IELTS Writing Task 2 | Let's write with me - Part 2

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  • I made some grammatical errors in this essay. Can you point out what they are?

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  • @ozodbeknazarbekov6205
    @ozodbeknazarbekov6205 25 дней назад +1

    Cheers mate! I'm learning a lot with you about writing structures. Carry on!

  • @ThuTran-uj8ty
    @ThuTran-uj8ty Месяц назад +3

    minor slips, "allow for" in the 2nd paragraph means to consider sth, not to give permission. In this case to avoid repetition of the word, we can also use "enable' in the previous sentence and allow sb to do sth in the next; "demand' should be singular in the conclusion part. Thank you for sharing this useful video!

    • @EnglishMende
      @EnglishMende  Месяц назад +1

      @@ThuTran-uj8ty Excellent😊 I actually made some other mistakes, you know, it's hard to speak and type at the same time. But in the actual exam, we should be more careful.