Piano Concerto in E Minor | III - Allegro energico (Original Composition)
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- Опубликовано: 16 окт 2024
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hahaha it's finally finished! it's been nearly a year in the making, so I hope you all enjoy! thanks to everyone who's been listening over the past few months, I really appreciate it. I'm probably gonna work on some smaller projects for a while, so stay tuned for that :D
this is also also great
Pretty nice, but you never really modulate away from E, even when i think its going somewhere you head back to either the 5 or the diminished and then hit e minor again. Id recommend trying to explore other keys and modes
Bel consiglio ❤
Beautiful concerto. Sounds very much inspired by Rachmaninoff's third and fourth concerto. An amazing piece.
WTF this is Actually SO GOOD please Keep Composing
that was amazing! i would pay to see this in concert!
Beautiful!
BRAVO! Very beautifully composed! Very Rachmaninoff-like, amazing melody lines and great orchestration! 👏👏👏👏👏
ITS NOT A CONCERTO NOR A SYMPHONY ITS A SYMPHONIC CONCERTO😅😅 BRAVO
i was looking so forward to this lets go
your style has developed rly well over the concerto and the last year, thank you for blessing us with this music :))
Music of God. Very impressive❤
This is wonderful! Fantastic composition, I can't wait to hear what you do in the future
You have a real skill for composition. I hope one day your pieces will be played in the giant concert halls like LA Phil or Berlin Philharmoniker 👍
An honor to have listened from beginning to end! I'm glad I met you and your compositions!
Now I have to finish my third movement as well! I completely stopped writing due to how busy I am lately, but looks like I have to start now!
Get started, can’t wait to hear your third mvt
Wake up baby the goat just post 📯
This work is so awesome. I generally don't enjoy that much music (I'm big impressionist and romantic fan), but your music was FANTASTIC. I was wondering how you made musescore sound so good? I own another software but I wanted to try musescore after listening to this but mine doesn't really sound the same
This concerto is excellent! I fell in LOVE with the first movement, and I’m happy to hear the rest. You have serious talent! Thank you for sharing these beautiful pieces with us.
I’ve noticed a lot of negative criticism toward your movements in the comments, and it has come off as overly harsh and tactless. Even some of the more positive comments have seemed backhanded. I’m sorry about that.
God bless you!
very good ! 👏
LETSS GOOOO!!! Please post a video of all the movements joined.
yesss we have all three movements now
The first eight bars could have been written by Tchaikovsky himself, it's the best dramatic intro I've heard in a while! Having said that, I have to add the whole is still a bit immature, even if you got there nice themes, intense build-ups and a wonderful feel of late romanticism throughout. The biggest "flaw" would be the constantly reoccurring climactic return to the tonic, which should be used sparingly as the "triumphant return" it is. One such place would have been the return of the wonderful introduction (in major!) at bar 300. You could try finding other tonal centers instead in between. Staying in the same tonality e minor/E major/parallel major G all the time is a bit outdated and unsurprising. The circle of fifth is another overused means.
Please don't feel discouraged about my harsh comment. I wouldn't even bother to write if the piece would have been bland and dull. You certainly seem to have something to give!
Very Good concerto. I' m going to make you a little suggestion. I'm percussionist and I think that the timpani can't make that chromatic scale in the bar 52 (minute 1:14). Commonly in the orchestras there are only 4 timpanum. You should check it, if you can change it.
Complimenti molto interresante dal mio punto di vista.
Hai un talento
Nice!
very nice ideas in here, my only sort of "complaint" is that i think it sometimes moves on a little fast and never really repeats themes of motifs (though i noticed how you sort of snuck in the main theme from the first movement at one point which i thought was pretty cool)
Wish could know at least something about you. But only it seems that you are looking for that composing degree
I enjoy it I think its very nice
here are some comments
Just an Idea but I think at ~3 minutes in there is into g major. I think a better idea is to have the piano on its own until 129.
At 145, I hear a lot of rubato, so much to a point where I belive its better to put a ritarando. Think if you didnt know the piece, the performer needs to have some indication to slow down.
I really enjoy that flute solo at that 6/4 bar
At 158, I Dont think it is neccessary for the low brass to be also playing there. Esp when you have forte for all instruments. It will drown out the Winds and Strings. Also just adds too much weight. I think a snare would add some extra magic to that section. Refrencing the exposition part from rach symphony 1 last movement's orchestration.
At 221, halfnote 85 I really like the texture, (maybe sounds a bit too like rach)
At 229, Strings cannot do that notated triplet staccato with a slur over it. This kind of staccato is used mainly in showpieces, this becomes muddy as there is the entire section playing. This could be a typo though as you have it marked without the slur for cello(good)
At 236 I suggest adding a counter melody in the orchestra that could lead to the brass at the a tempo
At 285, The Horn line is difficult. I suggest having the strings play it.
The Accel into 296, I think having the orchestra leading to it is beneficial. Esp because piano isnt playing anything important
At 300, Delete slur. It will confuse player if theyre supposed to slur it or staccato.
At 341 Presto, I suggest having upper winds double violins and stop four bars later but play it octave higher with like a piccolo or smthing
imho its a copy of rachmaninoff concertos but not that its wrong or anything
major comment is not using the orchestra to its potential.
nice piece!
0:51 this part is soooo cool whyd you never bring it baaaaaaack 😭😭😭
Thank you for this finale. Overall a great concerto. I’m gonna learn to play it and probably rewrite the piano part to be more unique and playable. Are you a pianist? It seems not to me. Great though. I’ve enjoyed every movement.
if he is not a pianist, it would be rather surpising. Most of the pieces he composed and are posted in musescore are written for piano hahaha
@@hugoballeste7905 you it seems also are not one.
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The first movment was more original but in the second and third its impossible not to hear rach2. It sounds nice but i think you should develope your potencial without taking so much reference from other music and finding your own style, great concert still.
i think its fine to take inspiration from other composers, especially because this is his first piano concerto ever written from what i know. i mean all the greatest composers took heavy inspiration from others in their earlier years (beethoven, scriabin, rachmaninoff etc)
actually now that i listen more i hear even more rach influence, especially at around 6:55
8:55 and on too kinda reminds me of rach 3 and the ending reminds me of the rach 2 ending
feel like Schumann: Symphony No. 3 too much instrument playing at the same time.
let the brass do it solo. let the woodwind do it solo
Nice!