some real good shi man, only thing i can say is maybe panning the lead a lil to a side and eqing the high end abit and maybe changing the hi hat sound to a clickier one, other than that this is some real good stuff man🔥🔥
great start!, when you add bass raise either the lead or chords up an octave to get all the high frequencies filled. you can also try cutting some chords a bit short because when a song is filled like that all the time it loses some punch but that's optional
For someone who is learning, its a fantastic One! Like the arrangement of the hats, could add some more pauses to it, but i think this is more personal so overall its fire bro, keep going hard bro! Props from PT 🇵🇹❤️
On each chord, slightly shorten the start of some of the notes. Not too much. Only a fraction. But make it random, then it will sound more humanised rather than all chords perfectly hitting on beat. You could also randomise the velocity of some of the notes slightly too
The beat whack but fuck what people saying bout the chords in the synth. They got movement and honestly sound like some frank ocean shit lol I like the speed of em keep going. That part fye fr
for the chords at the start add some higher notes! also it's out of tune, you should set your helpers to highlight the scale you want to use (automatic is sometimes useful to see a scale that fits)
Yo bro, the melody is good and all that stuff, but The hi hats rolls are trash, cuz If you make rolls in channel rack it sounds like trash, like you have to go to piano roll and make it on your own tho. I wish you good luck
i think you can play around with the chords you had on that pad i feel thats out of place, try some inversions or follow a progression from circle of 5ths ez game ez biz
IMO the chords and the lead sound like they clash a little too much, which can easily be fixed with EQing the lead to the high end, shifting the lead up an octave, or just expermenting with effects on both the lead and chords. At the end of the day though, every aspect of music (and art in general) is subjective, from melodics to rythm and even mastering. I think using your own creativity and experimenting through trial and error will result in something that is not only more fulfilling but something that is more personalized to your taste in music. Sorry if this seems to preachy
@Prod.MelzyMelodies Mixing can definitely be important. It just takes to learn. I find it's more fun to learn through experimenting, but the more effective way is probably to do research and seek out criticism. Either way, good luck on your journey.
Hard imo make th bass simpler if u changing thru lik 5 jazz chords in 2 bars without th intent of actual jazz it js comes off as hard 2 follow or get in2 a groove of
For sure an amazing start... i'd recommend some effects on the leads to blend them a little better into the beat
@@Njiht51 thanks for the tip I’ll definitely try doing that next time 👍
some real good shi man, only thing i can say is maybe panning the lead a lil to a side and eqing the high end abit and maybe changing the hi hat sound to a clickier one, other than that this is some real good stuff man🔥🔥
@@Moves__ yea I agree with you on mixing and making my sound better, thanks for the tip and motivation ❤️
great start!, when you add bass raise either the lead or chords up an octave to get all the high frequencies filled. you can also try cutting some chords a bit short because when a song is filled like that all the time it loses some punch but that's optional
@@mariojuan7539 thanks for the tip, I’ll definitely try it out next time.
ITS SO GOOD!! :3
69th like, and that beat is awesome dude 😁
Cool start man!
@@MeleeFernando appreciate it ❤️
I see you have some talent
appreciate it bro
For someone who is learning, its a fantastic One! Like the arrangement of the hats, could add some more pauses to it, but i think this is more personal so overall its fire bro, keep going hard bro! Props from PT 🇵🇹❤️
Thanks for the tips!
There are too many chords that don't sound juicy and bright
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Good stuff G, you're gonna go places 👍
@@scratchypack8549 appreciate it bro thanks for the confidence ❤️
your doing gret, keep up the work, thats a follow from me 🔥
On each chord, slightly shorten the start of some of the notes. Not too much. Only a fraction. But make it random, then it will sound more humanised rather than all chords perfectly hitting on beat. You could also randomise the velocity of some of the notes slightly too
damn thats pretty smart ill definitely try that next time, appreciate the the tip!
Good job
Jolly ahh beat i fw
Chords are a bit off to me so i would play around with them more to get them sounding the best
The beat whack but fuck what people saying bout the chords in the synth. They got movement and honestly sound like some frank ocean shit lol I like the speed of em keep going. That part fye fr
for the chords at the start add some higher notes! also it's out of tune, you should set your helpers to highlight the scale you want to use (automatic is sometimes useful to see a scale that fits)
Yo bro, the melody is good and all that stuff, but The hi hats rolls are trash, cuz If you make rolls in channel rack it sounds like trash, like you have to go to piano roll and make it on your own tho.
I wish you good luck
@@Rudix518 I did use the piano roll? I never really use the channel rack on my hi-hat.
i think you can play around with the chords you had on that pad i feel thats out of place, try some inversions or follow a progression from circle of 5ths ez game ez biz
IMO the chords and the lead sound like they clash a little too much, which can easily be fixed with EQing the lead to the high end, shifting the lead up an octave, or just expermenting with effects on both the lead and chords.
At the end of the day though, every aspect of music (and art in general) is subjective, from melodics to rythm and even mastering. I think using your own creativity and experimenting through trial and error will result in something that is not only more fulfilling but something that is more personalized to your taste in music.
Sorry if this seems to preachy
@@beezo5946 yea I agree with you, I mainly recall never mess with the mixing too much and I’m not that great at it, but thanks for the tips ❤️
@Prod.MelzyMelodies Mixing can definitely be important.
It just takes to learn. I find it's more fun to learn through experimenting, but the more effective way is probably to do research and seek out criticism.
Either way, good luck on your journey.
@@beezo5946 I appreciate you bro thanks for the confidence boost 🔥
I think that 2nd lead has to be more soft but it’s good
thanks for the tip! and i appreciate it.
The drum patterns good but the one shots don’t totally fit the vibe. I can hook u up w a pluugnb kit that would be hard asl on this
Sounds great to me
@@ellemefayo thanks I appreciate it
Give some life to the melody, it sounds kinda dry. Maybe remove the hihat roll in the beginning too. Pretty good tho
Shits Gucci bro u str8
A tiny bit of variation like taking one note out of the chord at the end or something and it might be perfect fr
Hard
imo make th bass simpler if u changing thru lik 5 jazz chords in 2 bars without th intent of actual jazz it js comes off as hard 2 follow or get in2 a groove of
Learning is constant u nvr gna stop i rly fw what yr doin sofar
the last chord for the first 2 bars sounds too upbeat, you should try a F#4-A4-C#5-D#5-F#5 chord instead
@@namakkv alright I change it see what it’s like! Appreciate the tip!
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The drum is good but just remove some of the chord
they are both a bit out of tune from each other
Nuh uh
work on tempo
very boring and bland but keep going youll get better
@@user-qt9ek7mp7k appreciate the honesty