How I got a First Class in EVERY Essay at Law School

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  • Опубликовано: 9 июн 2024
  • I’ve decided to share my experience writing essays at uni because I believe there’s a more efficient, reliable and systematic way to approach essay writing + achieve top grades.
    TIMESTAMPS:
    00:00 - Introduction
    00:40 - The Goal
    02:04 - The Question
    05:37 - The Research
    08:42 - The Analysis
    09:56 - The Essay
    LINKS:
    1. Exemplar first-class law essay (free download with commentary): www.gareth-evans.com/the-art-...
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    LINKS & RESOURCES:
    🎥 Camera - iPhone SE / Canon EOS M50
    💻 Laptop - MacBook Pro 2019
    ABOUT ME:
    Hey, I'm Gareth. I help law students study efficiently and effectively :)
    SAY HELLO:
    📸 Instagram - / heygarethevans
    🐦 Twitter - / heygarethevans
    🌍 My website - www.gareth-evans.com
    If you have any questions drop me a message below, on social media, or email me at heygarethevans@gmail.com 👍🏻
    #essay #law #study

Комментарии • 63

  • @tiffanychan6742
    @tiffanychan6742 9 месяцев назад +30

    suddenly realized i've been writing essays wrong for my three years of LLB, thanks Gareth for this video, i can write better essays in my future legal studies starting this September!!

    • @heygarethevans
      @heygarethevans  9 месяцев назад +3

      Love it! Good luck with your essays :)

  • @diyakhatri6359
    @diyakhatri6359 Год назад +5

    This was incredibly helpful! Thanks, Gareth! 😊

  • @thelisaw
    @thelisaw Год назад +11

    Just started my Year 1 in Law - so grateful to have come across this video. Thank you! (:

  • @zainabhabib3455
    @zainabhabib3455 4 месяца назад +1

    So thankful for this !

  • @johnroy7784
    @johnroy7784 4 месяца назад +1

    Really appreciate this insight! Thank you.

  • @Caribbeanmystic
    @Caribbeanmystic Год назад +4

    Thank you so much! I need this for my Law masters.

    • @heygarethevans
      @heygarethevans  Год назад +2

      No worries - good luck with your masters! 😁

  • @Melb321
    @Melb321 11 месяцев назад +1

    Thank you so much for this!!!!

  • @unnatiagarkar9471
    @unnatiagarkar9471 Год назад +4

    thank you sir for a helpful lecture. grateful.

  • @Uzairali123456789
    @Uzairali123456789 7 месяцев назад +2

    Just started my first year of a BA in Jurisprudence, so this is very useful, thank you!

    • @heygarethevans
      @heygarethevans  7 месяцев назад

      Happy to hear you found the video useful!

  • @montysmith1597
    @montysmith1597 Год назад +11

    Really enjoyed this video Gareth! Would it be possible to upload some videos of commenting on different first class essays, i know there is a link in the description but perhaps you could compare it with a 2:1 and 2:2 essay in a video?

    • @heygarethevans
      @heygarethevans  Год назад +4

      Thanks! That's a great idea - I'll add that to my list of potential videos to make as I'm sure that could be of use to lots of people 😁

    • @Caribbeanmystic
      @Caribbeanmystic Год назад +2

      @@heygarethevans please!😂

    • @heygarethevans
      @heygarethevans  Год назад +1

      @@Caribbeanmystic 😂

  • @gloriaosen5136
    @gloriaosen5136 8 месяцев назад +5

    I would like to thank you for this informative and in-depth explanation of essay writing, now I know where my errors are.

  • @ringkaizee301
    @ringkaizee301 Год назад +3

    In the conclusion, what are some of the ways to restate our thesis statement?

  • @yungliquidfire8605
    @yungliquidfire8605 Год назад +9

    Tysm Gareth, this really helped me with my first semester assessments, I'm giving it my all to secure a first class honours so I can get into UCL for masters.

    • @heygarethevans
      @heygarethevans  Год назад +5

      No worries and good luck! Let me know if you need any advice with anything 👌

  • @larimarardd
    @larimarardd Год назад +1

    Thank you so much
    😊

  • @berkaybozkurt3317
    @berkaybozkurt3317 Год назад +1

    How do I do research if the exam is in person and not open book?

  • @kersiaaddo3014
    @kersiaaddo3014 10 месяцев назад +3

    This is my first time watching your video and, truth be told, it has enlightened me which im very grateful for....
    But I'll like to know what do to or how to pressnt your argument or essay when you forget some important cases, the cases' names and other supporting evidence

    • @heygarethevans
      @heygarethevans  9 месяцев назад +1

      Giving the specific name of a case isn't that important. If you can say something like 'this is supported by a case, which found...' then the examiner isn't going to mark you down for that.
      If you're really struggling to think of supporting evidence, at least try to share your opinion and not sit on the fence

    • @kersiaaddo3014
      @kersiaaddo3014 15 дней назад

      ​@heygarethevans thank you so much for this❤

  • @H428
    @H428 4 месяца назад +1

    Hi Gareth hope you're doing well, this has really provided an insight into general essay writing, but just had a question regarding timed essays. How would you incorporate what is discussed in the video? What would be the changes to ensure that the quality of the essay does not deteriorate?

    • @heygarethevans
      @heygarethevans  3 месяца назад +1

      When doing timed essays, 80% of the results come from understanding the question + the planning. So spend 5 minutes breaking down the question so you know EXACTLY what it says and to ensure you actually answer the question - this is really where most people go wrong for timed essays and 2) create a coherent plan that answers the question, which should only be 3 or 4 points. The only real difference between this and a timed essay is that the research should already be in your head or clearly layed out in front of you (if an open book exam). Is there a particular part of the process you struggle with?

  • @cftphoebe3566
    @cftphoebe3566 Год назад +3

    U r amazing !!!

    • @heygarethevans
      @heygarethevans  Год назад +1

      That's very kind of you to say, thank you!!

  • @sammyy2022
    @sammyy2022 Год назад +1

    Is there any chance I could get a hold of that 'Essay Plan' notion template?

    • @heygarethevans
      @heygarethevans  11 месяцев назад +3

      Sure! You can download it here: www.gareth-evans.com/the-art-of-writing-first-class-law-essays/ :)

  • @SaifulIslam-fm8gm
    @SaifulIslam-fm8gm 7 месяцев назад

    Can you help me with this one
    'despite parliament's Supremacy, it is clear that judges make the law.'

  • @tashamorriss8997
    @tashamorriss8997 4 месяца назад +1

    This may not work for timed essay writing in an exam, where you must reference as well. We do not get our exam question beforehand, just some readings.

    • @heygarethevans
      @heygarethevans  3 месяца назад

      Yeah agreed, this is largely for non-timed essay writing - thanks for the clarification

  • @Hellokitty_2
    @Hellokitty_2 5 месяцев назад +1

    Hiiii I really hope you see this comment. I am in my first year of LLB at UCL. This video has helped me out alot regarding how to structure my essay. But I still have some troubles with referencing and other things. It would mean the world to me if I could speak to you somehow and get a little help.

    • @heygarethevans
      @heygarethevans  4 месяца назад

      What in particular are you struggling with when it comes to the referencing?

  • @ryanbhadain5867
    @ryanbhadain5867 Год назад +4

    Hi.
    I am on your website (digestible notes) and can't see administrative law. I also can't see judicial review case.
    Also, I can't see public law.
    I really need judicial review anf administrative law as I am taking the bar this year in Mauritius. Our legal system is a hybrid between English and French law. How adminiatrative law is fully English and derives its sources fro exactly the same cases as England; the GCHQ case, Wednesbury unreasonableness, Anderson v Liversidge.
    I thus really need your website.
    Believe me: you've been extremely helpful.
    PS: All of what I've just said is also 100% applicable to the law of evidence, which I also cannot find.

    • @heygarethevans
      @heygarethevans  Год назад +5

      I haven't been able to write notes on all of these topics yet - it takes quite a long time to put stuff together, but I'll try to prioritise some of this stuff :)

  • @naninani2795
    @naninani2795 Год назад +1

    Damnit I have 12 days to do this, I need to hurry!

  • @Maria_72a
    @Maria_72a 5 месяцев назад +3

    I hope to get 1st class from my exams :( I am currently in my 3rd year

    • @heygarethevans
      @heygarethevans  5 месяцев назад +1

      Good luck, let me know if you need any help!

    • @Maria_72a
      @Maria_72a 5 месяцев назад +2

      @@heygarethevans Thank you, I would be grateful for your help, please.

    • @Maria_72a
      @Maria_72a 4 месяца назад +2

      @@heygarethevans What help you can offer me?

  • @tashamorriss8997
    @tashamorriss8997 4 месяца назад +1

    I tutor students re writing essays. If you do not understand the questions being asked, you have already failed.

    • @heygarethevans
      @heygarethevans  3 месяца назад

      Yeah - I always tell people to spend a good chunk of time reading and breaking down the question before they do anything else

  • @saltytree729
    @saltytree729 4 месяца назад

    why do people put fake voices on?

    • @heygarethevans
      @heygarethevans  3 месяца назад +2

      Hey thanks for the comment - what do you mean by fake voices? I don't see the relevance to this video? haha

    • @kiranthind9516
      @kiranthind9516 29 дней назад +1

      I think you will find many people who go into law are required to be orally articulate and coherent. I fail to see how being well spoken is relevant in the slightest to someone putting on a fake voice. This is entirely your own very much distorted opinion.

  • @matchamelonpan6533
    @matchamelonpan6533 Год назад +2

    Thanks for the advice! I'm a JD1 student in Hong Kong who finds some crim law concepts quite hard to understand and your website is sooo useful to help me organize complex ideas. The notes are quite succinct and easy to understand compared to slides provided by my prof.🥲

    • @heygarethevans
      @heygarethevans  Год назад +1

      Hey 👋 I’m really happy to hear that you’re finding my website useful - professors have a tendency to make stuff more complicated than it needs to be 😂

  • @wajeihtoor7438
    @wajeihtoor7438 7 месяцев назад

    Brother i need you help while solving my assignment... How can i contact you? Kindly let me know please