Gateway To The Void: Despair In The Abyss

This is the fourth song in the album in which this track represents the despair we feel when cornered in life. Nothing makes sense, everything is just a blur, and that sense of insecurity grows louder and louder every second like an untamed beast. The noises and unintelligible voices scream but in the abyss of our mind nothing can be registered because we have shut ourselves out from the world.
Feel free to give me feedback so that I can improve on this. I want to make music to the best of my ability and highly appreciate any suggestions on what to include or remove and such.
Also anyone can use this song as long as it’s credited. Thank you!