Author of the story here!! Thank you so much to creeps for his outstanding narration and thank you to those who gave the time to check it out. Hope you all enjoyed it🙏
I’m really glad you let them escape. Hopeless no escape endings are overdone. I like being rewarded for going through the night,are alongside the characters.
@@Shadowstar1311 In certain cases situations like this one it is plausible that an escape can happen, sometimes though there are inescapable situations.
A train from New York to Chicago generally takes 20-22 hours. When I consulted one way I knew my client was cheap af if they put me on a train instead of an airplane.
Idk. I work at an airport hotel and I must say the real horror seems to be at the airports these days. Not only the constant cancellations but the way people are treated by the airlines. I think I'd actually rather take a train, or god forbid a Greyhound. And I've taken my share of Greyhounds, I used to jokingly call them "Hell on wheels." But air travel is literally a crap shoot these days.
Or, they could be afraid of flying. Like absolutely afraid of flying. Which for some is a horror in itself. So, plan things out for a little bit of a longer journey.
@@incognito7261 I purposely left him getting on the train for that exact theory to rise. Love when even after my stories there are some questions and theories.
This was wonderful! Well written, well narrated! I even had a strange intrusive thought at 22:56 for some reason gamer brain kicked in and I was expecting the train to be suplexed FF6 style
@@chrisclarence6247 Certainly. A good story. Trains make for an interesting horror setting. And I'm a huge fan of the weird and surreal, so that's always a plus in my book. :)
I'm probably reading a little too much into this, but it seems like there might be an Atheist way of reading this story. The endless train represents death. It's quite literally a journey to nowhere. That drives some people to religion (the preacher and his flock), some people mad, and some people occupy themselves in an attempt to try an endure the looming specter of an eternity to nowhere (the protagonist, Lisa and Harold). There really appears to be no rhyme or reason as to why the protagonist bought his ticket, and in this sense all of us have bought our ticket by virtue of being alive. The desire to escape death, especially via religion, leads to misery and death. The preacher causes misery to others (by sacrificing people to escape the journey to nowhere) and to eventually to himself (by trying desperately to escape. The protagonist, Lisa and Harold ultimately pass the test by not trying to escape the train (i.e., death). They pass through a period of darkness (despair of death), but ultimately escape the train and are able re-enter the real world and enjoy life (coming to terms with mortality). I also wonder if the professions (pharmaceutical guy, journalist) and destination (New York) are significant in some way as they're all coded secular progressive. They escape the train whereas anyone explicitly religious does not. ... or maybe the author just like Stephen King's "The Mist" and wanted to do it on a train. Oh well. Food for thought at least.
Wow! An absolutely beautiful take on this story. I like leaving enough open-endedness to my stories for people to give their idea/take on the story itself.
I really dislike this explanation. Because A) It is clear that the preacher and anyone who got off met horrible fates. Which isn't the case with belief in things. B) If the train is the fear of death then it shouldn't matter when one escapes it. C) Those who stayed on did in the end all escape the train so the train isn't death. Because that isn't that easily escaped. D) There wasn't really any sort of test. Despite the phrasing. "Don't get off where you're not supposed/don't want to."? Is that it?
4 minutes in and my guess is that he's dead. This is some sort of purgatory train that he's stuck on, which is why it goes nowhere. Guess I'll finish it to find out of I'm right.
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Thank you CreepsMcPasta for another awesome pasta. Excellent story and narration as always. Definitely a good one, though it kinda gave me a sense of deja vu. 🖤🖤🖤🖤
Jan Thirsten then Howard right after it reminded me of a Gilligan's isle character. There's a guy on there with those names combined kinda. it's Thirsten Howel.
Here is my theory, if the train never stops then how did ge get on? Well he could have been in a crash or something traumatic causing him to ve in a coma and the train could be a fragment of his imagination as his mind trys to wake up, everyone he meets is just a persona hes seen before walking through town or something because he has to of seen them to see faces cause the human mind can't make up its own face, so that means all the people hes seing is people he is either close with or met in a store even if its seeing them from afar, which would explain how he got on the train and everyone he is seeing. Yes i know i repeated some details, listening to storys makes ne tired and when im tired i dint think straight so deal with it.
i thought the story itself was good but the ending didn’t reconcile the beginning for me. why of all people on it, did he get to arrive at his destination?; if it makes no stops why could he get on (this would make sense eventually IF he came to the conclusion that he didn’t remember wilingly getting on the train or something like that though) in the first place? and if he got to be the only one who finally got to the stop (i know others got off, what i mean is that it was he who didn’t have to wait years or centuries, and no one else got on after him), then what is it about his journey that made the destination possible for everyone? i think the ending would’ve been cool if it ended with the little girl saying “hi is this the train to chicago?” , yet i did still like them being able to escape. and i liked the whole ride there lol
Ehhh...seems kind of weird that shortly after the new guy shows up, everything concludes. For the VERY first time in probably decades or more, the train stops?
not really. they just chose his POV, they couldve chose any POV and it still wouldve concluded the same way it did. with a new guy boarding and then leaving sooner than others. they chose his POV as someone who was freshly confused and new to environment.
Not sure why but this video is not appearing in search results. Probably explains the lower than usual views. Even if you type "creepypasta" and sort by recently uploaded its not there.
As a life long New Yorker who remembers the Real NYC before it died by all these newer different peole migrating here first from other states late 90s Early 00's to these Illegals now it reminds me of NYC roday just a routine nightmare.
Not all of us can watch right when it comes out. You know people have jobs and family to deal with right!?! I wanted to listen right away. But couldn't do that until now🧄
Author of the story here!!
Thank you so much to creeps for his outstanding narration and thank you to those who gave the time to check it out.
Hope you all enjoyed it🙏
I’m really glad you let them escape. Hopeless no escape endings are overdone. I like being rewarded for going through the night,are alongside the characters.
@@Shadowstar1311 In certain cases situations like this one it is plausible that an escape can happen, sometimes though there are inescapable situations.
Excellent story ❤ thanks so much
Here’s a plot twist for you. Ninjas
@@justforfun1242 Damn! That definitely would have been a wild twist😂
A train from New York to Chicago generally takes 20-22 hours. When I consulted one way I knew my client was cheap af if they put me on a train instead of an airplane.
Idk. I work at an airport hotel and I must say the real horror seems to be at the airports these days. Not only the constant cancellations but the way people are treated by the airlines.
I think I'd actually rather take a train, or god forbid a Greyhound. And I've taken my share of Greyhounds, I used to jokingly call them "Hell on wheels." But air travel is literally a crap shoot these days.
Or, they could be afraid of flying. Like absolutely afraid of flying. Which for some is a horror in itself. So, plan things out for a little bit of a longer journey.
This could be such a good horror film. I love it
Am I stupid for thinking too much into this? If the train makes no stops, how did the narrator get on the train. I know I'm stupid, but am I THAT bad?
@@incognito7261 I purposely left him getting on the train for that exact theory to rise. Love when even after my stories there are some questions and theories.
@chrisclarence6247 Was your theory that this commenter might be stupid? He mentioned no theories. Just a perceived plot hole or lack of information.
@@venga3LMFAO
Story’s are better when your not spoonfed every detail
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Cope he got u busted
Stop retconning
This overlay and reading is incredible.
Totally agree!
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I have soooo much to catch up on! I've been so sick for so long; thank you Sir for a lot to keep my mind busy
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This was a really engaging story. Well written and narrated
Early! Thanks for this. Lots of tears this week I needed this.
Lots of nerves as well today, time to relax 😅
Sorry to hear that. Hope things are better. A good story does help distract the mind. So grateful for this channel.
This was wonderful!
Well written, well narrated!
I even had a strange intrusive thought at 22:56 for some reason gamer brain kicked in and I was expecting the train to be suplexed FF6 style
Debating on saving this for my next commute on Monday or just watching it now.
No time like the present lol
@@Sicario215-kp7lyyep!
Perfect timing.
I just cracked a beer and packed a bowl.
Creeps on the beach is a new one for me.
A bowl of Cheerios?
junkie
@@aaron-gz cobra lips lol
It’s a wonderful sativa
@@jebuschrist9161Please tell me more.
The eternal engine provides! 1,001 cars long... 🚂
Wilford 🙏🙏🙏
A train heading to nowhere...
So, Infinity Train, then?
I just thought the same... I miss the show. Too bad it was cancelled.
Watching infinity train and train to busan actually made me want to write a train like horror story!!
I hope you both enjoyed this one!
@@chrisclarence6247 Certainly. A good story. Trains make for an interesting horror setting. And I'm a huge fan of the weird and surreal, so that's always a plus in my book. :)
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YAY new video, love listening to you at work
Really enjoyed this one. Thanks!
Awesome story, reminded me of a couple old films.
man i aint NEVER taking warp corp trains again
I was sniffing out a reference to that game!
excellent, it’s story time.
Not only do we have a new McPasta upload, but its a friggin train one!
The dark gods are smiling upon us my friends 🙏
Hail The Ladies and Lords Of Fright Night!
"You have to accept where you are or you'll go mad"
Art reminds me of 'Midnight Meat Train' ... Clive Barker
Thanks for the upload!
I'm probably reading a little too much into this, but it seems like there might be an Atheist way of reading this story.
The endless train represents death. It's quite literally a journey to nowhere. That drives some people to religion (the preacher and his flock), some people mad, and some people occupy themselves in an attempt to try an endure the looming specter of an eternity to nowhere (the protagonist, Lisa and Harold). There really appears to be no rhyme or reason as to why the protagonist bought his ticket, and in this sense all of us have bought our ticket by virtue of being alive.
The desire to escape death, especially via religion, leads to misery and death. The preacher causes misery to others (by sacrificing people to escape the journey to nowhere) and to eventually to himself (by trying desperately to escape. The protagonist, Lisa and Harold ultimately pass the test by not trying to escape the train (i.e., death). They pass through a period of darkness (despair of death), but ultimately escape the train and are able re-enter the real world and enjoy life (coming to terms with mortality).
I also wonder if the professions (pharmaceutical guy, journalist) and destination (New York) are significant in some way as they're all coded secular progressive. They escape the train whereas anyone explicitly religious does not.
... or maybe the author just like Stephen King's "The Mist" and wanted to do it on a train. Oh well. Food for thought at least.
Wow! An absolutely beautiful take on this story. I like leaving enough open-endedness to my stories for people to give their idea/take on the story itself.
Welcome to the religion of feeding people to the train demon. We're all about love, peace, and, uhm, forced human sacrifices.
This summary is terrible and so are you.
If it's "The Mist" on a train, the ending is way too positive.
I really dislike this explanation. Because
A) It is clear that the preacher and anyone who got off met horrible fates.
Which isn't the case with belief in things.
B) If the train is the fear of death then it shouldn't matter when one escapes it.
C) Those who stayed on did in the end all escape the train so the train isn't death. Because that isn't that easily escaped.
D) There wasn't really any sort of test. Despite the phrasing. "Don't get off where you're not supposed/don't want to."? Is that it?
Your the best of all the narrators
Listening to this one while im on the train haha
the amazing digital circus on a train
4 minutes in and my guess is that he's dead. This is some sort of purgatory train that he's stuck on, which is why it goes nowhere. Guess I'll finish it to find out of I'm right.
Never stop uploading 🙏🙏🙏
Creeps I’ve been watching your since I was 13, I’m 21 now. I love your videos so much, thank you for all the effort you’ve put in for so many years❤️❤️
bro is never getting on any train ever again 💀
Choo-Choo
I just started the story but my first thought is they're stuck in limbo
Nothing's more terrifying then believing you're still alive.
Thank you CreepsMcPasta for another awesome pasta. Excellent story and narration as always. Definitely a good one, though it kinda gave me a sense of deja vu. 🖤🖤🖤🖤
Train story. I listen.
I'm on a train atm
Anyone else remember a sory about a guy who becomes a delivery guy for a fae like company?
New york huh they probably got stabbed after gettin off the train😢
Right? 😂
And we know exactly how the stabber would look.
That or pushed into the train and now there all ghosts
@@venga3lmao
Hey ive been listening to your podcast since i was 13 so 4 years now and your voice and podcast is amazing thank you so much for making these
This was a fun one!
1001 cars? He’s on snow piercer?
Jan Thirsten then Howard right after it reminded me of a Gilligan's isle character. There's a guy on there with those names combined kinda. it's Thirsten Howel.
Dang I would be trying to pry a door open to jump off. I would need to know if I could get off even if it killed me
For real! It’s going to end badly either way, but at least you tried escaping!
@@nevermorehollows yeah like I would have to TRY at least death or not
From what it seems, you had easy access to getting off the train. It's just that something really wouldn't like you doing that...
Average Amtrak experience
Reminds me of a Rick and Morty episode
Great story!
Thank you❤️
Oh this is nice now this story reminds me of an oldie song....don't stop believing 😆
TY
I would give anything for a ticket on this train….
Lol
@xReaghan No. He needs a train ticket.
@xReaghan I am sure there will be one on the train!🤭
when you accidentally board thomas the dank engine 😑
Such a good one! ❤
Currently listening to this while living in downtown Cleveland haha
This story has been on many,many times now. The only thing different is the title keeps changing..
5 minutes in, “I stood up suddenly, almost knocking over my chair” huh? On a train?
Thank you
Hey have y’all ever been… yanno…. down there and
THAT SHIT BE FUCKIN’ STANKIN’ 😂
XD um, what?!
@@naotokamigire-terumi9912 u heard me
No. Take a shower. Personal hygiene is a thing.
@@Cvnt2201 I wasn’t talking about me 😭😭😐😵💫🤒
You're a genius!
Still the best narrator
Yay love the videos
Here is my theory, if the train never stops then how did ge get on? Well he could have been in a crash or something traumatic causing him to ve in a coma and the train could be a fragment of his imagination as his mind trys to wake up, everyone he meets is just a persona hes seen before walking through town or something because he has to of seen them to see faces cause the human mind can't make up its own face, so that means all the people hes seing is people he is either close with or met in a store even if its seeing them from afar, which would explain how he got on the train and everyone he is seeing. Yes i know i repeated some details, listening to storys makes ne tired and when im tired i dint think straight so deal with it.
30 seconds with zero views let me change that real quick!
Punctuation is a good idea here
Would be awesome as a Twilight Zone episode I like The Twilight Zone.
i thought the story itself was good but the ending didn’t reconcile the beginning for me. why of all people on it, did he get to arrive at his destination?; if it makes no stops why could he get on (this would make sense eventually IF he came to the conclusion that he didn’t remember wilingly getting on the train or something like that though) in the first place? and if he got to be the only one who finally got to the stop (i know others got off, what i mean is that it was he who didn’t have to wait years or centuries, and no one else got on after him), then what is it about his journey that made the destination possible for everyone? i think the ending would’ve been cool if it ended with the little girl saying “hi is this the train to chicago?” , yet i did still like them being able to escape. and i liked the whole ride there lol
I want to know if time passed, and how long the others were on the train
Ehhh...seems kind of weird that shortly after the new guy shows up, everything concludes. For the VERY first time in probably decades or more, the train stops?
not really. they just chose his POV, they couldve chose any POV and it still wouldve concluded the same way it did. with a new guy boarding and then leaving sooner than others. they chose his POV as someone who was freshly confused and new to environment.
We waited 2 weeks for "my train went the wrong way" ???
Wth happened to skinwalker & wendigo stories? Ghost & monster stories. Unreal
Not sure why but this video is not appearing in search results. Probably explains the lower than usual views.
Even if you type "creepypasta" and sort by recently uploaded its not there.
I typed in Mcreeps username and found this.
If the train never stops, how did he get on?
Someone else released this yesterday 😢
what was the message? what was his greatest sin?
The purgatory train just a theory as I listen to this haha
a 1,001 car amtrak sounds terrifying
Seems like a pretty meh abrupt ending to a magic demon train.
"Laptop out spread cheeks open"
Remember kids double check your train tickean stay away from religous people in crises
What do they eat?
I WAS WONDERING THE SAME
Tales from the Darkside Season 2 episode 19 "The Last Car"
I ain't no taco man that's for sure
Why
@CreepsMcPasta You sound more downtrodden than usual. You doing ok Creeps? Or is this just a new infliction you're trying out?
Why is he asking around then declaring people insane?
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all present and correct, logistics are fun lol.
As a life long New Yorker who remembers the Real NYC before it died by all these newer different peole migrating here first from other states late 90s Early 00's to these Illegals now it reminds me of NYC roday just a routine nightmare.
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Mmm
Untill
Only in Ohio bruh
Very mid story. Its so mid i bet GPT could have wrote it
88 views in 3 mins?? bro fell off
Get lost. Nothing nice to say, then as my teacher used to say, "fuck off then, keep that dirty mouth shut or I will wash it out with bleach."
Not all of us can watch right when it comes out. You know people have jobs and family to deal with right!?! I wanted to listen right away. But couldn't do that until now🧄
@@503rpf hey so it’s clearly a joke
Great story!