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  • @Natalia_NS
    @Natalia_NS 4 года назад +191

    So, are you telling me that life is mean to me because I’m the perfect protagonist of my own story? Wow

  • @SelfTytled
    @SelfTytled 4 года назад +204

    i’m in film school, and i’ve taken real courses on screenwriting, but this video pretty much sums it up. so why am i at university when i have jack howard?

  • @jaack
    @jaack 4 года назад +46

    Great advice mate.

    • @JackHoward
      @JackHoward  4 года назад +8

      Cheers Jack x

    • @dan5721
      @dan5721 4 года назад +1

      Jack and other Jack. Ha.

  • @lizibeff
    @lizibeff 4 года назад +98

    I am not a writer but of course I shall still watch this video, because jack

  • @jessestresse
    @jessestresse 4 года назад +9

    I really like the advice that flips the "write what you know" thing to become "know what you write" -- like, write whatever you want, but research it so you're not writing it clumsily without being informed

  • @UselessJack
    @UselessJack 4 года назад +33

    "are you torturing your characters enough?"
    *rereads the project i'm stuck on*
    oh...

  • @BardenHasACamera
    @BardenHasACamera 4 года назад +41

    That example about Marlin in Finding Nemo is absolutely perfect and gave me immediate inspiration to make one of my own characters much more compelling. Thank you!

  • @thatguy7521
    @thatguy7521 4 года назад +23

    Jack just explained what took my english teacher 3 months to teach. What's better is that he used shrek as THE ONLY example for all of these tips. I watched shrek 3 times in those months.

  • @parastusherafatian472
    @parastusherafatian472 4 года назад +21

    Looking forward to your analysis of "Little Miss Sunshine" 😍

  • @luciabee
    @luciabee 4 года назад +14

    oh my god YES, *PLEASE* talk about little miss sunshine. it's probably my favorite film, i love it so much. also this video was so lovely!! thank you so much for making it! you did a great job condensing big ideas into simple points that make intuitive sense.

  • @minnieatkins
    @minnieatkins 4 года назад +69

    I wish Chris Chibnall (aka the new doctor who show runner) listened to “show don’t tell”. Great video once again Jack!

    • @pluto1093
      @pluto1093 4 года назад +4

      HELLO FELLOW WHOVIAN I AGREE WITH YOU

    • @angishangi2876
      @angishangi2876 4 года назад +1

      Yes

    • @StevenDavisonYT
      @StevenDavisonYT 4 года назад +6

      Blows my mind how he did this so well in Broadchurch and yet in Doctor Who it's almost the opposite

    • @talkingpictures8152
      @talkingpictures8152 4 года назад +2

      Jasmine A if you want good writing advice the Writer’s Tale by Russel T Davis is very good and it’s Doctor Who too 😊

    • @harrywilliamson11
      @harrywilliamson11 4 года назад

      Chris Chibnal who?

  • @aurora-ub1po
    @aurora-ub1po 4 года назад +3

    "Are you torturing your characters enough? Be mean to them" is quite literally the best writing tip when it comes to creating characters that make sense and connect with the audience/reader

  • @jordanwaterwash2250
    @jordanwaterwash2250 4 года назад +17

    very helpful! i do developmental book editing and honestly this can totally apply to prose as well - especially what you say about protagonists and “writing what you know.”

  • @superdisco98
    @superdisco98 4 года назад +23

    Im Trying to be a writer and I don't think I've ever clicked on a notification so fast 😂

  • @theadventuresoflilhan
    @theadventuresoflilhan 4 года назад +4

    Please do a series on screenwriting! this is so interesting and i love the way you explain things!

  • @junotaylorthetrans1064
    @junotaylorthetrans1064 4 года назад +59

    "Anything with an Er?"
    May I suggest... Murderer.

  • @Geomist
    @Geomist 4 года назад +2

    I finished my Masters in Creative Writing and I just love watching Jack’s videos on writing. These videos feel like discussions but I never have to say anything, I just find myself nodding.

  • @elizabethrenton9715
    @elizabethrenton9715 4 года назад +1

    I honestly think all the years you've spent creating amazing content ABSOLUTELY gives you the right to give writing advice 😂😂

  • @lizziecallaghan4995
    @lizziecallaghan4995 4 года назад

    Not a filmmaker or writer or anything like that, but movies and stories like Finding Nemo are why I easily gravitate towards animated films and TV shows just as much as live-action, and why I don't understand people that go "but it's a caRTOOON SO IT'S FOR KIDS?!??!" Like just because the target audience for a piece of media is younger doesn't mean the content is not good.
    Great video Jack, hope you're staying well x

  • @MoviesMaria
    @MoviesMaria 4 года назад

    Yes Jack! Little Miss Sunshine is my favorite film. I am so excited for the analysis video.

  • @cordiecrisfield
    @cordiecrisfield 3 года назад

    Great tips, Jack! Still keen/excited for/waiting for your little miss sunshine video - love that filmmmmm

  • @FlipperTea
    @FlipperTea 4 года назад

    YES. Please do this as a series, I want to hear more~

  • @thecaringllama
    @thecaringllama 4 года назад

    THANK YOU! I have just started my journey into Writing screenplays and this is awesome

  • @melissahanson6914
    @melissahanson6914 4 года назад

    This is really helpful for my film coursework, thank you Jack

  • @SevrapondBlogspot
    @SevrapondBlogspot 4 года назад

    Brilliant video with quality content as always. I can’t wait to watch your Little Miss Sunshine video. Such a special film.

  • @HannahIsRandomSir
    @HannahIsRandomSir 4 года назад

    this is...exactly what I needed. thank you so much

  • @laurakojobeecham4872
    @laurakojobeecham4872 4 года назад

    Cannot wait for the Little Miss Sunshine video - I adore everything about that film!

  • @LeahHolt22
    @LeahHolt22 4 года назад

    Absolutely loved this jack, so helpful! Thank you☺️

  • @willwitham
    @willwitham 4 года назад

    This advice seems like it very much would apply to prose and I can’t wait to use this for my next uni assignment

  • @xsleepingsun
    @xsleepingsun 4 года назад

    loved this! looking forward to the video on little miss sunshine ☀️

  • @Joyce-qg7ub
    @Joyce-qg7ub 4 года назад

    Thank you Jack! I just started a playwriting class and am nervous and excited for it. Excited to create, but nervous because I've not written many stories before let alone plays! I think all these tips can be applied to all writing! I will defiantly be coming back to remind myself of these tips! What you said made a lot of sense. I just need to go practice now!

  • @HoneyBee-mq6cm
    @HoneyBee-mq6cm 4 года назад

    Reminded me of my old English teacher back in my sophomore year. Great advice!

  • @jokomayuga2101
    @jokomayuga2101 4 года назад

    Absolutely amazing and so informative, I'm just a Yr 10 GCSE student and I found this to be so helpful with my English literature, thank you and keep up the good work Jack.

  • @Joshsamet
    @Joshsamet 4 года назад +1

    I love you’re writing man

  • @dan5721
    @dan5721 4 года назад

    Love scriptwriting (apart from the technicalities of layout and all the rest of its so complicated help) and this has given me quite a few cool ideas of how I could develop some of my characters and stories, thanks Jack!

  • @keikilani_bgibson
    @keikilani_bgibson 4 года назад

    This was so well done Jack, thank you!

  • @TimesFace_
    @TimesFace_ 4 года назад

    i will be watching this over and over, this is incredibly helpful

  • @jon_franklin
    @jon_franklin 4 года назад

    This is absolutely perfect. At Confetti we've just been given a writing task like an hour ago!

  • @SincerelyMelaniexx
    @SincerelyMelaniexx 4 года назад

    ooh this got me inspired to write and brainstorm new ideas!! have loved following along on your writing/directing/filmmaking journey jack - i’ve got a lot of similar interests plus i just think you’re a funny dude haha. so thanks for letting us!

  • @_henryd_
    @_henryd_ 4 года назад +1

    THANK YOU!! THANK. YOU. THIS VIDEO IS SO HELPFUL! I FORGOT TO TURN CAPS OFF AND NOW I'M JUST GONNA KEEP IT LIKE THIS. THANK YOU!

  • @heyitsgabs21
    @heyitsgabs21 4 года назад +41

    am i torturing my characters enough? yeah, maybe a little too much.

  • @nadyrafauzia467
    @nadyrafauzia467 4 года назад

    Thanks for this jack. I thought I was going to quit writing but after watching this maybe I should give it at least one more try

  • @julietvandoornik3213
    @julietvandoornik3213 4 года назад

    now THIS is a good video. been wanting to write a screenplay during the summer and my gap year, so thanks for the final push. omw to my notepad!

  • @ruthisaiah3857
    @ruthisaiah3857 4 года назад +1

    Really appreciate your insightful videos and this one was very informative. Thank you, Jack!

    • @JackHoward
      @JackHoward  4 года назад +2

      Thanks for watching, Ruth :)

  • @armandamura7336
    @armandamura7336 4 года назад

    You talking about filmmaking is literally my favourite thing. This video confirmed that again

  • @BryanZam9
    @BryanZam9 4 года назад

    Hey Jack, thank you for this video, I think I really needed it

  • @SabrinaJohns
    @SabrinaJohns 2 года назад

    love your content jack!

  • @coolguylungs
    @coolguylungs 4 года назад +1

    I love Little Miss Sunshine for the same reasons, would be awesome to see a full breakdown from you!

  • @jadenicole29
    @jadenicole29 4 года назад

    This is so helpful! THANK YOu for making this video 💜

  • @tesslacey-hatton6684
    @tesslacey-hatton6684 4 года назад

    so so ready for that little miss sunshine analysis yes pleeeease

  • @hancarbery
    @hancarbery 4 года назад

    thank you for this!!!

  • @troodon_2000
    @troodon_2000 4 года назад +12

    Releasing this the day before July NaNoWriMo is very timely of you 😅 time to get motivated to write!

  • @UMNIA
    @UMNIA 4 года назад

    omg i can't believe you mentioned that episode of scriptnotes, it changed my LIFE - it's the best source for how to write a movie ever made no cap

  • @MikesBakes
    @MikesBakes 4 года назад

    I love your videos Jack! Thanks for the advice!

  • @mayowls6055
    @mayowls6055 4 года назад

    the thought of all the thoughts that went into the story of finding nemo just gave me goosebumps

  • @rubberduckyofsteel
    @rubberduckyofsteel 4 года назад

    great video! a lot of the points you touched upon in in the book Invisible Ink. one of my absolute favourite books on writing if anyones looking for recs!

  • @anamarsproductions360
    @anamarsproductions360 4 года назад

    i love these informative videos! I'm an aspiring writer, however i like to focus on novels as well as screenwriting, i think that the film vision when writing something that isnt in film is really interesting too, so all of this I'd like to apply to that. In a way when writing I know it's very unlikely for a movie to be adapted from it, so I write in a novel format. Just something interesting I thought on this :)

  • @JamesMorfa
    @JamesMorfa 4 года назад +1

    I'd add "try to give your characters the best introduction possible, so that they stick in the mind of the audience." Give your audience an image that not only tells them who the character is, but one that also makes them memorable. Again, the Joker in Dark Knight is a brilliant example, but the one I will always point to is Miss Havisham in Great Expectations... Pip enters her crumbling old mansion and in one of the rooms, which is dark and full of stale old wedding cake, he finds this crazy looking old lady in a rotten wedding dress. It says it all about her.

  • @TheGeorgia1Rose
    @TheGeorgia1Rose 4 года назад

    Great video! Might you be able to do a video explaining the practical, formatting side of script writing? Things like the layout with dialogue versus description, sluglines, scene changes/length, how to make dialogue realistic and how to make characters come to life? Really interested in your writing process!😊

  • @anoushkadutta3880
    @anoushkadutta3880 4 года назад

    thanks jack this is acc super useful!!

  • @Thaliathetree
    @Thaliathetree 4 года назад

    You know, I’ve actually been writing (or slowly trying to write) a tv script and this came at a weirdly perfect time to give me the push I needed today.
    Also, that’s a great shirt. Looks great.

  • @AmyTerrell
    @AmyTerrell 4 года назад +3

    Have you seen the HBO show Barry? Bill Hader is a genius. That’s all I could think about during this. Great thoughts!

  • @beanhope8739
    @beanhope8739 4 года назад

    I'm don't usually comment on videos, but O M G this video is going in my favorites. It sums up everything so well and Jack's videos, in general, have helped me open my eyes to taking in films differently. (in a good way) I would LOVE to see a video analysis on Little Miss Sunshine

  • @ireallydidntwanttomakeanac575
    @ireallydidntwanttomakeanac575 4 года назад

    I like this. More of these types of videos, please!

  • @blaecaster1697
    @blaecaster1697 4 года назад +1

    I really needed this

  • @JanetSuzanne
    @JanetSuzanne 4 года назад

    Yesss do a whole video about little miss sunshine!!

  • @nezbut7
    @nezbut7 4 года назад

    loveeeee this stuff!

  • @jaychilton9507
    @jaychilton9507 4 года назад

    I'm in the middle of editing the book I'm trying to write, and I definitely had to rework the plot after the first draft because of the lack of conflict past a certain point. I'm going to apply your advice to my work so I can try and make it the best it can be!

  • @MiniBristow
    @MiniBristow 4 года назад +4

    Challenge accepted - Time travel vampire romance coming up

    • @JackHoward
      @JackHoward  4 года назад +4

      I’d like to put my name in the hat to direct

  • @StevenDavisonYT
    @StevenDavisonYT 4 года назад

    Definitely make more like this!

  • @SadEntropy
    @SadEntropy 4 года назад

    Yessss Little Miss Sunshine is my fave 🖤

  • @assassino447
    @assassino447 4 года назад +2

    We need more Jack and Dean shorts you lazy man.
    Also, thank you for the great tips.

  • @dennis_mihaylov
    @dennis_mihaylov 3 года назад

    Gosh, man you`re amazing
    U helped so a lot

  • @TenthSgtSnipes
    @TenthSgtSnipes 4 года назад

    This makes me feel happy! 😄

  • @supitsheyyyalyssa
    @supitsheyyyalyssa 4 года назад

    never stop making videos shesh. also, please do movie reviews as often as you like ✨👏🏻

  • @succiholmes5803
    @succiholmes5803 4 года назад +1

    Hey Jack, I just wanted to say I support you and Love you ❣️love you,tim and sammy as well x3

  • @sobennison7344
    @sobennison7344 4 года назад +4

    Is Jack Howard's arch just slowly becoming a Light Squidge.
    (As apposed to Dark Squidge)

  • @SaighdeoirArcher
    @SaighdeoirArcher 4 года назад

    Thank you

  • @caitlinmcmahon9190
    @caitlinmcmahon9190 4 года назад

    Only took 7 minutes and 27 seconds to single handedly save what I thought was the end to my interest in film. I literally just wrote a short film idea after watching this and now I'm excited to make films again wtf Jack

  • @ACrabInATree
    @ACrabInATree 3 года назад

    God this is a great video, how am I only just watching it 🤦🏻‍♀️ suuuuuuper helpful thanks! Also, great shirt, big fan.

  • @morgan_coull
    @morgan_coull 4 года назад

    Just started to write my first script so this arrived at the perfect time!

  • @harambecca
    @harambecca 3 года назад

    every time I watch a video by you it makes me wanna go out and make a movie right at this second lol. so thank you :)

  • @solidmoonbeams8939
    @solidmoonbeams8939 4 года назад +2

    How in Hylia’s name has Jack just single handedly cured my writer’s block???

  • @DLO-wm2bo
    @DLO-wm2bo 4 года назад

    I don't do anything like this but honestly this was so interesting to watch

  • @ninagordin7397
    @ninagordin7397 4 года назад

    Little miss sunshine is my absolute fav movie!

  • @mickeleh
    @mickeleh 4 года назад

    another winner. Thanks.

  • @AEmiliusLives
    @AEmiliusLives 4 года назад

    Good stuff. And I say it as a filmschool dropout and frustrated... everything 🤣

  • @finbailie9619
    @finbailie9619 4 года назад

    Not a film writer or director but I love videos like this

  • @micha-yi3to
    @micha-yi3to 4 года назад

    Very helpful!

  • @henriklarsen8193
    @henriklarsen8193 4 года назад

    More like this. Not sure why I wasn't subbed, but I am now!

  • @gingetomassi8153
    @gingetomassi8153 3 года назад

    Just watched Little Miss Sunshine for the first time. Thank you.

  • @TheGraceOfEbonee
    @TheGraceOfEbonee 4 года назад

    Before this, I got an ad for Spike Lee's masterclass. Between that an this video, it has really inspired me. Makes me remember my acting classes and things I had forgot about.

  • @babyj5184
    @babyj5184 4 года назад

    Would love to see the breakdown of little miss sunshine, childhood favourite!

  • @zlee001
    @zlee001 4 года назад +2

    I need to start writing my novels.

  • @MrCRAIGJSTEVENS
    @MrCRAIGJSTEVENS 4 года назад

    Jack your hair and scruff are on point bro.

  • @mxmissy
    @mxmissy 4 года назад

    Jack, I know you said that this is really only for screenwriting, but I really fucking appreciate it for my novels. It made me think a lot, so thank you!

  • @anna-maymoon1001
    @anna-maymoon1001 4 года назад

    For real tho very helpful thank you ❤
    I'm too much imagination and not enough why or how and it's the why or how that makes writing hard for me

  • @nathanr5737
    @nathanr5737 4 года назад

    I’d love to see an analysis of little miss sunshine, one of my favourite films

  • @stevenlomon
    @stevenlomon 4 года назад +3

    6:08 I haven't seen Finding Nemo in well over 10 years, is that really how it starts?? Sweet baby Jesus

  • @KateNSW
    @KateNSW 4 года назад

    Yes to Little Miss Sunshine video 🌞