"Close My Eyes" (Demo Jungle/Ambient DnB Track) PLEASE GIVE FEEDBACK ❤️

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  • Опубликовано: 29 янв 2025

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  • @JetnoYT
    @JetnoYT Год назад +1

    It's pretty good 👍 👌

  • @mushroom312
    @mushroom312 Год назад

    I really like the intro part

    • @cosmicmicah
      @cosmicmicah  Год назад

      Thanks man! 🙌 also GOATED pfp 🔥

  • @siggatormusic
    @siggatormusic Год назад +1

    Sounds nice to me! I would recommend changing the synth brass sound you're using for a lead in the second half, I think the attack should be simplified instead of what appears to be a filter/pitch automation, kind of makes feel out of place to me. I will say it kind of lacks life: more variation in small details would also go a long way, I recommend listening to professional tracks of the same or similar genre and noticing the little things they do to make the track feel more alive and changing. For example, while this guy doesn't do jungle specifically, does do similar style of dance music that originated in relatively the same time period. I recommend noticing the little details, and how all the many small things that change and modulate throughout the track, giving it a lot of life.
    Disclosure - 'Never Enough' Twitch Breakdown
    and the actual track,
    Disclosure - Never Enough
    both can be found on RUclips if you're interested, hope it helps!

    • @cosmicmicah
      @cosmicmicah  Год назад

      Yes!!! 😁Thanks for the comment man, this is the kinda in-depth advice I was hoping for. I get what you mean about the slow attack on the synth brass' filter cutoff. Do you think having a faster attack is a good resolve or a different instrument altogether would help? And yeah, more variation is def a must. I think that's one of the aspects of production I still struggle with the most-- having fresh variations that don't feel out of place. I'll be sure to check out those tracks and some of yours as well!! Thanks again 🙌🙌

    • @siggatormusic
      @siggatormusic Год назад

      @@cosmicmicah No problem man! as for the synth, I think just simplifying the attack would be enough, but I encourage you to experiment and see what you like. if it sounds good, than it likely is good!

  • @funnyman1863
    @funnyman1863 Год назад +1

    78 views? MORE

    • @cosmicmicah
      @cosmicmicah  Год назад

      Thanks man, comments like yours help! 😄