Park Bom - You and I Cover

Park Bom - You and I Cover
I have really really tried my best to stay in tune and get the right pronunciation. But I noe my pronunciation was still terrible -__-lll
Any comments or critiques would be appreciated as I would really want to improve my singing. Thank you. : )

[@kaylayoushortie]

i really like your voice for this song but i wish you weren't breathing so hardly so that its easier to listen to.

[@brenbrenmao]

try to project your voice using your chest^^ it kinda sounds like you're using your head voice right now

[@anniex3081]

~good job. As everyone says, practice makes perfect! Haha just gotta work on the pronounciation. (: you already have a nice voice ^^ ~~