Wrote this while bored in church

Currently gonna stay unpublished cause its more of an exercise in writing for piano (I'm not a pianist so It's something I need to learn more), but if you ask I'll put the pdf in the description. Thanks for listening!

[@ellybargmusic]

honestly such a mood lol, nicely done!

[@alessiacoluccia2691]

I really like the transition to a waltz, I’d suggest changing that forte at the end of the page and putting a mezzo forte or better a crescendo, either way if you want to keep that forte I would suggest putting a crescendo in the previous section ( 0:51 )

[@NateBrinley]

Hey thanks for the suggestions, I’ll have to try these!

[@pietroguarachimagne8362]

It's a cute theme and variations!!!!

[@Steerpikey]

You certainly managed to capture that boredom into this song. It also sounds a bit AI-generated to my ears.

[@NateBrinley]

That’s fair. Like I said in the description, I wrote this more as a practice piece, not a serious endeavor, so I don’t really mind that it’s not a masterpiece. I more so want some feedback from pianists, as I’m not one and need whatever help I can get in writing for it.

[@efun1234]

PIECE

[@One-EyedDriver]

It's a good vibe!

[@christiandegrassi]

Meh.....