"This morning the doors to our apartment complex were welded shut." Creepypasta

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  • Опубликовано: 6 янв 2025

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  • @CreepsMcPasta
    @CreepsMcPasta  3 года назад +277

    CHECK OUT THE FULL NOVEL HERE► www.amazon.com/gp/product/B08T48KNRP/

    • @parrotlord7393
      @parrotlord7393 3 года назад +11

      I would but I’m poor

    • @FoulMan
      @FoulMan 3 года назад +13

      @@parrotlord7393 Plus we have this dude lol, he’s like, the best person in existence

    • @twicedeadtrilogy-book1-con234
      @twicedeadtrilogy-book1-con234 3 года назад +5

      Can we get it in the UK?

    • @victorplayz5777
      @victorplayz5777 3 года назад +4

      Bro your channel is long dead but you still drop fire every week for the fans. Keep it up g. 💯💯💯

    • @Sheidan5569
      @Sheidan5569 3 года назад +7

      Is this book available in russian? It's not every day you recomend a book, and on such an occasion I would gladly read it in its native language! :)

  • @Bigfoot_With_Internet_Access
    @Bigfoot_With_Internet_Access 3 года назад +1516

    That's why we bigfoots don't live in apartments

    • @WolfgangvonHam
      @WolfgangvonHam 3 года назад +54

      Is it true your kind eat babies? Or is it berries?

    • @Bigfoot_With_Internet_Access
      @Bigfoot_With_Internet_Access 3 года назад +43

      @Tyler Stone No

    • @trentthompson1495
      @trentthompson1495 3 года назад +27

      @@WolfgangvonHam I see you play red Dead

    • @sizzworthcat5039
      @sizzworthcat5039 3 года назад +11

      hey bigfoot do humans who try to record you ever annoy you

    • @RedRumRose106
      @RedRumRose106 3 года назад +7

      I wanna know where this bigfoots motom is plugged into, and what service provider it uses

  • @TheDownables
    @TheDownables 3 года назад +1382

    As someone who is dyslexic and has a very hard time reading stuff like books you and channels like you allow me to enjoy books and stories that I would not be able to read by myself
    So thank you so very much I just know you're helping a lot of people

    • @gnat8974
      @gnat8974 3 года назад +9

      Cool

    • @raychelleblack8366
      @raychelleblack8366 3 года назад +16

      Glad you are able to enjoy stories still and inspite if having dyslexia you still seek out a way. 🙂

    • @conni4518
      @conni4518 3 года назад +6

      Wut. How did u write this, and can you even understand what I've wrote

    • @-elliott-averagedragonenjo1812
      @-elliott-averagedragonenjo1812 3 года назад +31

      @@conni4518 as someone who also has dyslexia I think they are referring to long paragraphs.
      I can read and write and read small paragraphs really easily but if it’s a block of text like a novel I lose track and the words blur together and my brain wonders off.
      But they could be referring to something else, that’s just my experience

    • @-elliott-averagedragonenjo1812
      @-elliott-averagedragonenjo1812 3 года назад +3

      @@gnat8974 I too am a wii gamer

  • @Shady_098
    @Shady_098 3 года назад +528

    This is honestly one of my favorite creepypastas

    • @morsine
      @morsine 3 года назад +5

      Listen to PenPal, in this same channel.

    • @Shady_098
      @Shady_098 3 года назад +2

      I did it’s also pretty good

    • @morsine
      @morsine 3 года назад +3

      @@Shady_098 yes!!

    • @justaprotogen8391
      @justaprotogen8391 3 года назад +8

      Listen to "my sleep paralysis demon is actually a pretty cool guy" it's not a scary story, but it's relatable (if that makes sense)

    • @Ashs_GhostsAndGlam
      @Ashs_GhostsAndGlam 3 года назад +2

      It’s more of a audiobook the creepy pastas are little short stories

  • @SkellyfishJellyfish
    @SkellyfishJellyfish 3 года назад +2193

    Ah yes, here reads the Russin version of Sweet Home. 😌

    • @alexsalas9512
      @alexsalas9512 3 года назад +45

      Yessssss

    • @isaaclee3271
      @isaaclee3271 3 года назад +128

      same, the premise and setting reminded me of Sweet Home

    • @lucaa2216
      @lucaa2216 3 года назад +27

      Went on RUclips from Spotify for this reasok

    • @changegaming378
      @changegaming378 3 года назад +6

      I never watched it

    • @jodygirl
      @jodygirl 3 года назад +22

      I thought the same thing. Excellent story.

  • @paroxysm8588
    @paroxysm8588 3 года назад +205

    The ending was so satisfying. This story is a genuine gem amongst creepypastas.

    • @exploratory-fordora9672
      @exploratory-fordora9672 3 года назад +25

      It wasn’t for me it just felt like the writer just killed everyone last second. and did a quick rap up we never saw the “ mysterious figure” till the end. also while I understand stand it it’s a cliff hanger and that makes sense in a creepy pasta, it just fells like the story hit a styrofoam wall and made a ending as quickly as possible while trying to slow down…

    • @exploratory-fordora9672
      @exploratory-fordora9672 3 года назад

      I mean the ending btw

    • @xxxx-jh5vc
      @xxxx-jh5vc 3 года назад +7

      @@exploratory-fordora9672 yeah it’s a trend in these creepy pastas that the story’s end with everyone dying including the main character

    • @drainedclouds2799
      @drainedclouds2799 2 года назад +7

      @@exploratory-fordora9672 Thank you! The pied piper guy was so totally out of no where. Like it just felt like a huge cop out. It’s an interesting idea to introduce but i rather have seen it beforehand while people were still really scared and after to help give reason as to why the mc was finally leaving the apartment. i have a couple more problems aswell but that doesn’t really matter rn.

    • @Doejrk
      @Doejrk 2 года назад +4

      @@exploratory-fordora9672 hopefully the full novel is better

  • @fenrirunshackled4319
    @fenrirunshackled4319 3 года назад +297

    I'm only a quarter of the way through, but I can already see the only valid resolution to the story: Mecha Stalin

  • @Jeg_er_danskftw
    @Jeg_er_danskftw 3 года назад +542

    Funny thing is: I’m welding as I’m listening to this😅

    • @mommylefttogetmilk
      @mommylefttogetmilk 3 года назад +42

      Don't weld your door shut on accident

    • @Jeg_er_danskftw
      @Jeg_er_danskftw 3 года назад +27

      @@mommylefttogetmilk Don’t worry bro, my front door is mostly made of wood, so there is not a chance

    • @midnightbeans8694
      @midnightbeans8694 3 года назад +6

      OoO do you wear that mask if you do I shall name you mr inferno

    • @Jeg_er_danskftw
      @Jeg_er_danskftw 3 года назад +3

      @@midnightbeans8694 What mask?😅

    • @pompshuffle562
      @pompshuffle562 3 года назад +6

      @@Jeg_er_danskftw "what mask?" You good bro? When you don't wear one of those you tend to go blind.

  • @knekki.
    @knekki. 3 года назад +488

    If this story slaps, my broke ass might just drop those last dollars on the book lol

    • @LostTempest
      @LostTempest 3 года назад +68

      Update: it SLAPS

    • @Dylan-le9zi
      @Dylan-le9zi 3 года назад +14

      It’s basically rec. there’s 3 movies in that series, or you can watch the same movie but reshot pretty much scene for scene in the movie quarantine but the second movie in that franchise is a bit less connected than the rec. series that has a decent amount of story building and decent religion based infection.

    • @knekki.
      @knekki. 3 года назад +32

      Ight boys it slaps

    • @thewanderingamerican8040
      @thewanderingamerican8040 3 года назад +13

      Ladies and gentlemen, it slapeth.

    • @Александр-п3ц1в
      @Александр-п3ц1в 3 года назад +3

      I’m too broke too afford it anyway

  • @itsasarahmichelle4475
    @itsasarahmichelle4475 3 года назад +382

    Usually an hour is too long for me, but damn this story was amazing, I’ll be trying out more hour long vids now as it looks like I have a ton of content to enjoy lol

    • @austinfrank8058
      @austinfrank8058 3 года назад +11

      Personally I love the hour+ stories. I throw them on to help me sleep at night and then just pick up where I left off the next night

    • @josephwashington2961
      @josephwashington2961 3 года назад +3

      I use them for the car rides to and from school which is about 2 hours

    • @TheCoalminer13
      @TheCoalminer13 3 года назад +2

      I enjoy the longer ones being I can listen to them at work so it makes a ten hour shift go faster

    • @TheCoalminer13
      @TheCoalminer13 3 года назад +3

      @@austinfrank8058 I have the opposite reaction,I get sucked in and end up staying up to hear the end

    • @thedukesrule
      @thedukesrule 3 года назад +1

      I have these at work makes work go by faster

  • @RiotShieldMan
    @RiotShieldMan 3 года назад +267

    Absolutely top notch story. Reminds me very much of Stephen King's "The Mist"

    • @Pupp_pie
      @Pupp_pie 3 года назад +8

      I love that book/movie!

    • @BandidFourLife
      @BandidFourLife 3 года назад +1

      It also remind me of the Webtoon Sweet Home which is now on Netflix

    • @Dashyrre
      @Dashyrre 3 года назад +1

      Same! I thought I was the only one

    • @grummanf14tomcat40
      @grummanf14tomcat40 3 года назад +6

      It gives me the same vibes as the mist, but in a more familiar enviroment.(i live in a old russian style apartment)

    • @DollySvengali
      @DollySvengali 2 года назад +1

      Or Cujo even, given it's the same 'trapped in a place and there's a monster outside who will eat me if I try to get away from here" I guess the Mist was like Cujo + more characters, adding the element of social breakdown scenes and people problems compounding the central problem.

  • @fridaythe13thgamegod35
    @fridaythe13thgamegod35 3 года назад +64

    When I clicked on this story I thought it would be a typical around 20 minute creepsmcpasta video but when I saw the time I started coughing hard lol

  • @ken.kallingil237
    @ken.kallingil237 3 года назад +214

    I love when people come together to fight some inter dimensional being/monster kind of stories.

    • @tuebone4506
      @tuebone4506 3 года назад +7

      Read sweet home it's amazing

    • @chillycoldchomper9389
      @chillycoldchomper9389 2 года назад +6

      Honestly it is realistic. Most people in this world are actually good people, believe it or not.

  • @Eyyesse
    @Eyyesse 3 года назад +69

    As someone who needs insulin to eat or drink basically anything, this video reminds me I would probably not survive something like this-

    • @bloodonmytongue5408
      @bloodonmytongue5408 3 года назад +4

      Honestly you may not

    • @davidms0836
      @davidms0836 2 года назад +4

      same situation and i think wed be dead in about 2 days at most

    • @MikeHunt-zy3cn
      @MikeHunt-zy3cn 4 месяца назад

      I'm sorry to be grim, but you probably wouldn't. Only way I could see you living is if you are around medical professionals who may be able to take quantities from compatible individuals foe your own use. Which is unlikely, and I doubt that would even work properly.

    • @Saturnm0ss
      @Saturnm0ss Месяц назад

      Get to a pharmacy the minute something like this happens and lock down

  • @gana7206
    @gana7206 3 года назад +121

    AHHHHHH 1.5 HOURS THIS IS THE 3RD LONGEST CREEPYPASTA YOUVE EVER DONE WE ARE EXPERIENCING HISTORY

    • @midnightbeans8694
      @midnightbeans8694 3 года назад

      What’s number one

    • @gana7206
      @gana7206 3 года назад

      @@midnightbeans8694 penpak

    • @gana7206
      @gana7206 3 года назад +1

      @@midnightbeans8694 penpal

    • @gana7206
      @gana7206 3 года назад +9

      @@midnightbeans8694 save penpal for a stormy night because its onr of the best creepypastas of all time

    • @mrcreepmcpasta2959
      @mrcreepmcpasta2959 3 года назад

      @@gana7206 I loved penpal

  • @ruv3n406
    @ruv3n406 3 года назад +341

    I'm at 9 minutes now. I'll probably fall asleep soon. But i gotta say: so far it sounds like the movie sweet home

    • @joeyroyer5410
      @joeyroyer5410 3 года назад +4

      That's what i was thinking lol

    • @Maligust_
      @Maligust_ 3 года назад +11

      Except for the fact the Russians are a lot more intense

    • @ashlynnisunoriginal
      @ashlynnisunoriginal 3 года назад +2

      I'm sorry a movie?

    • @ruv3n406
      @ruv3n406 3 года назад

      @@ashlynnisunoriginal yeeyee

    • @ashlynnisunoriginal
      @ashlynnisunoriginal 3 года назад +3

      @@ruv3n406 I only knew about the webcomic

  • @wlfgrlx8577
    @wlfgrlx8577 3 года назад +50

    There is a movie called “The divide” that is insanely similar to this. It’s more of a psychologically fucked movie than a horror but they get welded into the bomb shelter of there apartment complex and shit goes south fast.

    • @S_047
      @S_047 2 года назад

      Dude in a dress batshit crazy

    • @KingRidley
      @KingRidley 2 года назад

      Their* apartment just fyi

    • @avrie6668
      @avrie6668 Год назад

      Oooh ❤

  • @rohatkarabulut2476
    @rohatkarabulut2476 3 года назад +36

    Bought the book thanks to you.. I've read a few pages so far and definitely would recommend to anyone who likes creepypastas and occasional reading as its very well written and the storyline is just amazing :)

  • @elswayr4525
    @elswayr4525 3 года назад +35

    29:18 Just wanted to point out a funny detail that when the man says "look at that one guys! so young and already trash", he actually means cop (мусор, derogatory)

    • @hithere5553
      @hithere5553 3 года назад +1

      So a more accurate translation would be “look at that one guys! So young and already a pig.” Right?

    • @elswayr4525
      @elswayr4525 3 года назад

      @@hithere5553 yep!

    • @mapples5871
      @mapples5871 4 месяца назад

      What does that mean

  • @FoulMan
    @FoulMan 3 года назад +110

    I think I’ve actually heard this one before! This story was very interesting but, there are some lines I do not remember,
    Keep up the good work! I don’t know how you can continue to speak after these!

    • @nazurath8833
      @nazurath8833 3 года назад +3

      Yeah cant exactly remember who but know I listened to it before and have seen it

    • @dogwaterhd4k304
      @dogwaterhd4k304 3 года назад +4

      @@nazurath8833 Mr creeps narrated this before a few months or more ago

    • @FoulMan
      @FoulMan 3 года назад +1

      @@dogwaterhd4k304 Ah, thank you ^^

    • @acetown2263
      @acetown2263 3 года назад +4

      It's an older story, but a good one

    • @dogwaterhd4k304
      @dogwaterhd4k304 3 года назад +2

      @@acetown2263 agreed

  • @mxtime2051
    @mxtime2051 3 года назад +55

    The whole survival/trapped aspect of this story is super interesting to me. Does anyone know of any other stories with a similar theme?

    • @janelpratt5234
      @janelpratt5234 3 года назад +16

      Yes I would recommend "My hometown is missing"

    • @viatheanimator
      @viatheanimator 3 года назад +8

      if you haven't read or seen "the mist," it's got the same sort of premise. it was originally a steven king book so maybe you can read it or find an audiobook of it. otherwise, it was also made into a movie

    • @agusontoro
      @agusontoro 3 года назад +3

      There’s also “Sweet home” a Korean comic with a similar premise, there’s a live action adaptation which is good in Netflix

    • @slitmeopen
      @slitmeopen 3 года назад

      the sun isn’t coming up!!!! (something along those lines) great story

    • @greeny-chang
      @greeny-chang 3 года назад

      @@agusontoro That’s what I had thought of when I heard this story

  • @loganheart7672
    @loganheart7672 3 года назад +29

    You know what's really bothersome as the amazing story ends in your mind you're still thinking there's more to it only realizing that's it, there's no more, the story is at it's end or until the author decides to add an extra plot twist to the ending. Love every story, it's like watching vivid stories in my mind.

    • @exploratory-fordora9672
      @exploratory-fordora9672 3 года назад +5

      Many creepy pastas end on a cliff hanger but like I said in another reply it fells like it hit a styrofoam wall Getting a ending as quickly as possible but just slowed down enough to leave a (I want to say bad but I’ll refrain from it) cliff hanger

    • @loganheart7672
      @loganheart7672 3 года назад +1

      @@exploratory-fordora9672 I know right, it's like how should I terrify the readers next time with a even better plot twist or unexpected turn of events.

    • @gm6393
      @gm6393 3 года назад

      @@exploratory-fordora9672 yeah the ending feels rushed like the author just got tired of the story and didn't know where to take it. Alot of loose ends were explained I rushed away but not really explored. It feels like there was alot that was just left, and the ending feels empty

  • @B0nkedd
    @B0nkedd 3 года назад +20

    I wish there were more hour long stories on this channel! They give me the strength to complete housework

  • @diljay
    @diljay 3 года назад +165

    BROO I HEARD THIS ON A DIFFERENT CHANNEL HOPPING YOU OR MRCREPYPASTA WOULD READ IT THANK YOU!

    • @aunkausarmawu-lisa7428
      @aunkausarmawu-lisa7428 3 года назад +12

      Yeah bro Mr.Creeps did this one a while back

    • @zin5805
      @zin5805 3 года назад +6

      @@aunkausarmawu-lisa7428 10 months ago

    • @whocares269
      @whocares269 3 года назад +2

      @Tyler Stone excuse me but I'd like a refund, my brain just read it in a terrible Russian accent and I feel offended on their behalf 🙋🏾‍♀️

    • @RedHotSillyPeppa
      @RedHotSillyPeppa 3 года назад +3

      Most definitely heard this from Mr. Creeps

    • @jackdurden466
      @jackdurden466 3 года назад

      I’ve definitely heard this, it was pretty damn great! Glad he’s reading it.

  • @sagelynette7308
    @sagelynette7308 3 года назад +16

    this is one of the only creepypastas over 45m that I genuinely enjoy

  • @tormentedslayer7498
    @tormentedslayer7498 3 года назад +226

    Hey creeps! Would you think about doin a series on the book from beginning to ending? That would be some I'd definitely tune into an listen to you read it? I can't be the only one that would want that!?!?

    • @842kemp
      @842kemp 3 года назад +20

      I imagine full book narrations are less accessable to narrators because of royalties and whatnot.

    • @winstonwins1096
      @winstonwins1096 3 года назад +39

      @@842kemp It's so hard for even the most talented writers to make a buck these days. You really can't blame them.

    • @darkstar2476
      @darkstar2476 3 года назад +3

      +1

    • @xXPiotyXx
      @xXPiotyXx 3 года назад +10

      Audible? He could do the narration for audible if it ever gets a version there

    • @iansahleen1173
      @iansahleen1173 3 года назад

      @@xXPiotyXx my thoughts exactly

  • @darkstar2476
    @darkstar2476 3 года назад +25

    This is the best there is. Kudos to the author. That's some quality work.

  • @Gloomistic
    @Gloomistic 3 года назад +161

    A LONG JUICY BOY LETS GO. MIGHT GET THE WHOLE BOOK IF THIS CHECKS OUT

  • @paroxysm8588
    @paroxysm8588 3 года назад +10

    I love the fact this guy embarked on his own quest out of boredom to discover the person who might've wielded the doors closed.

    • @kaamn1829
      @kaamn1829 3 года назад +1

      quarantine mood

  • @theatomiclizard452
    @theatomiclizard452 3 года назад +30

    This is the most incredible creepypasta I've ever heard.

  • @gaysatan4565
    @gaysatan4565 3 года назад +10

    I’m glad you narrated this one! I re-listen to a lot of stories and this is one of my favorites! Excited to hear how you narrate it and bring your own vibes/style to the story!

  • @Triplethreat247XT
    @Triplethreat247XT 3 года назад +44

    I still think about this story sometimes. It was amazing. If you ever get the chance through some platform please please please do a voice over of the book. I’d love to hear it. More than willing to pay for that

    • @rescue08jrgaming72
      @rescue08jrgaming72 3 года назад +1

      This is a voice over… What exactly are you talking about?

    • @GUIRADE95
      @GUIRADE95 2 года назад

      @@rescue08jrgaming72 got that right 👍

    • @MisanthropicOcellus
      @MisanthropicOcellus 6 месяцев назад

      ​@@rescue08jrgaming72book is not the same at this.

  • @_Arkane
    @_Arkane 3 года назад +20

    Oh man, I thoroughly enjoyed this one. Very intense and picturing myself there made it come to life even more. Plus creature stories are some of my favorite ones.

  • @KittyCat-yn1sh
    @KittyCat-yn1sh 3 года назад +9

    This was a 1:00:00 long and it kept me occupied during my family meeting. keep up the great work you just earned a new subscriber

  • @acid_tongue_4315
    @acid_tongue_4315 3 года назад +21

    I got a ton of Metro Exodus vibes from this! I actually really enjoyed this one, everytime the song/entry started to end I was afraid there would be no more! Kudos to creeps for the narration and the author for creating such a masterpiece! :)

  • @grizzly6018
    @grizzly6018 3 года назад +16

    Its pretty much like Stephen King's The Mist without the mist. Military experimenting with interdimensional portals and "accidentally" inviting in a whole other world into ours. I loved this story worth every minute. Clearly the goverment still sought value in this project otherwise they would of nuked the place and said "oops faulty reactor" lmao

  • @winstonwins1096
    @winstonwins1096 3 года назад +17

    Hell of a tale. I am definitely intrigued enough to get the novel.

  • @Sinnk_
    @Sinnk_ 3 года назад +33

    Thanks for the long upload^^ We appreciate your hard work✨

  • @sockie4791
    @sockie4791 3 года назад +7

    To this day, this is still my favourite creepypasta, it’s so well written and the story is great, I could replay it over and over again

  • @SpunkyEnigma
    @SpunkyEnigma 3 года назад +43

    Easily one of the best creepypasta story's weird this is so late...

    • @planxanso3994
      @planxanso3994 3 года назад +1

      Pretty old story been around for 3-4 years never gets old tho

  • @bongwelll
    @bongwelll 3 года назад +21

    This is fucking awesome. I’ve been wanting to hear this one for a while but I can’t handle Mr. Creeps narration. Thank you.

  • @DeadKehoe
    @DeadKehoe 2 года назад +5

    Thank you so much for reading this story! Not only it's really good and it keeps you involved and interested and the ending is cool too. But it also was such an inspiration for me! I am Russian and for a long time I've been wanting to interpret my horror stories in English (I am an English-speaking copywriter). So, it is a push that I needed, thank you

  • @laynicarter
    @laynicarter 3 года назад +18

    I'm a little early & a lot excited for this one. Haven't been able to get into a good book for a while so this may be exactly what I need. Thank you!

  • @penguinz3438
    @penguinz3438 3 года назад +5

    I’m pissed that no one pulled the rope to pull the old man up. Like, if they all got together, they could’ve figured something out and saved him! >:(((

  • @Myknight723
    @Myknight723 3 года назад +41

    It’s super exciting to hear that about writers getting the credit they deserve for their incredible writing ✍️ if only I could focus on one idea long enough to fill a short story 🤣 plenty of ideas but don’t know how I can put them down in writing without sounding like a loon

    • @levicearbhall651
      @levicearbhall651 3 года назад +1

      You could always write a creepypasta from the perspective of a crazy person 🤔 maybe they're seeing or hearing something that's actually there and people don't believe them. But that's a little cliché. Maybe you can jump between reality and the character's delusions? That would be a good excuse to jump from concept to concept rapidly while keeping a constant story.
      If you do end up writing something I wanna read it though!

    • @IloveMrD
      @IloveMrD 3 года назад

      If you are experiencing writers-block, I always try free-writing.(it’s when you write LITERALLY everything you are thinking at the time)

  • @crossfate1981
    @crossfate1981 3 года назад +9

    Reminds me of the story where a gate was built where they had to wait for some ball that transported those whole walked through it to a different world

    • @WarriorofSunlight
      @WarriorofSunlight 3 года назад

      It’s called “We Built a Gate to a Star 1,470 Light Years Away” or something very similar.

  • @tstorm64m66
    @tstorm64m66 3 года назад +8

    So they're trying to catch a welder that basically saved they're lives untill someone was poisoned

  • @Maligust_
    @Maligust_ 3 года назад +29

    Even when he’s recommending the book he’s still in character professional level shit

  • @jinxtheunluckypony
    @jinxtheunluckypony 3 года назад +3

    The ending to this one is really sad. The false hope in the narrator is like a final kick in the ribs.

  • @kirillg5048
    @kirillg5048 3 года назад +4

    It’s a trilogy there is 3 books in the series , outstanding

  • @lolgoteem5372
    @lolgoteem5372 3 года назад +4

    I'm so glad you got to cover this one! I heard it before and was in love and I'm ready to hear it again!

  • @amandam8609
    @amandam8609 3 года назад +8

    Was planning on heading to bed soon, but this is much more important, here I come 2am!

  • @Anita-k
    @Anita-k 3 года назад +4

    That's a great version of the story, I really enjoyed it!

  • @lordravenblade
    @lordravenblade Год назад +2

    All that worry about the roof and the basement but every apartment above the first floor apparently has an unsecured window and/or balcony?

  • @connoruzamaki4905
    @connoruzamaki4905 3 года назад +10

    That was one of the best stories I’ve heard

  • @morsine
    @morsine 3 года назад +4

    This needs to be a movie.

  • @senorduck1721
    @senorduck1721 3 года назад +8

    This made me buy two of the guys books. They were highly praised on Amazon

  • @nonexistentbanana4283
    @nonexistentbanana4283 3 года назад +4

    Fun fact: when he mentions the dead body, the piano music plays a slight bit of among us drip

  • @jared8002
    @jared8002 2 года назад +2

    What scares me most is that we never find out whether or not Maxim is part of the leaving survivors. He could've been lost on one of the expeditions, or lured by the humanoid. The author never tells us if he made it, nor does he ever follow up with the welder and his son. It shows the reality of survival situations, where the narrator abandons someone and there's no closure. You're simply left to wonder.

  • @loganthebigicecream9711
    @loganthebigicecream9711 3 года назад +7

    this would be a really good horror game

  • @nazurath8833
    @nazurath8833 3 года назад +31

    If only they had stocked up on toilet paper lol

  • @chance2413
    @chance2413 3 года назад +17

    You guys will love this. Heard it months ago. If I can get that novel in audiobook, Im on it!

    • @terrortalks3037
      @terrortalks3037 3 года назад

      Novel? Is this a novel excerpt?

    • @IvoryEve
      @IvoryEve 3 года назад

      Hey what’s the name of the novel, if you shouldn’t mind sharing.

    • @MrExDArte
      @MrExDArte 3 года назад +2

      @@IvoryEve It's called "outside" by Artyom Dereschuk, you can get it on Amazon and there's a link in the description.

    • @IvoryEve
      @IvoryEve 3 года назад

      @@MrExDArte tysm 🙏🏽

  • @JL-to9vg
    @JL-to9vg 3 года назад +4

    I’m surprised that they didn’t try to trap the beasts inside the bandits wing

  • @aircoder6681
    @aircoder6681 3 года назад +3

    20:56 I love those line man those just give me chills it's kinda cliche but it still is just a foreboding tone that gives me chills knowing it's most likely inside I haven't finished listening just wanted to say I love that part

  • @blitz3d447
    @blitz3d447 3 года назад +2

    0:56 after he says theres a dead body outside the amongus theme plays

  • @rinktheredlink9317
    @rinktheredlink9317 3 года назад +3

    I've heard this story before but hearing you do it makes me so happy

  • @frozenquasar1309
    @frozenquasar1309 3 года назад

    The twists and turns on this was soooo good. Love it

  • @SerranoPereira
    @SerranoPereira 3 года назад +7

    Creeps, if you would narrate the full book, I would buy the audio book for sure!

  • @luvely1062
    @luvely1062 3 года назад +6

    What a cliffhanger...

  • @treeherder42
    @treeherder42 3 года назад +3

    Glad to hear this, remember reading the OP what feels like forever ago.
    Great story.

  • @patron8597
    @patron8597 3 месяца назад

    Really exciting.
    I listened to this story while falling asleep and I had a dream based on it.
    Listing to it for a second time now, I wonder which parts I dreamed and which are actually in the story.

  • @UAHFAN
    @UAHFAN Год назад

    Nice! As an American who lives in a small Russian town not far from Vladivostok (about 40 km), the opening part where he describes the problems with "Kruschevkas" is extremely accurate, as I rent a flat in one (3rd floor, one room). Drab 5-story concrete panel building, hearing (usually drunk) neighbors arguing through the walls, and a horrific sewer smell in the stairwell. Very accurate. Moreover, the part about most of the tenants living in them because they received them in Soviet times is true as well. All of my neighbors either are old or they are younger, but inherited the apartment. And the old lady who lives next door is incredibly rude to me due to my nationality, and often reports me to the police for things like flushing my toilet late at night, or hearing my washing machine, or hearing my girlfriend when we're having fun, or the fact that I'm American and don't belong in Russia, etc. Luckily, the police don't care and have assured me that she is just a crazy old lady who they don't take seriously. They just check my visa and registration, tell her off and threaten her with a fine if she keeps bugging them for no reason, and leave.

  • @acesdeath
    @acesdeath 3 года назад

    this has to be one of my favorite creepypastas ive seen so far

  • @kaileealtman9630
    @kaileealtman9630 3 года назад +5

    The story starting: "Right now I'm in my apartment on the third floor."
    Me, in my apartment on the third floor: "Oh boy here we go!" 😂😨

  • @Avid_CJ4_Enjoyer
    @Avid_CJ4_Enjoyer 3 года назад

    I love stories and creepypastas. Normally though, I won't watch something for maybe more than 40 minutes. The only exceptions for this are your channel, theories, and drawing stuff.

  • @TomokoKuroki0164
    @TomokoKuroki0164 3 года назад +3

    When the story is so good it becomes a novel

  • @crazyawesometimee
    @crazyawesometimee 3 года назад +2

    Me on the 3rd floor 👁👄👁 thank God for all the windows

  • @jacobcooper2659
    @jacobcooper2659 3 года назад +2

    Mr.McPasta this is the best creepy pasta I’ve listened to

  • @beanman5502
    @beanman5502 3 года назад +3

    OMG that was so suspenseful I felt as if I were there myself thanks for making this it was really good

  • @justacoolguythatcomments5143
    @justacoolguythatcomments5143 3 года назад +6

    I wasn't able to buy the book since I don't have money atm. But I was wondering if that's where the book left of or there is a proper ending to this?

  • @kyliesmith521
    @kyliesmith521 3 года назад +3

    Definitely getting the books, the author did a great job and you did a amazing narration

  • @laliwali1
    @laliwali1 3 года назад +3

    just painted a lovely portrait of a turtle to this terrifying story lmao😳

  • @6235river
    @6235river 3 года назад +12

    Wait, they have balcony access? The protagonist mentioned being afraid of the little windows in the sewer but wasn't afraid to step on the balcony and have a smoke with his neighbor on the other balcony? Can someone explain this I'm so confused

    • @tatianadashkova2143
      @tatianadashkova2143 3 года назад +10

      At the time they didn’t know the crawler existed, assumed monsters couldn’t get to the upper floors

  • @codygolden7074
    @codygolden7074 3 года назад +6

    This is a lot like sweet home something so terrifying about being trapped like the thing that stalks the fields is a good creepy pasta as well

  • @elliusagi
    @elliusagi 3 года назад +2

    Artyom is such a beautiful name.

  • @boblyn_goblin6457
    @boblyn_goblin6457 3 года назад +3

    just finished this at 1:30 am, and I am definitely got gonna sleep now

  • @Captianmex1C0
    @Captianmex1C0 3 года назад +3

    I was listening to this while at work and I genuinely was disappointed that it wasn't a Show with only one season, God the characters and writing was perfect. Didnt over so the monsters to the point that it became an action story

  • @Immortal_Fish
    @Immortal_Fish 3 года назад +1

    I swear, some of these stories are good enough to become movies

  • @havingicecream
    @havingicecream 3 года назад +3

    not far yet; I have to listen to this in parts, but hooh the twist with the monster being _outside_ has me so invested

  • @loriwilson-n9t
    @loriwilson-n9t Месяц назад

    Glad I thought to look back in the past. Didn’t realize how much better the old CPs were.

  • @christianraphaelrossoescar9937
    @christianraphaelrossoescar9937 3 года назад +5

    Holy crap bro, this story its goood a graphic novel of this would be awesome lol😁😁😁 even better an animated movie

  • @WolfWelder69
    @WolfWelder69 3 года назад +2

    I'm thinking, a ring of 6010 dime stacks all around the door.

  • @phantom_error
    @phantom_error 11 месяцев назад +1

    I really like this and I absolutely plan to get a copy of that novel

  • @Asifity
    @Asifity 3 года назад +21

    After 7 years I gained the courage to start my own RUclips channel ( as I hated the sound of my voice) I wanna thank u coz I love ur content and my account is of the same niche as yours

  • @frogohmy6209
    @frogohmy6209 3 года назад +3

    I really hope the full novel ends up available as an Audio book, on something like Audible where I can still support the writer by paying for it.

  • @nonbinarymess
    @nonbinarymess 3 года назад +4

    so well written 👏👏

  • @kimsandlin5286
    @kimsandlin5286 3 года назад +39

    This sounds familiar. I think maybe I've heard it by another narrator. Can't wait to hear CreepsMcPasta's take on it now. 😊💜💙💚💛❤

    • @darkwolf4049
      @darkwolf4049 3 года назад +2

      I think it's reupload of a really old video

    • @thelegendarypleb7704
      @thelegendarypleb7704 3 года назад +5

      i think i heard it on mr creeps channel

    • @cousinjake7986
      @cousinjake7986 3 года назад

      I think I know which one you guys are thinking of, but it's not that one

    • @binkyclinky
      @binkyclinky 3 года назад

      there was a movie like this

    • @jonathananton7181
      @jonathananton7181 3 года назад +1

      @@binkyclinky sweet home right

  • @raheenb
    @raheenb 3 года назад +2

    This was the first long story I've listened to on this channel and it was amazing. It needs an ending though! 😭😭😭

  • @funkygoat4224
    @funkygoat4224 2 года назад

    i'm glad this was one of the first creepypastas i've heard

  • @ken.kallingil237
    @ken.kallingil237 3 года назад +6

    Anyone know what happens or the novel just ends here.