I forgot to mention that the white part of ladybug's black turtlneck thing and hat is a reference to the white stuff irl ladybugs have, also the dress on her is a double reference to what female French aristocrats wore in the 18th century, sack-back gowns or Robe à la Française, and to look like ladybug backs. tbh I wish I added heels to ladybug's design ;-; And yh, Ladybug has wings in my universe...AS SHE SHOULD! But she sucked at flying in the beginning, but the wings did help with her balance. It took her a lot of training to finally master flying. Also don't forget to check out Rask Ai: app.rask.ai/?via=mipsart
Well it's normal since he is a model and they have models and celebrities promoting items like this in real life like I saw one outside the mall quite a few times
@@shavellyn yeah it's a lot pressure on the shoulders but this is normal in real life and is also probably how Marinette found all those pictures of him to put all over her room
@@Owell_Owl Right, and now think about who might be getting those pictures. Pictures of a 13 year old boy. Things with this boy’s face on it. Anyone. That’s disgusting. This is not normal in real life and shouldn‘t be normalized
@@Owell_Owl I'm sorry if this sounds rude but, I've never seen her weird schemes not work. Here's a few examples: she tries to trespass into adrien's property to spy on him and Lila. There was a firefighter near her. What does the firefighter do? Help her trespass into adrien's property. Or when she uses ladybug to get into adrien's room, proceed to smell his pillow and doesn't get any consequences for it. Or when she dresses up as a guy to get into adrien's "guy-only" party and gets let in. When did her schemes not work? (This is a genuine question btw, I feel the need to clarify that I'm not trying to provoke you)
@RulerOfArniskad Technically she didn't trespassed and she literally fell off just as she got to the top as for cat blanc it was more a break in then a scheme and whats her conseqence why she has to go save the day Party Crasher she admits she was wrong too She does face consqences it's just not the ones that satisfy you Gigantitan,Simple man anyone?
15:50 my first mental image was him just putting the akuma into his staff and a buncha conffeti-like particles blasting out the other end ngl. morbid party poppers, anyone?
@@mipsthemouse oh, heck yeah. i have been brainrotting on tadc for a while lol, managed to end up with a dnd character named caine bc i'd watched the pilot earlier that day and just panicked
Wow you took traits of Marinette that fans despise the most and wrote those traits in a way where it makes Marinette a flawed yet complex, compelling and interesting character where she learns and grows over time to a mature and improved version of herself. I love that. That’s so amazing. As for the whole how Marinette became a stalker thing. I have a suggestion. In the canon series, Marinette showed no ill will towards Kim even though he’s the one who traumatized her. I think it would make sense and be realistic for Marinette to initially be resentful, hostile and weary towards Kim, having negative opinions on him. Maybe have Marinette be passive aggressive towards Kim. Have her show her distain towards him but in a subtle way to where it isn’t notable to most of the other characters
@@kmmk5022 I was thinking abt doing that, making it into a webtoon, but I can't make any promises, bc it's a lot of work and I'm rlly busy irl, so maybe in the future
@@kiyomi_kamimoto the thing is their ages are treated as something not important which is probably why i forgot lol. I remember Adrien and Marinette having birthdays though. And I'm not American, lmao, but I guess most of the audience of the show is
Honestly I love this idea of the character. She never felt like a outsider. I mean characters only were saying that but why didn't actually SEE this. It would make so much sense for her to be this sweetheart. And Gabriel would be a great mirror for Marinette to understand that her behavior was evil. That would be an amazing conflict for the show!!!
It was so fun hearing this idea for Marinette and little details like Chloe and Adrien being jealous of Mari and Master Fu not being as responsible. Love the use of pink for Mari and her gorgeous outfit with the pretty bows!
I really love your concepts, they're soo good! I would also find it super interesting to turn your marinette idea into a darker version just for fun. Also I really like the dismissive, toxic positivity tikki, because I kinda always saw her like that, just that she also tended to push Marinette too hard instead of enabling her.
10:14 i really live the design but i think the hero costume is a little cluster, the huge difference between hues make it seem messy and the armour looks like it isn't a part of the outfit, it looks like she wore clothes over her hero costume, but i think it's kinda also...fit? Idk i feel like she'd wear something like this grab attention and it wouldn't be something bad bc she's a hero, however the rest is so good i just personally think closer hues would make it better :D
0:30 while Marinette's Trauma was not done in the best way She is not a Mary sue like yeah she's good a quite a bit of things but she literally makes mistakes all time and does bad things too before you say she does not face consqeneces she is being punished just not in the way you want and the stalking is to show kids what not to do the weird schemes never ever work It's fine if still do not like Marinette just move on she's not even real though i will say The designs and story you created is defintely is interesting
Honestly I care less about Marinette, she never learns from her actions, and honestly doesn't deserve adrien. I already expect she will ask for the rings BACK under the excuse of protecting him from being controlled, only to control him instead.
@@mipsthemouse Oh, right. Why did you feel the need to change the characters this much? And did you like canon Marinette before the writing went down the toilet?
Hold on im back on my alt account i dont wanna be a hater or a prick or whatever im sorry What i meant is that the colors dont go well together in your main oc and stuff With like Color Theory n Stuff Im still watching and i rlly love the Designs in the Video :3
@@HORRORSPINPAPYRUS Yh I'm glad you like the designs, dw I'm not offended thx for ur input,, colour theory is important, but I dont think u need to stick to it all the time, I like how my oc looks like with all the colours and stuff, bc that's just my taste, art is subjective, but I appreciate ur criticism and maybe I''ll keep it in mind in the future
I forgot to mention that the white part of ladybug's black turtlneck thing and hat is a reference to the white stuff irl ladybugs have, also the dress on her is a double reference to what female French aristocrats wore in the 18th century, sack-back gowns or Robe à la Française, and to look like ladybug backs. tbh I wish I added heels to ladybug's design ;-;
And yh, Ladybug has wings in my universe...AS SHE SHOULD! But she sucked at flying in the beginning, but the wings did help with her balance. It took her a lot of training to finally master flying.
Also don't forget to check out Rask Ai: app.rask.ai/?via=mipsart
Bro I just realized why Adrien being put on ads and having perfume of him at 13 like thats creepy 💀
Well it's normal since he is a model and they have models and celebrities promoting items like this in real life like I saw one outside the mall quite a few times
@@Owell_Owl He‘s 13, isn‘t that a lot of pressure to put on such a young kid? A kid‘s face is being advertised to the whole country
@@shavellyn yeah it's a lot pressure on the shoulders but this is normal in real life and is also probably how Marinette found all those pictures of him to put all over her room
@@Owell_Owl Right, and now think about who might be getting those pictures. Pictures of a 13 year old boy. Things with this boy’s face on it. Anyone. That’s disgusting. This is not normal in real life and shouldn‘t be normalized
I don't usually like Marinette but how you did her she's better then the original i like her character in your au
Probably because in the show they portray her stalking as "romantic" and "cutesy"
Well the whloe point of it is to show kids what not to do as you have seen her weird schemes never ever work
@@Owell_Owl I'm sorry if this sounds rude but, I've never seen her weird schemes not work. Here's a few examples: she tries to trespass into adrien's property to spy on him and Lila. There was a firefighter near her. What does the firefighter do? Help her trespass into adrien's property. Or when she uses ladybug to get into adrien's room, proceed to smell his pillow and doesn't get any consequences for it. Or when she dresses up as a guy to get into adrien's "guy-only" party and gets let in.
When did her schemes not work? (This is a genuine question btw, I feel the need to clarify that I'm not trying to provoke you)
@RulerOfArniskad Technically she didn't trespassed and she literally fell off just as she got to the top as for cat blanc it was more a break in then a scheme and whats her conseqence why she has to go save the day
Party Crasher she admits she was wrong too
She does face consqences it's just not the ones that satisfy you
Gigantitan,Simple man anyone?
15:50 my first mental image was him just putting the akuma into his staff and a buncha conffeti-like particles blasting out the other end ngl. morbid party poppers, anyone?
Tbh that's giving amazing digital circus
@@mipsthemouse oh, heck yeah. i have been brainrotting on tadc for a while lol, managed to end up with a dnd character named caine bc i'd watched the pilot earlier that day and just panicked
I was thinking of hitting it, like hitting a fly with a flyswatter, but this is way funnier XD
thats a really funny thing xD
Wow you took traits of Marinette that fans despise the most and wrote those traits in a way where it makes Marinette a flawed yet complex, compelling and interesting character where she learns and grows over time to a mature and improved version of herself. I love that. That’s so amazing.
As for the whole how Marinette became a stalker thing. I have a suggestion. In the canon series, Marinette showed no ill will towards Kim even though he’s the one who traumatized her. I think it would make sense and be realistic for Marinette to initially be resentful, hostile and weary towards Kim, having negative opinions on him. Maybe have Marinette be passive aggressive towards Kim. Have her show her distain towards him but in a subtle way to where it isn’t notable to most of the other characters
I like that idea 👍
@@mipsthemousethanks. It’s just a little something I came up with since there was a plot hole in the series
@@mipsthemousedo you think you could do a rewrite of the series with this version of Marinette
@@kmmk5022 I was thinking abt doing that, making it into a webtoon, but I can't make any promises, bc it's a lot of work and I'm rlly busy irl, so maybe in the future
@@mipsthemouseif you do decide to do it, I’ll definitely check it out. Send us all a link to it
Im surprised i never knew all teen characters were around 13 i would have thought they were 17 or even 18 🙃
I think they're meant to be all be 15 at the end of season 5 but like...this show has been going on for so long that it's hard to believe
This show while it has going for 8 years in the miraculous universe only a single year has passed within these seasons
@@baoziday5178Mari's class is like 14-15 at the end of season 5, yeah. Her and Adrien are 14.
And I'm always surprised how most americans don't know their age. They said it on screen multiple times.
@@kiyomi_kamimoto the thing is their ages are treated as something not important which is probably why i forgot lol. I remember Adrien and Marinette having birthdays though. And I'm not American, lmao, but I guess most of the audience of the show is
Honestly I love this idea of the character. She never felt like a outsider. I mean characters only were saying that but why didn't actually SEE this. It would make so much sense for her to be this sweetheart.
And Gabriel would be a great mirror for Marinette to understand that her behavior was evil. That would be an amazing conflict for the show!!!
It was so fun hearing this idea for Marinette and little details like Chloe and Adrien being jealous of Mari and Master Fu not being as responsible. Love the use of pink for Mari and her gorgeous outfit with the pretty bows!
Marinette actually horrifies me- 😭
they are amazing! this is fr so good imo its better then the cannon! u did such a good job!
I love the idea that chat noir can also catch akumas but just chooses not too because of his powers of destruction.
I really like the idea that Ladybug can purify akumas, while Chat can only destroy them!
Honestly, love this.
I really love your concepts, they're soo good!
I would also find it super interesting to turn your marinette idea into a darker version just for fun.
Also I really like the dismissive, toxic positivity tikki, because I kinda always saw her like that, just that she also tended to push Marinette too hard instead of enabling her.
I would read a fanfic about this
PLS MAKE A PART TWO I LOVE UR MARI DESIGN UR ART IS AMAZING I HOPE YOU GET MORE ATTENTION FOR UR ART AND UR COMMENTARY (I subscribed:D)
Tysm!
Well I'm gonna say italian word for this video
IL VENTO D'ORO
IS THAT A JOJO'S REFERENCE!!!!!!!!!!!
Someone hire this woman in the writing team 🗣💯
pretty radical!!!
Ngl I need to know more about your sona bc it has a LOT going on I really want to know more about her she’s a cutie
10:14 i really live the design but i think the hero costume is a little cluster, the huge difference between hues make it seem messy and the armour looks like it isn't a part of the outfit, it looks like she wore clothes over her hero costume, but i think it's kinda also...fit? Idk i feel like she'd wear something like this grab attention and it wouldn't be something bad bc she's a hero, however the rest is so good i just personally think closer hues would make it better :D
Thanks for the feedback! I think I agree with that, so maybe I'll edit it in the future since I'm considering making a fan comic
@@mipsthemouse can't wait to see it !
OH MY GOD YOUR SO UNDERRATED THIS IS AMAZING AHHHHH
Criollo as alay hero name!!
9:55 How about Equiness? Or Hooflet?
absolutely devoured as usual
OMG OMG FINALLY BRO!!!
HE'S GOT ME SPINNING ROUND
Cool Ideas!!
I love this!
Alya could be called "Horseplay"(?) idk
Part twoooo
0:30 while Marinette's Trauma was not done in the best way She is not a Mary sue like yeah she's good a quite a bit of things but she literally makes mistakes all time and does bad things too before you say she does not face consqeneces she is being punished just not in the way you want and the stalking is to show kids what not to do the weird schemes never ever work It's fine if still do not like Marinette just move on she's not even real though i will say The designs and story you created is defintely is interesting
Honestly I care less about Marinette, she never learns from her actions, and honestly doesn't deserve adrien.
I already expect she will ask for the rings BACK under the excuse of protecting him from being controlled, only to control him instead.
I am 20 years old but I feel like I am younger
Tell me, why did you make Adrien's civilian outfit so much darker?
I explained in the video
@@mipsthemouse Oh, right. Why did you feel the need to change the characters this much? And did you like canon Marinette before the writing went down the toilet?
1:29 You're right, I'm a 17 year old boy who looks like a 13 or 14 year old n I don't like it so much
Im 8 hours early sweet
Your Oc looks like a
Gacha Character!!! :D
..................with really bad Colors all over the Place (Im so so sorry omg)
Dw, ur pretty accurate cuz I was a gachatuber and I designed this oc like 2 years ago and I dont think I'm changing it
Hold on im back on my alt account i dont wanna be a hater or a prick or whatever im sorry
What i meant is that the colors dont go well together in your main oc and stuff
With like
Color Theory n Stuff
Im still watching and i rlly love the Designs in the Video :3
@@HORRORSPINPAPYRUS Yh I'm glad you like the designs, dw I'm not offended thx for ur input,, colour theory is important, but I dont think u need to stick to it all the time, I like how my oc looks like with all the colours and stuff, bc that's just my taste, art is subjective, but I appreciate ur criticism and maybe I''ll keep it in mind in the future