i absolutely adore the little line-up at the end, as it displays a variety of body types, races & heighs, plus the fact you kind of gave everyone their signature "colour" making every single member of the cast stand out in their own way.
I love how Naomi's and Amy's new designs are complementary colors on the color wheel. Their hair length, style and expressions are opposites dispite their similarities. Those being their story, motives and powers. I also LOVE the 'M' on Amy's hero design, it's sorta mirrored on Naomi's design. The shape of a lightening bolt looks like an 'M' sideways. This could make a good reference to their how similar they are, Though Naomi's 'M' is written sideways, therefore 'wrong'. Amy's design is clean and symmetrical while Naomi's isn't, it's more chaotic. I adore the new designs and your artstyle so much I have a lot to compliment you on
I swear to god, HOW?! only 8 subs, 54 views(as of right now) and only 10 likes?! nah, gurlly, this youtuber is so underrated, the art is great, the story line is decent(above average) and overall, the video is just- WOW. People rlly need to know you, im sure that you'll get popular and your videos will blow up in time.
I loved it! Such a charming bunch of characters you have here by the end! I really like the art style: it's simple but the characters are still distinct in their faces and body shapes. A pretty much all-white cast is something that I feel like a lot of young artists have stumbled into (me included) but coming from a POC artist this is just doubly sad... I think deciding to stick to one main colour for each character is fine, you've got enough contrast and variations in tone to make it work. The story is also neat, Amy is a compelling protagonist, Naomi deserves to be redeemed through the power of friendship (or not, depending on how far she goes) and we love a guy that's 'just some dude'. Can't believe there's no other videos on your channel atm, but you've got yourself another subscriber!
No idea if you know about Mob Psycho 100, but Amy's arc reminded me of Shigeo's, the main character A teenager with unbelievably powerful psychic abilites linked to his emotions, that he started suppressing because of a traumatic event. Slowly learning to open up to others and accepting his feelings. Everything else os different, but if you like that sort of character arc, you might like Mob Psycho! (Anime has 3 seasons of 12 episodes, manga has 16 volumes, both finished)
THIS IS SO PEAK😭😭😭 ur characters and the story reminds me of worm kind of and if ur not into that i think ud be a fan bud...😅 BUT THESE ARE YEAH SOSOSOOSS GOOD SIBS AND SCREAMS I LOVE THEM
THIS IS YOUR FIRST VIDEO?? Dude this is absolute gold, I clicked on your page for more content and was _shocked_ at the revelation. This is super high quality!! Definitely sticking around for more juicy vids >:D
I love the idea of gfs but having them being the characters that are supposed to be mirrors of eachother feels really odd ngl, its your story so do what you want lol, it would still be really cool and i love all the redesigns! But idk theres just something off about putting the two characters that are supposed to be eachother but in different environments and situations, it feels odd imo lol. Regardless, i loved the video and the character arcs and redesigns are amazing! Keep doing what youre doing because you're doing it great! And i loveee levi! Hes such a cutie!
Omg I’m sooo honored to have watched your first vid! I can’t wait until you become famous and I can properly say that I’ve been here since the start lol❤😂
Imagine if the hero who saved Jacob was Amy's dad and that's how her dad died but also why Jacob advocates for heros so much. A random guy gave his life for Jacob's and Jacob does everything to repay it but it never feels like enough.
AHHH JACOB LOOKS LIKE PETER PARKER I LOVE IT! XDDD *ahem* pardon my craziness, i love the re-designs and the re design of Amy is kinds relatable to me, I used to have an OC, Blaine who was vampire pale with red hair, now he's tan and blonde and named Orion?????. Re-designs go crazy and, I love your artstyle sooo much its very pretty and so are the re designs :DDD.
I love videos about artist rewriting their old stories and this was so good. I love your artstyle and I'm very interested in the story. I look forward for your new videos :D
I love you art style it's so dynamic and has amazing form while carrying so much gesture!!! (≧∇≦)b your story and writing skills also improved sm with your art, I'm definitely a fan! 💕
I've seen you around on instagram so Im happy that you now have a RUclips ^w^ I like the redesigns a lot and im wondering to see what happens if you end up continuing the story :3
🥺I love your art and stories I am a bit curious at 23:57 you mention Jacob having a crush on Naomi, but didn’t you say Jacob & Naomi have the same dad/mom? At 16:27 ? Just a bit curious about that because maybe I’m dumb and did not get what you were saying😭 my English isn’t that good
IM SORRY i thought i added the CC after i published the video (idk how it works lmao) but they have long since disappeared 😭😭 i’ll figure it out next time LOL
wait you’re telling me a main character’s mother dies in a way which doesn’t really impact the story but it turns out she wasn’t their biological mother and also it turns out the other main character (who initially could be mistaken for a love interest) is their sibling????? your og plot is just black mirror 2 and 3 without the demonic curses lol
I'm a Caucasian but I love drawing other colors than my own and I dislike racism bro we all bleed red but anyway I love the art style and it looks beautiful
1st version of Jacob killed a family of four and told the lone survivor that is was a skill issue, this is why we love him.
Exactly ✊🏾
Bro the old designs dont even look like teens they just look like babies 😭
Btw this vid is awesome and i cant waif to see where you end up
I think thats just the artstyle they had at the time
Chibi.
OH YOU BET I’M PUTTING MY FEET UP, GETTING OUT MY IPAD, AND DRAWING WHILE LISTENING TO THIS
YIPPEE
I did the same exact thing but I draw on my phone
Omg Naomi's little cat ears on her dress are killing me they're so funny
i really like naomis redesigned villain outfit, it feels very 60’s and stylish to me
yeah it does!! :D also, hello karkat homestuck
karkat pfp
i absolutely adore the little line-up at the end, as it displays a variety of body types, races & heighs, plus the fact you kind of gave everyone their signature "colour" making every single member of the cast stand out in their own way.
I love how Naomi's and Amy's new designs are complementary colors on the color wheel. Their hair length, style and expressions are opposites dispite their similarities. Those being their story, motives and powers.
I also LOVE the 'M' on Amy's hero design, it's sorta mirrored on Naomi's design. The shape of a lightening bolt looks like an 'M' sideways. This could make a good reference to their how similar they are, Though Naomi's 'M' is written sideways, therefore 'wrong'. Amy's design is clean and symmetrical while Naomi's isn't, it's more chaotic.
I adore the new designs and your artstyle so much I have a lot to compliment you on
26:43 “Just some guy” nah mans is a tree 😭
just like me fr
Me at the end:
Oh mah god...its a rainbow :DDD
*Happy noises*
*SNIFF* *SNIFF* DO I SMELL... AN UNDERRATED ARTIST?!?!?!?!?
OH GOD IS THIS YOUR FIRST VIDEO??? I had no idea, great job!
TYSM
why is this actually such a good story
Amy kinda reminds me of the main character from the owl house
The design is really cool though
Luz Noceda?
I was about to comment the same thing
I swear to god, HOW?! only 8 subs, 54 views(as of right now) and only 10 likes?! nah, gurlly, this youtuber is so underrated, the art is great, the story line is decent(above average) and overall, the video is just- WOW. People rlly need to know you, im sure that you'll get popular and your videos will blow up in time.
THAT IS SO SWEET TY
@@dxnkexe ^^ (np)
@@dxnkexeI’m sharing this to my friend
Man. The pure shock I felt when I saw that you didn’t have *at least* 10k subs.. You’re so underrated bro, keep up the good work!!
btw, 10:00 is when the redesigns start lol :3
My fyp has once again blessed me with a hidden gem of a RUclipsr 🙏🏽 love your art!!
I'd love to see more content about these guys. The universe seems really interesting
NEW RUclipsR FAVE
You have such a cute art style, and I really enjoyed listening to you talk about your stories and draw. I hope you make more : )
I loved it! Such a charming bunch of characters you have here by the end! I really like the art style: it's simple but the characters are still distinct in their faces and body shapes. A pretty much all-white cast is something that I feel like a lot of young artists have stumbled into (me included) but coming from a POC artist this is just doubly sad...
I think deciding to stick to one main colour for each character is fine, you've got enough contrast and variations in tone to make it work. The story is also neat, Amy is a compelling protagonist, Naomi deserves to be redeemed through the power of friendship (or not, depending on how far she goes) and we love a guy that's 'just some dude'.
Can't believe there's no other videos on your channel atm, but you've got yourself another subscriber!
Your new art style is so disgustingly cute (literally throwing up and crying)
jacob's old design kinda looks like boss baby
11:34 THATS EXACTLY WHAT I THOUGHT 😭 I WAS LIKE: ISNT THIS JUST INCREDIBLES??
No idea if you know about Mob Psycho 100, but Amy's arc reminded me of Shigeo's, the main character
A teenager with unbelievably powerful psychic abilites linked to his emotions, that he started suppressing because of a traumatic event. Slowly learning to open up to others and accepting his feelings. Everything else os different, but if you like that sort of character arc, you might like Mob Psycho! (Anime has 3 seasons of 12 episodes, manga has 16 volumes, both finished)
Ooo girlfriends who are foils for each other...I see the vision.
These characters and their outfits look amazing!! ✨
Really liked this video, can't wait to see more :D ❤️
Your story feels like a saturday morning cartoon I'd watch as a kid :D
THIS IS SO PEAK😭😭😭 ur characters and the story reminds me of worm kind of and if ur not into that i think ud be a fan bud...😅 BUT THESE ARE YEAH SOSOSOOSS GOOD SIBS AND SCREAMS I LOVE THEM
i’m so invested in this story already these designs are incredible
I need more of them fr fr
THIS IS YOUR FIRST VIDEO?? Dude this is absolute gold, I clicked on your page for more content and was _shocked_ at the revelation. This is super high quality!! Definitely sticking around for more juicy vids >:D
I love the idea of gfs but having them being the characters that are supposed to be mirrors of eachother feels really odd ngl, its your story so do what you want lol, it would still be really cool and i love all the redesigns! But idk theres just something off about putting the two characters that are supposed to be eachother but in different environments and situations, it feels odd imo lol. Regardless, i loved the video and the character arcs and redesigns are amazing! Keep doing what youre doing because you're doing it great!
And i loveee levi! Hes such a cutie!
Omg I’m sooo honored to have watched your first vid! I can’t wait until you become famous and I can properly say that I’ve been here since the start lol❤😂
I can’t wait for you to grow!! You’re so talented and skilled 🫶🫶
I’m sooo happy I was 1 of the first 1K subs and watched your first vid!
Your character designs are so cool and i love your artwork :OO
YOUR STYLE IS SO CUTE 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
FRR
Imagine if the hero who saved Jacob was Amy's dad and that's how her dad died but also why Jacob advocates for heros so much. A random guy gave his life for Jacob's and Jacob does everything to repay it but it never feels like enough.
AHHH JACOB LOOKS LIKE PETER PARKER I LOVE IT! XDDD *ahem* pardon my craziness, i love the re-designs and the re design of Amy is kinds relatable to me, I used to have an OC, Blaine who was vampire pale with red hair, now he's tan and blonde and named Orion?????. Re-designs go crazy and, I love your artstyle sooo much its very pretty and so are the re designs :DDD.
AYO WHAT THE HECK??? THIS IS SO COOL❤❤❤❤
I love videos about artist rewriting their old stories and this was so good. I love your artstyle and I'm very interested in the story. I look forward for your new videos :D
Honestly love how my CV detail you put into your story and characters
It is just ✨👌
I can’t wait to see more of your videos 👍✨
thank you for the support 😭🙏
@@dxnkexe Np 👍
You honestly super talented and can’t wait to see more of your art
I absolutely love the redesigns! Especially Amy, girl had a GLOW UP!
YO I really like this! Hope to see more >:)
"sorry white people" nah, we have enough rep lmao, Amy looks better like that anyway
your art style is so cute oh my gosh i love this i cannot wait to see what else you make going forward 🩷🩷🫶
I love you art style it's so dynamic and has amazing form while carrying so much gesture!!! (≧∇≦)b your story and writing skills also improved sm with your art, I'm definitely a fan! 💕
WAIT THIS DESERVES SM MORE ATTENTION?!!
YOU ARE AMAZING WHAT ❤
this is so cool your art is very amazing :OO your being put on my list of artist i admire >:D
your'e so underrated. I love your art style too btw
OOO UNDERRATED
I love your designs !! They're so cute WAHHHH !!
tysm for being so invested lolll i really appreciate the support 😭🙏
24:36
"YOU KILLED MY FAMILY I HATE YOU!!!!! "
"I think you need a~ take a little rest" 🤓
I've seen you around on instagram so Im happy that you now have a RUclips ^w^ I like the redesigns a lot and im wondering to see what happens if you end up continuing the story :3
proudly ur 846th subscriber💪
Sooo much art talent❤
NO WAYY we got crys youtube channel before gta 6 (jk bro PLEASE make more videos this is so cool)
I WILL TRY 🫡
You are so underrated! Immediate sub
U write and draw so well like u need more subscribers
jacob = spike ???? 😼😼
eats cutely
off topic your sona design is so cool and also we have kinda the same name !! new subscriber :)
I LOVE SUE SO MUCH and that she’s a hijabi!!!💙💙💙💙
Amy reminds me of the epilogue Luz (The Owl House).
Im the 666 sub, lol
THE NEW DESINGS ARE SO COOL I WANT TO EAT YOUR ART
0:35 help why does the magic mystical girl look like me when I was younger 😭😭
You did Jacob dirty bro...
Justice for Jacob
Original Jacob being a shapeshifter but choosing to look like any white man is hilarious to me
🥺I love your art and stories I am a bit curious at 23:57 you mention Jacob having a crush on Naomi, but didn’t you say Jacob & Naomi have the same dad/mom? At 16:27 ? Just a bit curious about that because maybe I’m dumb and did not get what you were saying😭 my English isn’t that good
amy and jacob have the same parents! amy and naomi’s names just sound very similar so i understand the confusion loll
so are naomi and amy doomed yuri or no,,,
Time to comment and try to get you more views
1:15 TOHRU ADACHI PERSONA 4!!!!
i thought you were eridan ampora from homestuck
amy x naomi.................ummmm who who said thattt..who did thatttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt.
SO REAL BROTHERRR
@@cobalt214 LOVE YOU BROTHERRR🙏🙏
This kinda reminds me a lot of the Netflix series 'I am not okay with this'!!ヽ(≧∀≦)ﾉ
can't believe amy and naomi are lesbian enemies to lovers /silly
Unless?…
dont be shy drfop the og story t-t
Naomi and Amy should kiss trust
( NOOO DONT KILL HER OFF )
( I KNEW IT AMY CAN FIX HER TRUST )
( I KNEW IT THEY’RE GIRLFRIENDS )
merp, guys, me has writer’s block so…
I 💖 Levi
why no subtitles T-T
IM SORRY i thought i added the CC after i published the video (idk how it works lmao) but they have long since disappeared 😭😭 i’ll figure it out next time LOL
#HUNGRY
FEED ME MORE
:0 comment for the algorithm
wait you’re telling me a main character’s mother dies in a way which doesn’t really impact the story but it turns out she wasn’t their biological mother and also it turns out the other main character (who initially could be mistaken for a love interest) is their sibling????? your og plot is just black mirror 2 and 3 without the demonic curses lol
I'm a Caucasian but I love drawing other colors than my own and I dislike racism bro we all bleed red but anyway I love the art style and it looks beautiful
tasty
Mmmmmmmm the color scheme of your outfit is... intersting... I know what you are 👀 (and I'm the same 》:))
purple guy?
MUSLIM SU?? WUDHU POWER?
HELLPP 😭😭 WUDHU POWERS
No autosubs... :(