✌
I am also Christian and I am soulful. The book is great 😊
The preface made me cry as I instantly thought of the first moment I looked into the face of our daughter just moments after she was born. I’m sure this wasn’t the author’s intent, but it describes beautifully my feelings and emotions at the time. The story was enthralling and your voice gave it life. Beautiful 💕
My heart ❤❤❤💘. Im glad this brought joy to you! im wanting to jump back into the book but about a month after this was posted, life got pretty hectic, but i want to supply and get back to it soon! thank you so much for your feedback!💖
This was also the same for me. I thought of my two sons. Beautiful x
Beautifully done, Sophie!!! Would love to hear more of the story! 😊
I love your voice so much, its so relaxing! ✨❤️
There's one word that describes you best, and it is *lovely*. You truly embody the meaning of the word
really good video sophie :) have a nice evening!
This is a great idea to help out one of your subs! Genuinely fantastic!
Please do this soft verbal reading more. I need more of this asmr from you ❤️❤️
This las is just *chefs kiss* amazing!!! I love her voice, it’s so relaxing :D
just in time! you are my favorite, keep doing the great work. Lots of love! 💕💕💕
Ironically, I was just thinking yesterday about how I used to fall asleep reading books and realized that it’d make a great asmr video!💕
Poor chaps missed the like button huh? Lol not sure why anyone would dislike if they stuck around long enough. Anyway wassup random comments scroller !!!
H0I!!!
Yo
nah they liked it so much they turned their phone upside down and liked it again
ay yooo
Thomas Nichols some people just don’t like the video
The book is beautifully written and your voice is amazingly 💜
i’m inlove with your accent🥺
Your voice is so satisfying
I almost fell asleep 😴
I love this it’s so relaxing
I just now discovered you and this video when I searched “fall asleep to relaxing voice”. You are EXACTLY what I was hoping to find. It doesn’t hurt that you are stunningly beautiful as well. And I also connected with the story as it touches esoteric subjects that interest me. Amazing find today.
Honestly, just listening to your regular introduction tingles the ass out of me xx
Me haha 😂
I thought I was alone 😂😂
Tony Abrahams never alone
Tony Abrahams hope not everyone needs an ass
"Ass tingle triggers"
Thank you so much my ears were hurting and I was like let me listen to a same I saw ur video and literally listened and it HELPED SO MUCH thank you!
Not same sorry asmr
Very relaxing video, Sophie... 😌😴👌❤
Your voice and accent is amazing for story telling ASMR’s!
omg i love your voice and the book
Your voice is like silk 😍😍😍 thx 🙏🏼 for the sleep 😴 it helped because I have sleeping 💤 issues and you help me prepare a better day for tomorrow 💖
Omg your eyes are incredibly beautiful. Loved your reading, thanks
This, guys, is my new favorite person
I love ❤️ her voice so soothing and relaxing putting me to sleep like a baby
Sophie, please never leave us you beautiful ASMR angel, guardian of our dreams, guide of our slumber.
Wow at first i took this as a joke but i tried go to sleep with this vid and after 3 minutes i was already sleeping😇
YES THIS IS EXACTLY THE KIND OF VOICE IVE BEEN SEARCHING FOR.
Dude i was about to fall asleep, when my mom comes into my room and gives me a dirty look for no reason.
Wtf
Lmao
You were all 😴
She was all 🤨
Then you were all 😳
Hahaha m8 I know how that feels but with my grandma lol
Lmao
I’m so glad you did this! Thank you!
Im super late :'(
But thats not gonna stop me from watching this video and telling how great and soothing Your voice is! More pls 😊❤ !
shes literally summer from 500 days of summer movie, right? look at her, like damn shes stunning
Let's just say, we are listening to this and about to fall asleep and then SUDDENLY an advertisement pop up and it make us become awake👁👄👁
Thx for helping me fall asleep
Her voice is amazing and her accent 😍
You have the best soft spoken voice I have ever heard. I was a puddle the entire time
Your so beautiful your eyes pop so much and never let the haters get to you.
*you're
Cute as a button
@@jdwme1962 every single one of you
*you're
Perfect time for a video here in Sweden! I'll really try to listen to the book tomorrow but for now I will just watch the video, fall asleep and enjoy a good nights sleep. Good night!
Hey you! Yes you🌹. Close your eyes and relax, everything is okay right now. Be happy.🥰😴👍🏼start believe in you🙏🏻,and let's change •and remember: if it doesn't challenge you, it doesn't change you 💪🏻😍💪🏻🧚🏻♂️
Hey you! Yes you🌹. Close your eyes and relax, everything is okay right now. Be happy.🥰😴👍🏼start believe in you🙏🏻,and let's change •and remember: if it doesn't challenge you, it doesn't change you 💪🏻😍💪🏻🧚🏻♂️
I never knew something like this exist , but this is the best thing for my current emotional state. I am grateful to you. Big thumbs up👍
loved the readings, beautiful voice sophie
Thank you! This author is wonderful!
Definitely gonna repeat watch this tonight
Very pleasant and relaxing! Wonderful ASMR voice. I feel refreshed. Does wonders for my high blood pressure. Thank you!
The cover is so pretty
Your voice is so soothing ☺️
Ooh your voice is really relaxing~
Thank you 😊
I almost fell asleep at the start of the video that’s how good it is
You’re voice is sooooooooooooo relaxing. IGNORE THAT HATERS BOI
I've been looking for this kind of asmr
Something strange is that yesterday when I ready to go to bed I thought this was really relaxing. But now it’s morning, and it doesn’t really seem that relaxing. Does this happen to anybody else?
This is beautiful, Sophie. Thank you. 😊
I can't fall asleep, idk but this story makes me think weird.. but your voice is relaxing me tho 😅
Her voice is so smoooooth and soft
I like her voice
I really love your voice and your accent! 😍❤️ Now I’m waiting for a part two...😉🙏🏻
Did you change your hair colour? It looks super good and kinda lighter I think?
岩倉レイン nah i think its just because of the lighting
2yrs later and I’m still obsessed with this video. So many tingles. Maybe a whispered book reading next? 🥺
Thanks for the nice video and sound..
You're so good at reading quietly. More please!