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Комментарии • 199

  • @EmpyrealInvective
    @EmpyrealInvective 6 лет назад +121

    Thanks for the narration, it turned out great. It was a pleasant surprise to see my story getting narrated out of the blue.

    • @jjju3
      @jjju3 6 лет назад

      Your story?
      Did you write this?

    • @EmpyrealInvective
      @EmpyrealInvective 6 лет назад +3

      Ayup.

    • @jjju3
      @jjju3 6 лет назад +3

      Then holy hecc! Your a really good writer dude.
      I love your writing style, I like how early on in the story you showed off Eric's mental health slipping during him explaining his fantasy about tying her up and forcing her to write, as well as giving it like, an actual reason for his mental health being the way it was, with a traumatic past (hinted at with his dad), and the hole miscarriage (I also really like how you brought the miscarriage mention back in the very end)
      Also I'm a repetition slut and I really loved your use of it at the very end (I listened to a couple of your other stories and saw you used it in a few other stories which is just 👌👌)
      I can tell you put alot of thought into these characters and there story.

    • @EmpyrealInvective
      @EmpyrealInvective 6 лет назад +4

      Thanks for the kind words. I feel like the miscarriage background is what destroyed their relationship and Eric's mania at trying to get her to finish the novel is a weak substitution for the child they lost so I'm glad you picked up on it.
      I really try to incorporate anaphoras (repetition of certain phrases to build a crescendo) and alliterative phrases when I can (Listen to the "Paid for in Blood" narration by Dr. Creepen or read it on the Creepypasta wiki) as these are styles that don't get really incorporated into too many creepypastas.
      Have a good one.

    • @alekryde
      @alekryde 6 лет назад

      But... How does it end?!

  • @Charmynox
    @Charmynox 6 лет назад +6

    i may or may not have spent a good few minutes repeatedly saying "clackling" in various different voices
    i think thats my new fave word

  • @rolllikeabuffalo
    @rolllikeabuffalo 6 лет назад +3

    When your favorite fan fiction hasn't been updated in 4 years...

  • @silentsamuel_
    @silentsamuel_ 6 лет назад +33

    God damnit and well played on the author's part. How does it end? Well. That. That dear and fellow listeners is for us to consider isn't it? Does he finish her work before falling dead? Does he get arrested for murder? What is the end? Or perhaps it is a loop where there is no end. Perhaps there will be an end at a later time. For now. There simply is none.

    • @EmpyrealInvective
      @EmpyrealInvective 6 лет назад +15

      Thanks for the insight. Glad you enjoyed it. Funny you should mention a loop as that's what I was really thinking about when writing about these two character's relationship.
      It's toxic and cyclical. They're both terrible for each other and their discontent is reiterative. They thought bringing a child into the world might help fix their relationship, but they are unable to be parents. The novel becomes this surrogate for the child they lost, but that just makes things worse and highlights their incompatibility.

    • @slothful2039
      @slothful2039 6 лет назад

      Travis Kuhlman I love all the detail you put into this story! Stories like these are what make me want to continue writing ^^

    • @EmpyrealInvective
      @EmpyrealInvective 6 лет назад

      Thanks! I hope you do continue writing. It's an entertaining activity.

    • @slothful2039
      @slothful2039 6 лет назад

      Travis Kuhlman I just have a hard time finding time to free write with middle school and such xD. But I'll surely try to keep it up!

  • @Ruby-lq7yq
    @Ruby-lq7yq 6 лет назад +31

    I'm getting a strong Misery by steven king vibe

  • @OcculticaLHP
    @OcculticaLHP 6 лет назад

    This one is very well written. Bravo to the author, and a wonderful narration

  • @LittleBallOfGiggles
    @LittleBallOfGiggles 6 лет назад

    Woah!!! I really loved this one. Nothing was wasted, everything seemed to come full circle in such fluidity. And of course as always nice emotion.

  • @jaceek2030
    @jaceek2030 6 лет назад

    The story was already creepy...as psychological downward spirals are. Your narration took it to a whole different level of uber creepy..Bravo to the writer and you!

  • @Josh--Grey
    @Josh--Grey 6 лет назад +12

    Love your vids mrcreepypasta keep doing what your doing and you can do anything. Can't wait for the next video!

  • @ssjmontana1659
    @ssjmontana1659 6 лет назад

    You know what would be cool. A creepypasta about a vampire

  • @djentile7773
    @djentile7773 6 лет назад

    When your eyes glaze over and lose all control and pure hate takes over. Its the true darkness of humanity.

  • @dr.jamesmontgomerymd4469
    @dr.jamesmontgomerymd4469 6 лет назад

    I love creepy pastas of this length. Not too long not too shot perfect!

  • @nebbywoo
    @nebbywoo 6 лет назад

    It ends with the clip of Phil Collins saying "So how does it end?" slapping his neck repeatedly in the "Don't Lose My Number" music video.

  • @Streifen1911
    @Streifen1911 3 года назад

    damn she was straight tearing him apart with those insuLts. she knew just how to hurt him

  • @Blitzkrieg_Wolf
    @Blitzkrieg_Wolf 6 лет назад +4

    TFW you just finished a MCP video from about 2 years ago, and a new one gets uploaded on the spot.

  • @ChaoticUrges
    @ChaoticUrges 6 лет назад

    6:30 😂😂😂 It's a team effort

  • @sinemasatan3515
    @sinemasatan3515 6 лет назад

    I know how it feels, continuing to type days on end, even if my bones are twisting and convulsing. It happens to me sometimes, but I keep on typing like nothing happened.

  • @freddibb6767
    @freddibb6767 6 лет назад +9

    Me: lalalala
    MrCreepypasta uploads
    Me: ON PHONE NEEDING TO KNOW HOW IT ENDS

  • @creepykidandinfinitedreams2987
    @creepykidandinfinitedreams2987 6 лет назад

    And that kids was how mrcreepypasta was born

  • @MarcusVinicius-qd6wc
    @MarcusVinicius-qd6wc 6 лет назад

    Fantastic narration.

  • @KShea11
    @KShea11 6 лет назад

    I love when new vids come out so I don't need to binge watch old vids. And I love when I catch them so early!! Goodnight everyone

  • @godbearxd
    @godbearxd 6 лет назад

    The 50 Shades of Grey sequel sounds great!

  • @jaden9925
    @jaden9925 6 лет назад +6

    Sounds like the end of my relationship.

  • @jasminegarcia9360
    @jasminegarcia9360 6 лет назад

    This narration was amazing thanks mr creepypasta ur awesome😄

  • @Joseph6-k4p
    @Joseph6-k4p 6 лет назад

    Great narration too

  • @kaylawolfgirl9566
    @kaylawolfgirl9566 6 лет назад +1

    I haven’t watched his channel in a while , now I have to watch all his videos , I can’t wait 😁😁😁

  • @Joseph6-k4p
    @Joseph6-k4p 6 лет назад

    Great story love the part where they fight.

  • @Tw0Dots
    @Tw0Dots 6 лет назад +4

    How does it end? I dont want it to end :(

  • @honeybones8380
    @honeybones8380 6 лет назад +14

    My name is DDIIINNNOOO

  • @DiehardDuke-on5mr
    @DiehardDuke-on5mr 6 лет назад +5

    Plot Twist: Who wrote this story?

  • @ericad528
    @ericad528 6 лет назад

    Pls do a collaboration with
    the dark somnium!! You guys would mesh really well!!

  • @TheTalemaster
    @TheTalemaster 6 лет назад +35

    Master Creepypasta, what is the piano ambient? Is it Myuu or Kevin MacLeod? The desperate depressive anime part of my soul needs to know :P

    • @far_away_rhys
      @far_away_rhys 6 лет назад +4

      Horror Readings by G.M. Danielson Song in the beginning was 'Angst' by Myuuji.

    • @TheTalemaster
      @TheTalemaster 6 лет назад +2

      Grateful for the reply!

    • @TheTalemaster
      @TheTalemaster 6 лет назад +3

      Ah...I suppose you think you've persuaded me? :D

    • @TheTalemaster
      @TheTalemaster 6 лет назад

      LOL, in what way? Anime culture or?

    • @ryananderson9905
      @ryananderson9905 6 лет назад

      What anime???? What's the sauce, boss?! I'm running low on material lol

  • @erubin100
    @erubin100 5 лет назад

    God, I feel like the moral of most of these stories is no one should ever get married. Ever.

  • @theaonesucc3703
    @theaonesucc3703 6 лет назад +4

    Does anyone love his voice? I do. Top 15 should take some notes.

  • @psychoticjedi4853
    @psychoticjedi4853 6 лет назад +1

    It must have been one hell of a piece of fan fiction....

  • @MrFRNTIK
    @MrFRNTIK 6 лет назад +3

    Some odd version of Misery

  • @kiarasnow1987
    @kiarasnow1987 6 лет назад

    Am I the only one who started in thinking... "oh it's going to be one of those cliffhanger creepypastas" and now is just stuck questioning life?

  • @darkovelinov3801
    @darkovelinov3801 6 лет назад

    Nice one but may i ask you to upload longer ones

  • @YOUMAKEMEF33L_____
    @YOUMAKEMEF33L_____ 6 лет назад

    its funny I listened to this while typing an Essay about Mysterious Places or events

  • @mixedmaster
    @mixedmaster 6 лет назад

    *try’s to figure out what’s the person in the video is typing and misses half the story and then gives up and has to rewind*

  • @stormasher1622
    @stormasher1622 6 лет назад +1

    Hardcore fanfic writers man

  • @ChaoticUrges
    @ChaoticUrges 6 лет назад

    I love the build up to your stories

  • @richardcolumbia6709
    @richardcolumbia6709 6 лет назад

    That was pretty good man

  • @drenk2144
    @drenk2144 6 лет назад

    Great story I loved it but with it bringing up writing a story it sparked a memory of an earlier creepypasta I watched a long time ago and forgot the name of it. Basics of it is that a guy feels like hes not really in control of his life and that everything around him is being written and created and that he's in a story and it ends with him trapped in his basement where he writes down exactly what happened word for word so we're lead to believe he's writing his own infinite loop. If anyone can remember what story that was I'd be very greatful.

  • @empireporkster7552
    @empireporkster7552 6 лет назад +1

    I liked this one though it didn't end how I thought it would.
    I was expecting it to all be part of the story Jessica was writing.

  • @thesssradio5008
    @thesssradio5008 6 лет назад

    Intriguing story begins, clicks on tide pod challenge

  • @Remediast
    @Remediast 6 лет назад

    Legend has it he's still typing to this day

  • @meenky
    @meenky 6 лет назад +6

    What’s good my dudes

    • @meenky
      @meenky 6 лет назад +1

      Joe T that is correct my dude

    • @IsaacClodfelter
      @IsaacClodfelter 6 лет назад

      TheGamerPug You are good my dude.

    • @meenky
      @meenky 6 лет назад +1

      Isaac Clodfelter well thank you my dude

    • @gebriccatembung8084
      @gebriccatembung8084 6 лет назад +1

      it is Sunday night my dude

    • @bradtrinter9507
      @bradtrinter9507 6 лет назад

      TheGamerPug party at my house my dudes

  • @smeminem1258
    @smeminem1258 6 лет назад

    Legends say he is still typing

  • @ChaoticUrges
    @ChaoticUrges 6 лет назад

    6:16 TF!!! Why the eyes?

  • @Pigeon1235
    @Pigeon1235 6 лет назад

    Man, this was epic!

  • @NativeZombie
    @NativeZombie 6 лет назад +4

    Daddy posted again😍

  • @gheith7063
    @gheith7063 6 лет назад +8

    One piece writer be like

    • @arthas640
      @arthas640 6 лет назад +2

      Answer: it doesnt. One Piece will keep going and going until the writer loses his mind, and eventually gets replaced One Piece will continue until the heat death of the universe. watch "The Simpsons - Travel into the future couch gag" to see how One Piece will finally end.

  • @areearee7773
    @areearee7773 6 лет назад

    Who else knows every Myuu and Kevin Macleod songs?

  • @toxictroubles
    @toxictroubles 6 лет назад

    This is gonna be so random and really has nothing to do with this story, but I was thinking of old things I used to watch on vhs tapes I used to own ( I don't sleep much so my mind wanders). I used to own a vhs tape of the old kids puppet show Howdy Doody. Don't remember where I got it and no longer own it. Would love if someone came up with some weird freaky horror story based on that show lol. Sorry for the randomness. Wanted to throw that idea out there and see if anyone liked it.

  • @dixonbuttes
    @dixonbuttes 6 лет назад

    Haven't listened, but my assumption is that I won't be satisfied with the ending

  • @connerreed9886
    @connerreed9886 6 лет назад

    This is good I like it

  • @DuccDoesADoot
    @DuccDoesADoot 6 лет назад

    *Story says something about Autism*
    Me: *Pops up* HUH? IM INTERESTED!

  • @whileecoyote8719
    @whileecoyote8719 6 лет назад

    best couple ever

  • @NONCEYPLAYZ
    @NONCEYPLAYZ 6 лет назад

    U wonna knoe how it ends??...
    It ends with every1 dubbing and likeing the vid 💯

  • @elijahbarnett3512
    @elijahbarnett3512 6 лет назад +1

    Did he finish the story or what

  • @TheTalemaster
    @TheTalemaster 6 лет назад +26

    16th comment! Is that a record? :D

    • @fuzzimsmcfuzzface8926
      @fuzzimsmcfuzzface8926 6 лет назад

      Horror Readings by G.M. Danielson no. A record is a flat black round thing that you can put on a record player to make music happen. 😅

    • @TheTalemaster
      @TheTalemaster 6 лет назад +1

      Or...or...DJ shit happen :D

  • @zanthar_H
    @zanthar_H 6 лет назад

    What is the outro music?

  • @splo1nger909
    @splo1nger909 6 лет назад

    Now thats a dysfunctional relationship, or was.

  • @TCP_dizzy-kf6rx
    @TCP_dizzy-kf6rx 6 лет назад

    Anyone notice the left hand.... Greenscreen?

  • @an-insane-llama
    @an-insane-llama 6 лет назад

    Thank the flying spaghetti monster for this upload!

  • @cassandrawright2781
    @cassandrawright2781 6 лет назад

    Ahhhhhh.......Love😏.

  • @haleyx6737
    @haleyx6737 6 лет назад

    I was lost the whole time 🙃

  • @Mostwantedtbest
    @Mostwantedtbest 6 лет назад

    How does it end

  • @BrandonBarres51299
    @BrandonBarres51299 6 лет назад

    Are you planning to do Jeff the Killer: The Disturbingly Cruel someday?

  • @gabrielmontes289
    @gabrielmontes289 6 лет назад

    "But it was too late". Mmmmmm, yeah I'd say so

  • @batty69420
    @batty69420 6 лет назад

    My name is Eric...

  • @100CherryJuice
    @100CherryJuice 6 лет назад

    dope.

  • @maxbearington7565
    @maxbearington7565 6 лет назад

    The End

  • @CoolGuy-vo7ht
    @CoolGuy-vo7ht 6 лет назад

    How does it end though

  • @skull9999
    @skull9999 6 лет назад

    like story MCP 💀💀💀

  • @dorimobae7357
    @dorimobae7357 6 лет назад

    How. The fuck did this creepy pasta end someone explain!!!

  • @battyseal1313
    @battyseal1313 6 лет назад

    Hi MR creepypasta it's me Libby the killer

  • @Victoriai-y2m
    @Victoriai-y2m 6 лет назад +1

    Find out Next Time on: DragonPasta Z

  • @brandonhurd3674
    @brandonhurd3674 6 лет назад

    Will we know how does it ends?

  • @theaceofspades1153
    @theaceofspades1153 6 лет назад

    But how does it end?

  • @voiddog5743
    @voiddog5743 6 лет назад

    *Keybird*

  • @kristleprince9493
    @kristleprince9493 6 лет назад +1

    And i bet it was just nonsense

  • @silvershock
    @silvershock 6 лет назад +12

    God has posted!

  • @nocap8881
    @nocap8881 6 лет назад

    What’s up creepfam

  • @benardmandoza869
    @benardmandoza869 6 лет назад

    HERE!!!

  • @sethrodriguez1999
    @sethrodriguez1999 6 лет назад

    Hmm? How does it end?

  • @saintedpunisher1220
    @saintedpunisher1220 6 лет назад

    Do one about the popobawa

  • @John-Perry
    @John-Perry 6 лет назад

    Way too rushed, there was basically no character development or context. The word choice was pretty good though.

  • @far_away_rhys
    @far_away_rhys 6 лет назад

    But... how did it end???

  • @kaiserorc7694
    @kaiserorc7694 6 лет назад

    How it end tho?

  • @MoverTile
    @MoverTile 6 лет назад +1

    Pabletoo

  • @ChaoticUrges
    @ChaoticUrges 6 лет назад

    5:18 masochist much? Or is she taking him to court if he ends up rich?

  • @MrLittlejayden
    @MrLittlejayden 6 лет назад

    I know what you did at 3:16 🤔🤔🤔😈😈🤣🤣

  • @axzelgodoy2095
    @axzelgodoy2095 6 лет назад

    I hate stories like this

  • @BerserKei
    @BerserKei 6 лет назад

    Notification Squad ma dudees

  • @sophowomo8014
    @sophowomo8014 6 лет назад

    Sounds like misery 🤔
    So anyone up for being my valentine? My old one won’t stop typing 🙄⌨️🤷🏼‍♀️
    🖤🖤🖤

  • @upsidedownpineapple8135
    @upsidedownpineapple8135 6 лет назад +2

    👌🏼👌🏼👍🏼👍🏼

  • @TheHammyYammy
    @TheHammyYammy 6 лет назад

    Cool only 103 comments

  • @ashp4rker
    @ashp4rker 6 лет назад

    I love your voice💛💕🤤