YTP: The Michael Rosen Bum Sex Education

Hello! My third official YTP here. In this short but vulgar episode, Michael has landed himself a job in the education industry, and takes it upon himself to educate young citizens about the basics of alternative reproductive activities.
In other words, sex talk ensues.
I know my sentence mixing sucks, please don't kill me.
Also, I have no idea what that green bar along the right hand side of the video is. I think it's Vegas deciding it hates me while it renders my videos.

[@caldera11]

"fallopian transport" LMAO

[@RootNegativeSixteen]

Huh, that was actually some pretty decent sentence mixing. :) Could still use improvement but I could at least understand everything that was being said. I'd suggest first of all maybe picking up a copy of my Michael Rosen transcript, so that way you can find specific words or parts of words instead of having to memorize all the poems (though being familiar with the poems always helps). Another thing, I'd suggest not speeding up clips unless it's part of a joke or something, for instance when you sentence mixed "education" it probably would have been better to leave the "kay" part alone; speeding it up made the "K" sound disappear. :P But yeah, this was pretty nice for a newcomer imo :)

[@chocolateclick7274]

Thanks root. :) I did pick up the transcript a while back, and it's been fantastically helpful so far, although I've been watching MR YTPs for so long I kinda know where a lot of stuff is, especially for the white/grey background videos. I'm definitely working on getting my sentence mixing smoother though, I sped some bits up to make them sound more smooth, but they made the audio sound a bit weird so I'm avoiding that now anyway. Thanks for the feedback, I know we newcomers probably annoy you guys a lot.

[@Ultramanmeman4]

omg the best XD