World of Warships - Pensacola is NOT a Cleveland

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  • Опубликовано: 13 окт 2024
  • Game - 26:00
    I'm going to tackle the long-term poor reputation of the Pensacola.

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  • @Hakaze
    @Hakaze 8 лет назад +1

    You are repeating yourself a lot, and using fairly long time to get to your points. I'd sugest you work out a script in beforehand, to improve your videoes

    • @AdmiralHattori
      @AdmiralHattori  8 лет назад

      Yea, my speech skill is not that great which is one of the reasons I do RUclips which helps me improve in talking to the microphone. I'm normally a free-style commentary type of person which is what I'm gearing for (I like the idea of having the ability to talk on the go) but I do sometimes write scripts, just not as often as I wanted to. At the same time, I'm never had been a brilliant writer which is probably other reasons why I avoid scripts since I recognize the sentence structure is bad and thus leads to the reason for my lack of competence in writing in school.Hence, I ended up in a mathematical related field (I know more math laws than grammar and writing style rules) rather than a language related field (Business, English, and other careers that requires communication). But, thanks for the advice!

    • @Hakaze
      @Hakaze 8 лет назад

      Maby just try for some written cues, so you know what you allready have touched on, and what to mention next? Anyway gl