Weird Secret for Writing Metal Lyrics When You Have Writer's Block

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  • Опубликовано: 28 авг 2024
  • How many unwritten songs do you have sitting around? Here's an even better question - how many songs to you actually have released?
    ***Turn your metal riffs, lyrics, and ideas into complete songs:
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    Writer's block happens to all of us at some point. It's the one thing musicians struggle with the most.
    This lyric writing strategy works like magic, especially if you have writer's block, or what we call songwriter's block.
    It's a bit unorthodox. And the first things you write down may not end up in your song. In fact, the final lyrics may not be anywhere near it.
    But the idea is to get you taking action. And putting your pen to paper is the absolute best way to get those metal lyric ideas flowing.
    Remember, take action first. The motivation and ideas will follow.
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Комментарии • 149

  • @metalmastermind
    @metalmastermind  3 года назад +17

    ***Turn your metal riffs, lyrics, and ideas into complete songs:
    metalmastermind.com/metal-songwriters-forge/

    • @baileygaffney2205
      @baileygaffney2205 2 года назад +1

      You are a legend man

    • @TheScorpion615
      @TheScorpion615 Год назад

      Tired of how thing's are going
      Not sure how much more i can take
      I feel like I'm about to break!!!
      Blackout,body aches
      My life feels like an earthquake

    • @user-rg6qo9xg7u
      @user-rg6qo9xg7u 9 месяцев назад

      Same mines called demonic eclipse 😅

  • @TL-uq3hq
    @TL-uq3hq Год назад +49

    Bro I am a young black man in my mid 20s and this resonates with me so good. I'm heavily inspired by rock music but it's so hard for me to come up with lyrics for rock. These tips helped substantially 🙏🏽

    • @metalmastermind
      @metalmastermind  Год назад +11

      Awesome to hear that. Those lyrics are deep within you. Sometimes you just have to start writing, start moving those fingers, and lyrics will come out. They won't all be great but you'll be practicing and you'll be surprised what you can come up with

    • @youngsuccess6330
      @youngsuccess6330 13 дней назад

      Born in 1999 Jamaican/Afro cuban (me) and i got back into playing guitar in may of the past year and my drummer & i are starting to do gigs Never let something slow u down if u want it. just put in the time. i have people that tell me i play good 4 how little long ive been playing and im like no way i suck but ive written a few songs and performed and sometimes its just the time u put into it you can surprise yourself. i practice guitar 5 hrs a day and keep it up i have to practice more writing everything is just practice.

  • @kryskrys9604
    @kryskrys9604 2 года назад +80

    Starting a band with buddies and im the voccalist, im tryna find experience and this is my first time, thanks for the help!!

    • @metalmastermind
      @metalmastermind  2 года назад +7

      Awesome to hear that! Oh, and as a vocalist, you may want to check out our metal vocal course here: metalmastermind.com/metal-vocal-virtuoso/

    • @Decaying_Bl00d
      @Decaying_Bl00d Год назад +2

      @@metalmastermind I’m also starting a band with my buddies and I’m the vocals so thanks

    • @redx2gaming69
      @redx2gaming69 7 месяцев назад +2

      @@metalmastermindnah just do the Iowa scream for two songs and never talk again 👍

    • @Dracarys.tv.official
      @Dracarys.tv.official 3 месяца назад

      Same😂

    • @RDMHOFFICIAL
      @RDMHOFFICIAL 2 месяца назад

      Im on Spotify already. Just started lol

  • @mowogfpv7582
    @mowogfpv7582 7 месяцев назад +5

    This lesson is how to write adequate placeholder lyrics when you don’t really have anything important or meaningful to say. Basically metallica post 1991.

    • @metalmastermind
      @metalmastermind  7 месяцев назад

      Yes it can certainly be used for that and also to develop the melody. But it’s also used to simply write something rather than nothing to spark ideas.

  • @BlazertronGames
    @BlazertronGames Год назад +8

    Pain, devouring my soul, struggling to stay alive
    Need to push through, to prime my mind, for the battle ahead will not be kind
    [Chorus/main riff starts]
    So cheesy, haha.

  • @dylanbillups384
    @dylanbillups384 2 года назад +15

    As ridiculous as the topic you chose for the song was, this video was super helpful. Me and my band sat around for an half an hour trying to write lyrics and we had nothing. I will show this to my bandmates and it will help all of us write music.

    • @metalmastermind
      @metalmastermind  2 года назад +2

      Lol, yeah that was a crazy example! Really glad to hear this helped you and your band...at the end of the day, that's what it's all about!
      Also, we have a mini-course on songwriting here: metalmastermind.com/metal-songwriting-crash-course/

  • @thegatingskardener9842
    @thegatingskardener9842 2 года назад +6

    18:48
    Don't worry, it was just passion🤘

  • @nattheafro
    @nattheafro Год назад +5

    i usually don't comment but i have to thank you for this! Thank you for being so transparent and real

    • @metalmastermind
      @metalmastermind  Год назад

      We appreciate you taking the time to comment and glad this helped!

  • @finn3461
    @finn3461 Год назад +12

    Something I learned quite quickly is a thesaurus is your best friend

  • @2charliegotguns2
    @2charliegotguns2 3 года назад +29

    Jason, this is awesome! I love the whiteboard format please do more like this! I was on a bike ride a few days ago and for some reason I started thinking about people I've known who are such liars and Bullsh*#ers. Seeing this video today really inspires me todo somthing about that in lyrical form. thanks very much! 🤘

    • @metalmastermind
      @metalmastermind  3 года назад +3

      Thank you for the feedback!!! Yeah, I enjoyed making this for you guys! More to come!!! And that's a GREAT idea you have for lyrics!!!! Would love to see what you come up with!

  • @skullpan1102
    @skullpan1102 2 года назад +22

    Thank you Mastermind you've inspired me to write a brand new song Tonight I'm subbing as well thank you

  • @Insert_Bland_Name_Here
    @Insert_Bland_Name_Here Год назад +4

    This has got to be the most effective video I've watched so far on how to write lyrics, and I'm not even talking about Metal lyrics specifically. I could see this working for every genre I'm into, not just the heavier ones.
    Also, your handwriting is fine. Don't worry about it.

    • @metalmastermind
      @metalmastermind  Год назад

      Thank you, we appreciate that! We recently released an entire metal songwriting process and workflow guide here: ruclips.net/video/zNym0C-dGeg/видео.html

  • @coleman3047
    @coleman3047 Год назад +3

    I love his attitude and the how he is so positive like he needs to be my music teacher 🪩🎸⚡️🪨🎹👑🥁🪕💿🎙

    • @metalmastermind
      @metalmastermind  Год назад

      Thank you!
      We also just made some upgrades to our metal songwriting course mentioned in the video: metalmastermind.com/metal-songwriters-forge/

  • @ashjohnson9496
    @ashjohnson9496 2 года назад +4

    when i saw this guy i was like yeah cool i need this, and than he was really helpful and i honestly didn't expect it

  • @kromnarf
    @kromnarf 2 года назад +8

    5:12 don't sniff the marker! Lmao!

  • @adilmahta9893
    @adilmahta9893 Год назад +3

    I love the dad vibes this man has, subbed

  • @RickWalton71
    @RickWalton71 3 года назад +3

    This was awesome! When I used to workout, there was no motivational tactic for leg day. Lol. My only thought was to get it over with.

    • @metalmastermind
      @metalmastermind  3 года назад +2

      Lol...yeah, leg day is always (and should be) brutal!!!

  • @Tigg333
    @Tigg333 2 года назад +7

    I like writing ✍🏾 songs and I was looking to understand how I could be better. As far as, rhyming, clarity, consistency, creativity, and fighting through writer’s block. Thank you 🙏🏾 for this video. I really appreciate it.
    P.S. I’m newly subscribed here 👋🏾

    • @metalmastermind
      @metalmastermind  2 года назад +1

      First, thank you for the sub! We appreciate that.
      We actually have a complete metal songwriting course that can help you break through and bring out your true creativity: metalmastermind.com/metal-songwriters-forge/

  • @mementomori7356
    @mementomori7356 Год назад +2

    This is great! Thank you. My brain has been on the verge of exploding the past few weeks.

  • @EdlynGg
    @EdlynGg 4 месяца назад +1

    Man, I think this is really useful and motivates me. I just finished the verse and chorus lyrics. but when there was a break in the song where I was going to fill it with scream lyrics, I realized it was very difficult and I had writer's block. keep going!

  • @Adrian-qp8dm
    @Adrian-qp8dm 2 года назад +5

    Thanks man. I'm not great with lyric writing but this video has helped.

    • @metalmastermind
      @metalmastermind  2 года назад +2

      Awesome to hear that! Keep pushing yourself, and if you don't have our free songwriting guide, grab it here: metalmastermind.com/free-songwriting-guide/

  • @cubancavalier3051
    @cubancavalier3051 Год назад +2

    Starting a band with the boys on a whim. Trying to get all the knowledge I can to learn as much as I can. I don’t have a lot of experience with music making so I’m really starting from scratch. Soaking in all your wisdom and teaching 😂

    • @metalmastermind
      @metalmastermind  Год назад +1

      Thank you and we wish you good luck on your venture with your band!
      We also have a complete metal songwriting course if you guys are interested: metalmastermind.com/metal-songwriters-forge/

  • @justinkeyser9130
    @justinkeyser9130 Год назад +2

    This is cool, you are basically using your own daily monomyth's and making it into lyrics. It works well because people crave the monomyth (the hero's journey) in many forms of art and especially story telling. Thanks for the idea!

    • @metalmastermind
      @metalmastermind  Год назад +1

      Yeah dude, it's an easy way to just come up with stuff. You'll more than likely change it but it just gets you taking action and that's the first step that many don't take.

  • @Delta-ty1wr
    @Delta-ty1wr 3 месяца назад +1

    Dude, starting a punk band so a completely seperate genre, but this video helped an incredible amount. Felt like sitting down and learning from my dad, fucking awesome man

  • @exquisitelyelizabeth6531
    @exquisitelyelizabeth6531 2 года назад +5

    Loved this!! Thank you for sharing your skills. Would love to turn my poems into metal songs. 2022 goal 😁

  • @superstarmikeymike6700
    @superstarmikeymike6700 2 года назад +3

    This video is very helpful and I like the way you did this.

    • @metalmastermind
      @metalmastermind  2 года назад +1

      Awesome to hear that dude!
      We also have a complete metal songwriting course. It's pretty intense, but if it's something you're interested in, you can read more here: metalmastermind.com/metal-songwriters-forge/

  • @johncabrales2273
    @johncabrales2273 3 года назад +4

    This video is perfect I’ve been looking for a strategy to help me write lyrics. Thanks a lot.

  • @steveager1235
    @steveager1235 Год назад +2

    Good stuff.
    I’ve got about eight songs in the works. He is a self-employed trucker I guess my topic this week with me
    I didn’t crash and burn but I always worry about it

  • @lily.youtube9360
    @lily.youtube9360 Год назад +3

    I’m no where near being in a band or a songwriter, but this info was still super helpful!! I hope to be apart of a band one day, I absolutely looove music! Thanks for the advice!

  • @CerebralAssassin
    @CerebralAssassin 2 года назад +7

    Oh man...a song about leg day that's awesome!I dread and look forward to leg day at the same day...it's brutal!
    This is an awesome strategy to come up with lyrics.It never occured to me that every day occurrences could help fuel metal lyrics!I'm almost finished mapping out the lyrics to an entire song based on something that happened to me recently!It started by talking about this event but then it veered into a more abstract direction!Writing lyrics is an artform in itself and a lot of fun...I'm sure you had a lot of fun making this video!
    So anyway,thanks for this (and subbed).I'll send to you what I've come up with when I'm done :)
    P.S. sleep deprivation also helps (acute,not chronic)

    • @metalmastermind
      @metalmastermind  2 года назад +1

      Thank you for the sub! Yeah, there are so many ideas we can get through simple daily experiences!

  • @SRTrollinz
    @SRTrollinz Год назад +1

    underrated content and channel!

  • @bananabunch7181
    @bananabunch7181 4 месяца назад +1

    This felt really cheesy and cliche at first, but after watching it’s actually superbly helpful!! Thank you!!!!

    • @metalmastermind
      @metalmastermind  4 месяца назад +1

      Yeah, it almost sounds cheesy when you start the process but it's about starting something, somewhere, anywhere, and allowing that to lead you to the result as opposed to not starting at all (we can overthink and freeze up)

  • @charmedjoker6822
    @charmedjoker6822 Год назад +2

    THANK YOU SO MUCH I REALLY THOUGHT ID NEVER BE ABLE TO WRITE A SONG UNTIL I WATCHED THIS I WROTE AN AMAZING ALT ROCK SONG THANKS TO YOU. I NEVER THOUGHT ID MAKE IS AS FAR AS I DID TONIGHT WHILE WATCHING YOUR VIDEO. MUCH LOVE THANK YOU FOR EVERYTHING

  • @tylergarcia1781
    @tylergarcia1781 Год назад +2

    Your such a cool person your gettin 1 new subscriber

  • @jasonfriberg3751
    @jasonfriberg3751 7 месяцев назад +1

    Jason that was funny when you introduced yourself I swore I felt you talking directly to me since my name is Jason as well. I have been wanting to write music for years just don't know where to begin structure and stuff very helpful been going through a lot of emotions lately and pain is definitely one of them, so this video was very relevant to me. I believe I just started to write my first song with lyrics thanks to your inspiration. Cheers...

    • @metalmastermind
      @metalmastermind  7 месяцев назад

      Awesome to hear this, brother!! Let those lyrics flow

  • @jassvalja4468
    @jassvalja4468 Год назад +2

    Wow, this video is just amazing, I just discovered this channel and i feel so insipred🤘

    • @metalmastermind
      @metalmastermind  Год назад

      Thank you and glad this helped!
      If you'd like to go deeper, check out our metal songwriting course: metalmastermind.com/metal-songwriters-forge/

  • @1138dyson
    @1138dyson Год назад +1

    Very cool method. I had been thinking along those lines (pardon the pun) for song ideas. Thanks again Jason!

  • @alexanderthrun4366
    @alexanderthrun4366 2 года назад +3

    Some tips for writing good metal lyrics is talk about death,pain,and struggles in your life!

    • @metalmastermind
      @metalmastermind  2 года назад +1

      Definitely...and you can go even deeper when you imagine going through something that you haven't gone through, experiencing the pain of someone else

  • @Wtfdrewrustupid
    @Wtfdrewrustupid Год назад +1

    I love everything about this video and the host! Like and subscribed, what a cool dude.

  • @Themis781
    @Themis781 Год назад +1

    This video will definitely help me. What a great way to think about it. I love your Testament Shirt...awesome band...\m/. I love your content Jason, and I also love how you encourage creativity.

  • @LTapsy
    @LTapsy 9 месяцев назад +1

    Thank you!

  • @MikePaw777
    @MikePaw777 2 года назад +5

    You rock!! Don't sniff the marker 😂😂🤘🤘 Metallica are masters of letting the music do the talking.

    • @metalmastermind
      @metalmastermind  2 года назад

      Lol...yes, they are definitely great at that!

  • @loombaron
    @loombaron Год назад +1

    Worked magics of the dark errors
    They make my flesh sigh for shine
    I resist the idea of ​​writing in paper
    Metal phrases from my environment

    • @metalmastermind
      @metalmastermind  Год назад

      That's perfect!🤘
      Also, check out our course Metal Songwriter's Forge if you haven't yet: metalmastermind.com/metal-songwriters-forge/

  • @Jackhammer69able
    @Jackhammer69able 10 месяцев назад +1

    I like the old Madonna stuff too 😂👍👍 Before she got all dancey in the mid-late 90s.

  • @baileygaffney2205
    @baileygaffney2205 2 года назад +1

    You can tell this guy was around to see the greats back in the day sorry bruh you old but rockinnnn!!!!

    • @metalmastermind
      @metalmastermind  2 года назад

      Yep, I'm up there...47 next week! But never too old for metal!

  • @hollyfindlay4051
    @hollyfindlay4051 2 года назад +1

    This was pretty helpful. I really like the method you showed off.

  • @ronswary
    @ronswary 3 года назад +3

    Good subject matter, I’m more instrumental but the things I have wrote without it being a direct topic I tend to follow I similar nature. WHO/WHAT/WHY/WHERE is this song going to be about kind of like how I approach a solo

  • @justawfulgamer7738
    @justawfulgamer7738 Месяц назад +1

    I'm pretty sure my brain just isn't wired to write music or anything for that matter.

    • @metalmastermind
      @metalmastermind  Месяц назад +1

      My advice is to not try to force anything and don't overthink the process. Just let it naturally flow. We have another video here that may help: ruclips.net/video/zNym0C-dGeg/видео.html

  • @bubblegumking01
    @bubblegumking01 Год назад +1

    yo thanks man this helped a lot with the lyrics I’m trying to write and i went through circus juggling with hoops

    • @metalmastermind
      @metalmastermind  Год назад

      Awesome to hear that! We also have a complete metal songwriting course if that's something you're interested in: metalmastermind.com/courses/

    • @bubblegumking01
      @bubblegumking01 Год назад

      @@metalmastermind oooo sounds interesting! Definitely will be checking it out!

  • @baileygaffney2205
    @baileygaffney2205 2 года назад +3

    Maybe he's that good from sniffing markers

  • @digikaininja5
    @digikaininja5 2 года назад +2

    thank you for the videos.....ur soul is metal and we appreciate your each video....but please construct a meshuggah riff from scratch...maybe 1/2 whole diminished scale...any key

    • @metalmastermind
      @metalmastermind  2 года назад

      Thank you, we appreciate that. I think I'll lean on Ken fro Meshuggah style...I'm (Jason) more into the older rock and metal

  • @AnchoredSoulSband
    @AnchoredSoulSband 2 года назад +3

    I got lyrics from this video people growing through alot

  • @digikaininja5
    @digikaininja5 2 года назад +3

    u missed "blood flowing"

  • @toxiknaoyt1619
    @toxiknaoyt1619 Год назад +1

    I did back up vocals for a friend it was a fusion of trap and metal.
    I want to improve my lyric structure and tempo

    • @metalmastermind
      @metalmastermind  Год назад

      That's a great goal to have. We recently released a complete metal songwriting process flow here that may help: ruclips.net/video/zNym0C-dGeg/видео.html

    • @toxiknaoyt1619
      @toxiknaoyt1619 Год назад +1

      @@metalmastermind thank you so much bro. Any advice of videos on vocals in itself for example difference between growls and low exhales and gutterals.

    • @metalmastermind
      @metalmastermind  Год назад

      @@toxiknaoyt1619 The best thing you can do is get down some proper warm ups and do daily warm ups and exercise (no matter what style you're singing). Our vocal coach Elizabeth de Deus has a lot to offer in that area: ruclips.net/video/JfhTRLZFbjA/видео.html

  • @Angelina-iw8by
    @Angelina-iw8by Год назад +1

    so helpful thank you so much

  • @newheightsfitness1461
    @newheightsfitness1461 Год назад +1

    10 sets of 10 at 60% 1RM... I know the pain!

  • @gage2038
    @gage2038 2 года назад +2

    Positive reinforcement 10/10

  • @rhysdemazure4533
    @rhysdemazure4533 2 года назад +1

    Thanks!

  • @baileygaffney2205
    @baileygaffney2205 2 года назад +2

    Give me the magic juiceeeee

  • @ATreacherousFoe
    @ATreacherousFoe 5 месяцев назад +1

    Let's be honest, most of us are going to write the same song, but instead of leg day it will be about how we plowed through an entire carton of ice cream and continue to hate ourselves 🤣😂

  • @skullpan1102
    @skullpan1102 2 года назад +7

    (Disclaimer!!!!! im using this please dont copyright it it will be tracked in about 10 min with original music).
    Im tired im sick
    Im finished with this world
    And the way things are going.
    I prime My mind
    To fight back against this
    Pain...pain....PAIN,
    PAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    (Sustain each word)
    I can't go on
    But I cant give up
    Or give in
    I feel like ive been left
    Behind and cant start again
    Im so ashamed of myself
    Im so ashamed of you
    We failed each other
    While thinking I failed you.
    Failed you failed me
    Misery------
    loves companyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!

  • @cptsingsong
    @cptsingsong Год назад +3

    Okay, so I was just about to make lyrics for a song but then i went onto youtube and this was the first thing i saw.
    (youtube's watching me)

    • @metalmastermind
      @metalmastermind  Год назад

      Awesome...good to know RUclips is working in our favor! And hope this video helped!

  • @ikigai47
    @ikigai47 Год назад +1

    Step 1: Grrrarrr
    Step 2: Satan

  • @simon3818
    @simon3818 Год назад +1

    I wish you were my English teacher

  • @phillipcummings5480
    @phillipcummings5480 Год назад +1

    this helped a lot? btw the writings fine