So we have the beautiful and cheery girl that saves the sad boy who also had the beautiful goth girl. MC is also a skilled fighter. Then random cliffhanger for some reason. Creeps made this bad creepypasta actually seem good lol
Fr bro I was always messed up on pain pills, booze, and tons of weed. Never had to explain myself to my boss, coworkers, family etc. night shift is always an acceptable answer 😂😎💯 graveyard shift homies are all different animals than day shift workers
None of the story made sense after his wife dying lol. Therapist recommends night shift instead of fixing his problems, he asks not to be called a nickname because it reminds of his dead wife, only for his new coworker to immediately introduce him by that nickname, female main character instantly takes a liking to our main character after being called homeless, other new character attacks the main character to turn off the lights, instead of just turning off the lights. Mirror dimension is a thing now. No elaboration, no character development, nothing learned, and yet, the main character is now fighting for humanity to distract himself from his emotions instead of going to the therapy he paid for
Its incredibly well read but its such an odd story. I dont get it at all. No one behaves like a person at all in this story. The music and the way it's read is really good to the point it almost masks the weirdness that is this story
@@SparkleJumpQueenthat's because creeps is an amazing narrator. The writing itself tho is really bland and sounds like a single dude living out a fantasy
Nighttime CDL-B flatbed and truck trailer construction supply driver here. And I have to load and unload my pallets. Couldn't love it more. Just night air, roadway, diesel engine sound, and empty new construction structures.
I’m a tormented insomniac who is excellent at breaking wrists and fighting dr strange in the mirror dimension and girls want me on there team cause I’m so awesome is what I got from this story
My favourite part is where he says he cant find a job because his only experience is supermarket work so to fix that issue he starts working in a supermarket to get more experience
Dude: *asks not to be called by a specific nickname* Girl: *immediately introduces him to everyone else by that exact name* I'm not the only one who finds that to be a dick move, right? (to be clear I really enjoyed the narration, I just have had problems with people calling me specific nicknames when I've SPECIFICALLY TOLD THEM NOT TO so I'm a little sensitive on the subject 😅)
They did recruit him maybe she already new and was purposely testing him. Maybe her doing that is what made that specific mirror image to conjure itself and they knew that would be his biggest obstacle and if he could overcome that he was worthy to join. But yeah, it frustrated me too
@@JaqenHghar. That actually makes sense. He was lost in memory when Karen said that name, and she had to snap him out of it. Then when he came back from the mirror-world, he confused the girl in the memories for Karen. I was pretty critical of the writing over-all, but that's a good attempt at a set-up and pay off.
This isn't a good story. It feel like a huge chunk of info is just missing. So the sound near the end knocked him out. He woke up and sudenly his some fighter vs the mirror diamntion. wth.
Did not like that story one little bit. So much character build up just to have barely any payoff and an abrupt semi cliffhanger ending. Also karen is a god awful character. Seems like the author was trying way too hard to make her a likeable quirky girl but she was just an annoying weirdo. Outside of the main character no ones behaviour made any sense
His behaviour made no sense at all. Girl approaches his car dressed in a work uniform, and he assumes she's homeless? He doesn't like being called Rafa and tells her not to call him that, she ignores that, he smiles at her? Guy starts randomly threatening him, he tries to punch him instead of asking him wtf is going on.
@@krazycats564 The Rafa thing makes sense though. That's what his ex called him, and when Karen called him that, he was lost in memories she had o snap him out of. Then when he was lost in the mirror dimension, he confused his ex with Karen when he was being bought back to reality.
I have worked multiple different jobs with paranormal activity. The biggest was as a Louisiana State Special Officer during and after Hurricane Katrina and we saw and encountered many different types of entities. Another was as a Loss Prevention Agent at a very old Sears Department Store that was on the site of a old Civil War Confederate fort and later a Catholic Convent and was haunted by the ghost of a Nun. There are many more from my 30 plus years in law enforcement.
Creeps, your voice is so nice as always. I have to say that I liked the start of the story, but didn’t understand the end. The story seemed to have holes. Too many things were missing such as what the mirror dimension was.
@@sethsmallwoods you wanted him to leave? He's the best creepy pasta reader on RUclips but there are some oddities with this channel it seems like he has the algorithm down for success but out of nowhere his video views dropped from like 200k to like 50k maybe and so i was wondering is there some controversy or something? Its like people dropped him out of nowhere
I don't know if the author bases the main characters sleeping problem on their own experiences but taking too high dose of melatonin actually causes insomnia.
I know these are based on peoples actual events but some of them seem that they at least exaggerated a little bit. Not trying to call sentinel a liar just saying.
Love it when a neck beard writes himself into his own monster story thats end with him being a monster Hunter. And has a beautiful dead wife of course, like a shitty movie
Wow that was SAD, a bunch of random grouping of word's trying to be a story. May b it was all a dream, they have a reputation of being "really stupid" sometimes. 🇺🇲
RUclips can limit my ansers by creating boxes prefabricated, this doesn't require me to only ask questions provided im preselected boxes!!! I ha ve more questions than your answers??. I cn Google answers to my questions???!!!
So we have the beautiful and cheery girl that saves the sad boy who also had the beautiful goth girl. MC is also a skilled fighter. Then random cliffhanger for some reason. Creeps made this bad creepypasta actually seem good lol
“They’re going to think I’m high and fire me on the spot.” 🤣 it’s the night shift at a warehouse. I doubt they care how red your eyes are.
paranoia while high will do that to u fr xd
Fr bro I was always messed up on pain pills, booze, and tons of weed. Never had to explain myself to my boss, coworkers, family etc. night shift is always an acceptable answer 😂😎💯 graveyard shift homies are all different animals than day shift workers
I'm pretty sure this creepypasta was written by AI
Me too, AI don’t understand feelings like fear yet 🤨
yeahhh this was genuinely awful. Massive rise of just genuine garbage now a days
I feel like remy just existed to show how cool and capable the main character was. He was just an asshole for no reason.
None of the story made sense after his wife dying lol. Therapist recommends night shift instead of fixing his problems, he asks not to be called a nickname because it reminds of his dead wife, only for his new coworker to immediately introduce him by that nickname, female main character instantly takes a liking to our main character after being called homeless, other new character attacks the main character to turn off the lights, instead of just turning off the lights. Mirror dimension is a thing now. No elaboration, no character development, nothing learned, and yet, the main character is now fighting for humanity to distract himself from his emotions instead of going to the therapy he paid for
@@GumpierGoat2yeah it felt like the author is a mental case who's being smug about not taking their medication
@@GumpierGoat2guys will literally go to war in the mirror dimension to avoid therapy
What in the world did I just listen to
Its incredibly well read but its such an odd story. I dont get it at all. No one behaves like a person at all in this story. The music and the way it's read is really good to the point it almost masks the weirdness that is this story
Love the stories 90% of the time. Guess this is part of the 10. Wow that was ass
Anyone else get the feeling that this author has never interacted with another human being?
Yes.
This story was so weird, bland, cringey and lacking any actual interesting points.
their username is slimysackz. i’m not surprised.
Can you elaborate on what you mean?
For me it was the stilted, awkward, bland dialogue.
@@SparkleJumpQueenthat's because creeps is an amazing narrator. The writing itself tho is really bland and sounds like a single dude living out a fantasy
Damn bro why do you got to do him like that XD
This story is like a deliriant hallucination 💀
Maybe that’s what they were going for? Lol the whole thing is so weird, down to the writing style. It’s like they used chat GPT to write iy
@@notaperson9831
Awesome to see a new Creepypasta Story
Surprisingly on-point description
@@chipdipleraka7343
I like it.
I always liked the Graveyard Shift Creepypasta Stories.
What the hell was that bullshit?!
This story gives me 'Chat GPT vibes' don't know how else to explain it
Nighttime CDL-B flatbed and truck trailer construction supply driver here. And I have to load and unload my pallets. Couldn't love it more. Just night air, roadway, diesel engine sound, and empty new construction structures.
I’m a tormented insomniac who is excellent at breaking wrists and fighting dr strange in the mirror dimension and girls want me on there team cause I’m so awesome is what I got from this story
I wish people would stop using 'smirk' when someone smiles. A smirk is not a good thing, it's a condescending or mean-spirited expression.
Thank you! It's especially annoying in romantic scenarios
My favourite part is where he says he cant find a job because his only experience is supermarket work so to fix that issue he starts working in a supermarket to get more experience
Not really expanding.
You got it all wrong guys. I think he is admitted into a psych hospital. That makes sense of all the weird characters and their behaviors.
This makes as much sense as my nightmares.
this makes less sense than my nightmares
At 13:04, says time moves slow as a sloth walking in water. Feel the need to mention sloths swim faster than you would think
Don't turn off the lights...always good advice when you work graveyard shift at a warehouse
'Don't forklift in the dark'
@@Valchrist1313
If that was you and you on the bus then who was flickering the lights? *Lights flickering on and off* Nosferatu
Dude: *asks not to be called by a specific nickname*
Girl: *immediately introduces him to everyone else by that exact name*
I'm not the only one who finds that to be a dick move, right?
(to be clear I really enjoyed the narration, I just have had problems with people calling me specific nicknames when I've SPECIFICALLY TOLD THEM NOT TO so I'm a little sensitive on the subject 😅)
Horrible writing ✍
They did recruit him maybe she already new and was purposely testing him. Maybe her doing that is what made that specific mirror image to conjure itself and they knew that would be his biggest obstacle and if he could overcome that he was worthy to join. But yeah, it frustrated me too
Her name is Karen...
@@JaqenHghar. That actually makes sense. He was lost in memory when Karen said that name, and she had to snap him out of it. Then when he came back from the mirror-world, he confused the girl in the memories for Karen.
I was pretty critical of the writing over-all, but that's a good attempt at a set-up and pay off.
Pretty certain this was just a pilot episode to a harem anime.
Sounds like the narrator was chosen randomly to read in class and didn't read the correct paragraph.
This story was horrible my gosh.
In the decade since I first heard this channel you can really tell the difference in his voice
You're one of my favorites glad to hear you're out there tonight
Not a very good story.😒
best creepypasta youtuber!!!!!
NEW CREEPYPASTA!? YEEEE BOI!
This isn't a good story. It feel like a huge chunk of info is just missing. So the sound near the end knocked him out. He woke up and sudenly his some fighter vs the mirror diamntion. wth.
I haven't been able to have a lunch time story in MONTHS! I'm so excited!
This is the yiik of creepypastas
1 hour after posting. Can't believe i got here this quickly for a new creepy pasta
*works night shift alone in a warehouse.*
😳
😅good luck
@@TheSidicd
I like The Graveyard Shift
Mini golf and horror stories go crazy onmm
Jeff Smile and Masky: THE HASH SLINGING SLASHER
Karen pissed off cuz the squid wanna smash her
Did not like that story one little bit.
So much character build up just to have barely any payoff and an abrupt semi cliffhanger ending.
Also karen is a god awful character. Seems like the author was trying way too hard to make her a likeable quirky girl but she was just an annoying weirdo.
Outside of the main character no ones behaviour made any sense
His behaviour made no sense at all. Girl approaches his car dressed in a work uniform, and he assumes she's homeless? He doesn't like being called Rafa and tells her not to call him that, she ignores that, he smiles at her? Guy starts randomly threatening him, he tries to punch him instead of asking him wtf is going on.
@krazycats564 good point actually
All around bizarrely written story. Cant wait not to hear the sequal 😂
@@krazycats564 The Rafa thing makes sense though. That's what his ex called him, and when Karen called him that, he was lost in memories she had o snap him out of.
Then when he was lost in the mirror dimension, he confused his ex with Karen when he was being bought back to reality.
Ai generated?
I have worked multiple different jobs with paranormal activity. The biggest was as a Louisiana State Special Officer during and after Hurricane Katrina and we saw and encountered many different types of entities. Another was as a Loss Prevention Agent at a very old Sears Department Store that was on the site of a old Civil War Confederate fort and later a Catholic Convent and was haunted by the ghost of a Nun. There are many more from my 30 plus years in law enforcement.
Appreciate the new vid!
Easily one of the worst stories I’ve heard 😂
Damn
It had potential in the first half.
Appreciate the new video good job
Visualistic narrative ✊
I’ve never been so confused in my life
I got a cat and it fixed my sleeping 🥰 she's my best friend now❤
Haven’t seen any of your vids in my feed in about 4 years
Oh wow, I haven’t seen any in a while myself even though I was subscribed
3:04 "some rejected me"
Nah... That's why all I apply for is nights.😂
This story was carried by your narration.
Lol. Probably not the best video to listen to when I'm desperately trying to find a new job. 😋
I have a warehouse down in your area, I'm currently hiring stockers for night shift. I don't care about experience but just don't turn off the lights
Herbal teas that help you sleep are fire
Creeps, your voice is so nice as always. I have to say that I liked the start of the story, but didn’t understand the end. The story seemed to have holes. Too many things were missing such as what the mirror dimension was.
I wanted a new video and here it is ✨
I looked for a rules story for so long and finally found it at a good place.
Red Owl has lotsa ones with RULES😊
Why???
@@Datadog-1why not, friend... it gives the story some mystery and suspense ya kno really adds to da story ya kno
@@Datadog-1 I like those kinds of story as they mix knowledge with anticipation.
@@raelenejoachim1401 Thank you for letting me know. Will check out.
Yey! 🎉 But can you please fix the live feed too? ❤
CreepsMcPasta is reading stories regularly again! Hope that he's doing well.
Unfortunate, thought he left the platform.
@@sethsmallwoods you wanted him to leave? He's the best creepy pasta reader on RUclips but there are some oddities with this channel it seems like he has the algorithm down for success but out of nowhere his video views dropped from like 200k to like 50k maybe and so i was wondering is there some controversy or something? Its like people dropped him out of nowhere
He doesn’t make them I don’t think , he has a few he’s written though
@@davidreith2663 I mean reading them
@@IsolationLifts
I agree with you he's one of my favorites
Not bad! Not as scary as I thought, but definitely worth the listen. Love listening to you Creeps ^^
Fair enough; I won't eat an owl before bed.
And I already do stay away from mirrors in the dark.
Wow, that one took quite a turn.
Just started a job at UPS sorting. Fml.
I was invested until the protagonist whipped out some Jason Statham moves againts the prick outta nowhere.
Yeah this feels like it was written by AI. Why did you pick this story?
The biggest creepypasta narrator that ever lived.
Scully's House of Thrillers
I agree with you he's one of the best ones along with MrCreepypasta and CreepyPastaJr
Nah dark somnium is the best he puts a lot more production value into his reads but this guy is pretty good too. I'd say top 5
@@loveableheathen7441
I like him too
Man I love almost every story on this channel but my god was this all over the place with no point
Do people actually notice the dilation of their pupils?
Somebody used A.I to write a story. Cause ummmm
What's wit the AD for the YT ads, If I can't watch the way I want to then HATE to say it I won't WATCH !
Thank you creeps❤
There's only one rule! Keep the lights *on!* *On!* ~ Daycare Attendant
I love the rules stories but this one was not put together well at all this story was everywhere an nowhere at the same time
Not a fan of rules stories
I like how predictable they are, but I agree they aren't the most compelling stories.
Bro I was watching the video and fell asleep until very end
Pretty sure those are GoT words! What is dead may never die!
I don't know if the author bases the main characters sleeping problem on their own experiences but taking too high dose of melatonin actually causes insomnia.
I miss you so much. I haven't been able to find the live steam and I've heard so many stories. I haven't found an uncomment one yet
Wtf even was this story
First I thought remi was weird, then I thought he was part of the plan, then they said he was just crazy.. whuuut one plottwist after another
Anyone know what happened to the Live? Haven’t seen it in a few days
ive been missing it sm ahh, ive just been watching his old vids from like 7years ago to sleeb to xD
@@wat3rf4iryme too 😢 I need to his videos to fall asleep 😢
Read a book, hell once I start a book, I HAVE TO FINISH IT !!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thx a ton creeps!!!!!
Bring back your livestream!!
I know these are based on peoples actual events but some of them seem that they at least exaggerated a little bit. Not trying to call sentinel a liar just saying.
Notification Squad🙏
Today is my birthday Friday the thirteenth we love you creeps mcpasta
Glad I'm not the only one who noticed how stupid this story is.
"There's only one rule, keep the lights ON." - Sun, FNAF Security Breach
AW MAN YOU BEAT ME TO IT!
Sun knows what's up lol
@@pineappleprincess9704
Or have Nosferatu flicker the lights on and off
Wow a cliffhanger hanger, Please don’t make a part 2! :)
Love it when a neck beard writes himself into his own monster story thats end with him being a monster Hunter. And has a beautiful dead wife of course, like a shitty movie
What on earth was this? 🤣🤣
Maaan the story was disappointing haha result of turning the lights off couldve been something way more tangible
Wow that was SAD, a bunch of random grouping of word's trying to be a story.
May b it was all a dream, they have a reputation of being "really stupid" sometimes. 🇺🇲
Mirrors 🪞 there are none.
0:45 but lighthouse horrors wife sells them😮
Miss you more than you know ❤
Not one of the better creepypastas
Just smoke a j fo goin to sleep shi will make u sleep like a baby 😭
we need a story talking about his fights in the mirror dimension!
Just like Lights Out.
Ben Bay
Very good movie too
@@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376 Absolutely.
@@benbayford1756
I also like the short movie it's based on too
@@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376 Same here.
@@benbayford1756
Yeah and I like Creepypasta and Horror Movies and others
I ain't no taco man that's for sure
RUclips can limit my ansers by creating boxes prefabricated, this doesn't require me to only ask questions provided im preselected boxes!!! I ha ve more questions than your answers??. I cn Google answers to my questions???!!!
I need the live! What happened to the live !!
wOW what a disappointing story
These stories would be a lot spookier if the dialogue wasn't some redditor's incel fantasy.