THE JOURNAL - Chapter I (Post-Apocalyptic Short Film)
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- Опубликовано: 12 сен 2024
- My first short film ''The Journal'' is a story of a man who is trying to survive in the world of destruction. The man is wandering towards south until he finds a dead mans journal including his research and coordinates to the colony of survivals up in north.
*The Journal placed 3rd at Wasteland Film Festival 2019*
Directed, Shot and Edited by: Jani Tuominen
Written by: Jani Tuominen & Mikael Koskinen
CAST:
Mikael Koskinen
Janette Tuominen
Angelo Aalto
IG:@mdafilms
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Check out our new short film The King’s Letter!
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Why the guy had no ak?
It is a rare phenomenon that a gripping, very dark story, should be completely without dialogue. It held me for the entire film and when it abruptly ended, I was left wanting more. Full marks to all involved. you made it seem so real. WELL DONE
YEA,HALF OF A STORY.
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I have to say besides the locations and cinematography this movie is lazy and predictable as fuck but it is good if you do want a visual experience and can turn your brain off and forget about there ever being a story
@@fiddlesticksbessette398ใช่เพื่อนๆ😅
The cinematography in this movie was awesome
Hi! Can I use your video for my video?
Its not the apocalypse until everyone starts wearing fingerless gloves all the time
And gas masks.
What can a guy do Lol
why dont they wear normal gloves though
And gas masks work forever
@@MAILLADY2010 And you don't need them indoors even though the house is not sealed.
ONLY 3k VIEWS!? This deserves ALOT MORE Views. This is awesome
ONLY TO YOU MY FRIEND.WHAT WAS THE BEST PART TO YOU.??AND HOW COULD IT HAVE BEEN BETTER.
nearly 200k views now
By golly, that fighting scene took it to another level, loved how gritty it got! Hopefully the actors were treated with sauna afterwards, looked like it was shot during a cold evening, lol. Good job maintaining the story dark and desperate.
Actually incompetent ...example ,ANYBODY could fashion a club-pipe-ballbat to DROP someone immediately. Etc
That leg snap made me jump and yell.
All these post apocalypse movies are looking more real now.
Amazing! Probably the best Post Apocalyptic short film I have seen on youtube, great camera work, good editing and amazing colour grading, the only thing I can think of you could improve are the sound effects in some scenes, they are little fit off sometimes but overall you have made a great piece! Hopefully more to come in the future.
Balin Thank you so much!! More is definitely coming!
@@mdafilm How much time did you take to make this project?
It's so well done that it doesn't even need dialogue between characters
great job
Excellent overall. Loved the lack of dialogue. It makes the story speak for itself. The only critique I have, and it's not simply directed towards this film but the vast majority of movies I see, even big budget ones. Why does every character load their weapon (pull the slide back) just before a fight? Common sense would dictate, in a scenario like that, the weapon would always be ready to go. I have to assume it's done for dramatic effect but, as a lifelong shooter and decades long instructor, it just stands out to me like a flashing neon sign whenever I hear or see it. A small detail to be sure and possibly meaningless to anyone but me but its one of those details many people overlook.
When using a BB gun as a prop for a firearm, be careful not to give the audience a direct shot of the barrel; the small diameter will clearly give it away. Otherwise, great job.
There are barrels that small though .22 and 5.7 and more
The Walther PPQ M2 replica for Paintball is the perfect prop. It look real. There is a comparaison on YT with the real 9mm. Both are made by the same company.
Alec Baldwin join the chat…. Lol
@@mcchickenmcflurry3636 lol.
@@mcchickenmcflurry3636 Lmao
Great job! Have watched quite a few post-Apoc shorts as a homework assignment for my own scriptwriting.....ranks at the top of the 50 i have watched so far....for an improvement suggestion, i doubt the characters would be wearing such clean new appearing outfits.
No matter the hateful comments major props guys. These people actually followed through and made their short film. I really enjoyed watching the short major props
Movies like these need to be more shown the wait times all right now it's afraid that something might happen to the world the way both nations are looking at each other and I wouldn't be surprised
China and the United States are looking like boxing match let's see which one throws a purse for the purse punch first
I’m sure that the 115 people that disliked are just scared and creeped out. Great film and I have to watch this because of my school hw...
Veronica Alien whyyyyyyyyyy don’t expose my true identity
@@Jaconbee sO nOw ImA cAlL yOu LeOn????
Veronica Alien yes! And delete that comment!
@@Jaconbee Okay, so Ima call you Leon, and you are gonna call me Veronica.
Veronica Alien...ok
GOOSBUMPSS MAN, WTF IS THIS MASTERPIECE!!!
GROW UP PLEASE,UGH.
Lots of bad tactics.
Why ttavel with a gun in a hostile environment without already having chambered a round and keeping it the coat pocket instead of the backpack.
Where was his water?
Why didn't he scavenge clothes off the guy he killed? Like his shoes. He didn't check the guy's pockets.
The real post apocalypse is “Adventure Time” Mr.
XR600 Honda and shotguns across the back, bolt cutters and hand pump
👍
Someone prob reuploaded it smh
No. The "Big nose mask" Mr.
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Two thumbs up. Perfect shooting locations, props etc. etc. Well done.
is there a part 2? I'd actually pay to see the rest of this...
Yes, part 2. ruclips.net/video/3HscCMTmONk/видео.html
Good! You make realistic post-apocalyptic film!
Someone get this on Reddit so it can have the recognition it deserves
Thank you so much!
That's the best god damn fighting scene i ever seen! Great work!
no spoilers goddamn!
@@motorpig watch the video instead of reading comments. Then you wouldn't read spoilers...
Have you seen John Wick?
he was fighting a girl
YOU NEED GLASS'ES MY YOUNG FRIEND.LOL,..IT DONT TAKE MUCH TO PLEASE YOU.
One thing about a smokeless fire is that it warms the ground.
I suspect if needed the fire hole could be filled with dirt and slept on top of.
This is why you need to be physically fit I'm 32 year old man that's a retired firefighter with osteoarthritis in my thoracic spine and bad knees I'm not as physically fit as I used to be but in still strong when I need to be like if another man comes at me then yes I'm still an experienced street fighter and I know how to end a fight fast and I'm a former mms fighter with 15 years under my belt but I been doing more stuff like yard work to build up muscles again and get fit
That's great, now learn about comers.
I really enjoyed this ! The sound design is A1! Wondering if I can pull off something like this with a a6000
Wowww Look at that quality ,it just made my day !!
He forgot to take the filter
the filter he left was 40mm, the mask the main character wears takes 60mm
@@notnotagoodguy9600 nothing a little duct tape can’t fix if your desperate
@@keepermovin5906 I hope that's a joke XD
@@ductile1430 apocalypse problems require apocalypse solutions
@@keepermovin5906 I agree with that statement but when it comes to gas masks duct tape can cause a massive liability, there would be many leaks and such.
Great work with good camera working and editing. I like it!
I have seen over 200 AP films and this is well done : It gives a goal , a new idea , good cinematography , and best of all stage props were very realistic. Makes us want to know more about the colony too. You have the talent ,hope you progress in this line of work.
Fi:On siistii nähä e tämmösii tehdään myös Suomessa! 🇫🇮 Hyvin tehty!
En:It's cool to see that they make this stuff in Finland too! 🇫🇮 Well done!
DEZE Gamer kiitos paljon!
An excellent, gripping work! Much appreciated!
Thank you for letting me watch a great movie.
So cool !!! Really this film it's so fantastic !!!
The best apocalyptic film I have ever seen.
No ofense but leaving behind the second gas mask was not the brightest Idea
this was so well done, very impressive!
Great film MDAFILMS. THUMBS UP.!
Excellent filming, very good fight scene
That was a girl who kick his butt in LoL 😂 but gun beats rock 😳
Thats it?! More. Need more. Does he make it. More soon please. Excellent film
Great job!! Best PA short film i’ve seen 🤩
I looked with pleasure!
N I C E
Great work! So there was a short film somewhat like this - it was a special forces guy running... eventually he finds a house that he goes into. He survives fighting (a zombie? can't remember) doing so but as he leaves exhausted he ends up getting shot by another survivor sniping others. Anyone have a link to that one? It was great and beautifully shot too.
Why are you making so many post-apocalyptic movies? Is the order of those who plan to reduce the population in the world
Very nice job. I love the cinematography
I really hope that when the end comes, we will have a little more dignity and compassion and sense of humanity.
I subbed with notifications this was great. I have it saved to a playlist because it’s so good.
Oh my gah thank you so much for the ❤️ I’ll make sure to have friends sub because they’re into this kind of thing too.
Great film, hope you get lots and lots more views
The Journal Chapter II is out now! Watch it ruclips.net/video/3HscCMTmONk/видео.html
Good: photography, editing, locations. Bad: everything is (squeaky) clean, from the typewriter through the clothing (down to the dead guy's snow-white socks?) and the windshields to the can of food (and even the guy himself, after 280-something days on the post-nuclear-holocaust road?) And, he has running electricity 5 years after the war but he leaves it behind? And, he cannot break the glass in the gas station's door? These are major detractors from the film's atmosphere; and the only thing that can sell a no-budget short is authentic atmosphere...
Great postpoc short.. Much enjoyed. Thanks for your efforts.. d:^)
Excellent film! Love it. Very good plot, scenery, costumes, and acting. And without uttering a single word you can keep right up with it. Would love to see full length version of this! Great job, MDAfilms! Hope to see more!
I liked the opening but then nothing interesting happens. There wasn't enough forward momentum and I found the end really unsatisfying.
Its a short film.
an underrated masterpiece.
Good hunting STALKER.
So at the ending screen our hero realizes that this guy is actually raided his hideout find his research and thinks theres a colony of survivors up north but then gets killed buy the brown coated pmk gas mask dude our hero kills it and realizes that the guy who died was actually someone with hope thinking theres a colony of survivors up there? damn that hit hard...
Oh God 👍👍👍👍👍🔥
This is fire ! Perfect, unique and - I have to say - talented. Also you made something with a real actor and sh*t
I mean, I know this was made like 4 years ago, but in this case, I had to state how amazing a piece you made with this 🎉
Please don't cease with this kind of content, you clearly have a mind made to pull some post apocalyptic off awesomely
Love it. Well done. Keep going. Word of advice - people notice small things (like the gun... you know what I mean).
Everytime I watch an apocalyptic short film, I gotta eat Hormel Chili from the can! Lol
I just ate a can of kidney beans
A) The canisters on those gas masks don't last forever, so he should have grabbed the ones off the guy with the newly air conditioned head; B) Never, ever bring a rock to a post-apocalyptic gun fight.
Installation of new air conditioning destroyed the mask.
@@itsm3th3b33 I didn't say grab the mask, I said grab the canister.
THIS WAS SO COOL!! I want to make something like this but I don't think I can 😅 but I loved this!
This... is... GREAT !!!
I must have binged a thousand PO films the last week, and this one is easily in my top 3.
Nicely done! ty!
Can I say that I hate films that have characters wearing masks and filters all the time? If the air is always that toxic, we're all dead, especially after five years.
welp
it might not be toxins, probably dust or ash.
Dude this film shows you can survive without one. It's not immediately toxic, most likely there is a lot of ash in the air. People forget that in the event of total anarchy such as this, forest fires would run rampant. Not to mention the clearly burning city they're near. If it was toxic then the guy killed in the beginning would have had a gas mask, and the main character wouldn't have been able to survive without it when he took it off multiple times.
Some of these shorts are very quality. They have impressed me. If you watch enough of them they have 3 things in common. They wear gas masks. They all only carry a partial 9 oz bottle of water, and everyone kills everyone on sight. lol
Great film quality. Looks real good.
It amazes me how you can create such a great film without words. This really caught my attention and I bet it‘ll be in my dreams tonight :o
The film up-loaders spoiled their own film. But without the description, you wouldn't figure this out.
We have a term that applies to this: no head, no tail.
What camera did you use to shoot this one ..looks beautiful ?
Wonderful 💯
Awesome filming techniques!!! The location was perfect !
You have just earned yourself an new follower my friend
Filming is amazing
I really liked the short film, but I am quite concerned about the masks used here, they are the Soviet GP-7 and the Yugoslav M1, their filters contain asbestos that is released if the filter is hit, dented or wet inside, and I've seen that happen in the short film.
Yeah, that Yugoslavian M1 could also be an American M9 though (not saying that makes the filters any better)
looks so comfortable
-WELCOME TO THE ZONE STALKER-
Wow, awesome film. You really knocked it out of the park, home run.
Great short film 😍 its amazing how people can turn no each other and they both have nothing🤔. When your dead every you have and work is not going to be with🙄 you. Keep up the good work
Well done!
Wait so why can he sleep at night without the mask/ eat without the mask without choking
maybe its not really toxic
Maybe its like now. We have to wear masks to enter a restaurant however we can eat in one without. We have to wear masks if we are over 3-5 Years old, however children live with and breathe on each other and everyone over 5 all day long. This short has as many weird inconsistencies as present day life.
Bravo - got the right feel and locations for a post-apoc situation. About to watch Chapter II.
I'd share with you some extremely petty nitpicks. First, I noticed the character in the beginning had clothes and equipment that looked straight off the LL Bean shelves - brand new, clean, no soiling. In the next scene, they looked much more weathered and worn as you'd expect in an apocalypse 5 years on. Perhaps these scenes were filmed many days apart when props were or weren't available.
Second, the main character's firearm - if I'm not mistaken, that's a BB gun. I guess only firearms folks like myself notice this so it's not a big deal.
In any case, these are only nitpicks. I mention these because your film is extremely well made. Hopefully my comments will aid you in making your future endeavors even better.
Dude that was an amazing video!
Excellent.
A masterpiece with chilling suspense and thrills that leaves us wanting for more
Very good sir, I'm impressed. The soundtrack was amazing.
Помоему с неба сыпется полиэтилен, прямо сталкер!
Great job...Peace
it took me until now seeing someone irl use the gasmask to realize how silly the nose on the things look from a side angle.
Awesome film! What camera did you guys use?
Galavant thank you! I used sony a6300 witk kit lens.
MDA Awesome! I shoot my videos with the Sony a6300 also!
feels good man,feels like home
Hang on... didn't that guy have his leg broken below the knee during the ambush?... and then he "walks on" albeit with a bit of a limp... maybe... I guess some folks are easily impressed.
Broken or kneecapped, not sure which.
Must be an extremely fast healer.
😂😂😂
Wow..excellent...make it into a full feature film!!
Didn’t he get his leg snapped in two?
I thought he was kneecapped in the medium of a donkey kick.
Must be something in the polluted air that enhances healing.
😂😂😂
Looks like it didn't break, but still would have hurt like a motherfucker
This got 3rd place? I'd love to see second and frist! This was awesome!
Amazing nice job!
9/10 good shit, hope you make it big in the industry!
Awesome bruh
Underrated