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this is genuinely insane track. Peak 90s early 2000 aesthetic without drums

Relaxing af

I wann figure out how to get a pd or a synth pad

keep going

Chill as fuck🔥🔥🔥

This shii sounds like a good smoke at the top of a hotel

69th like, and that beat is awesome dude 😁

ITS SO GOOD!! :3

the last chord for the first 2 bars sounds too upbeat, you should try a F#4-A4-C#5-D#5-F#5 chord instead

The drum is good but just remove some of the chord

The beat whack but fuck what people saying bout the chords in the synth. They got movement and honestly sound like some frank ocean shit lol I like the speed of em keep going. That part fye fr

For someone who is learning, its a fantastic One! Like the arrangement of the hats, could add some more pauses to it, but i think this is more personal so overall its fire bro, keep going hard bro! Props from PT 🇵🇹❤️

Yo bro, the melody is good and all that stuff, but The hi hats rolls are trash, cuz If you make rolls in channel rack it sounds like trash, like you have to go to piano roll and make it on your own tho. I wish you good luck

i think you can play around with the chords you had on that pad i feel thats out of place, try some inversions or follow a progression from circle of 5ths ez game ez biz

The drum patterns good but the one shots don’t totally fit the vibe. I can hook u up w a pluugnb kit that would be hard asl on this

Hard imo make th bass simpler if u changing thru lik 5 jazz chords in 2 bars without th intent of actual jazz it js comes off as hard 2 follow or get in2 a groove of

I see you have some talent

Cool start man!

your doing gret, keep up the work, thats a follow from me 🔥

Shits Gucci bro u str8

work on tempo

the chords are ass thats what

Good job

IMO the chords and the lead sound like they clash a little too much, which can easily be fixed with EQing the lead to the high end, shifting the lead up an octave, or just expermenting with effects on both the lead and chords. At the end of the day though, every aspect of music (and art in general) is subjective, from melodics to rythm and even mastering. I think using your own creativity and experimenting through trial and error will result in something that is not only more fulfilling but something that is more personalized to your taste in music. Sorry if this seems to preachy

Jolly ahh beat i fw

Good stuff G, you're gonna go places 👍

Give some life to the melody, it sounds kinda dry. Maybe remove the hihat roll in the beginning too. Pretty good tho

great start!, when you add bass raise either the lead or chords up an octave to get all the high frequencies filled. you can also try cutting some chords a bit short because when a song is filled like that all the time it loses some punch but that's optional

On each chord, slightly shorten the start of some of the notes. Not too much. Only a fraction. But make it random, then it will sound more humanised rather than all chords perfectly hitting on beat. You could also randomise the velocity of some of the notes slightly too

for the chords at the start add some higher notes! also it's out of tune, you should set your helpers to highlight the scale you want to use (automatic is sometimes useful to see a scale that fits)

Chords are a bit off to me so i would play around with them more to get them sounding the best

they are both a bit out of tune from each other

some real good shi man, only thing i can say is maybe panning the lead a lil to a side and eqing the high end abit and maybe changing the hi hat sound to a clickier one, other than that this is some real good stuff man🔥🔥

There are too many chords that don't sound juicy and bright

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For sure an amazing start... i'd recommend some effects on the leads to blend them a little better into the beat

Bulshit

very boring and bland but keep going youll get better

Sounds great to me

fire

I think that 2nd lead has to be more soft but it’s good

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This goes crazy🔥🔥🔥

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Ooouuu, this one is a bit jumpyyyy These are a vibe🤑✋🏽✋🏽

This a vibeee😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨💎

Fire

The Arpeggio sounds cool and the strings are fine no need to take it down