Creative Writing: How To Get 40/40 In Question 5 Of GCSE English Language 2024 Exams + Free Story!
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- Опубликовано: 1 апр 2023
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1 day before my exam for english language and im watching this story, its so good and soothing to hear i fell asleep on my desk and started dreaming about it
Thank you
It's 18:00 how is you sleeping
@@JJ_029 agreed?
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@@JJ_029 idk her voice was so soothing you get me
I’m shook rn
Good luck for tomorrow guys - adored the story. It's great to cram all my revision into the last few hours of the night before (just like every other exam)
Technically, it's more efficient to cram right before the exam since you wouldn't forget what you revise, unlike if you study before hand. Your brain is fresh for the exam and can actively retrieve what you have covered quickly.
an hour and a half till my exam and this really helped me understand abit better since language has never been a strength of mine.❤
Same here bud
Same
POV:you started revising now.. good luck to all you guys
lol good luck to you too .we can do this
good luck!
I just started
Its tomorrow
Its midnight
I used the plot of this story for my GCSE edexcel this year
Thank you so much, I am much more confident and believe I have done quite well
AMAZING! What was the EDEXCEL question?
@@FirstRateTutors unexpected
@FirstRateTutors how can I use this plot for a description pls answer
To write about a time when something unexpected happened
are you allowed to use other peoples stories in the exam? i have mine next year and i thought it would be classified as plagiarism to use it or write many of the phrases she used
Good luck yall. And be positive and im sure we will all do good init 😊👍
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Thank you I totally had forgot about the structure form for these stories ❤
You're welcome! 😃
thank you, this is so helpful!
this helped me revise for my 2024 exam thanks!
Thank you! We did a mock exam of this paper and after i'd watched this video i got 27/40! I believe this is pretty good for my first time. Although sadly i had to skip Q4 in favour of Q5 meaning i missed out of 20 marks which affected my grade. I got a 4, and i believe if i manage my time better netx time i could reach a 6/7
100% and if time keeping is an issue - complete the exam backwards (start with Q5, then Q4, Q3, Q2& Q1) 😊
Thank you for this video!!
You are so welcome! 😊
Thank you!!!
Thank you so much for this video
Very useful, thankyou so much
You're welcome 😃
Can you do a video about description writing please
Maam some model answers for edexcel would also be appreciated for texts An inspector call or Romeo and juliet please...
love your videos! i really want to know if this AQA spec kinda method can be applied to edexcel spec. im mainly asking because 99% of vids on yt are for aqa so it would be so helpful to know that i can apply the same methods for my own exam board and still get a 9! :) :)
May God bless you and you family thank you so much
Awww thank you 😊
I can not lie this story should be turned into a book.
LOL!!
thankk you
Could you please do some descriptions?Xx
Useful
Wrote this for my mocks got 32 outta 40 ty
AMAZING!
Was ok thx💪
Ibsr 1 minute before my exam 8:59 currently in the assembly room
Loooooooooooooooool
Can you give some idea for the descriptive picture as well
Im cooked and gonna cry.
Same
We cqn do it
you’ll do well. revise before bed and skim through notes on the way to school.
if all goes wrong, there’s no harm in resitting. you have so many chances to re do it in the future. ignore what everyone says, it’s not shameful at all.
you’ll do fine
Its ntd, waffling is a very useful tool. You can get at least a 6 with educated waffle.
you got this bro ily
Very useful Thank you very much😊.
You're welcome!
I used her methods in my last year exams, I scored an A. I am a D at best a C student. ❤
Well done luv
Thank you 😊
Hi, how can I download the phrases you said in the video ????
Hi. Do you have other questions of this 2023 paper ? 1 and 2? Many thanks
Mr bruff does some he helped me build my grades
Can you do a video about modfizied cloze 1 and 2 thanks
how long did this take you to write
bro wrote ''ran as quickly as a cheetah'' and says this is a good response
Is it not one ?
@@osatomwenmuisaac894 I personally find it very cliché which is a red flag that I examiners look for. I have just finished year 11 and received 9's in both so you take your pick on what to use. Use your own intuition of what a good answer looks like.
@@osatomwenmuisaac894 No, this is a grade 5-6 answer I'd say. You need to be using complex vocabulary, metaphors, and language devices. However, I would recommend doing the description question as it uses less time (you don't have to plan a plot) and you can go more in depth in techniques. Good luck if you've still got your GCSEs!
@@emilia732can I do the descriptive photo one? Is that a good one to choose?
@lukie9936 I would say definitely since there are so many things in the picture you can go in depth describing. It also doesn't really require much of a structure like a story would so you can save time there. You can still get high marks though, I got a 9 for my literature and I did the descriptive question. Hope this helped!
How should you end question 5?
how many pages do you thing to write?
Have you covered all of english language paper 1 and paper 2 on ur yt, i'm stressed as hell
Hi 😊 I would like to see English Language Paper 2 2023 Exam Q5 Article Model Answer 🙏 🙏 🙏.
I have year 9 end of ear exam tmr and i have to write a story about a thunderstorm, its out of 40, can anyone help pls??
I have been away from education for a long time, plus English is not my first language, would I be able to do this 😢 I just started GCSE last week, exam board with Aqa it's so scary
Please what book would you recommend to enhance my vocabulary?
thesaurus
I pray everyone passes on here
I have my English language exam in a few days and I’m so nervous I don’t know how to stop these bad emotions in my head do u have any tips
Just plan 2 answers before so you can change it for the exam
will it be plagirism however to spell it if i memorise this
Probably yes especially if they see the same story over and over it’s better to keep the technique but change the story a bit
Can you help me on year 6 days please
Any chance you can do my exam for me?
Where can i get model answers, for question 5?
The model answer page on the website: www.firstratetutors.com/shopfrt
@@FirstRateTutors thank you 😊
Do we not need to add a range of punctuation
You do but don't overdo it.
I'm cooked
Lol same
Same 😢
Wait is it ok to add dialogue aswell?
yea obviously as this is a narrative response
its not recommeded as it can be too complicated in the time.
I am cooked
good luck i am so last minute too
@@amelia-xz3sugood luck
Was this in 45 minutes
Am I allowed to memorise this and write it for my exam?
Yes
noooooo if the examiners pick it up for plagiarism then they might disqualify you so you can’t get your grade and there’s also a change big chance that this won’t be the question that they ask in the exam
@@embersgone Uh now idk if i should or not cuz the exam is sooo soon and i need a good story
@@ButterflyZzz7 word
You can try, but honestly, it's not worth it as, I'm 99% sure they are not going to ask this question. However, I recommend you to just memorise the structure, followed by lots of sophisticated words that you can use for your story -- Include vocabulary for the main themes: Thriller, horror, adventure/discovery and the rescue life task. If you know the structure and lots of strange descriptive words, you will be fine.
heyy would you recommend doing the story or description
Story - you have more room to shift and change different points in your narrative. Descriptive is a little more restricting.
Can i write a nonfiction story or it should be a fiction
NEVER non-fiction for Paper 1, Q5 - ALWAYS fiction.
Bro 💀
Does this matter if I’m Edexcel?
Not really... a story is a story so this example can be used for any exam board 😊
What does B,B,P,R,E mean?
beginning, build up, problem, resolution, ending
Hi there my teacher tells me not to use onomatopoeia because im a high level I dont know why? 5:52
It’s quite a weak and boring thing that doesn’t do much
she means not to use it excessively . the lady in the video only used it once or twice which is good for higher marks .
You are too fast in explanations please try to do it slowly as I could understand in that way 🌺☺️
I'll try 🥺
Should I use a paragraph for each of the 5 steps?
YES
is this for edexcell
i don’t think it matters
but its aqa ive done it
Aqa
Releasing a new EDEXCEL Paper 1 exam video today so you can watch that to see how to answer the EDEXCEL syllabus exams 😊
@@FirstRateTutors HI PLEAS I BEG YOU MAKE A VIDEO ON THE EFFECT OR WHAT THE EFFECTS ARE OF STRUCTURAL TECHNIQUES AND LANGUAGE TECHNIQUES PLEAS
I really don't want to be rude but this story is not 40/40... It sounds like something I would write in year 6. Too many adjectives and they are not very sophisticated, also childish onomatopoeias in a GCSE 'grade 9' answer are a no for sure. Like I said, I don't want to hate because your channel was helpful when I was doing literature but please just consider this as constructive criticism.
u said it brother
I agree. It’s simplistic and I have lost interest halfway through the first paragraph.
You wish your pen sounds as hers when you writing imaginatively. Stop hating.
@@masooddawoodzai2187 stfu and stop glazing her shit story, its terrible and if u write smth like this ur getting a 3 at best it rlly is a year 6 level response
@@masooddawoodzai2187they literally said they're not hating 🤦♀️
The exams in 9 hours 💀
goodluck man i have did one day of revision so ur not alone
Started revising just now 💀
I’m really bad at creative writing I’m so scared
try reading a book and picking up ur vocab from there, or maybe even jumping straight to attempting paper 1 q5 with a book next to u. maybe some ideas from a book can inspire a different plot in ur writing, while you keep ur own style of writing. sounds like a silly technique but try it!
im really bad at creative writing myself (sat my gcses like 4 years ago) but want to resit like next year maybe so i might try this
aqa pls
This is AQA
Me doing this GCSE in year 9 😭
Damn! Good luck!
just started revising🙏🏽wish me luck
Fucking hell mate 😂
@@Vicnel ibr im failing i answered both questions for section B
@@andrewtateYTshorts 😂 I think I fucked it as well
@@Vicnel looked at the 2019 grade boundaries and im looking at a grade 2 max😭😭 gotta bang out paper 2 revision or i wont get a Grade 5
8:05 when u couldn't read ur own handwriting 😥
It gets like that sometimes
Rip to me
I’m not sure how this helped as she wrote like 7 pages you will never have that long watch mr everything English he is way better
I dont wanna be rude but if you add too many adjectives then it feels too childish
Yeah i thought so too before so i know what you mean but it really helps maximum marks (in my case)
this video was bad dont watch it
amen
Am I the only one who gets 8/9s with 2 hours of revision?
No
Shut yo ass up lil bro
Great job!
How! share your ways please I need a 5 for eng lang so I can do drama in college 😭