"My crew was hired to refurb a derelict cruise ship. What happened will haunt me" Creepypasta

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  • Опубликовано: 29 сен 2024
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Комментарии • 398

  • @curtbalch2321
    @curtbalch2321 3 года назад +1091

    "I Can't Escape, They Always Find Me. How Do They Even Know My Car Warranty Is Up?"

  • @valentino0343
    @valentino0343 3 года назад +492

    These titles get even more specific as time goes on
    “I left my microwave on at 3 am, when i woke up, i was in Antarctica”

    • @albertaberg6379
      @albertaberg6379 3 года назад +6

      Lol

    • @Brock_Fujiwara
      @Brock_Fujiwara 3 года назад +6

      🤨📸

    • @jebuscrist0244
      @jebuscrist0244 3 года назад +27

      I woke up in Antarctica there was a strange list of rules for me to follow

    • @markcarpenter6020
      @markcarpenter6020 3 года назад +27

      It was Saturday the 14th at 3pm when I stubbed my left big toe on a pine cone and when I looked up there was a Ghost of a civil war officer.

    • @Questionablexfun
      @Questionablexfun 3 года назад +1

      😆😆😆

  • @lavenderotaku2481
    @lavenderotaku2481 2 года назад +1

    My man decided to do the ONE thing you should never fucking do in a horror movie. Especially not on a spooky-ass cruise ship that’s been abandoned for 30 years. AND when you’re on a slide that leads down into a cursed-ass nasty pool.
    He did the goddamn “HELLO?!”

  • @katiesimpson8517
    @katiesimpson8517 2 года назад +1

    Hey, I'm a senior citizen. I seriously had to stifle a huge laugh.....

  • @LeeroyPorkins
    @LeeroyPorkins 3 года назад +30

    Tune in next week for "I Was Hired To Refurbish A Bathroom. Whatever Jumped Out Of The Glory Hole Is Still Haunting My Backroom."

  • @DOMFRMDA_800
    @DOMFRMDA_800 3 года назад +9

    I died and came back to life
    HELL ISN'T WHAT YOU THINK
    I think a story like this would be interesting

    • @yoshi9967
      @yoshi9967 3 года назад +9

      I think there's like 6-7 creepypastas with or a similar name/story as what ur looking for

    • @imagine778
      @imagine778 3 года назад +3

      Didn’t mr. creeps narrate one like that?

  • @trishamingin9003
    @trishamingin9003 3 года назад +4

    The perfect way to spend a Saturday afternoon!!!☺☺

  • @k.darkheart3088
    @k.darkheart3088 3 года назад +2

    Dude, you were born to narrate stories like this.

  • @Slappap
    @Slappap Год назад

    This is a story that should really be expanded on. It needs it honestly.

  • @danajones5896
    @danajones5896 3 года назад +1

    That was so hunting and creepy, I will forever say it, Great storytelling and my vivid imagination looovvves it, Thank you!😉❤💯👍

  • @crazyparanormalinvestigato2007
    @crazyparanormalinvestigato2007 3 года назад +2

    We all float down here and you'll float too 😂

  • @TheYeller7
    @TheYeller7 3 года назад +2

    Anyone have an idea what the 15:40 song/ambient is? I couldn't find it under the two RUclips channels in the description so I can only guess it's one of the music services on there? I really love how cool it sounds.

    • @stevepalpatine2828
      @stevepalpatine2828 3 года назад

      Al Bowly - Midnight, the Stars, and You. 😎

    • @TheYeller7
      @TheYeller7 3 года назад +1

      @@stevepalpatine2828 Good song, but definitely not this song lol.

  • @MeganC80
    @MeganC80 3 года назад +1

    Reminded me of a twisted Ghost Ship

  • @R3AP9
    @R3AP9 3 года назад +1

    This was amazing

  • @buncentb6139
    @buncentb6139 3 года назад +1

    Just under this video there was an ad for a cruise ship lol

  • @daniellewillis2767
    @daniellewillis2767 2 года назад

    I can't escape, I knew I shouldn't have cut that tag off my mattress..

  • @nattvaktenphotography
    @nattvaktenphotography 2 года назад

    "I forgot to feed my roommates fish. I had 7 hours to come up with $1500 for a replacement."

  • @giniwalters8401
    @giniwalters8401 3 года назад

    Great story I really enjoyed it 💙 Great narration as well 💙💙

  • @Abcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz1024
    @Abcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz1024 3 года назад

    26:16 correction:
    "not wanting to die and being prepared is weird"

  • @lavonnegeter7794
    @lavonnegeter7794 2 года назад

    Charlie is a mood frfr

  • @karganor
    @karganor 2 года назад

    New creepypasta Idea, me and my friends died in a car crash, we woke in newborn bodies and now something inhuman thinks she's our mother

  • @randlerichardson5826
    @randlerichardson5826 2 года назад

    Maybe I can finish watching now CreepsMcPasta

  • @conservat1vepatr1ot
    @conservat1vepatr1ot 2 года назад

    Holy shit, this one actually had me in the center of my bed so nothing could grab me from under it…

  • @nickbriz1156
    @nickbriz1156 3 года назад

    I've always had blue eyes.. what I saw in the mirror I will be forever traumatized

  • @brandijenkins3351
    @brandijenkins3351 3 года назад

    Great story. 😊

  • @MrDuneedon
    @MrDuneedon 3 года назад +3

    Was this ship called the SS Overlook, by any chance? 😉

    • @redengineer4380
      @redengineer4380 3 года назад

      What is this a reference to?

    • @MrDuneedon
      @MrDuneedon 3 года назад

      @@redengineer4380 The Overlook Hotel, from the book/movie ‘The Shining.’

  • @NinaDuffy
    @NinaDuffy 3 года назад

    Another awesome title.

  • @Zollnation
    @Zollnation Год назад

    Mr pasta must be a biologist, since he love the Word tendrils.

  • @captaingeneroddenberry8439
    @captaingeneroddenberry8439 3 года назад +2

    Another Ghost Ship

    • @raphaelralph6521
      @raphaelralph6521 3 года назад

      Tbh its not a ghost ship tho more it mire has a more cosmic horror thing going on since the bodies are real not spirits and the hungry man is phsyically real and the ship seems to be a web for the spider

    • @captaingeneroddenberry8439
      @captaingeneroddenberry8439 3 года назад +1

      @@raphaelralph6521 Could make into a good cosmic scifi movie

    • @raphaelralph6521
      @raphaelralph6521 3 года назад

      @@captaingeneroddenberry8439 on second thought maybe it could be classified as sci fi

  • @jeremiahbeckstead4394
    @jeremiahbeckstead4394 2 года назад +1

    This is the same story as ghost ship

  • @alexirose8270
    @alexirose8270 2 года назад

    250k views. 0 dislikes. hell yeah Creeps.

  • @sarahsafira9508
    @sarahsafira9508 3 года назад

    5 ⭐ out of 5

  • @austincarterog
    @austincarterog 10 месяцев назад

    fake

  • @that1pebble907
    @that1pebble907 2 года назад

    what a fucking story this was fucking amazing

  • @endlessvoyagexofficial3746
    @endlessvoyagexofficial3746 3 года назад +545

    “I drove to the gas station, how much it costs per gallon will still haunt me”

    • @jackalina91
      @jackalina91 3 года назад +7

      Try $1.60 a LITRE LIKE WE PAY IN AUSTRALIA

    • @michellealinateague9892
      @michellealinateague9892 3 года назад +6

      Hense why i use in city transportation. Waaaaay cheaper

    • @jackdare
      @jackdare 3 года назад +9

      @@michellealinateague9892 public transport is useless where I live..

    • @michellealinateague9892
      @michellealinateague9892 3 года назад +2

      @@jackdare ah. Thats a pity. Its amazing if it functions even half right

    • @blaircrocker9845
      @blaircrocker9845 3 года назад

      Oh the horror!!!!!

  • @ravenxavius7521
    @ravenxavius7521 3 года назад +612

    I know I'm supposed to be an adult, but hearing "I don't think I can get it up" and "It isn't coming easy" within the first 30 seconds made me chuckle way more than I'd like to admit

  • @EternityUnknown
    @EternityUnknown 3 года назад +49

    "I brushed my teeth for three minutes. I should have stopped after two."

  • @tsaqifrizky5276
    @tsaqifrizky5276 3 года назад +237

    "My dad went out to buy milk, it wasn't him that returned 18 years later."

    • @jacobsoronen
      @jacobsoronen 3 года назад +6

      That's pretty funny bro, not enough credit on this post

    • @torytellstales
      @torytellstales 3 года назад +4

      Most importantly though, did he actually return with the milk???? 🤣🤣🤣

    • @thelmagreenwood3377
      @thelmagreenwood3377 3 года назад +3

      Maybe the guy who left 18 years ago wasn't your dad, and the guy 18 years later was???

    • @IshijimaKairo
      @IshijimaKairo 3 года назад

      it was that guy from the CoD lobby.

    • @clint-thenormalguy-rockwell365
      @clint-thenormalguy-rockwell365 3 года назад +3

      @@torytellstales He did, but it was actually Almond milk!!! *Thunder crash*

  • @Zana205
    @Zana205 3 года назад +116

    Captain abandoned ship? So it’s the Costa Concordia

    • @DickChappy.
      @DickChappy. 3 года назад +33

      *Internet Historian noises*

    • @wombat2874
      @wombat2874 3 года назад +7

      That’s all I could think about the whole video

    • @exnomer5002
      @exnomer5002 3 года назад +4

      *_Vada A Bordo CAZZO!!!_* 😏

    • @Niagaranobs
      @Niagaranobs 3 года назад

      @@DickChappy. bright sun films

  • @picklerick88124
    @picklerick88124 2 года назад +190

    This reminds me of a take on the old 2000s movie "Ghost Ship" with he cursed gold. All crew and passengers killed. Only the female survives. Most notable moment is the opening where a wire snaps on top deck and slices everyone in half.
    There is a ghost girl who wants to sink the ship to free the souls.
    Please tell me I'm not the only one who remembers that gem of a move, and relates this story to the movie

    • @terilomoro8786
      @terilomoro8786 2 года назад +4

      I was thinking the same thing!

    • @stargazer6510
      @stargazer6510 2 года назад +2

      Nope. I was thinking the same.
      Specially how the man was ghost all along in the end.

    • @beverleythomas5708
      @beverleythomas5708 2 года назад +3

      That movie is the first thing I thought of as soon as I started listening.

    • @Luna_Spiritus
      @Luna_Spiritus 2 года назад

      Netflix i think

    • @HappyMatt12345
      @HappyMatt12345 Год назад +2

      I haven't seen it, should I watch it?

  • @oneghost1257
    @oneghost1257 3 года назад +81

    I know we joke about how specific Creepypasta titles have been getting but this one is literally a step away from being called "Cosmic horror in *my* cruise ship? It's more likely than you think."

  • @MasteryFlow
    @MasteryFlow 3 года назад +101

    “I accidentally overcharged my card at a seedy CVS in Mid-July, the overdraft fees I incurred still mildly annoy me 😨😨”

    • @SomeLonelyShmuck
      @SomeLonelyShmuck 3 года назад +12

      The horror of slight inconvenience should never be underestimated

  • @Alargator
    @Alargator 3 года назад +353

    Yes yes, creepypasta title funny, but can we talk about how good and creepy this story is? It could easily fit in with some Lovecraftian stuff. The vibes you get from the boat, the Hungry Man, the collection, and his gifts... really unsettling.

    • @JimmmyRaynor
      @JimmmyRaynor 3 года назад +8

      this is the best story I've heard all year and he's read a few really good ones too

    • @GreatPoland1232
      @GreatPoland1232 2 года назад

      Anime pfp defected opinion rejected

    • @island_girl
      @island_girl 2 года назад +2

      Dagon is hungry.

    • @Fede0779
      @Fede0779 Год назад +2

      Pretty good

  • @EdgyShooter
    @EdgyShooter Год назад +85

    The horrific irony that the captain was considered insane by the world when he was actually trying to save the passengers

  • @s.v8125
    @s.v8125 3 года назад +74

    This story reminds me of the movie Ghost Ship.

    • @Luna_Spiritus
      @Luna_Spiritus 3 года назад +4

      That movie was awful

    • @jessidavis3006
      @jessidavis3006 3 года назад +6

      I saw the head cut scene when I was around 8. It scared me so bad that I never watched the end or the movie again for years.

    • @joekline5171
      @joekline5171 3 года назад +7

      @@Luna_Spiritus I liked it, just has some generic techniques like all horror films from that time

    • @loganfarley9081
      @loganfarley9081 3 года назад +3

      Was thinking the same thing through out the whole story

    • @defiantspirit8512
      @defiantspirit8512 3 года назад +2

      Thought the same, glad I'm not the only one

  • @EternityUnknown
    @EternityUnknown 3 года назад +47

    "I gave my dog a scoop more of food than my mom told me to. I should have listened"

    • @oldgreggsmadmemes4431
      @oldgreggsmadmemes4431 3 года назад +2

      If it was liquid food you would understand the smell of horror

    • @EternityUnknown
      @EternityUnknown 3 года назад +2

      @@oldgreggsmadmemes4431 dog food smells like horror already, so I can't imagine a cruel world where the food is a liquid.

    • @cryofist
      @cryofist 3 года назад

      i would listen to that story lol

    • @oldgreggsmadmemes4431
      @oldgreggsmadmemes4431 3 года назад

      @@EternityUnknown youkow the mushy food In a can not the hard food it's the food normally given to puppy's after they just finished nursing

    • @EternityUnknown
      @EternityUnknown 3 года назад

      @@oldgreggsmadmemes4431 thanks for making me hate humans more.

  • @loganfarley9081
    @loganfarley9081 3 года назад +41

    Who else feels like the movie ghost ship inspired some of this story

    • @mischiefart1032
      @mischiefart1032 3 года назад +1

      Same

    • @drusilla_darke
      @drusilla_darke 3 года назад +2

      I loved the opening scene from that movie. It was so unexpected and well done. 🎬

  • @crispyblindead2413
    @crispyblindead2413 Год назад +5

    Yeah, the Coast Guard went back. We were trained to deal with wayward soul collectors of various manifestations, despite the constant criticism and put downs by our horny big sister branches who get off on bullying their little brother branch, we have our honorable hours. Dealing with Davy Jones types is like week one of basic training. See, what you do is create a bit of a custodial situation. One man’s talking to the entity, the other two or three are triangulating behind the being and looking around suspiciously. Then we start asking the questions, rapid fire like, “where’s you life jackets, throwable floatation devices, flares, are they expired, is this ship California compliant on fuel regulation, captains license, where the deployable rafts, fire extinguishers, what’s in the backpack, have you been drinking tonight sir or ma’am.” Before you know it, we have it detained and bewildered with enchanted hand cuffs, job done. I don’t expect you damned civilians to understand. Now sea serpents and fish men? Whole other subject, always a soup-sandwich situation. And the aliens and their pranks? Outrageous, I don’t even get their humor. But they get fines. Lighthouse ghosts are also a problem. I hate this branch.

  • @mistressraevyn3820
    @mistressraevyn3820 3 года назад +48

    I had meant to fall asleep to this but damn this was too good

  • @torytellstales
    @torytellstales 3 года назад +7

    "I Always Tell My Dog Who's A Good Boy? Today He Actually Answered That Question."

  • @GmodPlusWoW
    @GmodPlusWoW 3 года назад +14

    Shoulda torpedoed that damn thing from miles away. Preferably with a dumbfire, since spooky curses tend to mess with electronics like guidance systems.
    Honestly, it'd probably serve the sea better as an anchor-point for coral and kelp.

  • @jackdurden466
    @jackdurden466 3 года назад +33

    So far this is really good, I love derelict ships tales...Damn this was excellent! Screw the titles, I’m here for substance and this delivered. It’s just the right length for a good build up, an unsettling peak, and one helluva an ending. Damn good work! 👍

    • @raphaelralph6521
      @raphaelralph6521 3 года назад +3

      Yeah i dont know the fuss about the titles i mean it yeah its literall but its ok The stories are Better than the crap hollywood has been giving us

  • @tarahstephens673
    @tarahstephens673 3 года назад +91

    Yay more ocean themed stories!

  • @TheRisingDzn
    @TheRisingDzn 3 года назад +45

    Honestly, this story was awesome, no words.

  • @dovah2006
    @dovah2006 3 года назад +16

    Note to self: If you can't get it up, and it's not coming easy, just cut it. 👍

    • @DanBCooper
      @DanBCooper 3 года назад

      😳

    • @werewolf4358
      @werewolf4358 2 года назад

      Maybe try a few chemicals first. Might be less messy and more effective.

  • @franklinbonnefoy2295
    @franklinbonnefoy2295 3 года назад +8

    This story reminds me of Ghost Ship. I doubt anyone remembers that movie

    • @raphaelralph6521
      @raphaelralph6521 3 года назад +1

      Im 18 and i still remember it

    • @drusilla_darke
      @drusilla_darke 3 года назад +1

      I 💜 the opening scene of that movie. It was so unexpected and well done. 🎬

  • @anuvav9524
    @anuvav9524 3 года назад +48

    "Today I slept late at night. Now I am not sure whether I am in reality or still dreaming."

    • @alexdethrose1910
      @alexdethrose1910 3 года назад +2

      In other words "I've come to terms with the fact that everything I know is a dream".

    • @anuvav9524
      @anuvav9524 3 года назад

      @@alexdethrose1910 you definitely meant nightmare

    • @alexdethrose1910
      @alexdethrose1910 3 года назад

      It's the name of an old Creepy pasta. It's absolutely worth looking up if ya haven't heard it.

    • @anuvav9524
      @anuvav9524 3 года назад

      @@alexdethrose1910 which one the title I wrote or the one you wrote sir?

    • @alexdethrose1910
      @alexdethrose1910 3 года назад +1

      The one I did, fam. Definitely worth it.
      So are "World's Best School Psychologist" and "Obsessive Compulsive" if ya haven't heard those.

  • @cursedbeasts9991
    @cursedbeasts9991 3 года назад +19

    This is the work of an enemy stand!

  • @reclusive_traveler
    @reclusive_traveler 3 года назад +7

    You know this story reminds me of the Lovecraft eldritch God tsthuagua the sleeper the hungry man seems to have a lot of relations in hunting and consumption

  • @vincecastle9190
    @vincecastle9190 3 года назад +7

    I’m here late dammit it’s been a whole 9 minutes since this was posted 😧😵

  • @Buhleep
    @Buhleep 2 года назад +3

    so ghost ship? one of my favorite movies

  • @voltix9594
    @voltix9594 3 года назад +49

    Anyone else remember the days when creepypastas had shorter and simpler names? ‘Course that doesn’t make the stories worse

    • @Nerd-Power
      @Nerd-Power 3 года назад +1

      I just named mine Never Trust A Ghost. Short, sweet, to the point.

    • @bailysawyer804
      @bailysawyer804 3 года назад +6

      I miss the older stories that were simple and to the point and created an heir of mystery without going full inter dimensional monstrosity

    • @JhadeSagrav
      @JhadeSagrav Год назад +1

      Possible shorter title:
      Mr. Hungry
      The Ocean Takes Its Due
      Abandon Ship
      A Hunger At Sea
      i guess i see why they've gotten so descriptive. If i wanted to find this story again, i might not remember a clever, brief title. I'd probably search for "creepypasta cruise ship refurb" or something.

    • @fw--kx6sk
      @fw--kx6sk 16 дней назад

      These are probably from r/nosleep and had to be written in character to be allowed on the subreddit

  • @albertaberg6379
    @albertaberg6379 3 года назад +10

    You know shit is about to go down when this guy uploads

  • @bizzyizzy9526
    @bizzyizzy9526 3 года назад +4

    Ghost Ship the Creepypasta ☠️😱⚓

  • @xMrBlack
    @xMrBlack 2 года назад +9

    It's almost like the writer watched Ghost Ship and thought "wow, this would make a great story".
    Guys, movies are not ideas, they are the product of other people's ideas.

    • @ebonywilliams-dillard4550
      @ebonywilliams-dillard4550 2 года назад +4

      I literally was scrolling for this before I commented.. it sounds exactly like Ghost with a few different details.

    • @xMrBlack
      @xMrBlack 2 года назад +4

      @@ebonywilliams-dillard4550 it's that whole "yeah you can copy my homework but change it just enough so it's not exact."
      Sadly this isn't the first story that was a complete rip-off of a movie, show, book or game. There have been a couple that literally changed names and called it good.
      On the bright side, stuff like this makes me appreciate people who are actually creative a lot more.

    • @conservat1vepatr1ot
      @conservat1vepatr1ot 2 года назад +2

      I found this to be much more entertaining than that movie

    • @xMrBlack
      @xMrBlack 2 года назад +1

      @@conservat1vepatr1ot well we're all entitled to our own opinions, even if you're wrong.

  • @kevincaruthers5412
    @kevincaruthers5412 2 года назад +1

    I like the story, but the flickering screen was very annoying. Had to minimize the page and just listen.

  • @SleightOfHeart.
    @SleightOfHeart. 3 года назад +6

    TWO of my fav channels, too. It's my lucky day. 👻🖤💕💖🥰

    • @josephp.3109
      @josephp.3109 3 года назад +1

      Yes, I just saw you post I believe you were first on the other? 😋

  • @dkwei8812
    @dkwei8812 3 года назад +2

    I don't really understand the ending, so the hungry man can actually get off of the cruise ship? Any geniuses who get the ending care to explain it for my slow brain?

    • @JLDP666
      @JLDP666 2 года назад

      Think it's more like this thing will affect you in a way that a shadow, a figment of it will always linger, always stick to you, even after you've buried it in your psyche for decades.

  • @drownedharbour
    @drownedharbour Год назад +3

    New follower myself, and I’m truly enjoying listening to your videos while I work!! You’ve a right talent for narration and a flair for showmanship in the way you put it all together yourself- truly right enjoyable so it is, fantastic production quality, makes for lovely listening!

  • @rijidernacht1157
    @rijidernacht1157 3 года назад +3

    Well if you want a murder cult that sacrifices people to a creepy monster thing a cruise ship is probably the best choice.

  • @normalhuman9878
    @normalhuman9878 3 года назад +3

    Honestly I would’ve jumped ship even without the raft

  • @toxicstudiosyt4089
    @toxicstudiosyt4089 3 года назад +2

    Why does the title make me think of ghost ship? For the 3 people who watched that movie

  • @sirdanthechipwright821
    @sirdanthechipwright821 2 года назад +1

    Ummm, I've seen this movie. It's called "Ghost Ship". The similarities are a bit beyond suspicious

  • @richardrahl9371
    @richardrahl9371 3 года назад +6

    This is the greatest ghost ship of all time.

  • @StuffWithWords505
    @StuffWithWords505 3 года назад +4

    Super unique setting and story. Loved every second. Amazing as ever creeps:)

  • @gon3302
    @gon3302 2 года назад +1

    This one was ok for like 15 minutes then it got pretty bad.

  • @ShrimpShady
    @ShrimpShady 3 года назад +11

    "I was the only person wearing a mask at the grocery store in 2020"

    • @FlatEarthOracle
      @FlatEarthOracle 8 месяцев назад

      Part two of this story reads “I should’ve of never worn the face diaper because now I’m dead”

  • @spritetheknight9752
    @spritetheknight9752 3 года назад +4

    What an amazing story! I had chills during the part with the water slides.

  • @Kageoni187
    @Kageoni187 3 года назад +11

    This is very reminiscent of, "Ghost Ship"

  • @melzyofwonderland7363
    @melzyofwonderland7363 3 года назад

    💖♥️💘❤️❤️💓💙💙💓❤️💜💘💖🔥🔥💖💖♥️💝💝💞💕🔥♥️💘💜💓💗💙💘💕💖🔥🔥💕💚💝💚💖🔥🔥💓💗💙💓❤️💜🔥🔥💖💖💕💞💚💝💞♥️💘💜❤️❤️💜💜💝💚♥️🔥🔥💖💕💞💝💝💚🔥🔥💖💝💝💚💞♥️♥️💚💝💘💝💚💞💕💖♥️💘❤️❤️💓💙💙💓❤️💜💘💖🔥🔥💖💖♥️💝💝💞💕🔥♥️💘💜💓💗💙💘💕💖🔥🔥💕💚💝💚💖🔥🔥💓💗💙💓❤️💜🔥🔥💖💖💕💞💚💝💞♥️💘💜❤️❤️💜💜💝💚♥️🔥🔥💖💕💞💝💝💚🔥🔥💖💝💝💚💞♥️♥️💚 💝💘💝💚💞💕💖♥️💘❤️❤️💓💙💙💓❤️💜💘💖🔥🔥💖💖♥️💝💝💞💕🔥♥️💘💜💓💗💙💘💕💖🔥🔥💕💚💝💚💖🔥🔥💓💗💙💓❤️💜🔥🔥💖💖💕💞💚💝💞♥️💘💜❤️❤️💜💜💝💚♥️🔥🔥💖💕💞💝💝💚🔥🔥💖💝💝💚💞♥️♥️💚❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️

  • @ZeroGaming-el7yt
    @ZeroGaming-el7yt 2 года назад +3

    First pasta in a long time to give me the creeps. I loved it!

  • @JhadeSagrav
    @JhadeSagrav Год назад

    first 20 min of this story: "Hmm, interesting premise."
    At 20:27 mark: "Oh........... *SHIPS* 😳 "
    27:40: OHHHHHHHhhhhhhhhh nnnnoooooooooooo...........
    well that was unsettling... 😳

  • @kailynevyenn8848
    @kailynevyenn8848 2 года назад +1

    I know leaving her was the smartest decision, but the hopeless romantic in me is sad that he left her😅

  • @kendylharrison741
    @kendylharrison741 3 года назад +2

    When I first started listening this I immediately thought of ghost ship

    • @drusilla_darke
      @drusilla_darke 3 года назад

      I 💜 the opening scene of that movie. It was unexpected and well done. 🎬

  • @popevimtoripkeefhappysackXXX
    @popevimtoripkeefhappysackXXX 3 года назад +141

    Don’t know why people r taking piss out of the title - this is a blinding horror short.
    Nice one Mc.P and author

    • @bailysawyer804
      @bailysawyer804 3 года назад +2

      Because it's the equivalent of clickbait. You're welcome

    • @_attemptingtoadult_4962
      @_attemptingtoadult_4962 2 года назад

      @@bailysawyer804 how?

    • @fw--kx6sk
      @fw--kx6sk 16 дней назад

      ​@@bailysawyer804 They were hired to refurb an old cruise ship and what happened to the crew will always haunt him
      How is it clickbait if it 100% delivered what it said it would?

    • @bailysawyer804
      @bailysawyer804 16 дней назад

      @@_attemptingtoadult_4962 because it’s long and redundant? Because they could’ve just said “my crew was hired to refurb an abandoned ship”? Or even just “the secret of the SS_____” it’s a creepypasta, no shit what you saw haunted you that’s why you’re telling a story about it.

  • @TucsonHat
    @TucsonHat 3 года назад +2

    Ayyy you almost got Tucson' right!! It's pronounced *Too-san*

  • @BreadApologist
    @BreadApologist Год назад

    *listens* hmm this sounds weirdly familiar....*listens more* yep....kinda like....
    *to the rhythm of “look a lot like xmas”
    It’s beginning to look a lot like ghost ship

  • @damiengolledge9033
    @damiengolledge9033 4 месяца назад

    Id like to thank this man for his efforts, lets stop pissing on him , as a maritime forensic investigator in Australia, if you want to see what i see , watch, in search of souls , but be warned .!!!!! Lets remember these are just stories, NOT REAL LIFE,!!! Lets not be so ignorant. Jesus.

  • @robertsmith987
    @robertsmith987 2 года назад +1

    The author apparently saw the movie ghost ship prior to writing this

  • @jesselabelle1363
    @jesselabelle1363 3 года назад +2

    Any long story is always a bonus. You are quite good at your job yeah! 🔥👌

  • @Bloodletter87
    @Bloodletter87 Год назад

    Reminded me of Dead Space. Don't know why people keep comparing it to Ghost Ship, they've got nothing in common except taking place on a cruise ship.

  • @Lesbiwolf92
    @Lesbiwolf92 Год назад

    Getting real tired of all these horror story reading vids that use thumbnails that have fuck all to do with the story, I didn't come here for a rip off of ghost ship, I clicked because I thought it would involve sharks and deep sea diving.

  • @jeanettw2341
    @jeanettw2341 3 года назад +1

    I don't get it. Why do creepypasta titles always need the second part?
    It's suuch a nobrainer, the second half just makes the story sound dumb. Yeah, youu were hired to do shit on a cruise ship, great. Leave it at that.

    • @stevepalpatine2828
      @stevepalpatine2828 3 года назад +1

      "My crew was hired to refurbish a Ghost Ship. What happened will haunt me forever. It was seriously disturbing. My crew got picked off one by one by an Eldritch Horror. I still have nightmares about it. I've considered going to a therapist, but my insurance won't cover it. I'll probably always have PTSD. Safe to say, I'll never go to sea again. At least I don't think so. I'd have to be payed really well. And even then I might not go."

  • @lavenderwisteria6826
    @lavenderwisteria6826 3 года назад +1

    This reminds me of the Ship level in Resident Evil seven with all the molded walking around and Eveline being a creep

  • @LGVX9900ENV
    @LGVX9900ENV 3 года назад +1

    Ghost Ship… This is just a mixed up version.

  • @robustcrab5047
    @robustcrab5047 3 года назад +3

    The longer the video,the better

    • @EllySoccerstar
      @EllySoccerstar 3 года назад +1

      Yeah it’s very nicer than a short one
      😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝

  • @christyfielding7498
    @christyfielding7498 2 года назад

    Why are a lot of MCs in these types of stories written to be stupid and/or irritating? Am I the only one who thinks this?

  • @gJonii
    @gJonii 2 года назад

    Wasn't that good a story. The monster was way overexplained and ending dragged on for so long.

  • @PsylomeAlpha
    @PsylomeAlpha 2 года назад +1

    Peeps McCrasta

  • @yvonnemiddleton9985
    @yvonnemiddleton9985 3 года назад

    Oh fuck no how can you stop a ghost if you're surrounded by salt😨.