ESL Writing - Summarizing and Paraphrasing

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  • @AceGarrison
    @AceGarrison 3 года назад +57

    A giraffe typically requires a large intake of food; up to 75 pounds of food a day. It has been observed that hay and Acacia leaves are some of it's favorite food.

  • @chineloudeka7713
    @chineloudeka7713 4 года назад +50

    The key feeding habits of giraffes includes a preference to Acacia leaves and its abilithy of intake 75 pounds of food daily

    • @Englishing
      @Englishing  4 года назад +4

      Chinelo Udeka good job!

  • @pascalezekoye9671
    @pascalezekoye9671 4 года назад +19

    According to Mr. P, some animals can eat a substantial amount of food on daily basis, for example Giraffe whose favorite intakes are Acacia leaves and forages eats as much as 75 pounds of food daily (31)

  • @mohammedessam6359
    @mohammedessam6359 3 года назад +12

    Acacia Leaves and hay is one of the most favorite food for Giraffes, they approximately eat up to 75 pounds every day.

    • @Englishing
      @Englishing  3 года назад +1

      Good work. Please share.

  • @onyinyeogini5889
    @onyinyeogini5889 4 года назад +19

    The preference of Giraffes to Acacia leaves and Hay is outstanding. Such that on a daily basis, they can gobble up as much as 75 pounds weight of these as feed.

  • @sirgeo9432
    @sirgeo9432 Год назад +3

    With reference to Mr P, giraffes have a high preference towards feed prepared mainly from acacia forage for which they tend to consume heavily on daily basis.

  • @ayobamionakomaiya
    @ayobamionakomaiya 4 года назад +3

    The writer asserts that there are animals that have special
    innate liking for certain kinds of food. Giraffes, for example, have special liking for leaves and hay from Acacia trees. In addition, they are heavy consumers by nature and thus, can daily eat food weighing as much as 75 pounds.

    • @Englishing
      @Englishing  4 года назад

      Very good! All the best to you

    • @JahKnoxTV
      @JahKnoxTV 2 года назад

      My brother, your paragraph is too long. It should be shorter than the original. Remember, you are summarizing the paragraph in your own words.

  • @abisolamgbeze6988
    @abisolamgbeze6988 4 года назад +6

    Acacia leaves and hay are the preferred meal options for animals like Giraffes, and they can take as much as 75 pounds of food in 24 hours.

  • @najihananajih7502
    @najihananajih7502 2 года назад +4

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  • @janielleleannebautista7532
    @janielleleannebautista7532 3 года назад +4

    in general, the Giraffes can consume 75 pounds of Acacia leaves and hay as their meal, which they like to eat.

  • @daviduvo-vincent3534
    @daviduvo-vincent3534 4 года назад +6

    Acacia leaves and hay are some of the preferred foods for a Giraffe and because of that, they can eat up to 75 pounds of it daily

  • @nemolatouche
    @nemolatouche 4 года назад +1

    On a daily basis it is said that Giraffes can consume 75 pounds of food. It is also stated that they prefer Acacia leaves and hay as a part of their diet.

  • @Lydia130
    @Lydia130 4 года назад +1

    Many people do argue about food for giraffes, Acacia leaves and hay are the choice of food for giraffes and for one day, they can eat or take in 75 pounds.

  • @rahulprasad8279
    @rahulprasad8279 Год назад +1

    According to Author, food that is eaten by most of the Giraffes is Acacia leaves and hay as well. Giraffes have an appetite of eating as per the research, 75 pounds of food in a time limit of 24 hours.

  • @thecareerlady7167
    @thecareerlady7167 3 года назад +3

    Keeping giraffes also calls for one to invest greatly in acacia leaves and hay. Giraffes consumes up to 75 pounds daily.

  • @aliameer1905
    @aliameer1905 2 года назад

    According to many sites, animals such as Girrafes prefer to eat a lot of food, such as Acacia leaves and feed. Girrafes can expend 75 pounds of eating each day (33).

  • @sasad148
    @sasad148 4 года назад +3

    Animals such as Giraffes graze on large quantities of of food for survive. They are able to finish about 75 pounds of Acacia leaves and hay daily.

    • @Englishing
      @Englishing  4 года назад +1

      Sa-ada Sadique good job!

  • @afolaoluwasadeakintunde9123
    @afolaoluwasadeakintunde9123 4 года назад +5

    I'm trying to paraphrase and summarise at the same time, so I came up with these.
    1. Giraffes eat about 75 pounds of food daily, and the enjoy/are partial to acacia leaves and hay.
    2. Giraffes are big eaters with a preference for acacia leaves and hay.
    3. Despite having very healthy appetite, giraffes favour acacia leaves and hay.

  • @joylynsz
    @joylynsz 3 года назад +2

    A very interesting fact as stated by Mr P is that giraffes prefer to eat hay and acacia leaves than normal tree leaves. So much so that they can consume as much as 75 pounds in just a day.

  • @terrylydia7489
    @terrylydia7489 4 года назад +2

    A study was carried out on giraffes and estimated that on average 24 hours they eat 34 kilograms of acacia and hay.

  • @gracekandolo7439
    @gracekandolo7439 4 года назад +2

    According to recent studies, giraffes have a preference for Acacia leaves and hay. Their daily intake could amount to 75 pounds.

  • @yurichain
    @yurichain 6 месяцев назад +1

    Giraffes are animals native to Africa and are known to be quite the consumer. In fact, Giraffes consume seventy-five pounds of acacia leaves and hay daily.

  • @adeyemipired
    @adeyemipired 4 года назад +1

    Acacia leaves and hay are major food consumption for Giraffes. Resul shows that such a huge animal consumes a large amount of food daily.

    • @Englishing
      @Englishing  4 года назад

      Adeyemi Ogunleye good job! Don't forget to share

  • @DKthailand1812
    @DKthailand1812 4 года назад +1

    Acacia leaves are very popular with some Animals, like Giraffes, who can consume 75 pounds of food per day.

    • @Englishing
      @Englishing  4 года назад

      Try avoiding using who for animals.

  • @emeliennoka7703
    @emeliennoka7703 2 года назад +2

    Although giraffes have a voracious appetite, they are known to prefer the likes of acacia leaves and hay. (Mr. P, 2020)

  • @zheenoyazeed4573
    @zheenoyazeed4573 3 года назад +1

    On a daily basis a giraffe can eat about 75 pounds worth of food and two of their preferences are Acacia leaves and Hay

  • @latoyastevens2046
    @latoyastevens2046 4 года назад +2

    Acavia leaves and hay are thoroughly enjoyed by giraffes. Their average daily food consumption is approximately 75 pounds.

    • @Englishing
      @Englishing  4 года назад

      Good job! please share.

    • @afolaoluwasadeakintunde9123
      @afolaoluwasadeakintunde9123 4 года назад

      I love this response, very nice!
      However, I believe it would be better in active words Rather than passive voice.
      Giraffes thoroughly enjoy acacia leaves and hay. Their average daily consumption is approximately 75 pounds.

  • @jucavalinho
    @jucavalinho 4 года назад +1

    Big animals need a lot of food. The giraffes for example can eat around 75 pounds of food a day, and their favourite are Acacia leaves and hay.

    • @Englishing
      @Englishing  4 года назад +1

      Juliano Valinho very good :)

  • @Incore94
    @Incore94 7 месяцев назад

    Giraffes usualy intake multiple pounds which can carry on to 75 pounds in a day. They usually eat specific foods such as hay and acacia leaves.

  • @miranad0507
    @miranad0507 3 года назад +1

    According to what was reported about giraffes, they are likely to have over 70 pounds for their daily nourishment. In addition, it seems they have their favorite plates too, which are Acacia leaves and hay.

    • @Englishing
      @Englishing  3 года назад

      Very good please share

    • @miranad0507
      @miranad0507 3 года назад

      @@Englishing thank you for the useful lesson, it was very helpful

  • @crazycartoonlover6922
    @crazycartoonlover6922 4 года назад

    A giraffe's meal mainly consists of Acacia leaves and hay, since these types of plants are usually enjoyed by this animal. A giraffe may have a large appetite since their day-to-day intake of food can go up to 75 pounds.

    • @Englishing
      @Englishing  4 года назад +1

      Good job. Please share.

    • @JahKnoxTV
      @JahKnoxTV 2 года назад

      Your paragraph is too long. It should be shorter than the original. Remember, you are summarizing the paragraph in your own words.

  • @britonmarrett796
    @britonmarrett796 3 года назад +1

    Studies have shown that Acacia leaves as well as hay is a meal enjoyed by Girraffes. They are also capable of eating a whopping 75 pounds of meal daily.

  • @leothenrdkng
    @leothenrdkng 4 года назад +5

    Giraffes eat up to 75 pounds of food every day. Examples of what they like are Acacia leaves and hay.

    • @Englishing
      @Englishing  4 года назад +1

      Lionhel Ndalu great please share

  • @meeslogistics
    @meeslogistics 2 года назад +1

    Along with being able to eat as much as 75 pounds of food daily, Giraffes also like Acacia leaves and Hay.

  • @Doctorfredostar
    @Doctorfredostar 3 года назад

    Findings by research revealed that Giraffes eat mostly leaves such as Acacia and hay with an estimated daily intake of about 75 pounds.

  • @yienderiamartin2893
    @yienderiamartin2893 3 года назад +1

    Many animals are sustained by a plant based diet. One such animal is the giraffe, who can consume more than 70 pounds of food per day with a preference for acacia leaves and hay.

  • @aathegreat3280
    @aathegreat3280 3 года назад +4

    Acacia leaves and hay are giraffe's favorite, and they able to eat until 75 pound for a day.
    I'm not really good in English :')

    • @Englishing
      @Englishing  3 года назад

      ok, but it could be improved.

  • @malak_1725
    @malak_1725 3 года назад +2

    Typically every day of the week giraffes feed on 75 pounds of food daily, but they mostly tend to like acacia leaves and hay.

  • @malisaalexander3676
    @malisaalexander3676 2 года назад +1

    Giraffes consume on a daily basis 75 pounds of food, which mainly consist of Acacia leave and hay.

  • @chupsey21
    @chupsey21 3 года назад

    Research shows that giraffes can eat up to 75 pounds of food each day. In order to fulfill this demand, they feed on Acacia leaves and hay which are said to be one of the most liked foods for them.

  • @coolname101
    @coolname101 4 года назад +6

    It is well known that Giraffes can eat a great deal of food in a day, but their appetite grows even more when faced with the favourite leaves Acacia and hay.

  • @nigelarcani
    @nigelarcani Год назад

    According to Mr P, Giraffes are known to eat as much as 75 pounds of food in a day. Of their food choices, they are particularly fond of leaves and hay.

  • @pasindum2019
    @pasindum2019 3 года назад +1

    Acasia leaves and hay are some of the most liked meals for giraffes , and eat nearly 75 pounds in a day.

  • @phyllisnjaari7289
    @phyllisnjaari7289 Год назад +1

    Giraffes can consume 75 pounds of food per day. They mostly however like acacia leaves and hay.

  • @johoscorporation6277
    @johoscorporation6277 4 года назад +1

    Study shows that Giraffes preferences when it comes to meals are the Acacia leaves and hay. 34 Kg of this they consume within 24 hours

  • @ruthagbozo5700
    @ruthagbozo5700 2 года назад

    Acacia leaves and hay are a delight for giraffes. A giraffe's daily in take of food is about 75pounds

  • @devcath
    @devcath 3 года назад +1

    According to Mr. P Giraffes consume large quantities of food daily, approximately 75 pounds. Their favorite consist of acacia leaves and hay.

  • @throttle4you70
    @throttle4you70 3 года назад +1

    The favourite food of giraffes are hay and Acacia leaves and it is observed in a day they can eat upto 75 pounds of food.

  • @emmanueleleazar6467
    @emmanueleleazar6467 5 месяцев назад +1

    Acacia leaves and hay are food liked by Giraffes, they are likely to consume around 75 pounds a day.

  • @squeezewax_ct
    @squeezewax_ct 4 года назад

    The diet of Giraffes mainly consists of Acacia leaves and hay. The daily intake of food measures to 75 pounds daily.

    • @Englishing
      @Englishing  4 года назад +1

      Good, but try not to repeat the same words.

  • @betikufolakerose7422
    @betikufolakerose7422 4 года назад +1

    Leaves and Hay of Acacia are preferred for consumptions by Giraffes to the extent of consuming 75pounds of the plants a day.

    • @Englishing
      @Englishing  4 года назад

      BETIKU FOLAKE ROSE try again

  • @sandywubbeling7461
    @sandywubbeling7461 3 года назад +1

    If is amazing to think that such a big animal like a giraffe does not eat meat but eats mainly tree leaves and grass. The quantities consumed in 24 hours are mind boggling- "75 pounds".

  • @eesmaeladigunoloye9289
    @eesmaeladigunoloye9289 3 года назад +2

    On a daily basis, giraffes can eat as much as 75 pounds of food, especially acacia leaves and hay which are their favorites.

  • @toluoyelade4526
    @toluoyelade4526 3 года назад +1

    There are certain animals like the giraffes that devour approximately 34 kilograms of hay and acacia leaves within 24 hours.

  • @mathewdsouza
    @mathewdsouza Год назад

    Hay and leaves of the acacia tree remain the giraffe's preference regarding choice of meal. They are known to imbibe as much as 75 pounds of food in a single day.

  • @SixPaths_HanZo
    @SixPaths_HanZo 3 года назад +1

    Acacia leaves and hay are part of the food giraffes consume and it is normally up to 75pounds

  • @roseadam7946
    @roseadam7946 2 года назад +1

    Thanks mr .for this good vedio ,may i ask you what kind of applications you do use for this vedio ? Thanj u

  • @itsmekunne
    @itsmekunne 6 месяцев назад

    Acacia leaves and hay are one of the favorite food source for Giraffes, due to their huge bodies they usually need 75 pounds of food in a daily basis.

  • @likshanwong5911
    @likshanwong5911 2 года назад +2

    Giraffes eat 75 pounds of food daily, and the preference of their eating habits is Acacia leaves and hay.

  • @clc0991
    @clc0991 4 года назад

    Acacia leaves and hay are some examples of foods that giraffes prefer, which might also be part of their 75 pound daily intake.

  • @callistuslamwong6082
    @callistuslamwong6082 3 года назад

    Giraffes on a daily basis generally consume hay and Acacia leaves as their favorite and require as food an equivalent of 75 pounds.

  • @Ingenioustech777
    @Ingenioustech777 4 года назад

    Though giraffes are are able to eat up to 75 pounds of food daily, their main meals often consist of acacia leaves & hay.

  • @carlilecullen9587
    @carlilecullen9587 2 года назад

    Acacia and hay are the most common foods that giraffes love to eat, that's why they often ingest around 75 pounds of food per day.

  • @mimiopigo9044
    @mimiopigo9044 4 года назад +2

    Despite the different meal options available, giraffes prefer to eat Acacia leaves and hay. Their love for this meal can lead them to eat up to 75 pounds in a day.

  • @adeolaolajiga1489
    @adeolaolajiga1489 4 года назад

    Giraffes seem to have a preference for eating some particular foods such as hay and acacia leaves.
    Majorly,this forms a large part of their diet.

  • @SheillapBirungi
    @SheillapBirungi 4 года назад +1

    Giraffes can consume a good quantity of food which may equal to 75 pounds on a daily basis and they enjoy acacia leaves and hay.

  • @chonziefabulous5326
    @chonziefabulous5326 Месяц назад

    Giraffes are known to have large appetites. Their favorite food is acácia leaves and hay

  • @tlameloletshwenyo491
    @tlameloletshwenyo491 3 года назад +1

    Acacia leaves and hay are a giraffes favorite food, they can eat up to 75 pounds of food daily.

  • @Sakura-li6vs
    @Sakura-li6vs 3 года назад +1

    Hay and Acacia leaves are source of food to animal like giraffes. They can have them for approximately 75 pounds a day

  • @brianonyeke7169
    @brianonyeke7169 4 года назад +1

    Large animals eat a lot of food. The giraffe for instance, consumes about 75 pounds of Acacia leaves and hays per day.

  • @nippae
    @nippae 2 года назад

    According to Mr. P., a Giraffe masticate plenty food per day amounting to about 75% of a 100 pounds bag of rice but most of the food it enjoys eating most are Acacia leaves and hay, this shows that giraffes are good eaters.

  • @lynazouggari913
    @lynazouggari913 3 года назад +1

    Studies shown that in africa Girrafs as acacia can eat more than 65 pounds of food including hay and leave per a day .

  • @xmha8776
    @xmha8776 3 года назад

    giraffes of east Africa are known to digest varieties of trees like acacia tree's leaves and some hay, they could fill up their bellies to 75 pounds per day.

  • @AnonymousAnonymous-bi8gc
    @AnonymousAnonymous-bi8gc 3 года назад +1

    According to Mr P, the meal choice of giraffes include Acacial leaves and hay. He goes on to reveal that giraffes have the ability to ingest 75 pounds of food daily.

  • @rohanverma704
    @rohanverma704 2 года назад +1

    Giraffes, in accordance with their humongous size, have the ability to consume up to 75 pounds of food a day. Giraffes are fond of Acacia leaves and hay, due to which these are a major part of their diet.

  • @tem1465
    @tem1465 2 года назад

    Per day Giraffes tend to consume around 75 pounds of food. However, Acacia leaves and hay seem to be the most preferred food.

  • @blessingohiozua4165
    @blessingohiozua4165 3 года назад +1

    The author is of the opinion that Giraffes are very fond of a particular leave known as Acacia, and they have a very large appetite for food consumption.

  • @jukiyilmaz6320
    @jukiyilmaz6320 8 месяцев назад +1

    you made a great video . i appreciate that . thx

  • @quipped-op5xh
    @quipped-op5xh 3 года назад +3

    A typical giraffe is able to consume about 75 pounds of food everday, their favorite being Acacia leaves and bales of hay.

  • @esmiesokosa5987
    @esmiesokosa5987 4 года назад

    Mr. P highlights important aspects of feeding behavior of Giraffes who have an insatiable appetite for roughage which they can eat up to75 pounds in a day. They seem to have a preference for Acacia Leaves and hay.

  • @modupeogundimu9599
    @modupeogundimu9599 4 года назад +1

    Acacia leaves an hay appeal a lot to giraffes. The daily food intake can be up to 75 pounds

    • @Englishing
      @Englishing  4 года назад

      Modupe Ogundimu good but can you write it in just one sentence?

  • @ettiemidzi
    @ettiemidzi 3 года назад +1

    Giraffes prefer leaves and hay of Acacia trees. It is also studied that they take up to 75 pounds of food per day.

  • @widgetty22
    @widgetty22 4 года назад +3

    Due to their large size, giraffes need to feed on a large quantity of food daily. Their main diet consists mostly of Acacia leaves and hay of which they can consume up to 75 pounds.

    • @Englishing
      @Englishing  4 года назад +1

      Rachid Bekhechi great job!

  • @Nahasura
    @Nahasura Год назад

    The total amount of food intake by a giraffe equals to 75 pounds per day which includes leaves of Acacia and hay.

  • @teterosolange2597
    @teterosolange2597 4 года назад +1

    One of the most favorite foods for giraffes is Acicia leaves and hay to the extent that they can uptake up to 75 pounds daily.

  • @Carib7056
    @Carib7056 3 года назад +1

    Mr. P. posits that the appetite of giraffes allows them a daily intake of 75 pounds of their favourite foods, namely Acacia leaves and hay.

  • @Heraaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
    @Heraaaaaaaaaaaaaaa 2 года назад

    Giraffes can ingest as much as 75 pounds worth of food in one day. Giraffes can eat many different types of food, but it has a strong preference towards acacia leaves and hay.

  • @nasaoye
    @nasaoye 3 года назад +11

    Records show that Girraffes are able to eat over 65 pounds of Acacia leaves and hay in a 24 hour cycle.

  • @yuvikasaini8636
    @yuvikasaini8636 5 месяцев назад

    Acacia leaves are considered to be giraffes delightful meal.Over a day,giraffes can ingest 75 pounds of food including the Acacia leaves which is absolutely flabbergasting!

  • @HillarySylvester
    @HillarySylvester Год назад

    Giraffes are known to be quite the eater consuming over 75 pounds per day. Its noted that these herbivores favors the acacia leave and hays as part of its diet

  • @ghadaheikal341
    @ghadaheikal341 4 года назад +1

    Hay and Acacia leaves are Giraffes favorite food. Their daily consumption could reach 75 pounds.

  • @ItachiUchiha-ff5yb
    @ItachiUchiha-ff5yb 2 года назад

    Giraffes are Herbivores, which means they feen mainly on leaves. They have quite a fondness for the Acacia Leaves, so much, that their intake of Acacia leaves can be up to 70lbs in a single day. - Mr. P.

  • @mjabenaskitchen
    @mjabenaskitchen 4 года назад +1

    Acacia leaves and hay are the preferred source of food for giraffes. Their daily intake is 75 pounds.

    • @Englishing
      @Englishing  4 года назад

      Majorie Adjapong try just one sentence.

    • @mjabenaskitchen
      @mjabenaskitchen 4 года назад

      Acacia leaves and hay are the preferred source of food for giraffes and their daily intake is 75 pounds

  • @bhaskarverma8943
    @bhaskarverma8943 2 года назад

    Acacia leaves and hay are one of the most favourite food of giraffes ,they can gobble it as much as 75pounds in a single day

  • @pegkat6427
    @pegkat6427 3 года назад +1

    Generally, giraffes can devour 75 pounds daily with their ideal meal such as, Acacia leaves and hay.

  • @nevilpatel6368
    @nevilpatel6368 2 года назад

    Leaves of mimosa plant and the grasses grown on land that griraffes prefer to eat.The three-fourth of 100 pounds they can gobble up on their regular basis

  • @Abeh-Samson
    @Abeh-Samson 3 года назад +1

    It is estimated that Giraffes eat daily, 75 pounds of meal especially their preferred Acacia leaves and hay.

  • @christianayinda1102
    @christianayinda1102 4 года назад +1

    Acacia leaves and hay constitute the favourite Giraffes meals, hence they can daily consume around 75 pounds

  • @jedidiahojora2349
    @jedidiahojora2349 2 года назад

    According to Mr P, Giraffes are heavy eaters consuming up to 75 pounds of their favourites meal - Acacia leave and hay (31)

  • @hiddenagenda4603
    @hiddenagenda4603 2 года назад +1

    A certain long-neck animals that colored with brown and lives in desert are fond of eating coat of rice, actually they are capable of eating citentaicingco lbs of plants each days.
    -james ryan